Can our children do what we couldn’t? A DevAkshi FS (Few Shots) : Part 5 (Last Part)

Hi guys! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, all my dear readers! This is the last part, and I hope you guys like it.
Let’s begin.

RECAP: Raj, Trisha and Vivaan stick a note on Dev’s sofa which tells him all about what his mother has done, and requests him to unite with Sona.

DEV’S MANSION:
Dev moves towards the sofa, seeing a piece of paper stuck. He pulls it out.
He starts reading. The note says:

Dear Daddy,

Please read this note till the end. This is about your Mummy.
Your brother, Vicky was born to your mother. There was poverty at that time. Your mother did not want Vicky to face such a situation, and she handed him over to your aunt, when he was just born. Aapke Mama, uss waqt Delhi mein nahi the (Your uncle was not in Delhi at the time), and your aunt lied to him that she had given birth to Vicky. The same day, your Mummy found you lying on the street, a little baby. She took you home and fulfilled your needs. And then, she started bringing you up. However, now you are the owner of Ishwari Industrials. She is furious, that her son Vicky does not have money like you.

This is why, on your birthday, she made a plan, along with Radharani to kill you, so that the business goes to Vicky. Mummy (Your Sona), heard the conversation between your Mummy, and the goon. She rushed up to inform you. However, you did not want to listen to anything against your mother, and threw her out of the house, when she was pregnant.
This note is from your three children, Raj (eldest son), Trisha (your only daughter), and Vivaan (the youngest child). Please Daddy, listen to us, and please give us back our Daddy and Mummy once again. We are just kids, and we don’t understand much, but we surely know, that we need both our Daddy and Mummy.
Lots and Lots of love,
Raj, Trisha, Vivaan

Dev stands there, shocked, with tears of pain in his eyes. He recalls the time, when Sona had come rushing up to him, to warn him. He reminisces his harsh words to Sona at that time, and the way he had thrown her out of the house.
Why, oh why had he committed such a blunder? He had actually thrown out the person, who had loved him the most in his life. The girl, who could sacrifice anything and everything for him. And, just because of that wicked woman Ishwari?
Dev (with tears in his eyes): I have to go and deal with my ‘mother’ AT ONCE.
Dev moves towards the room, but stops himself.
Dev: But wait, first let me get my Sona back, and see my three little kids. There mustn’t be a moment’s delay in that.

Dev thinks: How do I convince her? Does Sona still love me? Yes, otherwise the kids wouldn’t write a note.
He gets his car out. Ishwari comes.
Ishwari: Dev, tu kahan jaa raha hai? (Dev, where are you going?)
Dev does not reply. He just drives off.
Ishwari (thinks): What happened to him?
Dev reaches Sona’s house.
Before ringing the doorbell, he stands and folds his hands, so as to pray, for the first time in his life.
Dev: God, I am praying, for the first time in my life. Please, please, let my Sona forgive me and let us become DevAkshi once again.
He rings the bell.
Sarah (the maid), opens the door.
Sarah: Dev babu?
Dev: Sarah, please call Sona outside. Please, hurry.
Sarah: But, I….
Dev: Sarah, I know why you are so hesitant. I have realised it, the biggest folly I committed in my life. I have come to correct it, what I did 5 years back. Please call her.
Sarah: Ok, Dev babu.

She goes and calls Sona.
Sona comes towards the door.
Sona: Yes, what do……….
She stops, and stands there dumbfounded, seeing Dev. Dev looks at her, tears welling up in his eyes, to see his wife after 5 years.
On the other hand, Sona stands there, pondering about why Dev had come back. Had Dev realised that his mother had evil intentions? Or was he going to hurt her once again, as he had done 2 years ago?
Dev: Sona….
Sona: Ab kyun aaye ho yahan? Phir se wohi karne jo do saal pehle kiya tha? (Now, why have you come here? To repeat what you did two years ago?) Please go away. Ab main aur bardaash nahi kar paungi. (Now, I won’t be able to tolerate it again.) [Starts crying]
Dev (regretfully): Sona, Sona please don’t cry. I am not here to repeat anything. I know what a flaw I made by not trusting you. I am as repentant as can be, for what I did. Please Sona, forgive me, and come back. I really need you. I love you so much! Punish me in any way, but please, come back.

