Bz I loved her..Sanskar’s love story (Episode 18)


When he reached home lights were off
“Mom..swara, uttara.where are u…? i think the elecricity has gone “.
he tries to switch on the lights by mobile’s flash light
but suddenly lights turned on with a scream…kids gathered around him.
“Sanskar bhayaa yeee…?????”
Mitti shouted.she is 5 year old,
Sanskar rolled his eyes.
“What…shethanoom, are u all here to tortue me…??”.
“yepee”…kittu and golu intertwined their hands

Akkad bakkad bambe bo
assi nabbe ya poore sau
Raat ke baje gaye paune doo
Jo hota hai hone do ..

“Sanskar their exams are over and vaccation has started .U know that they wont stay at home for more than a sec now.
they persuaded me to bring them here, otherwise they might eat away my brain.
You pamper them a lot and they have become so naughty that I cant’t handle them alone nowadays.”Sujatha said
Sanskar:. chachi when did u come..?”.He became so happy on seeing her.
Sujatha:”Today afternoon .i got lot of work in our farm ,so i cant stay for more than one week here, other wise
our cultivation will get spoiled,i dont know when these kids will return.”
“Mom u go ,no need to stay here we will meet after one month, shall I help u to pack ur bags”..golu said with excitement
Sanskar: “chachi…one month with this badmashoom…its better if a disaster would have come??”
Sujatha:”shethanoo…u r going to pack up ur own mum’s bag…Hey Ramji 9 months carry them on my womb, now see this what I got in return.? ”
Golu:”what mom u start again… 9 months huff”. He rubbed his head walked away from there briskly and came with a basket and placed it on the floor.
Golu:”Mom pls get into this basket I will carry u 12 months on my head. Is this oky with u ??”.
Everyone burst out laughing.Sujatha become more angry.
Sujatha: “See jiji what he said..this boy have no respect to elders..Suniye ji golu ke pappa..u have left me alone with these shethanoom and
gone to bhagvanji and u r watching and enjoying this
whole thamasha there?? “.
Golu:”Ha pappa why did u go..??” He looked up.
At that time all became very silent and a bit emotional,Seeing the situation swara changed the topic.
Swara:”chachi what all he said is good many mother’s would get this opportunity..haha..u should be proud of ur son”.
AP:”haha swara is right u r very have a son like him. Suji they are kids na if they are not naughty then how can we call them as kids”.
Sujatha: “Kids huff..jiji..fed up with thier mischief..u know one thing the whole village came along with us to railway station for bidding bye to them?”.
Uttara: “wow chachi whole village love them so much..??”.
Sujatha: “Na re uttara.. They came there bz for at least one month they will get rid of these monsters.
Now they might have started to curse themselves for praying to god to bless me and ur chahu with a baby?”
“Mami…what I did…am the younger one “.Mitti made a pout face
“Mitti ki bachi, she is their leader…if u and ur cousins play some prank on others, if something happen… ohh God then what shall i tell ur mom and dad..
be a good girl here”.
Mitti:”Mami I can’t carry u like golu bhayaa…bz u r so fat”.
Sujatha: “what me ..i look fat?? “.Suji widened her mouth.
AP:”suju haha..leave it”,Then kittu start crying.
Everyone one looked at her.
Sanskar: “what happened kittu ..why r u crying..?”.
Kittu: “No one giving me a chance to speak??”. She is slurring .
AP:”Ohh mera bachha come here ..lets talk a lot..haa”.she kissed her cheek.
Kittu:”Woo I have equal rights to carry my mom bz we r twins na?”.
Sujatha placed her hand on head “yeh bhagvan”
Golu and kittu(Gopal and kritika) are twins of Ram prasad and sujatha.They r in 7 th class.Mitti is their cousin’s daughter.
Uttara: “Thank god u all r here lets make a blast from today onwards.. Uttara give them HiFi”.
Swara is standing there with a smile..enjoying their convo..still her intense gaze on sanskar..

