” I can’t stop loving u “- Twinj Love. Chapter 16 ( Engagement Special )

” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !!!”

See guys ur Sayu is back ….Okkk!!! I know u all r hell angry on me …nd why not u all I deserve this ….what I did on my last one was wrong …how could I doubt on the love of u ppl ….I’m soo stupid one…naa!!

Thank u everyone for supporting me …I know I should not say thanks but sometimes it’s OK…plzzz forgive me …

Well coming to my dear …lovely ….my duplicate sis Sayeeda ….I don’t know why did u do that …what u wanted to convey to others …though at first I was very angry on u …but after that I wasn’t coz just bcoz of u I came to know; even u ;also came to know how much my TU family loves me ….what place I owed in their heart …Though u pointed out on our frndship but the way everyone was saying ” OUR SAYEEDA ” ….is the best word I heard in my life …nd coz of u my silent reader’s commented ….the thing which I was unable to do ; u did it ..Thanks for that yrr
U made me cried but if hurting me gave u happiness then I’m happy that I was able to make u happy ….I don’t have any grudges from u but plzzz if u really care of someone emotions then do not hurt other’s …this life is very small for hatred ..do spread love ..be happy nd keep smiling dear ..



Everyone was busy planning for engagement as it is planned by Sarna family..
A loud voice of dhol ( barrel ) is heard ..many of the person’s playing dhol entered Sarna house ….

B-” Who r u all ? Why r u entering our house without our permission ? We didn’t called u all …then how gave u right to enter our house ?”

Listening to the voice …everyone came to hall ..

K-” Bebe …did u called them …?”…he speaks loudly coz of to much noise ..

B-” No …I didn’t called them …

A man is seeing entering the house along with the lady …they both were shaking their legs on the beat playing …
Bebe nd others were surprised nd happy to see them ….

Man sings ….” Mere yaar ki saagai hai …o mere yaar ki sagai hai …”
( It’s my frnd’s engagement …..o it’s my frnd’s engagement)

K-” Yuvi ….Mahi ….u both came ..”
So the boy is revealed to be Yuvi nd girl is Mahi …

Y-” Oyeee…..it’s my bestie special day …nd I will not come …is it possible ??? ”

K-” No …even I will not get married without ur presence …never ” …

He takes him nd all other’s for dance …..
Kunj hugs Yuvi ….
Yuvi murmurs ” Wooww…kunj u so fast …u came here to attend Twinkle’s engagement nd now u r getting engaged to her….I’m so excited to meet ur Siyaapa queen ”

K-” Even I’m excited to meet her …I can’t wait for night to come …I’m feeling goosebumps thinking how beautiful she will look today but will happen when I will see her …”

Y-” Yah …I can understand ur excitement but control ur emotions today u r only getting engaged not married …at least save some of it for ur marriage ..OK now u assign some work to me for ceremony preparation.”

K-” Don’t worry Yuvi everything is already done ….I have planned the ceremony by myself ..I just hope everyone loves it ”

They both giggles …While everyone greets Yuhi…


Taneja family nd their guest arrives at the venue ….
Each nd every person was awe- struck to see the decorations …while Twinkle was astonished to see the place decorated so beautifully ….

The entrance door is lighted up with countless number of fairy lights..
Trees were lighted up with the sparkling lights all around adding a dreamy ambience to the garden . Wooden screens were placed lighted with diyas nd marigold garlands were twisted around it..
..the flowers sculpture of peacock placed nd on the feather’s of the bird some lines were written nd a pic is designed using flower petals ..
” I’M GETTING HOOKED FOR MY LIFE WITH A CHICK WHO FINALLY HOOKED ME DOWN- MY TWINKLE …” nd below these lines Twinkle’s smiling face is designed …
all over the above paper lanterns were hanged having pictures of Twinkle imprinted on it …nd floral chandeliers were arranged in way of inverted umbrella..

