How can an angel like you fall for a devil like me? (EDKV) Shraman Five Shots part 1 of 5


Hi all. Fatarajo here. I hope you all still remember me. I am the writer of Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Ek Duje Ke Vaaste. And now I got some time so I am going to write a 5 shots on Ek Duje Ke Vaaste and one and only Shraman. I hope you all will like the story.

Here is part 1.
Anger. That is what his eye conveyed. As if he won’t spare them. But? That is wrong. That thing didn’t click his mind at all. Without any thought he just took out the gun and it went Bang! In a moment with that sound the person alternate to him was knocked down with the bullet that came out by the trigger of the gun and pool of blood drenched that guy and he breathes his last in that pool of blood which was now his dead bed .
Without any guilt, regard or fear he just walked away from there. And then suddenly he heard a cute, innocent, pitched sound of a cry. He looked back and found an innocent cute little girl who was crying over the dead body. He wanted to do something? But. He just walked away in anger and didn’t have another look again. Not even that innocent girl could have clicked his mind.

He walked on the roads, like a normal human being. As if nothing happened. No one knew that he just came and shoot a guy dead. How would they? He made it look so simple. And while walking, just then someone called him out.
“Shravan!” The voice chased him.
Yes the bad guy was none other than Shravan Malhotra. It’s unbelievable but it’s true he was the bad guy. He was the same one who killed that guy ruthlessly and also ignored that innocent little girl.

Shravan Malhotra joined his gang and that guy was his gang member. They came to their gang leader and celebrated over their ruthless deeds via evil laughter. For Shravan he was just expressionless. Forget about evil laughter he doesn’t even smile or cry. Even Hitler would be surprised to see a guy like Shravan Malhotra. Shravan was as if someone who didn’t know what is happiness or what is sadness. He just did his so called job to kill people ruthlessly. And he didn’t even have regret over it? How can someone be so evil like this. From his face it’s impossible he looks innocent but it’s also true that it seems that he never did anything wrong. Shravan Malhotra was just a human by name he was just like a robot. Completely zero expression.

It was like you just open the spring, and then this robot will come and shoot you. Shravan Malhotra was just this type.
“If you need me again, give me a call I will be present.” Shravan said so and just walked away.
He can even speak? Surprising.

Shravan walked on the roads again like that expressionless robot and with zero guilt and insecurity. There was not a single trace of feelings in him. How is that possible?

And then, suddenly a cycle came towards him and just went away. Shravan moved his neck and he looked. And then suddenly, he became full of expression. Suddenly the humanity inside him awaked. You all must be thinking what he saw such that suddenly changed Shravan Malhotra?
It was a beautiful girl. A very beautiful girl. And she had a sweet smile on her face. And by her outfit, looks, actions anyone would say that yes this girl is full of life and knows how to enjoy life. But who was she?

Never in life Shravan saw such a beautiful and innocent face. His heart start beating to show that he had one and he was actually normal human being. There it was the proof.

Shravan looked behind and her cycle had this unusual tag which you won’t see in any other vehicle and with a smiley face.
And the cycle engraved her name.
Shravan read the words.
“Suman Tiwari’s cycle.” Shravan read out the three words.

Yes that beautiful girl was none other than Suman Tiwari. Finally Shravan knew her name. And it was shocking that someone like him ever would study someone with so much curiosity. He just stared at her lovingly and Suman just passed through him and didn’t even had a single glance of Shravan. Now Suman’s face started to flow in Shravan’s eyes and that was what he can see now. His heart beat was still going fast. Yes Shravan Malhotra was in love! That was love in first sight!
But then something came in his mind and finally his mind clicked.
“How can an angel like her fall in love with a devil like me?” Shravan regarded Suman as an angel. That’s what came in Shravan’s mind which showed that he was fully aware of his misdeeds, crimes and all that.

Shravan knew that he was not the old Shravan now. Shravan decided to forget about the girl and he carried his way like an emotionless robot. But still that didn’t work. The angel’s face was still in his mind and heart.
End of part 1.

