Why can’t you Love me???… Our first meet (Twinj-OS)….

Kunj’s Perspective..

‘..heyyy.. Hi guys.. I am Kunj (Aashutosh)..and I can’t promise that had dialogue ya har baat English main hogi..I prefer giving you Hindi script… Haan toh 1st of all I am writing this as I have a really sweet friend among you..Tara di..whom I have always felt as my Elder sis..she is like my Somu di…so she told me something and I thought to share my experience with you… I know I am not very good at writing.. Kya karu..mere Sir kabhi writings par acche marks nahi dete!!…samajh sakta hoon …I am very new to this site …zyaada kuch nahi jaanta what type of work you guys like..but kya karein main thehra Kunj Sarna…toh…moreover yaar I am sitting on my bed with a fractured leg..and a sprained elbow…uff..I have nothing to do instead of resting all the time

So ..frankly ..Let me reveal ..I Like a girl…In fact Love a girl …her Name is Twinkle…my classmate and my bestie.(..so guys the real one is actually one among you…try to guess who she can be…..you all Love her a lot…
She is a class9th student….chalo let me not confuse you…. She is …..Lovely (shreya)…..๐Ÿ˜‡)

Twinkle is someone with whom I am completely frank with…we talk alot …Fight… More than Lot!… But really guys… She is the one.. Whom I feel… for me from the day I first actually noticed her ….

So let me start with our first meet…I still remember that moment …ummm chalo time main thoda peeche jaate hain…about 3 yrs back…
The whole batch was all set to start the 1st term of 7th standard… Like every year..this year also class 7 was given the opportunity to perform for the session start…and its obvious naa..when performance has to be done then Aashutosh bharadwaj..oopsie..Kunj is must to be called for…

I was in the dance hall with my buddy ..Yuvraaj (Piyush)..only the students who had to do something that day were in the school for practice rest all were on pre-session leave..

I wore..umm…donno yaar yaad nahi…yaya..aya yaad aaya..a orange kind of full sleeved T-shirt with white jeans..ab santara mat kehna mujhe..but yaar vo shade wasn’t that bad…acha lag raha tha main..after all Kunj Sarna gets adored in every colour ..what say??

“Hey Yuvi..bro when are we going to start?”… I asked…” Bas yaar ek aur hai..use aa jaane de then we’ll start surely.. “..he replied busy in the player..” Who the shit is??…kab aayega yaar ?”..said the frustrated me…”aayega nahi aayegi…she is a girl yaar…sandeep sir told…”..his reply made me go in a rail of thoughts…really apne batch main kaun si ladki hai yaar jo hamare saath dance main tik jaaye?..normally hay daiyaa karti Hui nikal jaati hain…donno why but meri batch mates ladko ke saath perform nahi karti…generally..

I was walking here and there and found my shoes needed to be buckled again ….I sat to do so..and then…Some sound of footsteps reached my ears beside my handsome face!…I saw a slender figure coming on wearing black capri and checked sneakers…my gaze went up and guess what?!!!…..the same orange T-shirt like me…exactly the same…uff..dono rang gye in Gerua shade…hayee..I slowly got up…and yes my eyes saw her face…LOVELY!!!..was the first word that came to my mind from my heart after looking at her face…but somehow stopped my lips to move and let my voice out…
“Hi..”.. She said..aahh..yaar such a sweet voice she has.. My heart was popping as if yeh hero abhi mere ribcage ke poster ohaad ke bahaar aa jayega…
” hello…miss..I think you are quite late..you should be on time..”..I said catching all my senses running behind them ..trying to be Normal..but haan iska matlb yeh nahi that I turned abnormal!..”May I know what was the time given to all of us to reach here?”..She asked turning to me keeping her side bag aside in a casual tone…”umm..All were given the time ..7:25..ya..7:25 am..”..Yuvraaj said coming forward and greeted her…”..so Mr..the time is 7:20..I am actually before time..agar tum ek ghanta pehle aa gye toh main kya karu?..Sab log itne khaali nahi pade hote jitne aap hain.. “..she said in a taunting tone…now that’s what I like…attitude haan..chalo I can handle this…sahi hi kaha hai kisi ne..khoobsorati ke apne alag hi nakhre hote hain…but ya I remembered she is the one..Twinkle Taneja… Haan I know She was admitted in our school last yearย  before the 2nd term..she was in tje other section ..we have Crossed each other many a times but ajeeb baat hai naa..I never noticed her much..and kabhi interaction bhi nahi hua…but shayad bhagwaan yahi chahte the..ki ise main itminaan se dekhu…