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ho… Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ek Tuk Tumhein Dekhti Hai
They look at Your for a moment
Jo Baat Kehna Chaahe Zubaan
What my mouth wants to say to You
Tumse Ye Woh Kehti Hai
They speak that to You.

Kittu:”Sanskar bhayya see what we have brought for u..”.
They handed him a huge box .He opened the box. It contained ripe mangoes
.”Bachho attack..”.Mangoes are his favourite.
They started eating mangoes and click a mango selfe.But swara’s concentration was full on sanskar rather than eating mangoes.
Uttara started to tease her.”Bhabhi mangoes r in ur hand not in Bhai’s face.” Just then everyone noticed her .She felt embarrassed.
Sanskar: “swara what happened don’t u like mangoes”. She fumbled ,doesn’t know what to say.
Uttara: “Bhai u r a tube light.. why u asking ,feed her na”.
He smiled and placed a piece of mango on her mouth.when he turned 3 small mouths were already opened.
He also fed them with mangoes.After finishing the mangoes they went back to thier rooms.
After taking bath Sanskar came back to his room,He found swara standing near the window in a mango yellow saree.”
He couldn’t take off his eyes from her.
“Saree ..? Shona r u planning to go outside”,
“No .. it was gifted by u,so i just tried wearing it”.
He was wearing a leaf green T-shirt.
“u r looking beautiful shona”.Saying this he moved closed to her.Their eyes met..

Kaajal Ka Ek Til Tumhare Labon Pe Laga Loon
Let me apply a small dot of kajal on Your lips

He continuously stared at her beautiful eyes and tugged her hair strand behind her ear.She lowered her head

Haan Chanda Aur Suraj Ki Nazron Se Tumko Bacha Loon
Let me protect You from the evil eye of the Moon and the Sun
Palkon Ki Chilman Mein Aao Main Tumko Chhupa Loon

He touched her chin with one hand raised slowly and softly touched her cheek .
She leaned forward to inhale his fragrance and closed her eyes.
A blow of mild wind touched her hair.Moon now hide his face on clouds to leave them alone.
stars r start blushing and glittered more and more to add glow on her face.

Let me hide You behind the curtains of these eyelashes
Khayaalon Ki Ye Shokhiyaan Maaf Ho
Let the sauciness (vividness) of these thoughts be forgiven
Har Dam Tumhein Sochti Hai
They think of You all the time
Jab Hosh Mein Hota Hai Jahaan Madhosh Ye Karti Hai
While the world around me is in their senses, it makes me intoxicated

Aankhon Ki Sharm-o-Haya Maaf Ho
Let the modesty and transgress done by these eyes be forgive

