Can’t u see me… I m the one u searching for – By Ritzi


Hi guys….just got freedom from my exams…yippeeeee
An fs was revolving in my mind since my first paper I thought to try it out donno how it is but pls do comment na

So lets start the roller coaster ride
The camera shows a view of a big and lavish college campus. It has a huge garden we can see sm love birds engrossd in their private talks where as sm are engrossed with their friends . We now move on to a classroom, no teacher can be seen , sm are busy in studies whereas sm are busy stalking their crush. In short all are busy in their own work .
“how dare you…you ugly pig” a girl’s voice is heard
“how dare me? How dare you … anaconda” another voice is heard this a tym the voice is gruff
Listening the word anaconda the girl’s mouth widens up
“you…you called me anaconda…wait i…”
“ye lo ab anaconda ko anaconda nhi bolenge toh kya chachundar (mouse) bolenge”
The whole class is getting disturbed by their talks but their expressions shows tht its their daily routine.
“oh mister u don’t know me…I m twinkle…twinkle taneja…punjabi patakha with beauty and brains” (missing ths dialouge yaar) said twinkle
“I don’t know u??? hahaha I very well know u miss chid chid….u knw tu kitni badi galat fehmi mei jeeti hai? “ said the boy
“kya…kya misunderstanding ?”
“look it’s an universal truth tht an anaconda cannot look beautiful” said the boy
“again? Again you called me tht….u knw wht ur a langoor (monkey)”
“oh hello miss…whatever I m kunj…kunj sarna the great okay…jispe pura college marta hai”kunj said
“haan haan….ekdum correct….ladkiyaan tumhari shakal dekhkar hi mar jati hogi..u ugly pig” said twinkle
“how dare you?” said kunj
Nd the very next moment the world war three started….twinkle pulling kunj’s hair whereas kunj pulling twinkle’s hair
“OH NO …NOT AGAIN” shouted the whole class just then chinki nd mihir came and started to pull twinj apart from eo who were still engrossed in pulling eachothers hair
“stop it…stop it u both” said chinki still making frantic efforts to free thm”
“no chinki aaj mai is langoor ko nhi chodungi” said twinkle

On the other hand mihir was trying too to free kunj “kunj chodd de yaar” he said “never…aaj toh ye anaconda maregi” said kunj
“kunjjjjj…stop calling me tht”
Nd they continued to fight
Its been 5 minutes ….now tht whole class is seen making efforts to separate them…all the girls are helping chinki nd all the boys are helping mihir.
“I cant take this anymore” thought an exhausted chinki
“STOPPPPPPPPP” said chinki shouting her lungs out
The whole class stopped bcus of her voice…expect the two angry birds..hehe
“nhi chinki I m not gonna leave hi..” said twinkle
“twinkle tujhe sidhant gupta ki kasam ruk ja” chinki made her final move
Without even thinking for a second twinkle stopped…now it was not a difficult task to stop kunj
“chinki yaar….i hate you” said twinkle feeling defeated
“oh just shut up twinkle…u knw half of the noise pollution is just bcus of u two”said chinki
“ya exactly….mr. kunj sarna nd ms.twinkle taneja…will u both be kind enough to tell us the reason for your fight” said mihir
“arre mihir…you know wht…” said twinj together
“I will tell” again at the same time
“kunj u shut up..i will say”
“no…he is my friend I will tell him” said kunj
“so wht…I will sa…”
“twinkle tujhe sidhant gupta ki keep yr mouth shut” said kunj
Twinkle started giving death glares to chinki for exposing her one nd only weak point
Kunj smirked “accha so mihir…I was saying tht…” he stopped in the middle “oh shit..i forgot y were we fighting”he thought to himslef

A cheesy fake smile took over his lips “I was thinking tht….twinkle y don’t u only tell him the reason aftr all ladies first u know” said kunj to which twinkle smirked
“ab aaya na uth pahad ke niche…oh sorry sorry ab aaya na pig pahad ke niche” said twinkle with a victorious smile
“haan so mihir actually kya hua ki…..” “oh damn…I forgot y were we fighting” a similer thought ran in twinkle’s mind
“no no kunj…he is yr frnd…u only tell him” said twinkle with the same cheese on her smile as tht of kunj
“no u say” said kunj
“no u say” said twinkle
“ARRE I TOLD U NA U SAY” said twinkle banging her hands on the desk
“I ALSO TOLD NA…THT U SAY” said kunj repeating the actions of twinkle
“oh shut up guys” shouted chinki
“you know wht mihir they actually don’t know tht reason abt their fight…its just tht fighting is their cup of tea….nd they cannot stay without eachother” said chinki
“AYE” shouted twinj on chinki for her last lines
“accha sorry..autocorrect…they cannot stay without fighting with eachother” said chinki
“I cant srsly believe tht u guys were fighting bcus of no reason since past an half an hour” said mihir
To which twinj bowed down their their heads giving sign of their agreement
The whole class looked them with a daredevil types eyes for disturbing them nd tht too without any reason