My thoughts were paused when we started our practice after an introduction.. And mujhe Yuvi ke iraade kuch zyaada saaf suthre nahi lag rahe the..kaise gentleman banne ki koshish kar raha hai..huh.. I must say she dancesย  really well haan…We did some practice and then the recess time..sandeep sir (dance teacher).. approached us and asked us to have our lunch…And we nodded in agreement.. I was really happy yaar aaj mumma ne puran podhi diya..but aaj aisa kya khaas hai??..chalo Jo bhi hai..I am really happy..
Yuvraaj was having his lunch but kuch tha Jo itna capable tha ki mujhe meri puram podhi se distract kar raha tha.. And that was Twinkle’s absence.. I went to the corridor and saw her sitting quietly with her book on a railing..

“A walk to remember.. By…”.. I said trying to talk..
” Nicholas Sparks.. “..she replied still reading..
I still remember the name of that book..amn’t I really intelligent??… Batana abhi comment box main..and ho sake toh apni frnd KO bhi samjha Dena..

But yaar ladki ne bhaav hi nahi diya…

” umm…akele kyu baithi ho??..”..I asked coming to the point..
“..leave it..kya karoge jaan kar?”.. She said looking at me and then went back to her pages..
” are nahi phir bhi…ek khoo…(ahh..kya bolne wala tha..but I gulped in that word)..I mean ek ladki akele baithi aise gum sum.. atmosphere ko murjhaya sa bana deti hai..see ye patte bhi murjha gaye..batao aisa bhi koi karta hai kya??”..I said sitting on the other side of the railing…

“Aashutosh”….she said chuckling..and finally keeping her book aside…congratulations Kunj beta..I am so proud of you..
(..are yaar I know mujhe Kunj likhna chahiye but samjho naa..pehli baar usne mera naam liya tha.. Replace karne ka Mann nahi kiya..sorry)

“.. Chalo Twinkle..tell..”.. I asked..
” vo..actually Mujhe nahi pata tha ki practice k time par bhi lunch laana tha..and tum dono kha rahe the since I thought main wahaan baith kar kya karti..toh bahaar aa gyi..”..she replied
“Umm..tum chaho toh hum lunch share kar sakte hain..”.. I said offering..
” no no . thanks ..I am fine..”..she denied… Bhale mana kar diya par ab teen saal ki dosti main itna pata toh chal gya ki meri life main aisa koi insaan nahi Jo itna khaata ho!!!…and meri maa toh ab bas usi ke liye puran podhi banati hain..are..Main Baar baar present main aa jaa raha hoon naa..chalo ..ab aage kya hua batata hoon…

“Are don’t worry …isme kuch bhi ulta seedha nahi..pure Marathi hai..try toh Karo..”.. I said insisting..
” but…fine..but I have never eaten Marathi dishes..”..finally maan gyi ..”then try now..what say?”..I suggested.. “Ohhkay”..

And we shared my lunch..maa..tussi great ho..us puran podhi ne mujhe meri best friend dilva di…Twinkle..

So how was our first meet??…sweet si thi naa..

Abhi ek msg especially for Shreya.. But I really request you all to read too..

“Ani…yaar I am really very sorry…maaf kar de..Fine tu nahi chahti ki main fir se vo sab karu…I agree…kabhi nahi pareshaan karunga…promise… Kabhi nahi…but please yaar talk to me naa..plz plz….yaar meri ek dost hai…I miss her a lot ….a lot…I know vo abhi padh rahi hai yeh sab…use mere Baal khichne main bada mazaa aata hai…
Ani mere baalon KO uski yaad aa rahi hai…kya mujhe meri pyaari se bff vapas milegi???…pleaseeeeeeeeee…”..

Aap sab bhi bolo naa shreya KO mujhse baat kare…itna kar do mere liye…vo apsabko bohot importance deti hai…pakka maan jayegi agr aap log kahoge toh..

And yes..agar mera ye OS thoda bhi acha laga ho aur time ho toh please comment and encourage.. I’ll surely write more…

Thanks a lot..