He carefully took a fallen eyelash from below the eyes and smiles victoriously “yes I got it,forward ur hand shona”.
But she is standing closed eyes.He shaked her shoulder “shona u r sleeping here in this state, come lay on beb”.
She suddenly came in to sense.same time they hear a bang on the door.
when he opened the door bachaa party entered the room with full force.
Mitti climbed on the bed and start to jump,and shouted I will sleep here.
Hearing this a thunder fall on her heart.
“Come sit Bhai we will talk late night and full masti” Kittu invited them.
Golu:”Hey will arrange a DJ party here”.
“Badmashoom u all here let them sleep”. Uttara came there by following them.
“But we r always used to sleep here na uttara Di”.
“Ha now swara bhabi also sleeping here..look she is tired. So no masti get up”
“Ha I will make her sleep I know many songs..Di come sit on my lap”. Mitti find a solution.
“Mitti ki bachi come here”. Uttara took her hand .
“No leave me ..leave my hand…” She started to scream. Uttara put her hand on her mouth but she bite
Uttara jumped with pain.Mitti start to run on the bed and uttara run behind her stumbled and fell on floor.But she didn’t open her eyes. Everyone one feared.. Called her name”uttara.. “.But she didn’t wake up.Her eyes are closed. Swara splashed water on her face.
“Miiti killed uttara Di..?” Golu said in fearful voice.Mitti’s face changed she scared start sobbing.
“I didn’t do anything ?”. Said in a pleading sound.
Sanskar: “shut up golu she didn’t do anything”.
Kittu:”I think she goes to bhagvanji’s lap like pappa ?”.
Mitti: “uttara Di..don’t go to bhagvanji’s home ..we will miss u..pls come back.I will give u golu bhayya’s chocolates from his pocket pakka..voo I already ate my chocolates na ?” . She again start crying.Then trio start weeping.
.suddenly uttara opened her eyes “na bachaa nothing happened to me I was just kidding ??”
sanskar give her a angry glare? .But Mitti didn’t stop crying.swara put her on shoulder pated her head.
“Mitti look at me..nothing happened to ur Di..see her”.
Uttara feels guilty on her prank.
Some how she managed her to make sleep and laid in bed.
Sanskar:”uttara , kittu, golu u all go ..she will sleep here”.They go back to their room.
Swara leaned near to her and Sanskar on other side.Mitti’s thumb is on her mouth while sleeping.
“Sanskar ..I really miss Bobby..”.
“Yes am too..we will call Bidya aunty tomorrow.” They fell on asleep.
After sometime swara wake up and look into Sanskar who is in deep sleep.she came near to him rubbed her hand on his hairs.Then she walk towards the balcony stand there by staring moon.She is disturbed.. What’s happening to me..why this moon and stars looking different .. I want to count all these stars why..? I don’t know.Till now this feeling is unknown to me.I know him from years do I feel anything like this before I don’t know,but now am carving for his touch and want his presence around me. Yes I always miss him when he was not with me. I can’t bear anyone getting close to him more than me, may be all this bz of my friendship..may be..hmm. But this time more than a friendship I have a feeling that he is only mine and i have full rights on him,as a wife..?.Now I got to knew why marriage is very special thing to everyone. She hold her mangalsuthra and kissed on it.Goes near to the dressing table and looked into the mirror. she touched her forehead and filled sindoor there with ecstasy a tear escaped from her eye corner.
She came near to bed miiti is now sleeping edge of the bed , she try to turn her but she is again rolled to other side then swara placed a pillow on there.she came to Sanskar side there is a little space for her.She remember the morning after their wedding and rubbed her fore head on him .He became reddish due to her sindoor….look more cute on that red mark.A curvey smile appeared on her face. someone said love makes a person mad..its true that’s y am doing such crazy things.
Its 5am her phone rang continuously.. She wakeup it was uttara..
“Uttara what happened why r u calling”
“Bhabhi pls come outside the room am here.”
*******************************Hi guy’s ..sorry for the late update due to some personal reasons I was bcy…
Anji finally I updated .Thanku my friends for reading Ff and my silent readers love u all
Sree ur comments dear, they r valuble for me…
I don’t know how to express my feelings ..after reading everyone Comments..sus,shan, dhara,navi nive,Falguni,Anji,pratheeksha, Neha,shagun,Anu, musku,Rosh,jasmine,kanak, priyanka,Natasha, likhitha,swasan,harini,ayesha,nikki meera…anyone left..?Thanku for the love and support
Vaishu and vaibhavi love u…joya, anjali ,vini, needhi, divya,Shradha,Vinitha, vaishu, mickey, Sree,Anu, Sujata..enjoyed those chats..??????…got emoji’s?.
Kakku I hope u got all the links..I replied u twice.

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Credit to: sethooty (Malar)

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  1. Arre…… yeh vaishu ki bacchi ko kya hua???

    I haven’t spoken to her in AGES!!!!


  2. rups u knw this type of thing even happened with me!! even i fell asleep during my language exm once. sethu di i checked the news channel. nothing is being shown abt kerala… I had to literally snatch the remote frm my mahan bros. Are u all ok?
    tell vini di to take care of her..

