” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !””…….CHAPTER 21

” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love “!!!….

Hello everyone ! Sayeeda is back with her ff next episode …
Thank u everyone for the support u all extended to me …love u all ….
Sorry for not replying back to comments …Yesterday I was thinking that when I started my ff normally I don’t get comments …nd one day I finally decided to end my ff but then many of u made me to realize that it’s just a beginning nd after some episode my no. of comments will increase nd now see I’m soooooo happy that my ff is able to entertain u all …MashaAllah so many comments nd love u all gave to me …InshaAllah I will continue to entertain u all further nd u all will love my ff like this always …Ameen ….
Though many time I had face criticism nd I know in future these situation will occur but till the time u ppl r with me I can pass any obstacle …
Thanks to each one of u for making me believe in myself ….love u all so much ..

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Let’s start with the episode ….

Kunj comes back from washroom after getting freshen up …. Twinkle also wear her night dress …she is wearing pink kurta with white pataila ….

Kunj finds Twinkle struggling to remove her bangles …

K-” Twinkle is their any problem?”…

T-” Kunj see na I’m trying to remove my bangles nd I’m not able to do so …”..

Kunj move’s to her nd holds her wrist …
K-” Let me try once ..I hope I can help u out ..”

He trys to remove them while Twinkle is eye’s him endearingly ….

Twinkle thinks …” He loves me so much ; the way he cares for me is beyond my expectation ….no matter what happens he is always beside me to shower his affection on me …though now our relation is only limited to friendship but I will try my best to make our relation move ahead …..
Every girl drools for a life partner like him… They want their heart to beat for such person but I’m blessed that my Kunj’s hearts beat for me …”..

She remembers her convo with Mahi ; that she also needs to apply efforts to accept her marriage nd Kunj’s feelings too …”

Kunj snapped his finger before her …Twinkle comes out of her thought world ..

K-” Where r u lost …I’m calling u again nd again but u r busy in ur dreamworld ..what r u thinking …”

T-” Me…lost no ..no …”..

K-” Yes u were …leave it ; see I removed it ..” …

Twinkle see her hands …

T-” Kunj …u removed all of them …I just wanted to remove some not all “…

Kunj is confused….

K-‘ First u told me to remove it nd when I did it u r saying why I removed them …U r fine na ; I think u r so tired that u r behaving weird ..”

T-” Kunj I’m fine …see now I’m married nd for a lady it is auspicious jewelry as it symbolizes long life of husband ….it a sign for others that a girl is finally a wife of a the person who’s name bangles she is wearing ..From now my bangles …my vermilion ..my mangalsutra ..is my identity ….from now I’m wife of my Sadu Sarna ….”..

Kunj loves to see her gesture ..her respect towards their relation …

K-” Twinkle for u these things matters a lot ?”

T-” Of course kunj these all r inestimable for me…..the things which makes me feel that I’m ur wife r earnest for me ….as owe a peculiar place in my heart”

Kunj touches his forehead with her forehead..

K-” My Siyappa Queen ; I never had any idea that u can be so emotional …U made me so happy that I owe a special place in ur heart..
See it’s our first night ..now whatever u request to me I will give u that ..so tell me what do u want ..?”

T-” Me nd demand …phass gaye tum kunj; main jo bhi magungi tumhe dena padega soch lo ek baar phir se
( U r caught kunj …just think for once whatever I will ask from u have to give it to me “)

Kunj gives his one eyebrow killer look to her ..

K-” Ur expression is looking quite suspicious to me ..(tumhare irrade nake nai lag rhe hai mujhe )…don’t tell me u r going to demand for a romantic night with me…..
Tum meri izzat lootna chahti hoo…bachao mujhe iss zalim ; bedard aurat se ( U want to snatch my respect …someone plzzz save me)
But if u want so … I won’t reject ur request I’m ready to do so …so can we start as we r already late for it …Chal Twinkle hoja shuru ; bada maza ane wala hai ( Twinkle get ready ; we gonna enjoy so much )……..he smiles nd leans forward to her …

Twinkle’s mouth was wide open …she pushes him away …..

