Can our children do what we couldn’t? A DevAkshi FS (Few Shots) : Part 2


Hi, all of you. Thank you so much for your encouraging comments on the first part.
Special thanks: Anshi, Ria di, Ayushi, Zuha Fatima di, Maleeha di, Pari di, Aarti di (Aarti32), Princess. This part is dedicated to you and all my wonderful readers.
So, let’s begin.
RECAP: Sona and Dev have been separated by clever tactics of Ishwari and Radharani. Sona has three children: Raj, Trisha and Vivaan. The children want to know about their Daddy, and go to check Sona’s diary.
The children go to Sona’s room.
Raj: Trisha, go and check Mummy’s drawer. Vivaan, check the bookshelf.
Trisha: No, I don’t want to check Mummy’s drawer. Snooping is wrong. My teacher taught me in school.
Raj (hits Trisha’s head): Accha! Ye idea kiska tha bol! Bol,bol! Are, bol na! (Oh really! Whose idea was this! Tell me, come on come on, tell me!)
Trisha: Ok, ok fine.

Suddenly Vivaan shouts.
Vivaan: Here!! Mummy’s diary!
Raj and Trisha run towards him.
Raj: Open it, quickly.
The children open the diary, and start reading.
The story goes into FLASHBACK…

Dev was a successful business tycoon, who worked at Ishwari Industrials (In the name of his mother, whom he was devoted to). Sona’s brother, Saurabh worked at Dev’s company, and was Dev’s manager.
At a business party, Saurabh got Sona along, and Dev fell for her in the first meeting itself. Sona too, quite liked Dev.
The two continuously kept meeting, because of many parties where Saurabh brought Sona along, and soon, the two expressed their love for each other.
However, when Ishwari first met Sona, she showed her displeasure of Dev having selected a girl for himself. Radharani, too started accusing Dev for having chosen a girl who was his manager’s sister. But Dev defended Sona, saying that she was very kind-hearted, and had a pure heart. These were the qualities which were most important in any wife, or daughter-in-law.

Ishwari half-heartedly accepted Sona, and soon DevAkshi got married.
At first, everything was well, Sona had accepted Ishwari as her own mother, Nikki, Riya and Neha as her own little sisters, Radharani, Mamaji, Vicky and everyone in the family as her own.
But there was a little bit of a doubt in Sona’s mind: Had Ishwari accepted her as her daughter-in-law? Because sometimes, Ishwari used to act weird. For example, when Dev had decided to go shopping with Sona, she used to say “Dev, jab se biwi aayi hai, tu to apni Maa ko bhool hi gaya hai.” ( “Dev, since you have got your wife, you have started forgetting your mother.”) And then, of course, Dev had to say “No Maa, how can I forget my mother”, and then Ishwari would come along too.
When DevAkshi decided to go on a dinner treat, she said that the entire family needed a break, all of them would come along. She NEVER let Dev and Sona spend their personal time.

And then one day, Sona heard the most unusual thing. Ishwari was talking to Radharani.
She said “Ab Sona aayi hai, aur mujhe usse koi pareshani nahi, par agar humne kuch jaldi se jaldi nahi kiya, to humara plan kharab ho jayega.”Sona has come, and I don’t have much problem with her, but, if we don’t do something about it soon, then our plan will be foiled.”
Sona was really perplexed. Was it just that Ishwari was over-possessive, and did not want her son to belong to anyone except her? Or was there something else to it?
After about a day’s thought, Sona decided that it was nothing, she was just thinking too much about it. She made up her mind not to tell Dev after all.
The children look at each other.
Vivaan: Mujhe Ishwari pasand nahi. ( I don’t like Ishwari.)
Raj: Shut up! None of us like her. But she is our grandmother. Call her Dadi(Grandmother).

Trisha: She is not our grandmother. She is our Daddy’s mummy. Looks like you are confused with relationships, Raj Bhaiyya.
Raj: Chup kar! (Shut up!) Grandmother and Daddy’s mummy mean the same thing!
Vivaan: Ok baccho, ladna jhagadna band karo. (OK, kids. Stop fighting.) Let’s continue reading.
Dev, I love you so much. Why did you leave me?
I was just trying to protect you. But, that day you did not listen to me. You just threw me out of the house. Why?
I still remember that day. I wish we could become DevAkshi once more.
Please Dev, I surely can’t tell you, that the Maa who you worship more than God, is the one villain in your life. This is why I am writing it down in my diary.
The following is the secret, the one which no one knows, the one that changed my life.