    1. Sach me yr Vinita..pata nhi kis mahan insan ki dimag me yeh pdhne ka idea aaya

      INSAAN ko sirf kuch cheez dena chahiye life me..
      4.chickenn ???? creammmm???
      6.yummy yummmy Cake
      7.chole bhtre
      9.Rhne k liye ek acchi c ghr
      10.Ek gari..koi v chlega..
      11.n jab har subha uth jau tab har side pe tsty khana hona chahiye

      1. Aur batao guyz…sab kaha ho??

        ANJU clg me ho kiya?

        Vaishu n joya di?kaha ho yr?

        Sb log aaa jao..u khw guyz me na Chclte,n maggi kha rhi hu yuuuuummmyyyy???????????????????????.

        Kisi ko chahiye kiya????????????

      2. Meine bhi maggi khaya
        … abhi….

        Hn… I just came back from college…. ab me sone chali… then 6 utth kar… agla chapter shuru karungi…!!!! ????

        VAISHUU KO KYA HUA????

    2. Rupsikha!!!!!! Agar mujhe Roz koi ye sab de toh life will become wonderful for me!!!!!???☺


      2. I heard this incident….. People have become beasts
        Humanity ke liye koi jagah nehi hai

      3. But I heard that those laws are fake

  3. Dr now mother get unconscious we went to hospital she didn’t speak dr full unconscious only i feel like dying dr now we came to home..pls Pray for my mother dr…

  4. How to insert dp please tell me…I will insert my pug photo pls tell me

  5. Sneha grewal

    Sethoo when will you upload and Anyone know when will vini update???pls rply

    1. Oh Sneha …Vini di is nt well…so thik hone k baad update kregi??

      1. Sneha grewal

        Ohh,thats why…ok …thku dr for rply..

  6. Oh hoooooo mil gaye..kitna cute emblm h yeyyuu????

  7. Divya, how is your mother?

  8. Fake? Oh God…pata nhi kiya ho rha h…koi kuch khti h nhi

  9. Good morning ??………….
    Sab kaise Ho???????
    Joya di…vaishu….. Where are u all??

    1. Hai Vinitha…gm..mickey with other emblem..?
      Joya shradha anjali vaishu vini divya, needhi and all

      1. Hi sethooo di…?….o bs aise he try kiya tha dusra emblm

  10. Hai sneha and anji…I will try to upload it tmrw…
    Brain is idea….huff

  11. Div. ya how is ur mother..? What happened her……

  12. Mickey and Vinitha..u heared that news…there is no such laws to save us from this.beasts… Hmm
    Mickey animals r better than them…bz dey only hunt their prey for survival…

  13. Tat day night mother has no conscious only later we taken to hospital now k dr due physiological stress some thing she has taken so much stress so doctor told to do council once…now k actually my mother takING so much tension due to my father he won’t care my mother now days he won’t talk to her then first of all they don’t have understanding mother think wat if my my father leave means wat can I do war about children society and all..bec she is not educated tat much she don’t know to lead independent life like us..then more she think about us..I and my sis told dont bother don’t take tension also means she will take more health problems but only mental stress dr now k..then how r you dr now ur fav suRya called me..then how r you all…… our festival ends….then dr all insert ur dp…I. m waiting madly to c u all…..????

    1. Take care of ur mom…………

    2. Take care ur mom Dr….make her happy always..divert her mind..give my Surya….?

  14. Gooooooood morninggggggggggggggg guysssssssssss…………….

    Hum wapas aaye hai? swagat nahi karoge humara?

    Rups exam kaise chal rahe hai…………?????

    Vinita my dear how r u???????????? Tumhari joya di ab kabhi nahi royegi haaaaaaa……….

    Hi vaishu……….hi anjaliiiiii…………..

    Sethooty how r u dear??????? Is everything fine na?????????
    Wht’s abt vini di?how is she?????

