” I can’t stop loving u “- Twinj Love. Chapter 6


” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !
CHAPTER 6!!!!!!

Episode starts with Ranveer feeling some fishy regarding Twinj closeness..

Next Scene…

Kunj moves to his room nd his eye falls on his white shirt stained with mehndi marks as Twinkle collided with him….
He picks it up nd smiles recalling how he collided with her ; how she was struggling to drink water c; how he made her drink so nd how he drank the water from the same glass having Twinkle’s lipstick marks…

He looks at the mirror nd moves his fingers on his lips to feel sweetness of Twinkle’s lips….
He talks to himself…
” What is happening to me ? Why I’m acting so weird ? Whenever Twinkle is near me I don’t know why feels so good ?
Everytime when she is around me I can’t control my hormones ; my heart itself makes me move towards her..How much I try I can’t control myself..
Her smile ; innocence ;cuteness ;simplicity is making me crazy for her …
Today also my fav shirt is stained but instead of getting this marks washed out; I’m feeling to keep this as stained forever..
Dude ! kunj tumhare dimag mein koi chemical locha hogaya hai ( ur mind has effected with chemicals )…Babaji help me !!! Give me some sign to let me know in what situation I’m stucked..”

His phone starts to ring… due to which his thoughts comes to end..
k-” Hello …Uvi …how r u bro?”
U-” Kunj tu toh bol na smjha ( u don’t speak ) ..It has been 3 days u went to Mumbai nd since u didn’t call me to know whether I’m alive or dead… u r such a bad frnd”…he freaks his anger …
K-” Yr Uvi don’t say like this ..
ik I’m the worst frnd but what to do these days I was so busy here….I’m sorry..U know na how much u mean to me .”
U-” Don’t butter me ….OK I forgive u .
Now u tell how’s ur marriage celebrations going on”…

Kunj narrates him everything… his meet ; about Twinkle ; their dance challenge nd their frndship….
U-” Wooowww….kunj it’s the first time ur first time that u r so much happy that ur voice depicts the smile of urs….This is just bcoz of that girl…”
K-” Yah ….I’m very happy nd the reason why is that I also don’t know “..

U-” But I know ….kunj finally love has entered ur life…. finally it has conquered ur heart…. U r in love with Twinkle nd too that much extent that u even don’t realize… I’m soooo happy for u bro…”

Listening this kunj was shocked nd surprised …
k -” Have u gone mad …I nd love nd that too Twinkle …never . U know na love word is not present in my dictionary.
Don’t talk rubbish ”

U-” Though it is not in ur dictionary but ur name is present in love dictionary..
Whether u accept ur feelings or not but sooner or later u will do it …just wait nd see how colors of love will paint u in it..”

K-” Just shut up yrr…I said na I’m not in love nd that’s clear ”
U -” OK as u say but kunj ….tujhe pyar ; pyar hua ( u r in love ; u r in love )….he was about to speak when kunj canceled the call ….

Kunj in frustration …” Do the hell with him ; he always tease me”
While on other side Uvi is seen smiling nd promising him ” Kunj its my promise frnd that I will make u realize it …My happiness lies in u ; its just that presently ur mind is not ready to accept ur love…”

Kunj wakes up smiling nd recalls yesterday’s day …He thinks ” Let me first freshen up ; then I will go nd meet Twinkle just to check whether she is fine or not as yesterday she was upset bcoz of her mehndi…

After sometime he reaches her room nd found her sleeping peacefully …
Seeing her in that state kunj is looking at her face nd then her mehndi color…
K-” Sleeping beauty …..nd her mehndi is adding a much more beautiful look to her …What a dark color her mehndi has reaped.”…
He moves closer to her nd take her pic in that position….
K” See u soon ….”

T-” Chinki finally the day has arrived . Today is ur marriage ….I’m soo happy but at the same time sad as u will leave me “…saying this she started to cry nd seeing her Chinki also began to cry …
T-” Okk ….enough of these tears… today is the good day we should not make it bad by our crocodile tears …” ..she wiped her nd Chinki’s face …nd they both hug eo nd smiles…

C-” leave all this nd u tell now a days I’m seeing u getting closer to kunj…. haaannn…
What’s going on…is this the matter of love shove …”
T-” Love..?????… R u mad no; we r just good fndzz nothing else.. but how come u r thinking abt it ”
C-” No actually the way he sees u is full of love… he eye’s u very lovingly… I think he loves u ”
Twinkle started to laugh aloud …
T-” Kunj nd love …next to impossible .U know na he is not interested in girls.. nd he considers me as his friend..”
C-” As u say but….. Accha chodo ”

T-” Chinki I will come later ; I have some work ….bye..”

