I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 37

Well I want to ask in the beginning if I am writing too bad now… plzzz friends I want a true answer coz I had a commentor in my last update that was the promo for this ff who told me quite rudely that it needs improvement and well she also added that I shud stop harassing people orelse…… and the rest I don’t know… friends I felt very disheartened reading the comment as I have lost the interest in writing any further episodes…. But if I stop writing then I might do injustice to all the lovely support that I have got from u guys so here I come with the 37th part of the ff… friends I need a true comment not one to flutter me… but plzzz don’t be too rude like that girl… whom I have never seen as one of my commenters till now… ok I shud stop here with all my complain…complain…..complain…. HERE WE GO…..

Recap: Aryan and Aaroo remember the night that followed the party when all the misunderstanding between them is clear. The four leave for Mahabaleshwar.

Today:
Aryan is driving while Aaroo is busy with her phone chatting with er friends. Aryan’s eyes fall on the rear glass of the car he saw the reflection of a car following them.
Aryan: is the car following us or is it going on its own path…
Aryan slowed down the car and stop at a side…. The car went past them….
Aaroo: y did u stop the car????
Aryan: nothing I was felling thirsty… Varun pass the bottle frm the back seat….
Varun: yeah….(he passes the bottle)
Aryan (thinks while drinking water): the car was not following us… may be the man is tried of following us… good… at last got id of him….
Aaroo: Aryan…. Lets leave…
Aryan nods and restarts the car and they leave. As soon as they go past a bylane tht leads to a jungle like area… the car that was following them comes out of the past and again starts following them but keeping a safe distance….
Aryan: I need the gps help… Varun….
Varun: plzzz…. Aryan… not me…. U ask Aradhya for the help… let me and Shivani romance…
Shivani: Varuuunnn!!!!!….
Varun: wht???!!!! (shivani smiles shyly… so does Aryan and Aaroo)
Aryan: can I get some help frm u Aradhya…???
Aaroo: yeah y not…. (She turns on the gps and guides Aryan)
The car was still following them. The driver f the car is the same man of aaba sahib…. He calls someone…
Man: they are going to Mahabaleshwar… I am following them… ur work will be down… (call disconnected)

Krishnavati:
Kumudini’s house:
Tulsi is working in the kitchen when Kumudini comes in and starts helping her.
Tulsi: aayi… I can manage… u go…
Kumudini: don’t I have the right to help my daughter… Tulsi I am not ur enemy… not even Aradhya’s then y r u behaving lik this…????
Tulsi: aayi…. Trust is very important for any relationship… plzzz I beg u plzzz don’t break out trust… and not specially Aaroo’s…. shw will break….
Kumudini: she is already broken Tulsi…. Cant u see how much pain she is bearing staying here… send her away from here… trust me she will live very happily… that PVR’s family is a bad omen for her… send her somewhere far away…
Tulsi: y u want to send her away aayi….??? U only wanted her stay here… then not y???? is she stopping ur plans from getting successful….
Kumudini (to herself): tulsi u r my daughter but u can never think like me…. She is my weapon… I know I can win over that PVR with her help only….let the right time come… I will ruin her life… and then I will show that PVR how a girl lives when her life is destroyed… he will curse himself for doing wrong with me….
Tulsi: aayi wht r u thinking???
Kumudini: nothing… I was thinking wht shud I do so that u two trust me…..
Tulsi: nothing… u just stop thinking bad abt others… that all….
Kumudini (to herself): oh god… my Mahan daughter… u r such a fool…. (aloud)…. Ok I am going to the temple…
Tulsi: ok… (Kumudini leaves)… aayi… I know that u have something working in ur mind… and I also know that I will never be able to make out wht is there inur mind…. So I have make all the arrangements for my Aaroo’s future…. Now I don’t need to worry….

Aaba’s mansion:
Aaba sahib is sitting on his rocking chair and thinks how he threw Kumudini out of the village 21 yrs earlier…. And smiles to himself…
Aaba: the statement is true that history repeats itself… 21 yrs ago I threw that Kumudini out of this village and today I will throw her granddaughter out of this world…. Kumudini… I can do anything to make ur life hell….. u just wait and watch…

Mahabaleshwar:
The four reach a temple at Mahabaleshwar. Aaroo and Aryan get busy in doing the arrangements for the marriage.
Aryan: panditji… I think here r all the items that u need for the marriage…
Pandit (taking a close view of the items): hmmm…. Yeah…..
Aaroo: ok then I will bring Shivani and Varun….
Aryan: ok….
Aroo goes and brings the couple… the marriage starts…. The couple sits for the marriage…so does Aryan and Aaroo…
Aryan: Aradhya….
Aaroo: hmmm…
Aryan: I think we too shud get married today….
Aaroo: wht???? Have u gone crazy???
Aryan: y see… I love u…. u love me… we have proposed each other… so wht is wrong in getting married…
Aaroo: Aryan… it is not the right time… that is all…
Aryan: the right time will never come Aradhya… aaba an ur aaji’s fight have already made the situations between us too strained… I cannot bear this any longer
Aaroo: Aryan… we will talk abt this some other time… it is our friends’ marriage today… so let us focus on that….
Pandit asks the couple to stand for phere (rounds). Shivani and Varun stand and start taking pheres. Aryan and Aaroo throw flowers on them. While throwing flowers at them, Aryan starts throwing flowers on Aaroo. Aaroo looks at him and he again starts throwing flowers on the couple… they stop.. Varun makes Shivani wear the mangalsutra…
Pandit: from now onwards u two r married couple and no one can separate u….
Aryan and Aaroo smile and claps. Shivani hugs Aaroo while Varun hugs Aryan.
Shivani: thanks to u both… without u this was not possible….
Varun: thanks a lot guys… we promise we will also help u two in the same way if u two too decide to rn away get married…
Aaroo and Aryan laugh… followed by Shivani and Varun.
Aaroo: ok fine… now it is time for enjoyment… I have heard that here is a very famous roadside dhaba… lets go there and feed our humgry stomach with something really tasty…
Varun: yeah…
Aryan: ok.. lets go…
The four start leaving…. The other side of the road behind the bushes the man has taken the position to do his jod… the gun is ready in his hand…. And is in position…. His finger is on the trigger… the gun is aimed at Aaroo…. Right near her heart….. and 3……2……1…..SHOOT!!!!!
The bullet went through the air…. In that exact peek of time Aaroo turns around to talk to Aryan which makes her face the bullet… and the bullet strikes her right near her heart… Aaroo keeps standing shocked… looking at Aryan…. Aryan too is shocked ans so is Shivani and Varun… Aaroo takes her hand and places it on her wound and takes a look at it…. BLOOD!!!!!!! She again alooked at Aryan and then…COLLPASED!!
Aryan:ARADHYYYAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Aryan sits on the road with Aaroo in his arms….Shivani and Varun sit beside them….
Shivani (crying): Aaroo….get up
Varun (noticing the man running): hey… u wait….
Aryan sees the man… and puts Aaroo slowly on the floor and starts running behid him madly….
Aryan: stop!!!!!!

