” I can’t stop loving u “- Twinj Love. Chapter 16 ( Engagement Special )

” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !!!”
CHAPTER 16 ….( FIRST VOW TO UNITE FOR LIFE).

See guys ur Sayu is back ….Okkk!!! I know u all r hell angry on me …nd why not u all I deserve this ….what I did on my last one was wrong …how could I doubt on the love of u ppl ….I’m soo stupid one…naa!!

Thank u everyone for supporting me …I know I should not say thanks but sometimes it’s OK…plzzz forgive me …

Well coming to my dear …lovely ….my duplicate sis Sayeeda ….I don’t know why did u do that …what u wanted to convey to others …though at first I was very angry on u …but after that I wasn’t coz just bcoz of u I came to know; even u ;also came to know how much my TU family loves me ….what place I owed in their heart …Though u pointed out on our frndship but the way everyone was saying ” OUR SAYEEDA ” ….is the best word I heard in my life …nd coz of u my silent reader’s commented ….the thing which I was unable to do ; u did it ..Thanks for that yrr
U made me cried but if hurting me gave u happiness then I’m happy that I was able to make u happy ….I don’t have any grudges from u but plzzz if u really care of someone emotions then do not hurt other’s …this life is very small for hatred ..do spread love ..be happy nd keep smiling dear ..
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CONTINUED….

MORNING….. ENGAGEMENT DAY…SARNA HOUSE…

Everyone was busy planning for engagement as it is planned by Sarna family..
A loud voice of dhol ( barrel ) is heard ..many of the person’s playing dhol entered Sarna house ….

B-” Who r u all ? Why r u entering our house without our permission ? We didn’t called u all …then how gave u right to enter our house ?”

Listening to the voice …everyone came to hall ..

K-” Bebe …did u called them …?”…he speaks loudly coz of to much noise ..

B-” No …I didn’t called them …

A man is seeing entering the house along with the lady …they both were shaking their legs on the beat playing …
Bebe nd others were surprised nd happy to see them ….

Man sings ….” Mere yaar ki saagai hai …o mere yaar ki sagai hai …”
( It’s my frnd’s engagement …..o it’s my frnd’s engagement)

K-” Yuvi ….Mahi ….u both came ..”
So the boy is revealed to be Yuvi nd girl is Mahi …

Y-” Oyeee…..it’s my bestie special day …nd I will not come …is it possible ??? ”

K-” No …even I will not get married without ur presence …never ” …

He takes him nd all other’s for dance …..
Kunj hugs Yuvi ….
Yuvi murmurs ” Wooww…kunj u so fast …u came here to attend Twinkle’s engagement nd now u r getting engaged to her….I’m so excited to meet ur Siyaapa queen ”

K-” Even I’m excited to meet her …I can’t wait for night to come …I’m feeling goosebumps thinking how beautiful she will look today but will happen when I will see her …”

Y-” Yah …I can understand ur excitement but control ur emotions today u r only getting engaged not married …at least save some of it for ur marriage ..OK now u assign some work to me for ceremony preparation.”

K-” Don’t worry Yuvi everything is already done ….I have planned the ceremony by myself ..I just hope everyone loves it ”

They both giggles …While everyone greets Yuhi…
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NIGHT….. ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY…

Taneja family nd their guest arrives at the venue ….
Each nd every person was awe- struck to see the decorations …while Twinkle was astonished to see the place decorated so beautifully ….

The entrance door is lighted up with countless number of fairy lights..
Trees were lighted up with the sparkling lights all around adding a dreamy ambience to the garden . Wooden screens were placed lighted with diyas nd marigold garlands were twisted around it..
..the flowers sculpture of peacock placed nd on the feather’s of the bird some lines were written nd a pic is designed using flower petals ..
” I’M GETTING HOOKED FOR MY LIFE WITH A CHICK WHO FINALLY HOOKED ME DOWN- MY TWINKLE …” nd below these lines Twinkle’s smiling face is designed …
all over the above paper lanterns were hanged having pictures of Twinkle imprinted on it …nd floral chandeliers were arranged in way of inverted umbrella..

( They all were amazed to see the sight …without taking off their eyes they entered further ; the next view made them go bowled)

Moroccan tent’s were placed for guests sitting arrangement ….sofa’s nd table’s were placed in round shape giving a royal look to tents …having floral arrangement at center of table with combination of pink nd orange flowers ….the petals of flowers were having twinj engraved on it

While stage for bride nd bridegroom was set in form of tent having white nd light purple background implanted with yellow nd orange neon bulb….while the straight chandeliers places were covered with hydrangea nd blossoming oregano flowers ….a beautiful jhoola ( swing ) is placed in between decorated with bright ethnic cushions nd drapes for twinj to sit ….

