The Captives – Five Shots ~ Ria (Chapter 2)

The Captives – Five Shots
Chapter 2

In case if someone missed out on the link to the previous chapter, here’s the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/captives-five-shots-ria-chapter-1/

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A month after Yuvraj was thrown out of the Sarna mansion, Twinkle had been meeting him regularly. Initially she had suspected him to be Kunj’s murderer as well but, during her pregnancy period her thoughts on him had taken a drastic change. She had been observing his increasing care and love towards Mahi the entire time. He was also guilty of his deeds which he had done previously and had requested Mahi for another chance. Initially Mahi denied but, later seeing his several attempts she did give him another chance. Yuvraj did his level best to impress her and get her back in her life. Everything was going on pretty well only if Mahi could’ve been saved they could’ve led a happy and peaceful life.

Twinkle considered Yuvraj to be the only one who could keep Mahi happy but, yet when he was thrown out of the house she could do nothing but, keep her opinions to herself. She did understand the pain that the Tanejas and Sarnas had been going through and she thought that letting them know about Yuvraj was rather a bad idea at that time.

Except for meeting Twinkle on a regular basis, Yuvraj was also meeting his mother, Anita Luthra. He knew everything about her including her whereabouts and all her plans of deceiving the Tanejas and Luthras. He had convinced his mother upon the fact that he wanted to seek revenge from the Tanejas and Sarnas for insulting and humiliating him in front of everyone by throwing him out of the house. He also convinced her saying that he would complete the revenge from her side as well and make Twinkle his at any cost.

Twinkle and Yuvraj had been extremely happy over the fact that their collective plans were working out and they were able to find out each single detail about Anita Luthra. Yuvraj knew all secrets about his mother except one. His mother had told him that she had something to disclose yet which she’d disclose on a particular date. Yuvraj couldn’t understand what was so special about the date that his mom had to specifically disclose it to him on that day.

Yuvraj conveyed about this conversation to Twinkle and shared his confusions with her. Twinkle who had been listening to everything very keenly seemed depressed on learning the date. Consequently, a tear drop escaped from her eyes which made Yuvraj to worry about her. Yuvraj asked her whether it was because of him that she was crying but, she nodded her saying no. Yuvraj being an overprotective friend convinced her and later, asked her the reason behind. Twinkle started crying all over again and meekly replied that it was Kunj’s birthday that day. She told that it had been two years now and Kunj had still not returned to her. She doubted her love and asked Yuvraj whether her love for him was so weak that he didn’t think of meeting her in the past two years. Yuvraj calmed her down and told her to think about her and Kunj’s daughter who wasn’t even a year old yet. Twinkle calmed down thinking about Kaira and told that she won’t let her hopes down. Yuvraj smiled at her reply and the two of them discussed their further moves.

Finally, the day for which Twinkle and Yuvraj had been waiting for months had come. The day when Anita Luthra would be disclosing her top most secret and probably, it would lead them to the evidences that she was the one who was involved in Kunj’s so-called murder. Yuvraj had expressed his happiness for the day to Twinkle. He believed his mother to be involved in Mahi’s murder too and had promised Twinkle to justify Kunj and Mahi who were the two most important people of her life. Twinkle had just passed him a genuine smile while he also told her that he would be able to return to Sarna mansion with complete respect and dignity the next day. Twinkle asked him to leave as she didn’t want Anita Luthra to get a faint clue of both of them working together. Yuvraj agreed to her and quickly left for the place his mother had asked him to arrive at.

He met Anita at the specified place but, to his misfortune she told that she would not be able to disclose her secrets that day. Yuvraj sighed over the confession and convinced his mother to let him go alone. At the beginning, she refused but, on continually requesting she let him go alone on the condition that he won’t disclose her secrets to anyone. Yuvraj asked his mother whether she didn’t believe him that she’s giving him a condition like this. Anita denied and told it was just for her security. Yuvraj agreed and no sooner did Anita Luthra leave the place he called Twinkle to meet him at the address provided by Anita Luthra where her deepest secret would be disclosed. Twinkle disagreed at the beginning thinking it to be Anita Luthra’s plan but, Yuvraj convinced her telling it was merely a coincidence which led them to a golden opportunity. Twinkle being satisfied by Yuvraj’s explanations agreed and arrived at the place he had being particular about.