Sona is left with tears in her eyes. However, this time they were not of agony. They were of happiness. Finally, it had happened. What she had been waiting for, since 5 years, had happened, at last. Dev had come back to reconcile with her.
Sona: No Dev, neither am I angry with you, nor do I want to punish you in anyway. I am just happy that you realised the truth. I am happy that my Dev is in front of me, once again.
She holds Dev’s hands.
Dev: You are still the same. My kind, pure-hearted Sona. Always ready to forgive.
Dev pulls her, and they share a tight hug. Both of them cry tears of happiness, at becoming DevAkshi once again.

Meanwhile, the children come from behind. They look at their parents, and joyfully share a group hug.
Dev and Sona separate the hug. Sona calls her chidren. Dev happily stands open-armed, calling Raj, Trisha and Vivaan towards him. All of them rush towards them, and he picks them up.
Dev: This is to the little people, who actually united us.
Sona: What? They did it? But how?
Dev: Oh wait! They stuck a note on my sofa. But how did they reach my sofa? Even I don’t know how! How exactly did you do it, kids?
Raj, Trisha and Vivaan (together): Electricians!
Dev (shocked): Badmaash baccho! (Mischievous kids!)

Sona: Can someone tell me what exactly is going on here?
Dev tells her everything. The kids stand there giggling.
Sona (open-mouthed): Are you telling me that these kids actually disguised themselves and came to your house. (Looks at Dev) You idiot, you actually got fooled by these children! Couldn’t you have guessed by their height? Dimag nahi hai kya? (hits Dev’s head)
Dev: Arey, but………
Sona: Shut up! Gadhe kahin ke.
The children run into their room, still chuckling.
Sona: These kids….
Dev: Sona, why are you getting angry with the kids? They united us, right?
Sona: Ok fine.
Dev: Smile, please!
Both Dev and Sona smile, and hug each other once more. Dev kisses her on the forehead.
Dev: Ok, now let’s go home.
Sona: Dev, actually………..
Dev (puts his arms on Sona’s shoulders): Sona, I know. (looks away) I will definitely deal with ‘my mother’. (Looks back at Sona) Tum bas ghar chalo. (You just come home)
Sona smiles, and then rests her head on Dev’s shoulder. Dev puts his arm around her. The kids come running up to them.
Trisha: Daddy, I don’t like your Mummy.

Vivaan: Yes Daddy, I am scared. What if she separates you both again?
Dev: Ab DevAkshi judaa nahi honge. (Now, DevAkshi won’t separate.) And now, you don’t have to get scared of anyone. Daddy and Mummy are there with you.
All the children smile. Dev drives them off to his house.
He enters, along with Sona, and the three kids.
Ishwari sees him, and is shocked. All the family members gather there, look at Sona, and the kids, stunned.
Dev holds Sona’s hand, and the kids cling onto him.
Ishwari: Dev, how can you get her here again? Did you forget, the bad things she told you about me? That I was planning to kill you?

Dev (tells Ria): Take these kids inside.
Ria takes the children inside.
Ishwari: Dev, how can you bring this cheap woman………..
Dev (shouts): Enough is enough! If you say one more word against my Sona, then you don’t know what I can do.
Sona (puts her hand on Dev’s shoulder): Dev, don’t………
Dev puts his hand over Sona’s.
Dev (tells Sona): Let me deal with her.
Radharani: Dev! What are you saying to your mother?
Dev (shouts): My mother! I know the truth. (tells Ishwari) Just get out of this house, and take your son, Vicky with you.
Ishwari and Radharani stand there silently and look at each other.
Dev (shouts): I said get lost! You, Vicky and you also, Garib Ki Beti.
Nikki: But Bhaiyya, she is our mother.
Dev: After all this, you still think she is fit to be called a mother?
Nikki: No Bhaiyya, you are right.
Ishwari, Radharani and Vicky walk out, fuming.