TWINKLE’S POV …
” Exquisite …..elegant….fastidious ….Throughout my whole life I had never been to any beautiful like this …..the whole scenario over here ; each nd every scene are driving me crazy ….the more look at them the more I’m feeling jim- jams ….the more I’m loving it …. I always wanted my this day to be the most special one as today we make our first promise for a new relation but I never thought Kunj would make this day more than special for me ….U made me feel like a empress of a kingdom …u made a normal girl transformed into a queen …..ur queen ….The way everyone is lurking around nd staring me with a million dollar smile makes me feel more Worthy than I’m ….But where r u ….my eye’s r desperate to see u ….my heart wants u to look at me ….though u won’t be speaking through word’s about ur emotions u have but ur eye’s do speak nd I can read ur eye’s ” …

B -” Welcome ….u all ….Twinkle Puttar u r looking so cute ….so twinkling as if a brightest star of galaxy is shining ..Puttar go ahead nd have ur seat on stage ”

T-” Thanks Bebe for the compliment….but u all will accompany with me to stage ?”…she is looking here nd their ..

B-” Twinkle I know ur eyes r searching for kunj but don’t worry he will come soon. …nd u move to stage we will follow u frm behind ..”

Twinkle felt something fishy but she ignored it nd started to move towards stage ….Suddenly the light goes off…a complete darkness spread is spread around the lawn ..
Everyone got scared ….but the next view made them to understand that it is all pre planned…

A spotlight falls on Twinkle glowing her face more brighter …while on the all sides of lawn it is dark …Twinkle was confused that’s what going on ….A voice is heard ..echoing all around….everyone looks up towards the sky nd found kunj inside the helicopter ….having bugle in his hands…

” Oyee….meri jhalli siyaapa queen don’t be so scared …I know u have phobia of darkness but sometimes this darkness is the best way to beautify our happiness …today I nd u r going to be mutilated in the first step towards this sacred relation nd before that I want all ur doubt’s to be cleared ….

Every girl used to imagine pic of her life partner nd have many hopes with him …so as u also have ….though I may not match with that pic but I promise u I will try my best to match with it ….I can’t promise u that I will led stars in ur lap but I can assure u that I will present u with the stars of my love; care nd concern…..I will never leave u alone in life any path ….how much the way is tough …how much Peebles r scattered in it ; I will always
clear them to make ur way smooth ….every sorrows of urs has to first encounter with me before coming to u …I will always act ur shield ….No matter how much grief I suffer but I will never let any pain to come near u …
U must be thinking how much filmy lines I’m speaking but trust me each nd every word of it is coming directly from my heart …my feelings for u is indefinable …these few lines can’t make an impression on my emotions ..

Now I had spoked much …it’s ur turn to speak.. Tell me r u ready to accept ur Sadu Sarna as ur husband ….if yes then on the side of urs one red color flower is kept ; pick it up …nd if no then pick up the black one …do fast I’m waiting for ur reply ”

Twinkle is constantly smiling …..tears of happiness were gushing from her eye’s …for her it was all dream ….her fantasy world ..

She picks up black one ….while everyone were confused even kunj but then she throws that one nd picks the red one and kisses it …showing her acceptance …
Everyone claps …..lights r switched on again ..
Rose petals falls on Twinkle from the all four sides and upwards from the sky ….it looks as if the sky is draining all precious jems on a heaven angel …

Twinkle was twirling around with happiness …….she was making her drenched in the rainfall of flowers …while kunj excitement were at it’s peak seeing her ….

Kunj shouts ….” Twinkle look up …”
As everyone looked up…a big paper banner is shown hanging in the air ….having pic of her’s …the same pic which kunj clicked at Mumbai when she was sleeping …..nd in bold letter’s it was written …
” EVERY FRIENDSHIP IS BEAUTIFUL BUT OURS IS MY FAVORITE …KUNJ’S SIYAPPA QUEEN WELCOME TO SARNA FAMILY”…

Finally Kunj lands on ground ….nd moves towards Twinkle …..
He is wearing black tuxedo along with a classy bow tie …
While Twinkle is wearing lehenga in combination of orange nd blue with a light embroidery work on necklines nd sleeve’s nd all over front panels …nd matching light jewelry with it with a light make up giving a classy look to her ….

Kunj was mesmerized to see her ….while Twinkle’s heartbeat was increasing with the every step kunj was taking towards her ….

He kneels down nd forward his hand to her ..

