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Can’t you see my love -RagLak ff Prologue

DarshiniBy DarshiniMay 20, 201727 Comments3 Mins Read
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Can’t you see my love-prologue

He holds her hand tight inorder to ensure that he is there for her…
Her eyes were welled up with tears when her sasural didn’t accepted their marriage…
She walks weakly with him and she keeps on staring their hands which is entangled together…his grip was so tight revealing that he won’t leave her at any circumstances…
Her gaze then towards the building from where they are leaving…

“am sorry aunty for separating your son from you”she said under her breath…

He heard her sobs and tightened his grip more…

“you are not at fault…it’s my decision to marry you..i should have asked you once right…”he says with a guilt in his eyes…
“laksh…don’t feel guilty…if you weren’t there then i couldn’t see my father alive…you are a god to me…the saviour to me and my family…but because of me you are away from your family…am sorry laksh..!!”she says wiping her tears…
“those are big words ragini…!!did you think that am i a heartless guy…how can i see my major in that state..he is everything to me ragini…!!he is my ideal..he is my inspiration and more than that he was like my father…how can i forgot those training periods..he was such a great human being ragu..sorry ragini…!!”he says consoling her…

{here laksh will be seen in military man avtar…}

“it’s all started because of that Nikhil…atleast once he should have given me some hints na that he is in love with my sister…how can he accepted for my proposal when he loves my sister…”she started crying not for being betrayed but for his father’s pride and for laksh’s split up from his family…

“Ragini..!!please yaar control yourself..if he comes infront of me then i will kill him for eloping from mandap…how can he leave my ra..my major’s daughter..”he fumbles…
“laksh please…!!do you think that am feeling for that Nikhil..i was feeling bad for your condition…separating the son from his mother is the biggest sin..!!”she said to herself…

“don’t hurt yourself..!!”he says smiling weakly and makes her wear seat belt…
Their forehead met…
“sorry..!!”he says awkwardly and pressed the accelerator…
Ragini gaze turns aside and she was staring maheshwari mansion with her painful eyes…she closed her eyes and the tears starts escaping…
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Guys i know you all are angry on me for not updating any of my ff’s especially don’t stay away…am extremely sorry for the delay…am on vacation it was not a planned one…enjoying some splendid time with my niece…network issues prevails here…
So i will try to update don’t stay away by tomorrow evening or by Monday…sorry once again…
And about this plot,did you find it interesting or boring?? Tell me your views through your valuable comments…
Take care dears…
~Darshu…

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    27 Comments

    1. Mintu on May 20, 2017 10:30 pm

      Amazing sisy… Yeah its interesting dear..!! Wow.. Laksh army man ah…ragu laksh higher official Voda daughter ah?? laksh parents accept panalya ragu va.. Don’t worry ragu..laksh ellamey Sari paniduvan..!! Looking forward dear…waiting for all ur ff..njoy ur vacation ???? take care dear

      • Darshini on May 21, 2017 7:20 pm

        Tq so much da??
        Cncpt maathitene..!!I hope you liked it…
        Yes laksh paathuppan..
        Yup ragu laksh oda major ponnu…
        Thnks a lot da I will b bck frm tmrw…
        Take care too da…
        Love you loads da sissy ? ? ? ?❤

    2. CrazygirlS.P on May 20, 2017 10:50 pm

      Amazing

      • Darshini on May 21, 2017 7:20 pm

        Tq so much sam…am glad that you liked it…

    3. shrilatha on May 20, 2017 10:51 pm

      Looking at the cover pic itself I knew it was u…I don’t know akka…u cover pics tell it’s u….awesome..so Laksh loves ragini ..and married her save her respect…interesting

    4. A.xx on May 21, 2017 3:52 am

      fab xx

    5. harinipriya on May 21, 2017 5:01 am

      This is awesome akka! The way u express the story impressed me! I think my army man was in love with his major’s daughter. I loved it so much! Their words of assuring each other were making me mesmerize. Please akka post the next part soon! I am really loving this ff! Please next part soon, please my dear sister! Love u! Bye! 😀

    6. Sinni on May 21, 2017 5:36 am

      Nice

    7. tëìtō kUn on May 21, 2017 5:50 am

      Superb​…. Interesting….

    8. Sreevijayan on May 21, 2017 7:31 am

      Awesome start my dear..cnt wait to read mre

    9. amul on May 21, 2017 8:21 am

      super darshu

    10. Naz_Temish on May 21, 2017 8:35 am

      So awesome concept…Get married on a compelling situation…wowww can’t wait to read next darshu ????

    11. Naagin on May 21, 2017 9:28 am

      Nice yaar

    12. Ammu on May 21, 2017 10:19 am

      Interesting prologue dear and thanks a lot for another Raglak story. It’s really Interesting and please continue. Eagerly waiting for next episode ??????

    13. Arjuna on May 21, 2017 10:20 am

      AWESOME AWESOME

    14. asra on May 21, 2017 10:30 am

      darshu dear it’s awesome dear…Indha story ya read panum pothey Idhu nenga than write panirkanga nu thonuchu…adhu correct…enoda darshu dear than author happy…army man love major daughter…interesting dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
      vacation nalla enjoy panunga dear….tkcr dear…

    15. lovely7 on May 21, 2017 10:40 am

      Amazing

    16. Makku on May 21, 2017 11:10 am

      Superb ??? prologue akka. The plot was interesting and I am eagerly waiting for the story to progress akka. Update as soon as possible akka.

      Bye akka. Take care.

    17. Sindhura on May 21, 2017 11:17 am

      Awesome

    18. Rehna on May 21, 2017 11:29 am

      Superb prologue dear

    19. Malu on May 21, 2017 12:35 pm

      Awesome nd continue

    20. Ashly on May 21, 2017 12:44 pm

      Superb

    21. IQRA222 on May 21, 2017 4:04 pm

      darshu didu it is awesome
      loved the prologue
      and again i will be able to see lucky as an military man i am realy excited for it
      so update soon
      and didu your DP is superb ragu is looking to cute

    22. aleeza on May 21, 2017 4:56 pm

      Awesome

    23. dharani on May 21, 2017 6:32 pm

      darshu it is awesome and damn interesting waiting for the next parts of all ur ffs and enjoy ur vacations

    24. Anju on May 21, 2017 9:00 pm

      Awesome

    25. avika on May 22, 2017 11:17 am

      Superr

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