Precap for part 2:- Shravan was now in his goon spree and as usual he continued to treat people mercilessly, and he even didn’t spare the kids and pushed him out of the way. Just then a girl comes and steps forward and stops him from doing this. Shravan couldn’t tolerate this and he pinned her to the wall to kill her. As he took out the gun, he was about to shoot her and as he looks he was shocked as it it is Suman, his angel. He stared at her.

The next part I will publish tomorrow as I already wrote the 5 shots. Sorry for less Shraman scenes in this part, but I assure you there will be more Shraman scenes in part 2-5.
This story is more of Shravan’s life than Suman’s life that’s why. But next parts there will be Shraman scenes.

I hope you all liked the first part of the 5 shots. The next part I will publish tomorrow. Till then feel free to express your opinions πŸ™‚

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  1. Joyee Aapi
    Joyee Aapi
    Joyee Aapi..
    I am super shocked…jus post soon…love u?

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Laddoo Rani hehe
      OMG happy u liked it πŸ˜›
      Well will post next part tomorrow
      Love u too πŸ™‚

  2. Fatarajo..
    How can we forget you..
    When we read ur name..that krpkab edkv ka ff hi yaadh aati hai hum sabko..????
    And when I read this and about to read precap…
    I just thought… perfectly..cutted thus ff into five equal I felt..u too that u already wrote it????
    Its OK..yaar.not a big deal if no shraman scene in first part..firstly..charectors intro was necessary right..??????.nice story remembers me ek vilan..sid malhotra ?????

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey sona thanks for commenting
      And Wah u all still remember that ff? πŸ™‚
      And well actually yes i divide into 5 parts but they r not equal the other 4 parts are longer actually hehe
      And yeah i wrote it already πŸ˜›
      Ya right character introduction is necessary and yes u r right Shravan’s character is inspired by siddhart malhotra’s guru character in EK villian
      I loved that movie so much but the story will be diff just that inspired from the movie

  3. Angel20

    Hi Jo once again!
    Such an interesting title… Increased my curiosity to read it!!☺??
    Shravan a criminal??
    But I know everything will go well.. So he has already fallen for Sumo… That’s nice! Eagerly waiting for the next update!!❀

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Angel thanks for commenting and happy u liked the title πŸ™‚ ya Shravan is a devil here but sumo will be there for him and yes Shravan has already fallen for his angel and will update the next part tomorrow πŸ™‚

  4. Diya

    O Fatarajo ur back !!! Very nice story and by starting it really sounds interesting !!

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Sonai thanks for commenting yes ink back and happy u liked the story πŸ™‚

  5. Beas

    Awesome episode Di ! ❀ I m very glad that u r back. Missed u very much ?
    I guess now u r not busy with ur cousins and that’s why u started writing this one??

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey beas thanks for commenting and yes i m back and yes u r right i m not busy with cousins as they r busy unfortunately their exams began so i m in my aunt’s house now and i have more free time so i wrote this 5 shot that time πŸ˜›

  6. Yayy you are back with a super interesting ff. ?
    How are you? I really missed reading your amazingly written ff. The one you ended was so cool. ?
    Coming to this one now.. Liked this episode a lot. Such a unique idea. Can’t wait till tomorrow. Loads of love. Take care ?

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey zainab thanks for commenting and happy u liked this ff i m fine dear and happy u liked that ff a lot πŸ™‚ and happy u liked the concept πŸ™‚ and will upload tomorrow thank u πŸ™‚

  7. Dhira

    Superb amazing episode
    Nice character sketch
    U have ur own way of writing which makes u different from others

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey dhira thanks for commenting and happy u liked the story and character intro and well happy u found my writing diff πŸ™‚ really means a lot to me πŸ™‚ actually is just that i write combining my imagination and inspiration that’s all