Twinkle enquired Yuvraj about Anita Luthra and was quite suspicious knowing about her disappearance. She told Yuvraj about the same but, he joked on her and told her not to use her detective skills. Twinkle ignored him and asked him to open the shutter quickly so that they could get the evidences quickly. Yuvraj quickly opened the shutter and both of them went inside the pitch dark godown. Twinkle tightly held her dupatta and asked Yuvraj to switch on the torch immediately. He quickly switched on the torch from his phone and both of them searched for the light switches. Yuvraj shone the torch everywhere and Twinkle switched on the lights after she found them. Both of them quickly had a look over the godown and found it quite empty unless Twinkle tripped over something. She let out a gasp and quickly looked down at the floor to have a look. Yuvraj ran over to her and “Kunj” was all she mumbled.

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Hello, everyone! Thank you for all your comments and support. I tried replying to all your comments and I hope I’ve not missed out on anyone. I’m really sorry if I did.

Well, I wanted to let you all know something. My ff “I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Comeback) would be completed soon. Initially, I told that I’d be writing it for six chapters but, I’m really short of ideas and kind of short of time too so, I’d be discontinuing it in two more chapters. Moreover, I don’t have any story for another ff in my mind now so, probably I won’t be writing anymore. But, it’s just a PROBABILITY. I might come back as well.

Also, I’ve an OS plot in my mind so, I’ll be uploading it soon. May be that would be last piece of writing from my side atleast for the time being.

Anyway, how was this chapter? Please do drop down your thoughts below. I’d be eagerly waiting to learn about your thoughts. Suggestions and criticisms are always welcome as they’ll help me improve but, no abusive language.

Best regards,
Ria

46 comments

  1. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    Looks like I didn’t have to wait 18 hrs after all πŸ˜‚ I know u told me not to read ur note, but that’s why I had too…last piece of writing? Idk if those words exist in my dictionary. The chapter was soooo good! it’s getting so interesting Well now we know who our first captive is. Now who is our second? Or is Anita now going to come and also capture Twinkle? U have a lot of questions to answer so post soon. Love you!

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Sara,
      Well, stay tuned to the next one and you’ll get to know my final decision about writing.

      Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter. I’ve submitted the next chapter just now so, hope it gets updated soon. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  2. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Ria awesome amazing full on suspense it increase my eagerness day by day n plss asap n I think twinkle had seen kunj I hope so
    Yr bohat questions hai only ur ff is answer
    I loved it n love u plss plsss asap

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ramya,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Well, the next chapter has been submitted. I hope it gets uploaded soon.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  3. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    You won’t leave right ????
    You can’t
    Loved the episode Twiraj’s bonding is so sweet πŸ™‚ Loved it πŸ™‚ And did Twinkle say Kunj OMG means they found him πŸ™‚
    Love you πŸ™‚ Post soon πŸ™‚

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey SidMin,
      Why can’t I leave? Everyone around is leaving, then why not me? That’s so mean.
      Well, you’d get to know about that soon.

      Anyway, I’m glad you liked this chapter and Twiraj’s bond. Yes, she did say `Kunj`. Let’s see what’s upcoming. I’ve submitted the next chapter. Stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  4. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Holla
    Woaaah its amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍lovely. I knew kunj ff mien toh nahi mar saktaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜i am feeling so elated. I cant even discribe. I wish aisa seiral mein hota. Loved it.
    U r not quitting writing na. Hope so not
    Plz post soon
    Love uπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Chiku,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, ofcourse. Hamare liye Kunj toh ek hi hai. No plastic surgeries at all.

      Read my next update for knowing about whether I’ll be writing or no.