With Love
-Aashutosh๐Ÿ˜ƒ

35 comments

  1. dreamer...arundhati

    So…. Omg.. Cuteness ki hieght.. Ashutosh.. Akhir janab aap se mile… Humare sis ke bff..
    Shreyu man bhi ja…
    And good os

  2. Sidhanshi

    OMG!!! Wooowww… Superb… Amazing… Fabulous… Awesome… Mindblowing…. Words r very less to show my emotions, my exitment… Yeh os padhke mere andar se sabse pehle ek word nikla that “HHHOOOOWWW SSSSWWEEEETTT”… Nd i think ummm… Thode intelligent to tum ho, aur thode dramebaaz bhi… bilkul meri tarah… Hehehe… Nd shreya meri cutiee pie yaar i don’t know ki tum donoke bichme kya huya but jobhi huya ho yaar purani batoko bhulke ek naya restart karona plssss… Ashu (do u mind if i call u that?) he was/is u’r friend infact best friend na nd abto bho sorry bhi bol raha hey to use maaf karde na plssssss… Dekhna tere liye kitna pyaara os likha hey… Aur mere liye to koi ABCDE bhi nehi likhta… Ab to maaf karde yaar… Tujhe puran podhi ki kasam… Bt dear i won’t force u but hosakhe to iss bare me sochna aur use maaf kardena Plzzzzzzz… Par baki teri marji… Nd ashu yaar good going, keep it up…

  3. SidVee

    Aww soo cutee.. really loved your first meet.. hey shreya, plz forgive him na.. he’s genuinely asking fr forgiveness.. your story is ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

  4. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Awwwww ashutosh sooooo cute os yrrrr u should write more n yaa shreya u should forgive him yrrr aakhir his hair is missing u forgive him…….

  5. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Aashutosh tum pgl ho……..
    Truely u r mad I wish sabhi aise friends mile yr …
    I know u want forgiveness from her I have messaged her and she had replied to me….
    I ll tell u wt she had said ….
    And han maine ye poora is padha with a smile on my face …
    Main or ani same creatures hain …hopefully usne bhi smile ke sath hi padha hoga….
    Ur first meet is sweet and lil bit filmy…
    I just hope and pray ki she forgive bit wt u have done ….uske liye..pehle ladki ka pov zaruri hota hai…
    So better ask forgiveness hopefully she forgive u

  6. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Oohhhhhoooooooo so u r my Shreyoo’s Ashu ……( hope u don’t mind me calling u with this name…waise bhi why would u mind akhir mai Shreyoo ki sis hoo toh aapki bhi relative hui๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)….

    Okay …jokes apart…..
    U know what Ashu I still remember the time when Shreyoo once posted am article depicting her nd urs frndship …. throughout the day I was wondering that who is that guy ? He is so lucky to have such a good person like Shreyoo in her life…..

    Today after reading ur article I’m so happy… believe me dude u r really good…in order to apologise u wrote so amazing article…… don’t worry Shreyoo will forgive me ….or else mai usse naraz ho jaungi nd I know she can’t afford that I get angry with her ….

    Thanks yrrrr for giving my Shreyoo a bff like u ….. Inshallah she will surely forgive u ….I will help u with Lovely manao mission……

    Awesome…. amazing OS yrr……keep writing more articles keeping Shreyoo in ur mind๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚…

    Ok byeee…..
    keep smiling…

    • LovieAasni

      |Author

      Aree are bas..aapne itna keh diya..ki main apki shreyoo ka..hate..jaan leli meri..and yes rishta toh hai apna..vo wala..are vahi wala Jo bada special hota hai…vahi vahi Jo joote churvata hai…
      Haan haan samajh gyi naa.. Are badi samajhdaar ho..aap Jo chaho vo bulao..
      And yaar aap na bilkul MATLAB ekdum johri ho..is gemstone KO pehchaan liya..thoda gyan api choti sis ko bhi dedo..shayad mera bhala ho jaaye..varna is stone KO toh vo aise ghisti hai jaise saari value gira k manegi..
      and luck!!!..kya baat kar di yaar..is ladki ka bff banke tikna aisa hai jaise sherni ke samne lablata shikaar ban kar jao..uper yeh sherni nahi Shreyani hai…zyaada khatarnaak..but baat aisi hai ki bhagwaan has made me with super powers to handle this girl..varna sabke bas ki thodeyi hai…main special ho naa๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š

      and thanks a lot for being ready to help me..

      And try karunga next Sunday tak ek aur post karne ki..(agar tabtak zinda raha toh๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜„)..

