I can’t see you in tears (IKRS) – Episode 1

Hello friends.. Thanks to all for your lovely comments. Let’s come to the episode.

In a hospital, a small girl is seen sitting beside a woman. That woman is crying vigorously. The girl says Aunty don’t cry. My mother is just sleeping. She will soon wake up. Hearing this the woman tightly hugs the girl and cries.

The girl could not understand anything. She hugs the woman back. The doctor comes out of the operation theatre. The woman gets up and rushes to the doctor. She asks with curiosity Doctor how’s she? The doctor remains silent. The woman shouts Doctor why r u silent? I asked is she fine?

The doctor says I m sorry Kanakji. I couldn’t save Dulaari. Kanak who is shocked hearing this falls on the ground. Tears fall from her eyes. The little girl who is confused rushes to the operation theatre. There she finds her mother lying on the bed.

She goes to her and says maa wake up. See your Dhaani is come. But she doesn’t hear any response. She says maa enough of your sleep. Now get up na. Dhaani is unaware of the fact that her mother is no more in this world. She says maa if u don’t get up I will start crying. But there’s no response.

Tears fall from Dhaani’s eyes. She hugs her mother tightly. She says maa r u angry with me?? She doesn’t hear any response. Dhaani says maa I promise I will not trouble u for anything. I will not be stubborn. At least now get up. I will listen everything what u say. But there was no response.

Suddenly Kanak, Shambhu, Dashrath, Sushma and little Viplav come there. Seeing them Dhaani rushes to Kanak and says Aunty maa is not responding me. Tell her na to get up. U r her best friend na. She will get up if u say. Hearing this Shambhu, Sushma and Kanak get emotional. Tears roll down from their cheeks.

Dhaani and Viplav r unaware of what is happening. Viplav goes to Shambhu and asks papa what happened? Why r u crying? Kanak kneels down to Dhaani who is crying and says beta stop crying. Come we have to go out now. Mumma needs some rest. She is telling lies to Dhaani because she knows that Dhaani will not be able to bear that bitter truth that her beloved mother has left her.

Suddenly the the ward boy comes and takes Dulaari’s body out. Dhaani who sees this rushes out and says uncle where r u taking my mumma? She is sleeping. Let her sleep in that room. Kanak also comes there. She is not able to see Dhaani in this condition. She goes to her and says Dhaani let him take. We will meet mumma tomorrow.

Dhaani had no other option than listening to Kanak. She cryingly sees her mother going away from her. Kanak also cries seeing Dhaani crying. She thinks beta your mother is not sleeping. But how to tell u? The episode ends.

Precap- Kanak says the truth to Dhaani.

What will be Dhaani’s reaction?
Will Dhaani be able to digest the truth that her mother is dead?
If not what will be the step of our little Dhaani??

To know this u have to keep reading my ff. Don’t forget to drop your lovely comments.

24 comments

  1. maha

    Very emotional episode Louella .. but keep going and yeah one more thing u are very talented.. handling 5 ffs at a time great job .. mujh se tw aik he manage nahe hota .. seriously u guys are great writers

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Aww!! Thank u so much dear. I love writing love stories. In fact I think I m made for this only. So I keep on thinking about New plots and New stories for u all

  2. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    First episode and already crying… This was just perfect Lou! I really loved it man <3 Kanak as a positive character who loves Dhaani, can't wait to read the upcoming episodes

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Oh thank u so much dear. Sorry if I made u cry but this is what I thought. I wanted u all to feel the same emotions which Dhaani is feeling. And I think I m successful in it!

      • Shruthy

        |Registered Member

        No yaar, I just meant that it was so touching, I seriously loved that fact. Write only what you feel to. You have been successful in it indeed 🙂

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Oh so sorry if I hurt u. But this was the main thing. Without this the story cannot move further dear. Well thank u so much for commenting.

  3. Lakshmi

    |Registered Member

    Cutie u made me cry…. :'( sad epi….but loved ur writing skills dear…. how can u write like this even though u r really young…? I am surprised…u rocked dear…

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Yes it was indeed a sad episode. When I personally read it I had tears in my eyes.
      I m able to write this just because of my imagination. My imagination is the main thing which makes me write so many ffs. But I don’t think I write so well. I m trying to improve myself. After all I m inspired by all your ppl’s ffs

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