    Hey shraddha……..
    Network eng. Aur languages ka koi connection nahi hai?.

    Missing u guys……take care of urself………………..

    1. Hai fine Dr….
      Shradha is bcy with examzz

    2. Hey Joya di..xm acche ja rhe h

      N hwcr u di? I missss u soooo much…apke v xms thi?

  15. K dr I will tell about you….I will take care about her…
    Dr i saw ur comment under one analysis nice dr actually I too feel d same d writer forgetting RAGLAk only he only focus on swara not ragini or other character I stop watching swaragini I only watch swasan scenes in fb…first story is very nice in beggining now dragging and making bore same story we have seen in many serial..not at all unique if they continue like dis trp will get down it will go away soon. .
    Coming to RAGLAK dey should give some interesting twist nd shd give some more role..swasan scenes they give doest have passion only they always hug or one kiss or crying tats it then swara always Detective sanskar will say i know ur very bold girl anta…RAGLAk always come and ask wat prb tel me pls give me some side role at least anta..dis adarsh pari always calm as they doing medidation like…then dadi i dont when she become good when she will become evil anta i dont know y director has given her split personality…and he director doesn’t know what is romance only..he doesnt no how show romance. .romance is nothing but we can create
    With their eyes..for RAGLAk by seeing their dress we came to know tat dey r consumed…god given very good brain director atleast use tat Danny laksh doesn’t getting any role..even danny role given some passion but laksh doesnt not getting it…. actually I love laksh he so cute charming if i am director I would have given chocolate boy role.. make use of him by giving some crazy things like fighting ragging with ragini then before swara ragini has born ragini should detectives first or both should not hide anything they should fight without compromise..bec they r swaragini but in dis serial swara all Detective has done at climax ragini will hold her hand swaragini song play in bg… .all people appreciate swara but our serial name is swaragini……instead of sumi make pari pregnant give some role..don’t bring any x love atleast for dp and ap….and thank god atleast u didn’t make dadi pregnant..I feel like laughing when I see dis serial…..if u would be d director of swaragini how will u proceed RAGLAk character pls tell me..what’s d director name……
    Sharadha just lab exam ge fear agbeda don’t take tension write calmly..all d best pa…yake nem state naLi exam late nam state naLi already finished dr……

    Joya dr how r u when ur exam will end I miss you dr..

    An ju u hv exam on Sunday in our state it’s common but lately it transfer to ur state tats it…all d best pa r u in fb….

    Vini ta thank u for ur concern my mother is well…hope ur exam finished then about gift wat u ask I will get for you….

    Sree pls take care typhoid is danger in dis season pls do check up daily take care pa..

    Hi vini how r you pls come back soon I want to tell so many things come back k..y u always go to kerala be in bangalore…bangalore is d safety place u go kerala u get sick ah pls take care if u not take care means I will tell ur husband to beat you….day by day ur becoming lazy I think u won’t eat food properly more than wheather is not good u and bhai go to ooty climate is nice u do full masti take selfies..go boating…and .1 week u give break to all things k…..

    Sethooty u don’t go ooty now only dr after ur marriage we both can go if u wish I come and show all places like a guide…or else u go with ur husband only bec u need twins urgent…I will book ambulance for emergency delivery…k tc

  16. Vini diiiiii i misssss uuuu ssoooooo much???????

  17. Joyaaaa di!!!!! WELCOME back!!!!!!!
    U knw I got my results!!!!!!!!!!!
    It is sooo good!!!!!!!
    I want to do bhangra right now!!!
    When I saw the results I was so happy.. u knw my mother almost cried out of happiness!!!!!!
    Today I got a new mobile!!!!
    Till now I had a “baksa phone”………
    I always had to comment from my father’s mobile or computer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    1. Wow so good news what u studying dr..I want treat then..

  18. Goooooood morning guysssssss………….

    I m misssssssing u alot…….
    Shraddha and rups allll d best yr…………

    Hey vinita……
    I m so happy for u…..???????????? lo muh meeeeetha karo………congratulations………………????

