” I can’t stop loving u “- Twinj Love. Chapter 13

” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !!!”
CHAPTER 13…

First of all I’m very sorry that I didn’t revert back to the comments …reason u all know…
Shreyooo….dear I read ur ff nd u wished me Eid …Thanks nd same to u …
Though the no of comments dropped on the last episode …don’t know why??..
Many of u didn’t find it appealing ….but I didn’t feel bad as I know many of the readers were busy with Eid …so it’s okk..I hope u all like this one…nd sorry to all ff writer as I didn’t commented on yesterday episode of urs..

Thank u soooooo much..
Rashi ; Sana( Aamu ) – I’m so happy to see the way u commented Sana…u made me feel so good that u were waiting for my ff..
Sidmin ; Zikra; Kruti ; Sameera; Aaruhi ; Loveleen ; Purnima; Lama; Aru ; Fan ; Shona Mona; Zaku ; RiaA ; Baby …..
Romaisah( I’m soooo sorry dear …I didn’t commented on ur ff intro coz of being busy with Eid but ur ff is amazing …I’m waiting for it …All the best to u nd now in ur next one u will surely find my comment..)
Bhavika ; Sujina ( thanks dear for commenting for the first time ..I hope u will support like this further)…. Nd Aaffo….
Nd all my silent readers …

Let’s begin with the episode…
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A man is shouting …” Stop; this engagement will not happen”

Everyone get shocked while Twinj were confused nd staring at eo…
T-” Papa!!….why papa is shouting ..why he is holding Raman( Twinkle’s prospective spouse) from his collar ….why he is so angry ..why…” ..she was about to speak when kunj cuts her nd speak..

K-” Saans lele ..kabse bol rhi hai ( Take a breath ..u r speaking since long time ) …

T-” But kunj see na ..why he is shouting”

K-” How do I know it !!..Aisa lag rha hai ke Maine PHD ki hai tumhare papa ke upar ; ke mujhe Maloom hoga ke kab tere papa aisa kyu kr rhe hai ( It seems to u that I did PHD on ur dad nd I must be knowing why ur father is behaving like this )”..

T-” Haahhaa….very funny …Here I’m tensed seeing the sight nd u r in a mood of joking…Let’s both go down nd see what’s going on …

K-” Toh kya Maine tumhara aath padke tujhe roka hua hai …ja na ..( Am I holding ur hand coz of which u r not able to go ..go naaa..)”
T-” Kunj yrr u r unbelievable …every time u r in mood of cracking ur Pj’s”

She gets annoyed nd went down leaving him alone …while kunj see’s her action nd smile ..nd follows her…

L-” Aye ji !!!…why r u saying like this …what’s wrong …why this engagement will not happen”

Rt-” Because he is a fraud ..a chicane ….”

FLASHBACK… @
Rt went to garden to receive the call nd finds Raman begging with someone …

Raman-” Plzzz…. Forgive me !! Give me sometime …I will pay off ur debt’s very soon …Just 2 months more ; I promise ..”.
Man-” 2 months nd that to u …u think I’m mad to trust u ; I know how much a cheapo u r !!…
What is the guarantee that within a short span of time u gonna arrange such a large amount …u r pauper ; bankrupt …”

Raman started to laugh loud …nd speaks
” See this is the guarantee ” ..he points towards Taneja mansion …
” I’m going to get married to Rt Taneja’s daughter very soon …nd she is a single issue of his family nd after marriage this whole property along with business will be mine …mine only …These stupid ppl thinks that we r rich but they don’t actual story behind the curtains….
Bahut bada murga haath laga hai ….( a big chicken is trapped in my plan)

Man-” OK I grant u time for 3 months but not more than that nd if u r not able to pay off it then u will be slaughtered to death ” ..nd moves ..

Rt followed the man …he catches him nd asks him about the reason behind His nd Raman covo…
Man tells him ” Raman is a big cheater ; he lost his 1 crore rupees in gambling nd we all running behind him to get our money but he always make excuse nd leaves but now he has assured us that he will pay it off soon as he is going be to son in law of head of Taneja Empires….”

FB ENDS……..PRESENT…

Rt-” Now u all come to know how much a swindler he is …..Thanks to Babaji that today he made me to know his real face or else my Twinkle’s life would be ruined ….”

Everyone was boggled …no one knew how to react on the situation…
Kunj moves towards Raman ….nd slapped him hard …nd started to beat him …
” How dare u !!…..u con man was trying to destroy the life of My Twinkle …..”

The word ” MY TWINKLE ” …is echoing in Twinkle’s ear ….she is very happy to see his care nd concern of kunj towards her…

Rt calls cops nd get Raman arrested …nd asked his family to leave at once …while other guest left ….only Sarna family were present over their…Leela nd Rt were crying badly …seeing her Twinkle felt bad nd she runs to her room ….