K-” Will u allow me to hold ur hands lifelong …will u allow me to give my surname to be added in ur name …will u allow me to accept u as my wife ….”

Twinkle was crying seeing his passion of love towards her …..she speaks …” Yes …yes
..yes… I allow u ….” ..

He makes him stand nd holds his hands ..
” I promise to hold ur hands forever for life …”

They both head towards stage nd exchange their rings ….. …

K-” One last surprise …for u ”
T-” How many more kunj ….don’t do this much for me ….I don’t deserve all this …”
K-” Shsshh….who told u that u don’t deserve …infact u deserve more than this ….what u have given to me cannot be expressed with such small surprises …”..he places his fingers on her lips nd makes her tear droplets touched to his heart ….

He moves na takes guitar nd started to sing the song along with other musicians supported him..

Oh, her eyes, her eyes
Make the stars look like they’re not shinin’
Her hair, her hair
Falls perfectly without her trying
She’s so beautiful
And I tell her everyday
Yeah
I know, I know
When I compliment her she won’t believe me
And it’s so, it’s so
Sad to think that she don’t see what I see
But every time she asks me, “Do I look okay?”
I say,
[Chorus:]
When I see your face (face, face…)
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile (smile, smile…)
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are).
Yeah

( He holds her by her waist ….nd dances sensually with her )

[Verse 2:]
Her lips, her lips
I could kiss them all day if she’d let me
Her laugh, her laugh
She hates but I think it’s so s*xy
She’s so beautiful
And I tell her everyday,
Oh you know, you know, you know
I’d never ask you to change
If perfect’s what you’re searching for
Then just stay the same
So don’t even bother asking if you look okay
You know I’ll say,
[Chorus:]
When I see your face (face, face…)
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile (smile, smile…)
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
The way you are
The way you are
Girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)

( He lifts her up ….nd twirls her around ….he tucks her hairs behind her ears nd murmurs ..” u r looking stunning ….ur simplicity …ur killer looks make me more maniac for u “..)

[Chorus:]
When I see your face
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing
Just the way you are
Yeah….

( He kisses her forehead …nd both hugs eo )

Everyone claps ….nd kunj introduces Twinkle to Yuhi ….
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TO BE CONTINUED…

hello everyone !!!!!…
Did u all liked the way I described everything?
Did u liked the way kunj proposed Twinkle for marriage ?…

Angita dear u told me to send links for the pics but I wanted everyone to imagine it ….sorry for that….but still if u all want I can send links to u …

I will try to post next one soon …till then byee

LOVE U ALL…..KEEP SUPPORTING

77 comments

  1. Romaisah

    ????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I srsly wish i was there!!!! Man u described it so damn fabulous
    Sayu!!!!!! You did an amazing job these descriptions these surprises n yes just the way u r .. One of my fav songs .. I hope u read my last epi n now u no where im from … 🙂 … Srsly Sayu im obliged to have met u i wish to meet u in person !!! I hope you get some1 in your life just as you described kunj in ur ff ??? or maybe you already have one ???
    Seriously i don’t have words to say how gr8 this engagement was yaar !!! I can’t imagine rest Of the functions !! 🙂 come on dont make me wait post ur next episode fastttt!!!! haa im demanding you yaar ❤❤❤ love u dii !!

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Awwww……Romu ur comment made be blushed soo much …
      I’m soooo happy that u liked the description… u all made my effort fruitful …
      Even I want to meet u ….but what to do we r soo far from eo ..
      but if anytime I visit to ur country I will surely come to meet u…
      And about someone ..no dear no one…..
      I hope I can meet up to ur expectations in my next one ..I will try to post next one day after tmrw..
      love u

  2. sana (aamu)

    SAYUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
    i just cant BELIEVE dis
    It was just AWESOME……BLOSSOMMMMM……BL@$T
    MUAH LOVED IT
    how u describe decoration was just amazing n kunj ki propose karne ki style
    Ek dam phaadu thi
    Reallyyyyy LOVED it to d core of my heart
    Cant describe yaaaarr it is speechleass
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    First i was angry on u but tumhare lovely lovely epi ne mujhe 😛 c¤¤| kardiya loved it

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank u soooooo much Aamu for ur soooo good comment …I’m so happy that I made u to love the episode …
      But why were u angry with me ???
      Love u….