T-” Kunj u r so naughty …every time u think of romance nd what u r doing now with me is called flirt ..”.

K-” Hayyeee jiski biwi aisi ho toh flirt toh krne ka dil krega hi ; meri koi galti nai hai saari galti tumhari hai tumne mere iss dil ko cute sa badmash sa aashiq bana diya hai
( Uff ….if a person has a wife like u then flirt will happen automatically ; I’m not at fault its u who made my heart crazy for u ..)

They both burst out laughing …

K-” OK ..jokes apart …tell me what u want from me ?”..

T-” Kunj …I want to take one promise from u that u that no matter what happens u will always trust me ….
I have seen many couples fighting with eo just coz of misunderstanding …nd at that time they forget the time they spend together …the love they carry for eo …A lack of trust can lead to many arguments; stress nd heart breaks ….
Nd u know kunj I have already faced the rejection in my life from Ranveer …only bcoz of him I’m not able to believe on love ..
I want to spend my life with u till my last breathe being loyal to u …but if once my trust is shaken then I won’t be able to cope up with it ….
Nd I know a person for who I’m his empress of his heart will never betray my trust ..I trust u completely but still I want this promise from u”

Kunj is silent …he is just staring her face with love …

T-” Kunj say something …don’t look at me like this …did my words hurt u “…..she is having tears in her eyes coz she thought that her words hurt him ….

K-” Heyy…Don’t cry plzzz …I’m not angry with u …infact I was glad to see what u demanded from me ..If any other girl would be their in ur place then she would have asked me for a expensive article but u r so innocent …..
Yes ..I promise u that I will always trust u nd make u me capable so that u can trust me blindly…nd very soon ur past bruises will be healed nd then u will able to believe in love …again love will knock at ur heart door …..

Bas dil ka darwaza kholke rakhna …kahi deri na hojaye …
( Keep ur heart door opens before it gets too late ..)….”..

Twinkle smiles hearing his words …..

K-” That’s like my wife….keep smiling like this only as ur smile is a only reason for my smile …I can never see u crying ….throughout our life I won’t let any grief come near u ….
Now lets sleep we both r tired ..”

He take’s pillow nd blanket to sleep on couch..

T-” Kunj where r u going ?”…

K-” Twinkle I know u r not comfortable sharing bed with me nd I don’t want u to make u uneasy ..u sleep on bed nd I will sleep on couch …Good night “…

He is about to move but Twinkle holds his hands ….nd stops him..

T-” Kunj why r u so good ; why u care for me so much ….why u always keep my feelings as ur priority ..at least think about ur emotions …u can sleep on couch so that I can sleep comfortably over here …
But how can I sleep peacefully seeing u sleeping with difficulty …no I can’t …
U will sleep with me on bed only …I will sleep at right side nd u on left nd u don’t worry I won’t try to seduce u ….” ….she smiles ..

K-” U nd seduce me …haahhaaa what a joke u can never do it as u don’t have guds to do it ….haahhaa …Twinkle u crack so good jokes ..”…he holds his stomach nd laugh hardly ..

Seeing him Twinkle get frustrated ….she thinks … ” Huuhhh…this Sadu Sarna thinks that I don’t have guds to do it ..I can do it just wait …”

She gets up from bed nd keeps moves her hair’s to one side nd moves sensually towards him…
Kunj gets tensed seeing her approaching so charmingly towards him..

She start to moves her fingers romantically on his face ….she holds him more closer to her by holding his collar …

T- So kunj am I not able to seduce u …am I not romantic ….”…

Kunj don’t know how to react seeing Twinkle’s new side …seeing her so close to her …he just speaks ..” Hmmm…..”…

T-” What hmmmm…..my hot nd s*xy husband…” …she moves her fingers on his hands ..shoulder ….she leans closer to him ..while kunj heart is pumping like a speed of bullet train …he closes his eyes …

Twinkle moves more closer to him but he move’s away from her ..Twinkle smiles seeing his respect towards her …
She back hugs him ….

T-” Kunj why r u getting so nervous with my touch ….its ok I’m ur wife ..”
She makes him face to her …..her hands reaches to his shirt buttons …
She opened first two buttons of shirt …while kunj is enjoying her touch but somewhere he is having a feeling that she is doing all this just bcoz he challenged her …

K-” Twinkle …stop it ..plzz”..