She enters in kunj room….
T -” Hi ! kunj …!
K-” Twinkle u . When did u wake up ….when I came in ur…..” ..he was about to speak but then stops him thinking what she will think of him..
T-” When u came what… speak na…
Accha leave all this I came to tell u that u give me ur shirt that was stained yesterday…..I will get it washed.. ”

K-” No Twinkle….thhhaaatt shhhiirrtt …I already gave it to get washed to laundry ..” …he was stammering as he was speaking lie…

T-” okk ..now I should leave ..byee”
As she turns ..kunj speaks
” Wait …Twinkle show me ur hands ”
T-” Hands …but why ? ” ..she was feeling uneasy as her hands were covered with mehndi marks nd showing it to the boy was something uneasy for her but she did as he said..

K-” Look at ur hands ; its looking so nice ..Just bcoz of it ur beauty is exaggerated…do apply it bcoz u don’t know some where or the other someone is loving ur hands…”
He smiles nd leaves from their leaving Twinkle to confused in her thoughts..
T-” I did not understood what he was trying to speak… someone ; hands ; Heena ; love …Urrggghhh!!!!! sometime he is confusing ….”
She was trying to understand ; when she was disturbed by the entry of Ranveer ..

R-” Twinkle I need to talk u ” ..
T-” Get lost !! I don’t want to talk with u ..what is left between us to talk about “…her anger was it peak..

R-” Twinkle I know I did wrong with u but believe me now I’m change …ur love made me to transform me …Plzzz forgive me … I love u ….”

T-” U love me …u cheapo . Do u know the meaning of love ; u just know how to betray nd play with feelings…;”
He tries to come near her but she shooed him away nd shouted…
T-” Stay away from me . Don’t u dare to come close to me …. U think that again u will speak cheesy words nd I will get into it …Never ; I hate u nd u better make urself accept it …I will never love u again . I had moved on nd will turn back “…..
She leaves from their…
R-” Ik u r hurt but now I’m not gonna hurt u more ….If u r happy staying away from me ; I will stay away from u but I will make u meet ur true love that is Kunj…. I somewhere has a instinct that he loves u”..he smiles..

To be continued …..

PRECAP- Marriage …..kunj nd Twinkle in car nd kunj about to kiss her….

Hello !!!!everyone ….tell me whether u liked the episode or not ?
Do u liked Kunj’s feelings nd his confusion ?
R u all okay with length ? Do tell me plzzz..

Guys if u all r reading my ff …first it’s a pleasure for me that u all giving ur precious time to my ff …but plzz just spare 2 min nd do comment… I don’t say to write long ones but ur single word will also make me happy… plzzz comment..

Love u All…..nd keep supporting…

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  1. SidMin

    Is Ranveer a good character? waiting for the next episode loved this episode
    Thx for commenting on my ff

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Sidmin for ur comment ….nd don’t worry u will always find my comment on ur ff as I can’t stay away from reading nd commenting….
      Hmmmm….whether Ranveer is positive or negative for that u have to stay tuned with ff…

  2. Amzing i m okay wid d length n lykung d confusion of love

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u sooooo much Cutie pie for ur sweet comment ….I’m happy that u r okay with length….
      Keep supporting …..

  3. Ria

    Sayeeda, I’m happy that you again didn’t start worrying about or thought about stopping to write. Back to the episode, I loved it. It was amazing. I’m so sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes but, believe me I was quite busy as I mentioned in my ff. I barely had the time to write my ff. I’m really really sorry for that. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next episode.

  4. Kruti

    Superbbb epi…..loved it muaahhhhh
    Jaldi se twinj ko unka pyar realize karvado

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u sooo sooo much for ur lovely comment ….
      Itni jaldi nai hoga realization for that their is a time …..I will make sure that before realization I can show romance ….
      love u nd keep supporting

  5. Briliant episode…loved it to the moon and back

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Lama ..
      I’m very happy that u r liking my ff…ur comment made my day …
      Love u nd keep supporting

  6. Sameera

    Fab epi waiting for ur next one

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Sam…I’m happy that u liked it..
      Keep supporting

  7. loved your story

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Sohi…
      I’m glad that u like my story..
      Keep supporting dear.