  3. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    ????????
    What was that???…am I dreaming…no I m not
    Wow Sayeedaaaaa..u really took me to the dream land
    The description was killed….I was on the verg of getting heart attack…
    All the time I was smiling like a miniac…n my heart was doing Jim jams….heheh
    But seriously this piece of writing was exceptional….
    Aap to writers ke bhi baap….sorry sorry…Maa nikle
    Not dont disturbed me n let me enjoy this moment❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  4. RiaA MendeZz

    Sayeeda????????????? wow wow wow wow wow. Like OMG..idk what to say..while reading this epi I felt so jealous of twinkle. Would u come arrange my marriage if I asked to u?no expenses on ur behalf. I’ll pay for ur flight, food, hotel and everything else. Even if u wanna bring ur family I’ll pay. The way u described everything omg, its sooooooooooooooo beautiful. Perfect! I applaud you! Standing ovation.. I felt twinkle’s happiness. I really did. You didn’t do an amazing job, you did a super duper amazing job. U wanted to end this ff? Tht would’ve hurt me so bad. I’m honoured to b reading this..pleaseeee upload the next chapter soon.love u loads??

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      OMG ….RiaA ur comment what to say …I don’t have word’s to tell u how much ur words touched my heart ..
      I will come nd arrange ur marriage …haahaa..I’m very bad at planning these all things but I wish that ur marriage will be the world best one
      U r not honored infact I’m honored to get so good comments frm u ..
      Thank u soooo much for ur lovely words…
      love u …

  5. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Oho such an awesome episode ?????and link is not needed but atmosphere oh my goodness. Its like am I dreaming!?? Twinkle kitna lucky heh yaar.the song explained twinkle a lot and also how he understood her and you lines????????……unpredictable episode…amazingly written and the rose part,,,omg!!! And you know it was quite filmy but touched my heart so so so so Much. You described it so so well. Your today’s episode is not worth of words but standing ovation.I’m actually just so touched but I don’t know by what and the only the only think I know its all only because of sayeeda….the sweetest best sayeeda. I’m so lucky to have you as my di???????you just have turned a ff into so much

  6. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Diii..sorry..Sayoo..(di hi nikalta hai)..U r so tricky.. U made Kunj propose her for marriage, Do all the more than just special deeds…but but but ..he din Said..”I LOVE YOU “…amazing.. And no need to tell to the description queen that her each and every line was making me feel that I am at that place.. But One doubt.. Kunj was on helicopter ri8?..toh usne Jo bhi bola twinkle KO clearly sunai aaya kaise…hehe..I know it’s stupid and silly but bacchi ka dimag hai…questions toh aayenge hi…
    Love you

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Meri Shreyoo….the way u call me description queen make me feel sooo happy ..
      Yah dear he didn’t said I love u …kyuki Maine usse bolne nai diya ..hahaaa….abhi time hai but I promise u will love the way when he propose her ….
      About ur doubt …so dear I mentioned that he was having bugle ( mike ) in his hands…
      Thank u sooo much for ur lovely comment just like ur name.. love u

  7. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    WOHOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO…..WOOOOOHOOOOOHOOOOOO…..HOOOHOOOHOOO….WOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO….aaj mere yaar ki shaadi hai aaj mere yaar ki shaadi hai….no no mere dost ki shadi NAHI hai….m soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy….my happiness knows no bounds di….aur episode ke baare mein only 1 reaction??! Muh band…itna bada already khol rkha tha padhne ke baad ki makkhi to kya uski poori family bhi ghus jaaye…aap waapas aa gye ho di m soooooooooooooooo glad….love u forever di??…may u always stay blessed…nd dare anyone badmouth abt u or frame u….use to main dekh lungi….tab tak ke liye tadaa.,,???

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hhhhaahaaa…..Laddo dear ur comment made me laugh so much …makkhi ghus jaye nai nai poori family ghus Jaye ….lolzz
      Like ur happiness is knowing no boundaries similarly my happiness knew none of it after reading ur sooo beautiful comment …
      Thank u soooooo much ….love u too

  8. Maggi

    OMG!!!!It wz epic.. lyk it wz beyond words… the descriptions cudnt ve been better bcz dey ver bestest!!! LUVED IT??????? TO TEN TMIES TO INFINITY!!! I wz so waiting 4 ur ff as soon u posted it i wz so happy?? bt wen i read it i wz speechless…. it wz sooooooooo lovelyyyyyyy…. the descriptns; oh my god…. it seemed as if i wz watchin it live…. kunjs entry wz lyk i wud hundred deaths to c sumtin lyk dat…. it wz ELEGENCE AT ITS BEST!!! Jzzz fantabuloussss… tqz a lot 4 such a beautiful epi….luv u loadz???