( They all were amazed to see the sight …without taking off their eyes they entered further ; the next view made them go bowled)

Moroccan tent’s were placed for guests sitting arrangement ….sofa’s nd table’s were placed in round shape giving a royal look to tents …having floral arrangement at center of table with combination of pink nd orange flowers ….the petals of flowers were having twinj engraved on it

While stage for bride nd bridegroom was set in form of tent having white nd light purple background implanted with yellow nd orange neon bulb….while the straight chandeliers places were covered with hydrangea nd blossoming oregano flowers ….a beautiful jhoola ( swing ) is placed in between decorated with bright ethnic cushions nd drapes for twinj to sit ….

” Exquisite …..elegant….fastidious ….Throughout my whole life I had never been to any beautiful like this …..the whole scenario over here ; each nd every scene are driving me crazy ….the more look at them the more I’m feeling jim- jams ….the more I’m loving it …. I always wanted my this day to be the most special one as today we make our first promise for a new relation but I never thought Kunj would make this day more than special for me ….U made me feel like a empress of a kingdom …u made a normal girl transformed into a queen …..ur queen ….The way everyone is lurking around nd staring me with a million dollar smile makes me feel more Worthy than I’m ….But where r u ….my eye’s r desperate to see u ….my heart wants u to look at me ….though u won’t be speaking through word’s about ur emotions u have but ur eye’s do speak nd I can read ur eye’s ” …

B -” Welcome ….u all ….Twinkle Puttar u r looking so cute ….so twinkling as if a brightest star of galaxy is shining ..Puttar go ahead nd have ur seat on stage ”

T-” Thanks Bebe for the compliment….but u all will accompany with me to stage ?”…she is looking here nd their ..

B-” Twinkle I know ur eyes r searching for kunj but don’t worry he will come soon. …nd u move to stage we will follow u frm behind ..”

Twinkle felt something fishy but she ignored it nd started to move towards stage ….Suddenly the light goes off…a complete darkness spread is spread around the lawn ..
Everyone got scared ….but the next view made them to understand that it is all pre planned…

A spotlight falls on Twinkle glowing her face more brighter …while on the all sides of lawn it is dark …Twinkle was confused that’s what going on ….A voice is heard ..echoing all around….everyone looks up towards the sky nd found kunj inside the helicopter ….having bugle in his hands…

” Oyee….meri jhalli siyaapa queen don’t be so scared …I know u have phobia of darkness but sometimes this darkness is the best way to beautify our happiness …today I nd u r going to be mutilated in the first step towards this sacred relation nd before that I want all ur doubt’s to be cleared ….

Every girl used to imagine pic of her life partner nd have many hopes with him …so as u also have ….though I may not match with that pic but I promise u I will try my best to match with it ….I can’t promise u that I will led stars in ur lap but I can assure u that I will present u with the stars of my love; care nd concern…..I will never leave u alone in life any path ….how much the way is tough …how much Peebles r scattered in it ; I will always
clear them to make ur way smooth ….every sorrows of urs has to first encounter with me before coming to u …I will always act ur shield ….No matter how much grief I suffer but I will never let any pain to come near u …
U must be thinking how much filmy lines I’m speaking but trust me each nd every word of it is coming directly from my heart …my feelings for u is indefinable …these few lines can’t make an impression on my emotions ..

Now I had spoked much …it’s ur turn to speak.. Tell me r u ready to accept ur Sadu Sarna as ur husband ….if yes then on the side of urs one red color flower is kept ; pick it up …nd if no then pick up the black one …do fast I’m waiting for ur reply ”

Twinkle is constantly smiling …..tears of happiness were gushing from her eye’s …for her it was all dream ….her fantasy world ..

She picks up black one ….while everyone were confused even kunj but then she throws that one nd picks the red one and kisses it …showing her acceptance …
Everyone claps …..lights r switched on again ..
Rose petals falls on Twinkle from the all four sides and upwards from the sky ….it looks as if the sky is draining all precious jems on a heaven angel …

Twinkle was twirling around with happiness …….she was making her drenched in the rainfall of flowers …while kunj excitement were at it’s peak seeing her ….