  8. Nikita

    Joyeee di!
    Oh this was amazing!
    How the title made me creep over it, and I read it with full concentration!
    Oh di, it was superb..
    I’m so glad you’re back..
    Shravan’s character seems interesting..
    I loved it!
    Please post soon, as I love ShraMan scenes!
    Love you,
    Nikita πŸ™‚

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Nikita Thanks for commenting
      And happy u liked the title
      And yes i m back πŸ™‚
      Ya shravan’s character is a little diff and unusual
      And next epi will be more shraman scenes
      And will post the next part soon πŸ™‚

  9. WeirdSister

    Wow fatarajo… I m in awe…
    What a fantastic idea…!!
    I mean its just so interesting nd way different…loved it totally…
    Nd how u justified ur title….I loved that…
    I m loving d plot…
    Post very soon…
    Love u loads nd loads…
    Take care..

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey weirdsister thanks for commenting
      Happy u liked the idea πŸ™‚
      And well i wanted to try something new
      And is inspired from some Bollywood movies
      And happy u liked the plot
      And yes will post the next part soon πŸ™‚
      Love u too dear πŸ™‚

  10. Niharikamalhotra

    Oomgg…Jo…when I started ….I was thinking abt ek villain movie…ha siddarth MALHOTRA of ek villain but he is Shravan MALHOTRA of ek DUJE k VAASTE….amazing starting.. I just loved this…it is very very interesting… N your headline is really very unique… I really really loved this…amazing dude…PLEZ post nxt asap…..???

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey kittu thanks for commenting so finally u got registered? πŸ™‚ and yes Shravan character is inspired from siddhart’s character wow EK villian EK duje ke vaaste didn’t realise that also Shravan and Suman starts with S and siddhant and shraddha also starts with S and both Shravan and siddhart Malhotra wow what an observation πŸ˜› and happy u liked the title
      And yes will post the next part soon

  11. amazingly good yaar…
    can’t wait more for nxt part
    a soon update plzzz

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey aishana thanks for commenting happy u liked it and will upload the next part soon πŸ™‚
      Actuallly i got a shock when i saw ur name but then later i realise actually one of my cousin’s name is ashiana that’s why πŸ˜›

      1. grt then I will call u di

  12. Its so awesome i loved it waiting for the next part.

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey miste thanks for commenting happy u liked it and will upload the next part soon πŸ™‚

  13. hey jo…it was interesting…hope u remember me…anjali on wu page ?
    it was so interesting n diff frm serial…
    loved it…title reallu suits ??
    waiting for next part… ??
    love u yar πŸ™‚
    amazing epi…

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey anjali thanks for commenting
      And happy u liked it πŸ™‚ and also the title πŸ™‚
      I already submitted the next part
      Depends when they will post it
      Love u too πŸ™‚

  14. Zuha Fatima

    Yaaaaayyyyyy?β€Ό Fattu is back β€Ό So glad to see u! Nice concept! Good going. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next update! Keep going! Take care! Stay blessed!

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚


    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Chuha thanks for commenting and happy u liked the concept πŸ™‚
      and i already submitted the next part
      Depends when they will publish it

  15. Ariana

    Omg u r back!!!! Finally!!! It’s been soooooooo long i guess…I missed u honey. But the shot was out of words…Brilliant! I’m super curious for the next part, so pls post soon.
    Loaaaaaddddddddsssss of love
    take care

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Ariana thanks for commenting
      And haha sorry for being late πŸ˜›
      And happy u liked the first part of the five shots
      And i already submitted the next part
      Depends when they will post it
      Love u too πŸ™‚

  16. Sriya

    hmmmmmmmmmmmm yup i didn’t liked it yuckkkk so bad it was i m not lying jo ( can i call u that pls?) in fact i loved it
    it was incredible
    tremendous update
    master piece
    out of the world
    rocking full too jhakas and rapchik ! okay love u lots jo byeee take care see you soon post asap can’t wait to read more

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey sriya thanks for commenting and Omg i almost got a heart Attack when i read ur comment but later i took a sigh of relief happy u liked it a lot and love u too
      And i already submitted the next part depends when they will post it

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