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Maggi first of all thank u soo much for waiting for my ff ..u makes me feel happy that u waited for it ..
      Now thank u so much for ur such a beautiful comment….I’m so glad that u liked the description nd u were able to imagine Kunj….that’s the best thing for me that I was able to make u all imagine him doing those scenes….
      love u too dear…

  9. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi sayeeda..loved the way kunj proposed twinkle….btw thats my fav song glad u added it to ur epi..it was like an icing on the cake..waiting 4 the next epi..

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank u soooooo much Fan ….
      I’m so happy to make u like the proposal …I’m so glad I added the song which u like …
      Plzzz post ur ff ..I’m waiting for it..

  10. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Sayeeda meri jaan………ufff mar dala yar tune
    I was just thinking y isn’t sayeeda posting her ff …..now I understood she was planning such a beautiful engagement for us …….u made my day sayeeda loved the way u described each and every part
    Yar tum Sab ke ff’s padne ke baad mujhe itni craving ho rahi hai ki mujhe kab koi aise itna special feel karwaye ga …..I know not possible but at least in Sab ka 1% toh ho sakta haina……leave all this
    Loved the epi ……muhhaaaa
    Love u Sayeeda kunj ke style mein Love u 2 3 28 27 26 25…….

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Kruti …..uffff……maar dala tere comment nein…..soooooo cute one..
      I’m so happy right now that I can’t even define it ….that I was able to make the engagement memorable one for u all..
      Don’t worry InshaAllah very soon someone will make u feel more special than this ….
      Loved that kunj style…. soo good …I’m able to imagine kunj saying same words to me….lolzz..
      Love u ..

  11. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Omg an epic epi wow the way u wrote was just awesome no not awesome it’s fan fantastic superbb marvelous too good whoa kunj love him n decorations uhhhh too good love the epi muahh
    U nailed it babaes
    Love u
    Do post asap
    Can’t wait for next epi
    ??????

  12. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Sayeeda,
    Firstly I’m soooooooooooo sorrrrrryyyyyyyyy forrrrrr not commenting on ur previous epi as I was busy then my net pack also got exhausted…..
    But I read that ur name was misused in any other ff but I’m glad u didn’t stop ur ff…..
    Now coming to ur epi it was blast….
    I’m just speechless as I really don’t have any word to explain today’s episode…..
    The decoration was just amazing and the Twinj scenes were fascinating…..I just went with the flow….I could literally imagine each and every decoration……
    In short LOVED IT TO THE CORE…….
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Shamz

      |Registered Member

      ——–<—<—-<@
      ————–<———<—–<@
      ————-<—–<@
      This rose bouquet for Twinj and for Sayeeda….. I hope u accept it becoz Twinkle aka Jasmin and Kunj aka Siddhant love rose bunches….. 😉 😉

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Shamzooo don’t say sorry dear …I can understand nd it’s OK…
      I’m soooo happy that u liked it coz for me till now I had never read any best engagement which was urs one …I still remember each nd every scene of it…nd u r liking mine one is a big thing for me
      Thank u soo much for ur lovely comment nd I too accept ur bouquet as it’s our Sidmin fav so it’s mine too..
      love u ..

  13. Bhavika

    |Registered Member

    LATE HO GAYI KYA ? NAHI? HA? NAHI?OH LEAVE
    THE EPISODE WAS MIND BLOWING
    i wish i could be there the proposal was fabulous
    mu khula ka khula reh gaya like a HUGEEE O(huge one aa)
    was this really engagement i think i had a mistake letme loook wait ..OMG OMG its engagement so what about the other functions WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING IN YOUR KHURAFATI MIND i think like this u will make us go on NEPTUNE NO NO PLUTO OMG I AM JUMPING LOVE U DIII LOVE U LOVE U LOVE U I LOVE YOU A THOUSAND TIMES…

  14. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    Sayu di.. It was killer.. Means just think yaar.. Koi hume itna behinta pyaar karta ho ki itna kare.. Kash aisa hamare sath bhi ho ye. Di u portrayed the perfect Prince Charming of every girl.. Luv u di. Osum, superfab epi

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Aru ……ur comment touched my heart …yah u said right every one wants a prince charming like kunj only……
      Thanks for the lovely comment ….love u…

  15. Aaruhi

    Haaaaayeeeeee….sayeeda ……..wat to say… no wordss….it was jst byond awsssmmmmmmm….!!!!! ♡♡♡♡♡
    Kunj entry was jst lyk a super herooo…..muuuuuuaaaaahhhhhhh…..m jst lost in dat world of aroma of love ……. mzaaaa aaa gyiiiii…… aaaahaaaa
    It was jst lyk….do does dese typ of love really exist….. mmmmmuuuaah muuaahh….love u for dis ff……