Kunj shouts ….” Twinkle look up …”
As everyone looked up…a big paper banner is shown hanging in the air ….having pic of her’s …the same pic which kunj clicked at Mumbai when she was sleeping …..nd in bold letter’s it was written …

Finally Kunj lands on ground ….nd moves towards Twinkle …..
He is wearing black tuxedo along with a classy bow tie …
While Twinkle is wearing lehenga in combination of orange nd blue with a light embroidery work on necklines nd sleeve’s nd all over front panels …nd matching light jewelry with it with a light make up giving a classy look to her ….

Kunj was mesmerized to see her ….while Twinkle’s heartbeat was increasing with the every step kunj was taking towards her ….

He kneels down nd forward his hand to her ..

K-” Will u allow me to hold ur hands lifelong …will u allow me to give my surname to be added in ur name …will u allow me to accept u as my wife ….”

Twinkle was crying seeing his passion of love towards her …..she speaks …” Yes …yes
..yes… I allow u ….” ..

He makes him stand nd holds his hands ..
” I promise to hold ur hands forever for life …”

They both head towards stage nd exchange their rings ….. …

K-” One last surprise …for u ”
T-” How many more kunj ….don’t do this much for me ….I don’t deserve all this …”
K-” Shsshh….who told u that u don’t deserve …infact u deserve more than this ….what u have given to me cannot be expressed with such small surprises …”..he places his fingers on her lips nd makes her tear droplets touched to his heart ….

He moves na takes guitar nd started to sing the song along with other musicians supported him..

Oh, her eyes, her eyes
Make the stars look like they’re not shinin’
Her hair, her hair
Falls perfectly without her trying
She’s so beautiful
And I tell her everyday
I know, I know
When I compliment her she won’t believe me
And it’s so, it’s so
Sad to think that she don’t see what I see
But every time she asks me, “Do I look okay?”
I say,
When I see your face (face, face…)
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile (smile, smile…)
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are).

( He holds her by her waist ….nd dances sensually with her )

[Verse 2:]
Her lips, her lips
I could kiss them all day if she’d let me
Her laugh, her laugh
She hates but I think it’s so s*xy
She’s so beautiful
And I tell her everyday,
Oh you know, you know, you know
I’d never ask you to change
If perfect’s what you’re searching for
Then just stay the same
So don’t even bother asking if you look okay
You know I’ll say,
When I see your face (face, face…)
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile (smile, smile…)
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
The way you are
The way you are
Girl, you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)

( He lifts her up ….nd twirls her around ….he tucks her hairs behind her ears nd murmurs ..” u r looking stunning ….ur simplicity …ur killer looks make me more maniac for u “..)

When I see your face
There’s not a thing that I would change
‘Cause you’re amazing (amazing)
Just the way you are (are)
And when you smile
The whole world stops and stares for a while
‘Cause, girl, you’re amazing
Just the way you are

( He kisses her forehead …nd both hugs eo )

Everyone claps ….nd kunj introduces Twinkle to Yuhi ….


hello everyone !!!!!…
Did u all liked the way I described everything?
Did u liked the way kunj proposed Twinkle for marriage ?…

Angita dear u told me to send links for the pics but I wanted everyone to imagine it ….sorry for that….but still if u all want I can send links to u …

I will try to post next one soon …till then byee


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  1. Baby

    omgggggggggggggg sayeeda di first of all i m hving a big curve on my lips u made me smile lyk wt nt di kya describe kara hai evn i ws awestruck kash di sbke hsbnds aise hi srprises rkhen i mean it ws amazing di wrds hi nhi hai bolne ke liye d wy kunj ws expressing d srprises al were jst fabulous di marvalleous u niled it ina jyada ki jahan nail kiya tha wahan se aar par dikh rha hai kyalikha hai di engagement itni achi thi toh shaadi toh w8ing di osm keep it up

    1. Sayeeda

      Hey Baby ….thank u soooo much for ur comment…. u never forget to comment no matter how much late u r …..but I already submitted my next part of ff ….nd dat time I didn’t aware of ur comment so I didn’t mentioned ur name in it…hope u forgive me….
      Love u for ur sweet comment nd yes I will try to make marriage as the royal one..

  2. Baby

    thnks di its f9 at least u no me n actually d site ws nt wrking so ws nt able 2 cmnt bt d episode ws epic mere pas toh wrds khatm ho gye hain luvd it

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