Dev calls all the children.
Raj: Now we are not sacred.
Trisha: Ya!
Vivaan: Our Mummy and Daddy will always remain DevAkshi.
Mamaji comes.
Dev: Sorry Mamaji, there was no other option but to make them get out…..
Mamaji: Dev! Why are you saying sorry? What you did was absolutely right.
Nikki: Ok, now that everything is alright, we must take a photo Dev Bhai, Sona Bhabhi, Raj, Trish, and Vivu. Sit down, all of you.

Dev and Sona sit down. Vivaan rushes onto Dev’s lap, Raj sits on Sona’s lap, and Trisha sits in the middle. All the children show their teeth, while Dev and Sona smile lovingly at each other.
THE END.

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I hope all of you liked the FS. Thank you so much, all of you who commented, and all of you who have supported me, throughout.
Thanks for reading!

39 comments

  1. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    Amazing…..episode….💖💓💞❤💟💕😘…..seriously, I loved all of them…..😍💋💗💟💖💕…… Great ending….👍….ishwari and gkb, Vicky….out of the house….😂😂😜…..
    All the parts were awesome….and I’ll be waiting for ur another ff….💋💓💟💘
    Love ❤

    • Niki645

      |Author

      Thank u so much Maleeha di!!😘😘
      I am so happy u loved the fs😘😃😃
      Will surely come back with another one really soon!

      And a great load of thanks for ur amazing support since the first part🙏🏻😘😘😃😃
      Loads of love😘😘❤️❤️

  2. Rj12

    |Registered Member

    It was superbly amazing 😃😊😉😄😍😚😘😜😍😄😊😊😁😃😉😃😍😚😘😚😘
    Come up with something good

  3. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niki,
    Well firstly I am sorry as I missed the previous part and was not able to comment but I caught up with it 🙂

    And I must say you have got a really creative brain…This was a Stupendous piece of creativity with a sizzling touch of dialogues…You really are so amazing of a writer…Waiting for your next story!

    Loads of love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Niki645

      |Author

      Hey di, thank u so much!!
      It’s all thanks to ur encouraging comments😃😃

      Well, u don’t have to wait much for my next story😘😘
      Will post new one really soon!

      Lots and lots of love😘😘❤️️

  4. Vinya

    |Registered Member

    This was a really sweet and cute episode…. I have started loving raj trisha and vivaan more than devakshi…. Really they r just so cute…..this ff was amazing… Pls do come up with another soon…. Keep writing and keep smiling ☺

    • Niki645

      |Author

      Thank u so much Vinya di!!😘😘😃
      I am so happy u liked this fs, and Raj, Trisha, Vivaan😘😘

      Will come up with another one really soon😘😘😃

      Lots of love😘😃

  5. Rockzzzzzz

    |Registered Member

    Hey the episode was superb..and i loved the ending…full of happiness 😊😊😊😊
    plz keep posting ff os or whatever u want😁
    take care
    PARI💗💖