  16. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    sayeeda I don’t know what to say….
    I don’t have words to describe how fabulous it was…….
    the way u described the decorations of the venue….I just hope I would’ve been there????
    and his proposal…. oh my gosh
    how do u write so well yr ….I am so jealous..
    hehehe… just kidding??
    on a serious note I just loved the way he proposed her…..she is so lucky

    loved the epi….??????
    continue soon

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Awww……thank u sooo much Shreya for ur comment ….it’s fab dear..
      How I write it so well…hmmm…..u ppl support made me to write it …
      I’m so happy that u all loved the way of proposal….. …

  17. Apoorwa

    |Registered Member

    song was epic sorry sorry whole episode was a legendary piece
    full of fun and the description was amazing
    see although i was not going to comment but commented and dear one information i read you all ff’s epi so donn’t worry add one more lazy commenter to your list
    really sayu actually “OUR SAYEEDA” don’t feel bad for some miserable or idlers creatures
    and i trust u more than myself (filmy to banta hai)

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      I’m so happy Apoorwa to see ur comment …..thanks fr reading my ff dear ..though u were not going to comment but still u did it is the best thing for me..I’m happy that u liked it..
      I love the way u trust me ….love u soo much for it ….

  18. Foreverfanoftwinj

    |Registered Member

    Lahore-vila-quwat
    Simran kya ff likha hai.masallah,subanallah….hamare paas lafz nahi hai is epi ki tareef karne k lie
    Lekin phir bhi ye nacheez aapke is episode ki prashansa krna chata hai….
    Izzazat hai kya??
    (Humko malum hai Ki padh k has hi rahe hoge.matlab izzazat hai….)
    Shukriya simran apne is amrish puri ko taaref krne ka mauqa dene k lie….
    Aapka ye ff padh k jee chahta hai is duniya ki saari taarifon k shabd aapko nazar kar doon…
    Par kya hai na….itne saare Alfaz likhne k lie ye comment box chota pad jaiga.
    Lekin ye nacheez dil se dua krta hai ki apki bhi saggai isi tarah ho.
    Ameen…
    Meri dua hai ki Aisi saggai chahne wale ki muraad zaroor puri ho….
    Is ff ne mujhe mere dukhon ko bhulne mein madad Ki….
    Inshaallah apki har murad puri ho..
    Aur sarv pratham vo CCTV toot jaye jiski vajah se us hitler ne aapko daata..
    Mera bas chale to usko ye ff zaroor padhvaun…
    Aakhir vo bhi toh jaane ki meri simran mein kitna talent hai…
    Khadoos kahinka..
    Ya khuda usko sadbuddhi dena….
    Chalo ab meri taarifein khatam hui….
    Bas in taarifon mein prayog kiye gaye saare Alfa sidha mere dil se nikle hai….

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Oyeee……forever fan of twinj…. kitni duaein dogi mjhe….but u know I loved the blessings u gave to me …nd I hope all of them come true…
      Chalo ek kaam toh Accha hua ke mera ff padhene ke baad tera mood to sahi hogaya wrna shaam se upset thi tu …
      Hitler …nd CCTV ko toh main kal dekh lungi uski tension mat le I’m enough to handle both of them ..
      Chal meri Amrish puri ab Simran chali wrna reply bahut lamba hojega ….byee…love u …

  19. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Sayeed Loved it The engagement was like a dream I want my engagement to be just like this one with a husband as caring as Kunj(don’t worry there is a lot of time for it 10 years or so but I will make you my wedding planer for sure 🙂 )
    Please post the next one asap

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Sidmin …..u made me feel so blessed dear….I nd ur wedding planner…
      soch rhi hoon itne offers aa rhe hai toh CA drop krke yahi join krlun..lollzzz..
      Thank u so much for liking the episode….

  20. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Srry fr late comment. ….. but itna romantic omggggggggggggggggggggggggg
    its sooooooooo different. ….loved it………….kahan se socha itna sabb
    ….lovrly
    mai toh teri jabra fan ho gayi…..
    itna acha…. loved it…..kya kahun samajh nahi aa rahaaaaaaasssss……….
    basssss itna kahun gi itna romance soch kehieh I turned red like a tommato…my frnd call me tamaatat…byt today I was dark red colour ka tamatar…hahaaa loll
    plzzz post next asap

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Chehak …dear u made me blushed soooo hard ….I’m so blessed nd lucky to have a fan like u …..
      U turned red like tomatoes….. nd after reading ur comment I was also having the same conditon….
      Thank u soooooo much ….how to thank u ab mujhe smjh mein nai a rha hai ….