      Okay, I’ve submitted the next chapter a while ago. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  5. SidVee

    Amazingggg😍😍.. its getting interesting chapter by chapter.. so my one guess was correct that one of the captive is Kunj.. at least he can’t die in ffsπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. loved Twiraj’s bonding.. eagerly waiting for the next ❀❀

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidvee,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, we’ve only one Kunj. No plastic surgeries. No nothing. We like him like he was before.

      Anyway, I’ve submitted the next one. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  6. Komal123

    |Registered Member

    This is so amazing ria! I told you are a better writer then me! And see you proved it! I want next part to be updated soon!
    Loads of love and postiive vibes to you ! Xoxo 😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Komal,
      Chalo, kal aap ka update. Eee.. I’m so dayum excited. Jaldi update karna, okay?

      Back to your comment, let’s not argue over it. Everyone knows you’re better so, let’s just accept the fact. Also, I’d been keeping really busy the past few days and wasn’t getting time to write. Sorry for the delay caused.😒

      I’ve submitted the next chapter. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Jisha di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter as well as Twiraj’s bond.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sohi,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked it. Well, sorry for the delay caused. I’d been keeping really busy the past few days and may continue to do so which might result in delay on a regular basis. Sorry about that.

      Anyway, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much, Purnima! I’m glad you liked this.

      So sorry for the delay caused. I’d been keeping really busy for the past few days and might continue to do which might be resulting in late updates. So sorry about that.

      Well, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  7. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey dude,
    Glad that you uploaded it quite soon!! It’s damn amazing! I’m loving it like anything.

    So Kunj is the 1st captive! (Look I guessed it right at the first place πŸ˜› )
    Well for the next captive I guess it’s Mahi! I hope that this guess of mine is also correct πŸ™‚

    Anyways Loads of love and support β™‘β™‘β™‘

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

    (Please do tell me whenever you post KRPKAB FF as I rarely visit that page.)

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad that you liked this chapter. Well, your first guess was surely correct, but about the second one.. let’s see.😝

      Well, I’ve submitted the next chapter of this. Do stay tuned.

      P.S.: I’ll surely let you know about my KRPKAB articles.πŸ˜€

      Loads of loveπŸ’•
      ~ Jaan

  8. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Last piece really? Don’t joke. You cannot do like this yaar. Please don’t stop writing. OK so coming to the episode, it was good but the end was too good, I guess she found Kunj. Yeah!!! Waiting for the next parts…

    Loads of love
    Maria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Maria,
      Aww.. sorry dear. Frankly, I’m not getting any time to write. You must be understanding that because I’ve not updated the KRPKAB FF for more than a week now I guess. Sorry about that.

      Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. I’ve submitted the next one. Do stay tuned.

      P.S.: How are you? I hope you’re keeping well.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Rashi,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this. Well, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Hope it gets updated soon. Do stay tuned.

      Also, the one shot would take some time, bit do stay tuned for it. I’ll try my level best to upload it at the earliest.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  9. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey ria the episode is amazingly amazing…I’m so happy that twinkle finally found Kunj…damn excited for next episode…and about ur come back I’m damn sure ul come back soon with new plot…desperately waiting for I love you come back and this ffs next episode and ur OS too…

    Love you 😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter. Hope your excitement now comes to an halt reading the next update.πŸ˜€

      Well, about me coming back, read the next update for knowing all that. Also, another message is included in over there. Do read it. Also, about the one shot. I guess it’ll take some time, but I’ll try to update it at the earliest.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  10. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Hey idiot,
    So finally, one captives name is out and believe me, I had a clue of it being kunj. Anyway, this chapter was great. But the second captive? and where is Anita lost? So many question in my head to post the next chapter asap! Will be waiting!

    Love you! xx❣️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Stupid,
      Thank you so much, baby! I’m so glad that you liked the chapter. I don’t co sider your guess. You might be just faking it.😝 Just kidding.

      Well, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Hope you find all the answers to all your questions in that. I’m so sorry for the delay caused as well. You know, I’d been keeping really busy. So sorry about it.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  11. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    Yeah finally twinkle found out kunj….it’s getting so interesting…..n abt ur ff….u do as u feel comfortable…I being a regular reader of urs wud miss u bt wish to see u soon….bt do concentrate on studies more…that’s frst …I knw it kills alot of tym in writing ffs as I had written one…so it’s gud u concentrt on studies more…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Loveleen di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked my chapter.