  6. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niki di!
    Long time no see, huh? Okay, now I know you must be really mad at me for having been absent all this while, and in return, you can punish me as much as you want. Sachchi!
    The thing is that school has being going very hectic these days and along with that, I’ve also gotten extra classes in my society which I’ve gotta catch up with. And, I really am one restless person, so one evening stuck at home makes me turn wild. I’d been down with viral fever lately and have gotten bad cold now, which hardly leaves me time to do anything excpet studies at all. Due to my tight schedule these day, neither do I manage to catch up with all articles nor do I get enough time to watch serials on the television. In fact, it’s been ages since I could even get time to sit and write a bit of my own FF! And, to add to my busy days, we’ve also gotten our inter-house basketball championship/competition coming up at school and I’ve been appointed as the captain for the girls of my house in my grade. So, I end up spending my breaks roaming around, collecting people for the team. Earlier, me and my friends would do a bit of our homework in class itself, which would leave me with quite some time to do my own stuff at home; but now, I have to do everything at home itself, which means hardly getting any free time at all.
    Okay, this might seem stupid of me, but I felt all this explanation was needed varna meri Niki di mujhse naaraz ho jati!
    After all my nonsense, lemme come to the main point- This FS was AMAZINGLY AMAZING! It was such a treat to read it. Now, I don’t think I’ve been commenting on the previous parts, and if I have, I don’t really remember, but after reading all this, I feel guilty for not having been commenting on the previous parts. This was splendid! A unique topic you’ chosen and you displayed it wonderfully! The way the three kids united their parents was lovely! And, Sonakshi too turned out to be very understanding! I seriously loved this! You nailed it di! Admist all these wonderful lines and scenes, the last one was my favourite! A very happy ending! Wow!
    If time permits, please do come up with more of these marvellous works from your side! I’d be eagerly waiting for it!
    Till we encounter again, take care!
    Loads and loads and tons and tons of love to you!<333
    P.S.- Assuming my comment turned out a bit more lenghty than I'd though of, I'm really sorry for wasting your time, if I did!

    • Niki645

      |Author

      Thank u so much Anshi!!😃😃😘
      I understand, dear😘😘
      Wow!! Captain of the girls team😃😃
      U seem to be very good at sports, huh!😘😘😅
      U must be so busy dear😘😘
      I am so happy u liked the fs!!😘😘😃
      Will surely come up with one more really soon😘😘😃
      And if u get the time, pls pls pls pls post ur ff soon🙂
      I love it 😍 😘
      Loads of love😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️

  7. Bharti123456

    |Registered Member

    It was terrificly awesome
    I did not comment for so long sorry but it was due to my exams and so much school work life became so hectic couldn’t do do anything but I read all ur parts it was fasinatinating. I loved each and every part sentence word was totally amazing u nailed it dude such an amazing idea for children uniting their parents it was amazingly superbly fantasically terifficly amazing
    Do come up with something good 😃😉😁😊😄😍😚😘😚😍😊😄😉😁😊😃😁😘😍😄😃😄😉😘😊😚😍😄😍😃😊😍😃😃😉😄😁😁😉😊😍😚😄😁😍😚😄😉😄😚😃😚😄😁😊😉😃😚😘😍😘😁😍😘😚😍😄😁😍

  8. SHAHEER

    |Registered Member

    It was jst awesome…….keep it up dear……will surely miss u but do come with another one…..luv u😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙

  9. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niki,
    This story was a really nice one. I am so glad you shared this idea of yours with us. I love the smartnwsof the children. Hehe.. the union of Devakshi was simple yet, beautiful.

    Well, I’d be looking forward to more of your articles.

    Loads of love💕

    • Niki645

      |Author

      Thank u so much Ria di!!!
      I will definitely come back with something new, really soon😘😘😃

      A load of thanks for ur constant support since the first part!!😘😘😃
      Lots and lots of love😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  10. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee episode dear we will miss your ff u write fantastic dear i hope we see u soon with a new ff pl. come back soon and best of luck for your exams do well

  11. Erika

    |Registered Member

    o sorry this comment was for another ff but it got posted here idk how sorry and your comment is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fantastic writing skills …

  12. Erina

    |Registered Member

    Well seriously epi was full of awesomeness 😊😍😘😚💓💕💖💝💘💗💜💞💟👍👌👌👏👏👏👏nd Niki awesome thought dear nd I’m sorrrryyyyy 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 bcse I’m late but I was stucked in smthg thats why not commented…..
    With loads of love
    Erina

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