  21. Sayeeda

    |Author

    Sattu missed ur comment soooo much …this sweetness was missing in my ff coz u were not there …so happy to see u back…
    It’s a pleasure for me to take u to dream world …to make u imagine it ….a great ff writer like u compliment me is a big thing for me…..
    Ff writers ki baap …nai nai Maa…lolzzz….soo cute ..
    Love u .

  22. Sayeeda

    |Author

    Angita dear thank u sooooooooo much for ur amazing comment …
    I’m so happy that I was able to imagine u all scenes ….
    I’m not sweetest but it’s u who always make me to feel sweet with ur words…
    Love u…

  23. Amii

    Omg . It is just wow diii. u r amazing.. What a thinking superb hatsssss offff to uh…. Its just a woooooowwwwwwww writing superb episode..

  24. Sayeeda

    |Author

    No Bhavo u r not late ….u r on time ..
    Even I wish I could also present their too ….hhaa…
    Thanks dear for ur soooooooo amazing comment ….nd what is mind planning that I also don’t know…I’m so stupid na…lollzz….but what I will plan u will come to know very soon….
    love u ….

  25. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Sayooo firstly hats off to you for your thoughts the you changed negative to positive….never no one can such good answer for sayeeda not even anyone…I’m sure that sayeeda will feel sorry while reading it…If there any drop of goodness in her heart…

    Sayooo second a tight hug for your imagination…Masha Allah what a imagination each and everything the way decorated….view of Twinkle…and proposed part what to say mind blowing…I liked all but mainly I like the big paper banner woooooo that part was amazing….His words for her which came from his heart superb…

    Third A big walla thanks….For coming to my life…Thank you for minutes you makes us to feel we’re not in world really I’m not in this world while reading your ff…Thank you for giving such an fabulous ff…Thank you for being such a good friend, sis,writer, commenter, and most of all for being a good human…

    If I say any…you’ll say that I’m being very formal…but what to do you’re ff is soo good that I can’t control myself…Sayooo I was thinking if you would have stopped your ff we were going to miss such an marvellous story…And haa insha Allah Tomorrow show your Hitler our comments…definitely he will feel guilty….I don’t know to comment like you…to make others happy…but I know one thing I love you sooo much…
    Ok enough…
    Asalsmu alaikum…
    Good night..
    Mmmmmmhhhhhhh

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Aaaaaffffoooooooooo………
      my dear…..my bestie ….u r a heart stealer ….ur comment MashaAllah…it’s so nice …u made me soooo happy …
      Though I was very sad coz of that Hitler but after reading all ur beautiful comment I felt so relaxed that even his harsh word’s didn’t effected me ….
      Formal toh tum hogayi …lekin I just love this act of urs ….
      What to say to u ….I’m so blessed to have a person like u in my life ….nd moreover I was able to make u to take u to the ride of imagination world was the best thing for me …
      I’m speechless to thank u ….but still …
      I love u…….love u till more than infinity…

  26. Queen

    Oh god you just described it in such a beautiful way I wish I could actually see those the epi so so good just loved it super good

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank u queen …..thanks for liking it …I’m so glad that u wanted to see it in real …..nd u liked it ….
      Keep supporting…

  27. Shonaa...

    Sayeeda…. how can u write sooooooooo wellllll…. it’s toooooo goooooooood….. kya description tha….. loved it to d core…. how lucky twinkle is…. i was blushing…. d way kunj does everything…. best engagement ever…. mujhe to koi word hi nhi mil rha kese describe kru apni feelings how much i love it…. u r amazinggggg darlo nd ur ff is Hayeee kya khne loved it love u….

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank u soooo much Shona Mona ….for sooo lovely words…
      U liked it ….it means a lot for me …
      Best engagement ever…
      best compliment for me…
      Love u ….nd thanks for liking my ff

  28. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Wow… Sayeeda…It is so awesome…Loved the entire arrangement…The engagement and the Kunj’s action to make her feel special was ultimate.. Loved it to the core…
    Hats off to you…The way you replied to the other Sayeeda..That positive attitude towards it…Kudos to you…

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Jisha di……thank u soooooo much for ur comment …
      Getting so great compliment from a great ff writer like u is a big thing for me …
      I’m so happy to see ur comment…

  29. bulbul

    Are yr I am so so late to comment but koi ni kr hi dete hain yr sayu di ye episode to super se bhi upper wala tha just amazing yr I wish I could be their but unfortunately ye ni ho sakta but hub Aap ho here to no fear kya engagement thi yr man aagya main apni seat se bandron ki tarah jump kar rahi thi or mere cousins they were looking at me as if I am mad but koi ni ho bata hai

    But di hats off I am just speell bound love u muaaahhhhhh

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hhaahaaa….u were jumping like monkey nd ur cousins teased u ….awww…soooooo cute…
      Thank u so much Bulbul for ur lovely comment ….I’m so happy that u liked the engagement…
      Love u

  30. Monica

    OMG! the way kunj proposed twinkle! Shit it was so good ! eagerly waiting for the next part. And sorry to comment so late … i was actually having a very busy schedule. Loved your work.