What is the secret? Will the children do something and make Dev and Sona DevAkshi once more? To know, please keep reading.

I hope all of you liked it. Please let me know in the comments below. Thank you very much!

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  1. Bharti123456

    Amazing Niki???????
    Sorry for not commenting yesterday?

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much Bharti di??
      No probs? I am really happy you commented???

  2. Superb story desperately waiting for the next episode post the next episode soon

    1. Niki645

      Thank u very much!!!!!
      Will post next part asap???

  3. Zuha Fatima

    Hey Niki,
    Dear you rocked it once again. I’m really excited to know what happens further. I am actually damn excited to know what is that SECRET and the children are really so cute 🙂 And I am sure the children will do something to make their parents DevAkshi once again 😉

    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, so please post ASAP!!

    Loads of Love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much di!!!!!!
      Will post asap?????

      Thank u very much for ur awesome comment??
      Lots of love❤️❤️?

  4. Sami

    outstanding dear

    1. Niki645

      Thank u soo much Sermistha di!!!??

  5. Aarti32

    Awesome.. finally Ishwari is actually n intentionally villain??

    1. Niki645

      Thank u very much Aarti di!!!
      Was looking forward to making Ishwari a villain????

  6. Manya

    Raj,trisha and vivan de kehna ki humein bhi Ishwari pasand nhi hai??
    Eagerly waiting to know the secret
    Ishwari:THE VILLIAN???
    Post soon❤️
    Love love?

    1. Niki645

      Thank u very much Ayushi!!!!
      Will post asap?????

      Lots of love❤️❤️?

  7. Ishram


    1. Niki645

      Thanks for commenting!!!!????

  8. Simplesweety1

    Wow! Interesting! Update Soon! Read All The Parts In A Go!

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much!!!!!
      Will update asap??


  9. Awesome one…….??❤??????…..loved it …….and kids should know the truth….but I think sona May come back soon…..and they will run away….??…… The episode was amazing❤??

    1. Niki645

      Thank u veryyyyy much Maleeha di!!!!???
      The kids will surely get to know the truth in next part, somehow???
      So happy that u liked it??

      Lots of love❤️❤️❤️❤️?

  10. Angel20


    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much Maria di!!!!??

  11. It was lovely ♥ ♡ post soon

    1. Niki645

      Thank u very much Akshita di!!!!!
      Will post soon???

  12. Ria

    Hey Niki,
    This is just amazing. Looking forward to the next part already. Do try posting soon.

    Loads of love❤

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much Ria di!!!

      I will try to post today itself, if possible??
      Lots and lots of love!!!❤️❤️?

  13. Varsha94

    Great…post the next one ASAP.. Its very interesting.. Wanna know about that secret..

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much Varsha di!!!
      U will get to know the secret very soon!!!???


  14. Does Dev know about his children

    1. Niki645

      Dev knows about Trisha and Raj, he knew that Sona was pregnant with another child, but he never met Vivaan.
      And he has not seen his children since Sona left.

  15. Hey Niki di!
    Firstly, I’m soooo sorry for my extremely late comment! Had been stuck in work and just returned from school.
    Now, coming to the second part, it was amazingly fantastic! I love your writing skills! They are truly worth an applause!
    Whoaaa…this really was so interesting! And, currently, my brain is all puzzled as I’m somewhat trying to figure out what the secret can possibly be. However, all my trials are of no use because I simply can’t think of anything! So, I assume all I can possibly do is wait!
    After hearing all my nonsense, I suppose you must’ve understood that you’ve gotta post really soon!
    Loads of love to you!<333

    1. Niki645

      Awwwwwww…..Thank u so much Anshi!!!???
      No probs dear!!

      Will post really soon…I am just going to submit the next part??
      Lots and lots of love❤️️❤️️?

  16. Heshine

    Hey Niki…..!!!the epi was awesome….!!!!its really amazing….!!!???????…I really loved it….!!!!!possibly …despite my schedule….I could read it ……happy…!!!☺☺?☺???☺
    U really knw…!? I’m desperately waiting for the secret to be revealed… !!!so please post the next asap…really…I can’t wait….!!I should….say…!!! The children were so cute..!!! They understood….wat ishwari is and how she tortured their….mother…!!!but hope…sona won’t get rage on her children for reading her diary….!!!???????u really nailed it…. !!! Pls post the next as soon as possible….dear….;!!??

    1. Niki645

      Thank u so much for reading and commenting Heshine di!!!!!

      Will post next part really very soon!!
      Loads of love❤️❤️❤️❤️?

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