      Thank you so much for understanding. Aww.. you’re a regular reader of mine!! It means a lot. Well, I’ll miss you all too. By the way, would you like to tell which FF did you write? Please do tell me.

      Anyway, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Manvi,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Hope it gets uploaded soon.

      Also, sorry for the delay caused. I’d been keeping really busy for the past few days and might continue to do so which may lead to delay regularly. So sorry about it.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  12. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Ria di…
    Well the episode was awesome…Nd expected kunj as the first captive….do tell the next one soon…
    Nd about the ff I won’t say anything…😣😣😣😣
    U always do this…no request to u….jst go away…
    I very well understand ur problem but ……….
    Well jst post soon…
    No spcl comments from me….
    Love u

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Adya,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter.

      Oye always ki bacchi!! Aur kab kiya maine? I never mention a limit for my FFs. `Go away`? Really? I am sorry.😒

      Well, the next chapter has been submitted. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  13. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Mujhe pta tha!!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ kunj!!!! 😍😍😍
    Ria why couldnt u shape TEI’s story?? Ur ideas blow my head away!!! Simply fabπŸ™πŸ™
    U earned my admiration😘😘
    Love u❀️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Ayu,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Guessed? Yaar, maine likha kyun ye!!πŸ˜‚ Sab kuch toh Tum sab hi jaante ho.😝 Just kidding.

      TEI storyline? Are you serious? Thoda zyada nahi hogaya. Ofcourse hua.❣

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  14. Anayaali

    Ria really sorrh for late cmnt and yea epi was amazing and interesting…and i think kunj is alive maybe plzzz try to post nxt asap

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Anayaali,
      Thank you so much, darling! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, really sorry for being late, but had been keeping really busy for the past few days and may be would continue doing so. Sorry about that.

      Anyway, the next chapter has been submitted. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Simiyy,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this update.

      The next chapter has been submitted. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

  15. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria! firstly sorry for late comment…. actually yesterday I was busy n I want to give u long cmnt…. so pls sorryyyyyyyyyy

    Well epi was awesome amazing superb as always…. loved twirajs bond…. n wow twinkle find out her kunj now lets see who is second captive… waise agar aisa TEI mein bhi dikha dete to unka kya bigar jata? how badly we r missing TEI n twinj/sidmin.. hai na? Ria, I think u should give them trainnig arrey unhe bhi to pata chale unke jaise tallented writer hamare paas bhi hai…. well aaj main tumhari tarref nahin karungi bcz tumne mana kiya hai… but u r really great n superb writer…

    N this is not fair you’r ending ur ff… so sad yarrr… well its ur own decision so I’ll support u n not force u …. but I hope you’ll come back with new ff n new idea….

    N ya one more thing go n read my ff’s 3rd epi n its not a reqeust its an order…. n aisa kyun hai ye tum epi padhne ke baad jaan jaogi… don’t worry this order is only for 3rd epi then I’ll never tell u like this…. if u’ll get bore then read only last part…
    Sorry if its hurt u… but itna right to hai na?waise batana jarror maine ye order kyu diya hai…
    Jyada long cmnt ho gaya na? sorry for this also..

    Ba bye tc n keep smiling

    β™₯Love youβ™₯

    “Shalini/Neha”

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Neha di,
      Thank you for this precious comment! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Don’t be sorry, nah! It’s alright. I di understand your condition.

      Me, great author? Ofcourse not better than the TEI author.. and neither am I any extraordinary one. Just something which I do because it relaxes me and I love to do it.

      About the FF, do read the next update.πŸ˜€

      Also, so sorry. I’ve been keeping really busy and as a result I couldn’t go through your FF. Sorry.πŸ˜” I’ll surely try checking it out at the earliest.

      By the way, I’ve submitted the next chapter. Do stay tuned for it.

      Loads of loveπŸ’•

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