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Don’t be sorry Monica …u r commenting this is only enough for me …as ur support is important…
      I’m so glad that u liked the episode…
      Keep supporting….

  31. zayb_zikra

    Oh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo….
    Swear di m really really shorry yaar….
    For commenting late for u……..
    Yaar ws literally very busy…..
    So hope u understand…..??????
    N commin to d epi it ws jus….
    .
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    ..

    ….
    …….
    Ws jussssssssssssssss muahhhhhh superbbbbbbb yaar…….
    Loved it sho sho shooo much…..?????
    N mah fav song yaar u nailed it so perfectly……
    M jusss in luv ur writing….?????
    How I can I stop loving ur ff…..????
    Haan aisa kabi hosakta hai kya????
    Nahi na toh phir…..???☺☺☺☺?????
    Oh her eyes her eyes….
    I jusss luv that song yaar…..
    One of my most favorite one….❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Tysm for writing it…..
    N ya do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz……

    • zayb_zikra

      N ya sho sho shorry sholy pleazzzzz
      For commenting late yaar ….
      Or kya ho sakta hai…..??????
      N one more shorry….
      Arre socho mat….
      Wo isliye ki…
      Ki ….ki…..k….k…..ii…..
      Bata to hu baba batari hu….
      Wo na…
      Acha pehle plomish kalo k dato ge nahi……
      Wo na comment chota sha karne k liye yar….??????????????????????????????????????
      Ehhehehehe kya socha tha….?????
      ???????????????
      Acha chalo maaf kardena ha pleaashhhhhhhh…….
      Is choti si bachi per rahem kardena……
      Pleaashhhhhhhh….?????????

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Zikroooo…..u know since yesterday I was waiting for ur comment…. I thought u r busy nd u won’t read it ..
      Par aisa ho skta hai kya meri Zikroo padhe na ….never….
      Nd why r u saying sorry bad manners…. naa…saying sorry to ur sista is wrong …for me ur comment is most precious nd most beautiful one …
      Love u soooo much…. I have send u mail do check it …nd reply…

  32. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hi Sayeedaaaaa,
    Ab kya bolun, bata bhi do. Umm..umm..ruko, dimaag mein kuch aaya.
    Thodi der rook bhi jao itni bhi kya jaldi hai. Acha chalo bata hi deti hoon, aap bhi kitna wait karogi.
    Kaise kahoon ki aapke ff ke ham kitne bade fan hain! Hamare toh hosh aur awaaz dono chin gaye.. it was amazing. I mean it was such an unique engagement. Loved it you know na. Please post the next part soon.?

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Awwww….Ria darling ur comment is sooo good ….I waited as u said nd after that waiting I got so good word’s to read…
      Thank u soooo much ….I know I always say to u not to thank me but now I’m doing it …but u know na kabhi kahbhi sab chalta hai ….
      Love u …

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Prashansha….thank u ….thank u soooooo much…. I felt sooo good to see ur comment for the very first time …
      I’m very happy to know that u liked it…
      Keep supporting …

  33. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omgggggggggggggg sayeeda di first of all i m hving a big curve on my lips u made me smile lyk wt nt di kya describe kara hai evn i ws awestruck kash di sbke hsbnds aise hi srprises rkhen i mean it ws amazing di wrds hi nhi hai bolne ke liye d wy kunj ws expressing d srprises al were jst fabulous di marvalleous u niled it ina jyada ki jahan nail kiya tha wahan se aar par dikh rha hai kyalikha hai di engagement itni achi thi toh shaadi toh w8ing di osm keep it up

    • Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey Baby ….thank u soooo much for ur comment…. u never forget to comment no matter how much late u r …..but I already submitted my next part of ff ….nd dat time I didn’t aware of ur comment so I didn’t mentioned ur name in it…hope u forgive me….
      Love u for ur sweet comment nd yes I will try to make marriage as the royal one..

  34. Baby

    |Registered Member

    thnks di its f9 at least u no me n actually d site ws nt wrking so ws nt able 2 cmnt bt d episode ws epic mere pas toh wrds khatm ho gye hain luvd it

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