      Buhbye..
      ๐Ÿ’œ

  7. Shikha

    nice story
    and really its amazing ashutosh how you remember each and everything about your first meet
    may she forgive you
    after this very sweet way of manofying

  8. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Hey Aashutosh! Bhaiyya bulaun? 13 ki hoon na๐Ÿ˜‚
    Well….Lovely di ne ekk OS likha tha…wo poora Aashutosh aur Piyush par based tha….
    Abb main ye bhool gayi ki hero kaun tha๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Silly me!
    Ekk baat toh pata chal hi rha hai…u love her a lot…see school mein mujhe love guru bulate hai…so itna toh main pehchan hi gayi…
    U r very sweet, very cute, very draamebaaz๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Aur kya kahun…bass ekk baat hai u miss Lovely di a lot….hai na?
    I know I know kaisa lagta hoga…
    Lovely di…,pleaaaaaasssssseeeeee forgive him. I know main koi nhi hoti hoon aapko ye bolne wali….but Lovely di he’s genuinely sorry, he just wants ki u talk to him…he misses u a lot…
    Please forgive him, hum sab keh rhe hai….for once forgive him…baki aapki marzi…love u Lovely di๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Oopsie…u r not Lovely DI….u r only Lovely…13 ki ho na?
      Achha Lovely listen na…
      Even I was abt to lose a BFF…the same way….
      Dosti toh accept kr lo…zyada convincing nhi krungi…but…just reconsider ur decision…

  9. Angita

    |Registered Member

    That was really really cute yaar
    But ek problem…I could not imagine twinj in this scene
    Only aasni
    ๐Ÿ˜ถ
    Nothing else to say….plshh understand but.

  10. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    ohh Shreya dear ab man bhi Jao…..ladka kitna try Kar raha hai….n u knw its nt an easy thing to bring a guy to TU ( sry ashutosh offence nt intended sry if I hurt ) cz as far as I knw guys dnt watch serials or may b they won’t b knowing abt TU…bt this guy has come to TU wrote an ff just fr u Shreya dear …..Chalo ab man Jao I request u….n cmng to u ashutosh tht ws so cute n sweet apology I guess she wl forgive bt make sure u wl nt hurt her again n u repent fr whatever mistakes u hv done…

  11. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Ashutosh this was just amazing…..u wrote it so well

    Nd rahi baat shreya ki toh vo pakka maan jayegi
    Nd sherya agar ye padh rahi ho haan mujhe pata hai ki tum pakka padhogi toh pls kruti di ki ek advice maan le…..maime bhi ek bff aise hi kho diya that kuch saal pehle…..nd I regret now
    Isse pehle ki its too late nd u lose such a sweet person pls maaf kar de usko
    Pls think of it coz after reading both d os’s I am damn sure agar tunne usse maaf nahi kiya toh at some point of time u will surely regret

    Pls shreya maaf karde usko aise dost bar bar nahi milte hain

    Nd ashutosh dont stop convincing her dosti itni bhi kamzor nahi hoti hai guys ki ek jhatke mein 3 yrs ki frndship se moveon ho jao

    Realy wishing shreya tumhe maaf karde nd u guys bcome back to normal wale bff’s

  12. Anayaali

    Awesome ………
    Amazing……..
    Plzzzzzz writte more os like this….. And shreya plzzzzzzzz forgive ur frnd i only comment to ask u to forgive ur frnd and see ur frnd is so nice she is asking forgivness from u in really different style and infront of whole tu family same thing happened with my sis her frnd was angry with she does not talk to her for whole year and u know my sis was really upset whole year in every point she used to talk about her and i was angry on my sis that why she cant leave her but after 1 year on same date her frnd forgive her plzzzzzzzz shreya forgive ur frnd she is so sweet shreya plzzzz for god sake forgive her

  13. Anayaali

    Guyz which story i tell u in comments this story main lead names are khadija and saliha khadija is my elder sis and saliha is her frnd and all this happened in 10 standard

  14. Anayaali

    Sorry i dont mean she sorry replace the comment from she to he i write he only but these tu waly chnge kr diya

  15. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Shreyaaaa………I mean what are u waiting for Yrr ………….u know what we don’t get bffs so easily………and if u hv gt one ………value him yr ……u know nowadays nobody bothers to give their talks to sum1 Nd he has done so much for u……….
    Nd ya shreyoo’s ashu….as sayeeda Di said…………..u don’t loose hope……..she’ll surely forgive u…….else we’ll eat her up……..fir se boll this hu shreyoo ….maaf kr de

  16. manu

    Woowwwwwwww yr toooo cute aashutosh bhaiya vese bhaiya bulau yaaaa jiju chalega….hahahha…..ok ok hmmm now sreyaaa diiiii yrrr banda itna cutely sry bol raha plz yrrr maf kar do plshhhhhhh and bhaiya maine toh koshish kar di ab dekhte hai par jo bhi hoga batana zarur ok welcome to tei family and I reallyyyy liked the u saod sry to dii yrrrr tooooooo cuteeeeee