  8. Rashiverma2199

    Fab…..eagerly waiting for next part…loved it….??????

  9. Hope kunj will recognize his feelings of love soon.. N I like ranveer turning to be cupid for twinkle nd kunj.. Awesome idea it is..
    N the episode was just fab..

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Poorvi for ur lovely words…
      Soon kunj will recognize his feelings ..very soon ….
      love u nd keep supporting

  10. So sorry I’m late on commenting but what to do, I’m nt keeping well.
    About the epi…. I loved it to the core. I don’t think you’ll ever disappoint me sayeeda because your writing is outstanding.
    Its an honor to be reading your fanfiction. Keep writing since you play a role in keeping me happy and please update soon as I’m anxious about the precap

    1. Sayeeda

      OMG !!!!! RiaA ; how much I thank u for such a awesome comment is less …..I don’t have words to express my gratitude to u …..
      I feel blessed that my ff makes u feel happy nd it’s my honor that u instead of being not well read the ff nd commented ….
      Yah I will surely try my best not to disappoint u ….nd don’t be sorry for commenting late ….u will surely get to read next one very soon …
      Get well soon dear… love u …

  11. Shatakshi

    Hey Sayeeda
    I just loved today’s episode
    N please don’t ask regarding the length of the episode as aap jitna bhi bada likhogi…that will be still small for me…becoz its just superb…
    N I m happy to se Ranveer in a positive role… Eagerly waiting for the next episode?????????????

  12. Fan

    Nice epi …

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Fan ….I’m happy to see ur comment…
      Keep supporting..


    awsome continue it pld

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Ayesha
      I’m glad that u liked it…
      keep supporting.

  14. Nice epi….nd thanks sid bhai k bre me btane k lye..

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Jasmine wani ….I’m happy to see ur comment..
      No need to say thanks to me as whenever I will have answer for ur ques I will surely reply…
      Keep supporting

  15. Hiii Sayeeda amazing epi n yes length ia perfect … Precap is tether interesting n not worth waiting ? ✌

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Romaisah …I’m happy that u liked it ..
      I won’t be making u to wait for long…
      Love u nd keep supporting

  16. Sayeeda diiii muahhhhhh loved it
    Yea loved d epi n thank God u did nt started Jr emotional speech ki apko comments nahi milrahe he! Sry I hurted
    Btw epi ws jus amazing epi loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz

    1. Sayeeda

      Haahhhaa……Zikra after reading ur comment I was laughing so hard…
      what a mimicry dear ….seriously sometime I’m so annoying ….
      From now I will never say like this promise …its ur di promise..
      Love u for always making me feel happy through ur words ….

  17. Sayeeda

    Ria no need to say sorry ; I can understand that u have a busy schedule ….n don’t worry regarding the comment as I know u r always been their to support me..
    Now I won’t be worrying for my ff ….I’m glad that u liked the episode..

  18. Sayeeda

    Thank u soooo much Rashi …I’m happy that u liked the episode nd yah u will get to read next one very soon …
    love u nd keep supporting

  19. Sayeeda

    Haayyy meri Sattu kinni acchi hai …..love u to moon nd back…
    I’m very happy that u r liking my ff…
    I will try my best to make u love this ff more nd more…

  20. diehard fan of sidmin

    Oooooosummmmmm…..the precap sounds too amazing..can’t wait for the next one

    1. Sayeeda

      Thank u soooo much Die hard fan of Sidmin for ur so lovely comment…
      I won’t wait u for too long….

  21. dreamer....arumdhati

    Sayeeda der I m really sorry for so late comment

  22. Dreamer...arundhati

    Sayu dear..,can I call u dis
    And a big soorryy for late arrival

    1. Sayeeda

      Of course dear ….u call surely call me wid dis name …I would love it…
      Don’t say sorry for late arrival I know u r always their to support me but u also have busy schedule …so no worries..Thanks for ur lovely words

  23. omg sayeeda osm

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