Ta-” Kunj go behind her ….nd make her happy” …
Kunj also goes.

L-” Hayyoo Rabba….ye kya hogaya ( what all this happened) …..Today my daughter was going to take a first step towards her next phase of life but everything got crashed …now what we will do …what will society will say …our respect got ruined ..my daughters life got ruined ….” ..

Bebe consoles her …” Leela ji …u should be thankful that Twinkle’s life is save ….why r u thinking about society …these ppl just want gossips to chat nothing else …but u should act as a strength of Twinkle …it’s tough time for her .. She needs ur support”..

Kunj reaches Twinkle’s room nd sees her hiding her face from pillow nd crying ….
Kunj’s moves to her nd removes the pillow from her face…..
K-” Ooorriii Baba…..ye chudail kahan se agayi ( from where did this witch came from ) ……he giggles….

T-” Kunj it’s me not a witch …nd go from here I’m not in a mood to talk with anyone. “..she gets up to move ..but kunj holds her hand

K-” Aoooo….so u r not in mood to talk …well u know na I hate tears ….nd when it is in ur eyes I can never bear it ”

He started to tickle her stomach ….she starts to laugh …

T-‘ K…uu..nnn..jjj…s…t…op..”
But he is not in a mood to do so …he is enjoying seeing her like that …she is trying to stop by applying force to remove his hands nd in a spur of moment they both fell on bed …Twinkle above Kunj….Twinkle’s hand were resting on his chest nd Kunj’s hand on her waist ..while Twinkle’s earring got stuck in Kunj’s sherwani..
Both were staring eo lovingly…..

Aankhon ki neend ho
Shabnam ki boond ho bas tum
Honthon ki pyaas ho
Jeene ki aas ho bas tum
( You are the sleep of my eyes
You are the drop of dew
You are the thirst of my lips
You are my hope of life)

( Twinkle’s hairs were kissing her face which were making Kunj go more crazy for her …she was about to move her hairs but Kunj tucked her hairs behind the ears )

Mere khyaalon ki dhundhli faseelon pe
Subah ki baarish ho tum
Thode se hum thode se tum
Ishq mein kho rahe
Thode se hum thode se tum
Muqammal ho rahe
( You are the morning rain over the
Foggy walls of my thoughts
Both of us are getting lost in live
A little
Both of us are getting complete
A little)

After sometime they came back to their senses….nd both tried to remove the earribg

T-” Kunj removes ur hand from my waist …I need to get up ”
K-” Haannn….plzzz get up fast or very soon I will reach to heaven …u r so fat …get up yrr…mar jaunga main …uthh meri ma( Get up or else I will die …get up my mother )”

She hits his chest nd stands up nd says “I’m not fat …okk..I’m pretty good in my figure ; it’s u only who is holding me coz of which I’m not able to get up ”

K-” Haan jaise main toh mara ja rha hoon tujhe apni bahaon mein girane ke liye ..( as if I’m dying to embrace u )..

They both started to argue with eo …while hearing the noise coming from room everyone went upstairs to see the what’s happening over their …

B-” Kunj ; Twinkle ; Stop it …”.
But they both were busy in their fight only …everyone tried to stop them but failed in their attempt …

Tanya shouted….” Ruuuuuuukkkkooooo ( sttttooopppp)”
Finally they stops …

B-” What u both r doing …why r u fighting like a kids ….?”

Twinj started to point out eo …
K-” Bebe …she started first ..”
T-” Haawww…Bebe he is saying wrong ..he started first…”
K-” Ohhooo…..siyaapa queen don’t blame me ; everyone knows how much laddaku girl u r ( harridan girl u r )”.

B-” Again u both started …u both say sorry to eo …nd I don’t want to listen no ”

Twinj unwillingly say sorry to eo …while Tanya helds Kunj’s hand nd takes him out of room..

L-” Twinkle Puttar ….plzzz forgive us …we failed in choosing a right life partner for u …I know u r very upset ”

T-” No.. U both should not say sorry ..infact I’m happy that we got saved from them ..nd I’m not upset …I love u both ..” ..the trio shares a hug..

Twinkle think.
” I should be sad as my engagement got adjourned but I’m feeling happy …even I don’t wanted to do this engagement ….Thank u Babaji for it “…

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NEXT DAY…MORNING….

Kunj was extremely joyful thinking about yesterday’s night …

Kunj’s POV..
” Wowww………Babaji how smoothly u cleared my way to Twinkle’s heart …now I have no tension regarding her marriage ….Yipee….”.