  17. manu

    And yaaa u r intelligent yrrr u still remember ge name of the book plus write hmmmm sreya di u r lucky u have a dramebaaz but intelligwnt bff

  18. Aksa(sidmin's and the ff writer's big fan)

    Hiiii…what an LOVLEY os..maan gaye..it was fab…hayeee luved ur first meeting it was superb..u r a fab writer Jiju..(Sorry buh shreya di is my sis so aap hue jiju sorry haan bura laga hoto) plzzzz shreya di maaf kar do u r so lucky to have a bff lyk him..I nvr knew indian boys r friendly nd sweet…aise bffs dhundna is nxt to impossible..u r such an amzing friend…and dnt worry shreya di will surely forgive u..I’ll surely pray for u…

    And do keep posting articles..u r An awesome writer…it was bliss to read ur article..shreya di forgive him naaa…

  19. R. S. H. H. P

    Amazing os aashutosh yaar shreya forgive him otherwise umm yes i will not comment on ur ff. Waiting for next update aashutosh all d best for lovely manao mission. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  20. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee sooo cute ashutosh please Shreya forgive him year plz plz plz nah okay now coming back to os really year in a cute Tha nah mujhe diabetes pakka hone Wali hai ya ashutosh as sayu said she’ll definitely forgive u…..
    Just do cont soon plz if possible….
    N best of luck in Shreya manao mission we all r with u…

  21. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Aashutoshโ€ฆ
    u r very funny โ€ฆ
    ur story was superbโ€ฆ
    Shreya ka tashan was amazingโ€ฆ
    ab ladkiya nakhre nhi krengi to kon krega? Lolโ€ฆ
    We know little part of ur story through Shreya’s Osโ€ฆ Now we will read full version of ur storyโ€ฆ Intrestingโ€ฆ
    post soonโ€ฆ
    #Shreya plz forgive ur bestieeโ€ฆ
    he is trying so much to make up ur mindโ€ฆ

  22. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    awww….hw cute ashu( hope u don’t mind).so sweet…yaar shreya plz maaf kardena…plz plz…itne cute article usne tere maafi le liye likhi hai…plz maaf karde..Hamare liye plz…

  23. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    You know what man you are so sweet Shreya yar pls forgive him ๐Ÿ™‚
    Itna cute koye ladka kase hosakta hai ab tak sirf Shreya Ka POV tha abhi tera bhi hoga ๐Ÿ™‚
    Shreya yar Pls maaf karde Kitna sweet + cute + Handsome (dekha nahe hai par hoga jho itna sweet hai voh handsome bhi hoga na )
    Loved it your first meet was awesome I was reading this when I was in the car pura time sir yeh soch race the Ke kya comment karu So sweet Loved it
    Itni bar Sweet bola Diabetes na hojaye mujhe (LoL)
    You are a Maharashtrian ,I live in Mumbai where do you Live ?

    • LovieAasni

      |Author

      Hey hi Sidmin..First of all..thanks. A lot..itna sweet bola mujhe..I am glad..and thanks again for being at my side…
      But I am not a maharashtrian..My mother used to stay their and being a cooking lover..unhe kayi States k dishes aate hain..and puran podhi is one of my favorites…

      Thanks again yaar..๐Ÿ˜Š

  24. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™€ ashu can i call u that if u dont mind.
    U r such a sweetheart.
    Really
    Sooo sweet. Sweetest boy i have ever seen
    Loved it
    Always remain the same.
    Shreyoooo plzzzzz forgive himm. U will never meet a nice guy like him. Believe me
    Plzzz forgove him.
    Aashu keep going one day she will surely believe uโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
    Bieee

  25. Tara

    |Registered Member

    arey… tum toh zarurat se zyada hi cute ho….first of all thanks mujhe aapna dost man ne k liye… ๐Ÿ™‚
    this was super cute yaar.. kya bolu.. i was just murmuring “awwwww” throughout…
    tumse baat karke yeh to pata chal gye tha..ki u r kinda diff bt this… was out of the world.. full filmy…
    btw yaar yeh puran podhi kya hain?? actually idk..hehe
    bt yaar ashu.. i really hope ki shreya aur tumhari misunderstandings thik ho jaye.. and u guys become frnds agaain..shreya if u r reading this.. plzz forgive him na.. such a sweet fellow..
    u take care.. and do write more..

    • LovieAasni

      |Author

      Hello di…thanks 4 reading.. Puran podhi is a Marathi dish..its a kind of paratha type but the stuffing is of jaggery& chana daal..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
      Thanks for the compliments and yes requesting ani too..

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