She understand his worries nd moves back leaving him …

T-” Aaj ke liye itna bahut hai …Baki ka baad main ….abhi toh ye trailer tha r tum itne main hi daar Gaye …aage aage dekho hota hai ; tumhari siyappa queen ke bahut saare rang hai”
( This much is enough for today left one will be carried on later ; This is the only trailer of mine nd u r scared in this much only ….Just wait nd see as ur siyappa queen has many shades ….)”..

K-” Ufffff …..tumahri iss ada pe hi toh main marta hoon( I die in this attitude of urs)…
Come let’s sleep …

They both sleep…



PRECAP- 1 month leap nd Twinj reaching Bangalore….

Did u all liked it ?…
Plzzz do tell me ….

Nd here’s the link ….





  1. Laddoo

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    Haye mar jaawan main gud khake….oye hoye….
    Kya episode hai!
    Wo seducing wala part😂😂😂
    Aur wo Twinkle ki wish…jo Kunj ne bola tha😂😂😂
    Aur uski asli wish👏👏👏
    M really proud of u meri Sayu di…
    U have no idea how much I love u….
    Love u love u love u…
    And haa….now my mood is alright😂😂

  2. zayb_zikra

    Ah meri sayuuuuuuuu diduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…….
    U r jussssssssssssssss muahhhhhh….😘😘😘😘😘
    Can’t describe it….
    K hw u have written it…😍😍😍😍😍
    It’s fab……..
    Ur an incredible wrter didu……😘😘❤❤❤❤
    Blessed to have uh …..!!!!!
    Superbbbbbbb yaar….😚😚😚😚😚😚
    N ya actually Idk y my mail is nt working….
    Wth is happens wid it Idk….
    So that’s y I can’t reply uh…..
    M sho sho shorry……😅😅😅😅😞😞😞
    Hope uh understand…..
    Idk wht error occurred to it….
    Bcz it’s nt showing anything…..😅😅😞😞😟😟
    Stupid kahika….
    Uski wajah se mai apni didu se baat b nai kar sakti….😭😭😭😭
    So sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad na….
    Aisa hamesha mere sath hi kyu hota hai???😭😭😟😟😞😞😞
    Sad life….😞😞😛😝😝😝😂😂😂
    F*** that hell mail…😡😡😡😈😈😈😈
    Srsly uski wajah se apse baat nahi hosakti…😡😈😈😈
    Ok anyways ur epi

    Meli jaan ap na meri life me sista didu,my star….
    My shining star…❤❤❤❤
    For uh nly….
    Nly for uh a small try….
    Actually na I juss luv shayaris….u kno….
    So it’s one of my most favorite one…..
    Which is for uh……❤❤❤❤❤
    My cutest n bestest didu sista….😍😍😍😍
    Hop uh like it …..
    Ok nw bck frm my bakbak…..
    Jussssssssssssssss do cont asap
    Do reply n tell me k kaisa lagi meli shayali….
    Tata…lub uh..,
    Luv u to d moon n back……

  3. Bulbul23

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god……………..
    These words are less to express my feelings right now di
    At this time I am on bed with a thermometer in my mouth and cold strips on my head but still I am reading ur ff

    Di ur a amazing writer can’t tell u

    And thing I liked the most is u always write full words not shortcuts while I am being a duffer use shortcut words like thanq
    Silly na but kya karoon di ap bahut bahut hi aache ho or waise hi aapki story bhi love di bye muaahhhh stay blessed

  4. Shatakshi

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    It was damn cute
    Really loved each n every moment

    U know I was smiling all time while reading

    Loved it to the core💞💕❤💞💕💕


  5. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Haiiiiiiii kitna acha likhti hai aap👌👌 Dil toh karta hai jhat se aap ka autograph le loon par afsooos😞😞😞😞
    Anyways, by god you write so well, that I am impressed!
    Well to be honest I never read any Twinj FF before, except of Fatarajo’s but now I have discovered writers who are soooooooo awesome, that you are out of words to praise them! And same is the case here! I am just awestruk after reading this chappy😃 Masha Allah, you write so well 😘😘😘😘 Keep wtiting!
    Although I hardly use this word, to praise, but JHAKAAS 👌👌👌 And for your information, I use it when I am having a big wali smile on my face while reading😊😊

    Stupendous FF👍👍👍👍
    Keep it up!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂 Sayoooooo Api 😘

    Keep writing..Stay blessed..Take Care!!