He is jumping on his bed …” Cancel hogayi ; Twinkle ki shadi …shadi toot gayi …( Twinkle’s marriage got canceled )

Wah ! Wah! Ram ji ( wow ! Wow ! God)
Shadi kya turwayi ( How marriage got canceled )
Twinkle r kunj ko ; baddhai ho ; baddhai ho
( Congrats to Twinkle nd kunj)
Ab hogi Kunj ki Twinkle ke saath saagai
( Now Kunj will get engaged to Twinkle )

Tanya-” Nai hogi sagaai ( engagement ) …”
Kunj was shocked to see her ….
K-” Dii…aap yahan …kab aye ..( di ..when did u came here )””…he stammers …

Ta-” When u were busy in singing ur song nd expressing ur happiness”

K-” Wo di actually ..” .

Ta-” No di …haan….u were having so many things inside ur heart nd u didn’t even shared with me …U love Twinkle so much but u didn’t bothered to tell me ….”

K-” Aww….meri kucchu pucchu …pyari Di …I’m sorry ..”

Ta-” I accept ur apology …fine ..but how will u get engage to her …”

K-” Why …why I won’t ”

Ta-” Areee…we have to go nd take marriage it proposal for Twinkle ..”

K-” My marriage proposal for her ….thanks di …I love u …” …he start to twirl her around …..

Ta -” Control ….we will go …we all like Twinkle a lot nd it’s a very happy news for us to get her as DIL of our family… but before that I have to talk to Maa ; Bebe nd papa ..” ..

K-” Jiise baat Karna hai jaldi Karo na…( Whomsoever u want to talk u can …but do soon)”..
Ta-” Control ur emotions …i will …” ..

Episode ends on Tanya nd kunj smiling nd excited face ….

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PRECAP – Kunj’s marriage proposal for Twinkle ….nd Twinkle to say no for it ..

Hello everyone ..!!!!!!.
Though I said to post next one after some days but I got time so I posted it…

How was the episode …?
Well many of u guessed it right …it was Kunj’s proposal only …smart haan…

Think guys …why Twinkle said no for marriage ?

I will try to post next one tmrw or day after tmrw..till then byee…..
Nd plzzz guys do comment ..I was missing comments of so many ppl in last episode..

Love u all.. …keep supporting

23 comments

  1. Lovely

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    Diiii..???????????sorry …sorry..
    Khaa naa sorry…
    Maaf kar bhi do..

    Plz…

    Sorry..jaan bhi pakad liya…

    Sorry…
    Maaf kiya??

    Noo….!!!!haaaawwwww..but Maine kaam hi aisa kiya hai..main bhulakkad hu..bevakoof..pagal..jhalli..stupid..and what not….I mean …I din read YOUR FF!!!..main aisa kaise kar sakti hoon…mujhe bohot gussa aa raha hai…

    Chalo je sab chodo..
    Epi ekdum..rapchik..and precap!!!.. God..kya kiya..I think she is doing bcoz she is miffed with kunj…

    And how was ur Eid??..of course..it would have been an awesome one..

    And ya I posted yehi hai ishq 26..do read and comment if u wish..

    Love you di..from the core…and so sorry again???????????????????????????

  2. SidMin

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    Sayeed please post the next part soon I can’t wait for it Loved the episode 🙂 and waiting to know why Twinkle will say no to the proposal (hope its some stupid reason like Kunj always fights with her or he did not propose her and all);)

  3. Chehak

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    Sayeda first of all Eid Mubarak
    ill luv ur ff but I am unable to comment on each nd every ff. I am srry fr that… but today got time its amazing. . I luv ittt…… ur ff is amazing. ….mimd blowing. .
    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  4. Shreya098

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    fabulous episode…
    yaay twinkle ki shaadi toot gayi????
    I am soo happy
    I feel like singing that song along with kunj.
    just loved the episode…. twinj scenes??????
    waiting to know why twinkle is saying “no”…
    and sooo sorry for not commenting on ur previous episode
    as i was a bit busy….soooooo sorry

  5. Romaisah

    Sayeeda !! Thank u for commenting on my ff i was feeling a bit down since i was hardly getting comments … Anyway I’ll post soon 🙂 …. Back to ur epi yaar it was amazingggg!!!! I enjoyed hmmm but precap is kinda scary … Im waiting for i next epi so the.mystery can b unraveled …

  6. Angita

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    Episode was fantabalous. Kunj keh saath meh bi kush ho kyunki twinkle ka shadi thode gayi. Yippee. Or I really enjoyed twinj fight which brought a really really broad smile on my face ☺. Itna cute that aaj ka episode. Wese how was your eid. Eid Mubarak and so so sorry for not commenting on your previous episode. I really enjoyed the song to. Tere lite??????????