To be continued….

So guys how was it uh? Fingers crossed
Pls drop down yr comments yaar…I really need them to continue

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  1. Mahi

    Hahaha ??????
    Its sooooo funny & nice & amezing
    Plssssss continue rotzi
    I love ur ffs

  2. Fan was too continue asap

  3. R.S.H.H.P

    It’s so funny ritzi ??? waiting for next part

  4. Anushka


  5. Hahaha maza aa gya… Seriously enjoyed it vry much…..

  6. Meeta


  7. Thanmy

    Ritzi diiiiiii
    What was this I mean I was catching my stomach n laughing it was soooo hilarious wow diiii exams se chutkara mil gaya na plsssss next one soon plssss diiii its a sissy request I mean I can’t wait for it diiiii
    Love u dii??❤?

  8. Amazing…and it was to funny…post next asap

  9. Ayeshakhanum11

    it is beautiful

  10. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute funny marvelous epi….loved it….hass haas k pet dhukh raha h….bhot funny tha…loved it….

  11. It’s too good.. Do cont. it..

  12. Ayu

    ???that was my reaction to this!!! Awesome yaar! Teri kami thi! The gurl who forced me to comment for the first ever time on TU!!!❤️❤️

    U write amazingly dear!! Keep it up!!!?

  13. Hahaha amaxing epi ritzi??? and hilarious too ??.. just kept on laughing like a maniac ??.. pig n anaconda.. hahaha.. n they forgot why they forget with each other ??.. hehe n sidhant gupta ki kasam.. hayee uske liye to kuch bhi??.. cant wait for the next one.. do cont soon ?

  14. Rashiverma2199

    Wow…..ritzi nice start….amazing

  15. I just love the way how Twinj had fight that too with no reason keep posting soon wating for your next update. Great job.

  16. Hey ritzi
    Cute episode especially twinj fight
    N sid ki kasam
    Loved it

  17. Kritika14

    I loved this. Like twinj fight was toh need ? write soon x

  18. Tara

    ?????? ?????? ?????? ??????
    this is what i can say…
    damn funny..
    that part “ladkiya tumhari shakal dekhte hi mar jati hongi” lol..
    u nailed it dear..

  19. Sidhants_asifa

    Superb….sidhantgupta ki kasam???? loved it marvellous

  20. Sujina

    ritzi….lovely….n funny
    pig n anacondas tashan seems hilarious
    its funny…so plz continue
    love u…??

  21. Shreya098

    Awesome ritzi…
    Siddhant Gupta ki kasam?????

    I was laughing throughout…
    Enjoyed it to the core…??????

  22. dreamer..arundhati

    Ritzi its superb
    Right now our forum needs such stories
    Ctd soon
    And sorry ff wtiters as I m not able to comment on all
    Really sorry

  23. Anam_sidhant

    Chuchundar and sidhant gupta ki kasam???? it was so funny? eagerly waiting for the next one❤

  24. SidMin

    OMG Loved it awesome Mind-blowing Post the next part soon Loved the fights and the best part was that they forgot the reason go there fight in the end Loved it Post soon 🙂

  25. Romaisha

    tujhe sidhant gupta ki kasam..
    Oh My God!!! That line ????????????????????????????????????????????????
    I can’t stop laughing and smiling! Now iknow what to do when im angry and want to calm down ?
    But seriously first epi was a blast!can’t wait to cont reading the rest !!
    Love you yaar! ❤
    And yah sorry for late comment

  26. Baby

    Ritzi luvd it 2 moon n bck srsly fun tha bhot acha tha pls poat it asap j cant w8 luving it hahahhahahahahaaaaaaaa stil I m laughing cant cntrl osm…..fs ols cntinue asap……..

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