    LOVE U ❤❤


  6. Sidhantfan

    Omg!!! Awesome episode….the way kunj teased twinkle when she said that wish and the real wish was amazing…loved it

  7. Romaisha

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    Haayyyyy im dead …. Sooooo romantic and emotional sayu dii!!! 👌👌👌👌 loved it alot yaar twinkle’s brave wala avatar and kunj ki nervous side was funny and amazing!!!!! Can’t wait to read next part hope u post soon 🙂

  8. SidMinTwinj

    Wowww…awesome episode…sayu I’m eagerly waiting for your caught in the love embrace of wild beast ff plz post that ff soon dear…try to post it tomorrow itself…its a request dear…

  9. manu

    Hey sayu di love u yr I don’t have words to desceibe how much I live ur ff and every time u give a different definotion of trust in any relation, love yr just love u and in tadays epi also the dialogues were just awesome loved twnew side and the last line of kunj ab mai batati rhahungi na ki mujhe kya kya achaa laga toh mai 2 days tak type hi krte rhe jaungi aur aapka next epi bhi post ho jaega so 3 words mai khatam karti hu overall epi awesome ya di if u don’t mind can u tell me your email id as I want to chat woth u in insta if u don’t mind……bye bye zayada nhi pakaaungi

  10. Lovely

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    Sayoooooo..so sorry I missed your last epi actually… Sorry for not commenting but I told you d reasons in my epi naa..
    And this I just love this loving Kunj..vaise toh I love Kunj(Sidhant).. You know that…

    You are going tooo good..
    And I am waiting for next epi

    Love you😘😘

  11. Chandra

    Hello . Dont be surprised . I m a silent reader of ur two amazing ffs . Generally i dont comment . Bt I also dont support bad things . I get vry less time . Ff parna bhi mushkil h . So cmnt karta bhi nehi , parta bhi nehi . I came to know that some ppl r speaking nonsense in ur ff . Thats why commented tdy . Dont listen to them . They r good for nothing . Itna cute sa kisiko koi kaise kuch bol sakta hain . Do mind blowing ffs likhta hain . Sabki ff mein coment kark unko encourage karta hain . Dont take them to ur heart . Machi kan ki samne awaz zaroor karta hain par koi sunta nehi . Inka bareme bhi ehi thik hain . And as far as religion , Muslim is vry pure . I m hindu bt I know how it feels if smone say anything against ur religion . I m Bangladeshi . Hindu is vry less in no here . So I know how good u ppl r . So I wont call di . I will call u APU . So Sayeeda Apyenoughfortdy . Longest coment . Bye

  12. Srija

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    omg hayeee😘😘😍😍😍😊
    what an episode
    toooo toooo goooood muaaahhh😘😘😍😍😊👏👏😉😉😘😍😍😊😊😘😘👏😉😉😘😍
    continue soon

  13. Anchali singhania

    omg.di u write so well.ur giving complete respect to twinj’s relationship in eo’s pov.i just going crazy for ur style.nd today’s epi was wow superb.I loved it.by the way di I’m waiting for ” caught in the love embrace of a wild beast”. plzzz post it soon na.and this one too

  14. Jisha

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    What an awesome episode dear…. fabulous..romantic…… nervous Kunj…was so funny…. loved it to the core…

  15. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    Suraj ki kirno se bani…
    Chandni ki chamak ho aap
    Fulo ( flowers ) ki mehak se bani
    Shahad( honey) ki meethas ho aap
    Kuch khas bat toh jaroor hai aap me
    Issiliye sabse special ho aap….
    Much bhi kahlo sayeeda
    Magar tu page ki shan ho aap….