  7. Mitali

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    Please continue soon. it was PERFECT.
    THIS IS IT.
    Kya ff hai yaar.
    Mar dala tere ff ne mujhe.
    (pata hai over hogaya but I wanted to tell u this

  8. Ruchi

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    Hey Sayeeda 🙂
    How r u dear?
    The epi was fab specially the song part nd Twinj’s romance cum fight… 😉
    But the Precap… It is quite shocking…
    I thnk she will say only on some condition i will agree for this…
    May be m not right… But let see…
    Excited for nxt epi…
    so when we will get nxt epi…

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

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    awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi……ummmah loved it….bt y twinkle will say no to kunj’s proposal….?????eagerly waiting for next part……plzz post next part asap…….

  10. Bhavika

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    mauja hi mauja shaadi toot gayi hun mauja hi mauja
    twinj hi hogi shaadi ab toh mauja hi mauja shaam savere hun mauja hi mauja
    diiiiiiiiiiddiiiiiiiiiii
    episode was jhakas,rapchil,mast,faadu and what not loved it now just write quickly next episode

  11. Baby

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    hey sayeeda yr amazing ohh god phele toh i ws laughing lyk wt nt bt d precap hd made me a bit nhi nhi vry mch tensd koi nhi i belive u amazing yr wow i luv it wah wah ram ji shaadi kya turwayi ab kunj se kaho proposal le ja bhai nhi toh koi dhulaniya ko chura le ga uske saiyaan se pls sry nt at all gud at riting bt dis song made me laugh d most d sids excitement n craziness frjasmin uff luvd it hope u ll soon post nxt episode di pls post nxt episode pls asap

  12. sana(aamu)

    sayyyyu yeaaaaaaah my guess was right dat its kunj’s proposal for twinki
    n ur epi……………….was…………..was…………..i dont wanna tell ………y?(umust b thinking)………………….coz i hav no words to describe n now i m reading from d laptop so no imoji …………………………………..yaa idea!!!!!
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    best…best n ever best
    n d song made by kunj(means actually by u) was……………………….(let me think naaaaa) …………………….
    haa!!!
    uff bhul gayi
    yes,,,got it
    dis is d same song u made but lyrics diff hai

    wah wah ramji
    song kya bnaya
    meri sayyu ne
    badhai ho bdhai
    (kisko ho bdhai)
    its half
    but ise hi chala lo

    so now bahbye
    muah
    love u
    n m glad dat u like my way of cmnting
    n today also big wali comment ho gayi

    n
    woh upar awesome likha hai mene thoda meri style me likha
    bahbye

  13. Affaa

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    Sayooooo sorry sorry for late comment…Sayooooo I read you’re episode afternoon itself….but my network was very slow….so I thought to comment you later…
    Ok now coming to episode….
    Yaar Sayooooo what happened to this twinkle…what is her problem…
    Like always you rocked…
    Epi outstanding marvellous Yaar…In each episode you proves that you’re amazing….
    Masha Allah the way you write…no the way you describe…superse uparr…
    Don’t know to explain how I love you’re your ff…my favourite writer…my favourite jodi….my favourite ff….
    Love you love you love you….
    More fish in ocean….
    Keep writing…
    Take care…
    Keep smiling…
    Love you….
    Mmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  14. RiaA MendeZz

    Twinkle creates new drama with each new day…she gives me whiplashes..My god!
    Awesome epi.. I hope kunj will not be heartbroken again.
    Anyway, you again amazed me with your writing and I’m waiting on the next epi.

  15. Shonaa...

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    Sayeeda…. first of all ur dp ?? nd dn back to d episode as always…. amazing awesome fantastic fabulous mashaallah…. kunj dancing nd singing ?? amazing everything was just awesome loved it nd love u…. ??

  16. zayb_zikra

    Sho sho shorry…
    For commenting late…..
    Shorry shorry sholy pleazzzzz…..
    Maaf kardo na pleaashhhhhhhh …. ?????
    Ws really depressed on m grandfather died on eid..
    Ik Ik ikr he ws very gud person didu……
    I ws really in a delimma for so many days. ……
    So ws nt able to comment……… Pleaashhhhhhhh????
    Ok chal tere liye b ek sorrly song….
    Ok so let’s get started….
    Ha hogai galti mujhse mai janta hu…..
    Per abhi tujhe mai apni shaan maan ta hu….
    Ek akhri moka de mujheeeeeeaaa…
    Aaj se mai jaldi comment karne chahta hu…
    Ok commin to d epi yaar kya kahu mai…???
    Matlab. Ki kya likte ho yaar ap..????
    Jusss superbbbbbbb….????????
    Precap seems scary…..???
    Anyway do cont asap

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