Krishnavati:
Kumudini’s house:
Tulsi feels restless as if something is not right… she goes and stands infront of the idle of Lord Krishna and folds her hands….
Tulsi: deva… plzz take care of my daughter… plzzzz ….

Road:
Aryan is running behind the man… suddenly the man trips and fall… Aryan rushes to him and catches him…. Aryan’s eyes were red with tears and anger….
Aryan: tell me who send u… that PVR…
And he starts beating him… the man tries to resist but Aryan’s mad blows can never be controlled by him… Varun comes there running…
Varun: Aryaaan!!!! Aradhya…. We need to rush her to the hospital…
Aryan loos at Varun with concern… the man gets this chance… he pushes Aryan and runs away,…. Aryan goes to chase him but Varun stops him…
Varun: Aradhya is losing too much blood…. Leave that man… lets rushes Aradhya to the hospital…
Aryan without listening to Varun starts running to Aaroo…. There Aaroo was lying unconscious…. Her entire dress was red with blood…. Aryan sits beside her and starts crying madly looking at the condition of his love….
Shivani: Aryan control urself….
Varun: I have called the ambulance… it will come in sometime… we don’t know the way to the hospital… and it will be very risky to take her all by ourself…..
Aryan: Aradhya….. plzzz open ur eyes… I promise I will nevre fight with u…. plzzzz for once open ur eyes….
The siren of the ambulance is heard…. They stop at the place and take Aaroo in the ambulance… Aryan accompanies her…

Precap: Aryan rushes into the Rao mansion and shouts…. AABA SAHEB PRADYUMAN VIDYADHAR RAO…. Aaba sahib comes out… Aryan…today u have lost ur grandson and if anything happens to Aradhya…..i will not leave u…. he leaves the house…

Hope u guys have likd this part…. plzzzz do comment….

30 comments

  1. Rebba

    Wow..So crictical Aarra..Itz awsm rimjim..
    Don’t feel bad on ua writings..Itz not bad..
    And also leave the -ve commentz & accept +ve..Don’t giveup ua mind in any -ve points..I think u got the point what i meant..😊

  2. AAN

    |Registered Member

    u r sucha gud writer 🙂 and i am not telling this to flatter u or something…
    and u shuld continue writing…waiting for the next part… 🙂
    pls update it asap…then abt dat person..she might b a pessimist or something..pls dont pay heed to SUCH cmnts and stop writing…tis a request..

    • Rhimjhim

      |Author

      THANKS AAN FOR THE COMMENT… AND YEAH I TOO THINK THAT THE GIRL IS A PESSIMIST… BUT I HAVE DECIDED TO FORGET ALL THE CRAP AND CONTINUE WITH MYFF FOR U ALL…. LOVE U….

  3. silent reader

    i put my name as a silent reader beacuse i wasa silent reader here over 1 years in telly updates but when i read the 3 part of ur ff i was so …..then i began to comment …..

  4. AYUSHI

    I luv ur ff and i read the comment of that girl i think she was totally wrong u do not do anything like that nd if u did we wud hve told u earlier plzz don’t lose interest and today’s episode was fab plzz post the next part asap😊😀

  5. Pihu

    Hey Rimjhim… Im a silent reader of ur ff… Plzzz dont stop it…. It d best aara ff…. Plzz dont stop… People r there who r jealous of other plzz ignore them…. N we all aara fans love ur ff…. Love u

  6. Aribah

    Mindddddddd blowinggggggggggggggg episode yaar Rhimjhim♥♥♥…….and hey Rhimjhim be brave don’t get hurt with such silly comment and I’m sure that she must be jealous of your success and just trying to distract you because you always get such lovely comments and yeah promise me that whenever you will get such sillllyyyyyy comment you will ignore it and won’t get distracted and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t think to stop you are going just fabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb…….and yaah always love you and your ff sweety ……..and I must say fantasticccccccccccccccccccc going yaar keep it up……..

  7. Asmitha

    Hi di dont take that Naina’s comment to heart. Because majority wins. We all love your ff and will always. One bad commenter doesnt make much. But if you leave writing because of that one person then all of us wi be effected. Pls dont leave writing. You r the best! 👍👍👍👍👍

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