    Thank u thank uu & love

  16. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    An ye toh aap me liye that…
    but seriously this is made by me only…
    Sach me sayeeda Maine kahi se copy paste nahi kiya hai…chahe toh app chech ker sakti hai…..actually I’m also in shock ki Maine ye shairi banayi hai….but ye San aap ki air aapki ff me wajah we ho raha hai…aapke ff ne jadujadu hi aisa kiya hai Jo me khud ko ROK hi nayi payi

    Meh shayar toh nahi….
    Magar aae sayeeda,
    Jabse padha hai aapke ffs ko,
    Mujko shayri as gayi…..

    Air pls haanreply jaroor karna shairi kaise lagi

    Coming to d ff it was damn romantic….
    & loved d cute expression of kunj….awesome epi….sayeeda….as always….loved ur both ffs to d core….

  17. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Finally twinj r coming to my place……lolz
    Kash aisa saach mein hota ….main ek bar sid aur jas se mil pati merit zindagi sarthak ho jati….. Ok jokes apart
    And the epi…….the way u described abt the vermilion mangalsutra and bangels was superb
    And kunj Ka promise to twinkle abt trust is only thing what a girl expects from her partner
    Wonderfully described
    Loved d epi……love u ♥♥

  18. Sidhanshi

    Superb episode.. Kunj is soo understanding… I wish i also get someone like kunj(sid)… Awww mujhe bhi mera kunj chahiye.. Allah ap apne eis cute si inocent si bande ki wish pe gor karna, kiu ki ap to mere bestest friend ho na!:-) Achaa ok ok! Mey apna bakbak band kar rahi hu… But sayuu appi (appi means di here,,, so if u don’t mind can i call u dat??) awesome, amazing epi.. Loved it…

  19. dreamer....arundhati

    Sayu di aapko pata hai na.. ..Wordsbr less to describe the simplicity and adorableness of this ff… Lovely .. Perfect.. .Osum.. Luv u di… Ctd soon

  20. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Sayeeda, the episode was damn good. The way Twinkle tried to be romantic..Hehe.. sorry for commenting late again but, I was just too tired after the entire day at college. My college is really one of a kind. Who keeps college for 12 hours? Huh! Anyways, do post soon.
    Loads of love.😘

  21. sujina

    1stly thanks 4 d link n post part6 soon…
    n coming 2 dis ff u r so amazing writer u always show d reflection of religion…oh kunj is so cute n understanding…hope tw will love him n express d feelings…loved it a lot….

  22. Aaruhi

    O M GGGGG……wat a seducing episode it was……..
    Sayeeda its jst awstruck momnt reading dis……d promise twinkie was to to to to lovable n swt……
    N it waa jst lyk koi nahi h kmre me kya haseen mila h pal ….aj sharat krne do kaam baaki krnge kl …………. :p
    Hehehehehe to much fun…..
    Keep ur. Work up…. waitng for such many more new episodes…..
    Tonessss n quitnls of loveee to uuhhh….♥♥

  23. Affaa

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    Sayooooo fantastic…
    Woo promise part
    Seduce walla outstanding..I was able to kunj’s expression how cute…
    I was laughing while reading it…
    Totally I enjoyed episode a loootttttt
    It was mind blowing…feel to hug and to give a kiss on your cheek….
    A write can rock…but you rockess every day…
    You’re thoughts….your imagination….
    Sayooooo after many year when you’ll became grandma your grandson granddaughters will surprise that their grandma is a wonderful writer…The will proud of you…
    That time you’ll read your comments…
    Your grandson and granddaughter will feel sad no one commented them…so I’m commenting…
    Sayooooo is grand children’s I’m Sayooooo’s friend affa…your dadijaan is just amazing …she is only one piece in whole word…
    I love her sooo much…she is my best ever friend…

  24. Baby

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    sayeeda di osm u rckd nailed it d way jasmin seduced sidhant osm di luvd it 2 d core di how how how u ryt so well srsly u made me blush laugh n luv u yr di u r osm it ws jst amazing speechless i m di u r osm post nxt asap di n sry fr being late so late syt ws nt wrking so..sry maaf krna agr kar sako to u were osm di luv u n luv d episode n sidmin n twinj also haha

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