    Hey divya…………..i stopped watching swaragini…..i reallly like tejwi’s acting skilll but only bcz of that i can not watch something like swaragini………

    Hey sethooooooty………..wht’s going on… r u????? Vini di ki koi khabar??????????

    1. I too stop ed watching swaragini in my home no colors channel dr..I hv complaint to cable operator dr then how r you now a days ur so busy rite….

      1. Hey same pinch.. Am also stopped watching da way how u guy’s.. Hey joya…fine dr
        Am writing next epi…thatz y am irritated it may be a boring one….
        I have doubt why u always called , I mean nor you..’oh gosh’..
        Is it sound god?
        Phir irritation.. For me writting is a hard task .

  19. First comment from my new mobile☺???!! Thanks Joya did and divya? now I am in shopping mall……
    Joya diiii pune har gaya???

    1. Vinitha congratzz darling….
      New phone?????
      Lots of ice cream for u…?????????

  20. Divya my friends always tease me like DAT sethooty…. Don’t go ooty…
    Sethu r u from DAT??

    1. So nice their is a proverb “Go to ooty…marry a beauty(like u)…come with penny kutty..very nice line know…

      Vini ta new mobile so much happy rite I too love my mobile very very much it’s my frnd mother father everything. …I too taken new Android mobile tat to for commenting. .my mobile is very lucky tat I m commenting d great friends and writer like u all .then advance happy mothers day to u all ..

  21. Happy Rabindra Jayanti!!!!!!!

  22. Hey dr wat about vini still she is not well…ah pls vini tc

  23. Thanks sethu di!!!!!!!☺????????
    Aap sab ke liye lots of roshogollas chomchom dorbesh and ice cream☺??????????

  24. Some one wish me happy Rabindra Jayanti ????

    1. Wat do u mean by Rabindra Jayanti anyways happy Rabindra Jay anti dr gn tc

      1. Rabindra Jayanti marks the birthday of kobi guru Rabindranath tagore. Rabindra nath tagore was born in 1861 in calcutta. He is a famous poet,playwright, dramatist , painter , philosopher , writer and he struggled lot for indias independence. He was the first asian to be awarded the novel prize for literature for his renowned work gitanjali (song offerings ) . He discarded his knighthood because of the jallianwala Bagh tragedy. He wrote our national anthem Jana gana mana and even Bangladesh ”s Amar Shonar Bangla (my golden bengal) . He wrote above 2000 rabindrasangeets (songs composed by him are known as Rabindra sangeet) .his each and every story has highlighted a social cause. We pay our tribute to this great person on this day . A lot of functions , gatherings are held in entire bengal. He died in 1941 and before his death he wanted to see India independent and blessed netaji subhas chandraft nose. Whatever I write about Rabindranath tagore is less . If you want to know more about him u can refer to Google and read some translated version of his stories.

      2. Subhas chandra bose

    2. 108 vi jayati hai na vinita??????????

      Happy ravindra jayanti dear………………

      Sethooty wht’s going on dear?????? Is everything fine na??????????

      Take care guys……………goood night……..

      Plz sapne dekhna qki aaj hum sab ko sapno me milne aa rahe hai…..

      1. Good night ??????????? ………I will be waiting for you Joya di in my dreams☺?????
        It is 155 th jayanti………..

  25. Ohhhhhhh…………….that my would be archeologist……………..

    Vinita humne news me suna tha ki Mamta banrji Netaji se related kuch secret documents ki files open karwane wali thi unka kya huaaaa……….

    Gooooooooood morning guyssssssssssssssssssssssss…………….
    Utho tum sab k sapno me aakar bhi hum jaldi uth gaye……… Chalo utho sabbbbbb………..

    1. Good afternoon ☺?????!!!!!!
      Netaji se related documents abhi bhi nehi khula . Even modi told that he will reveal those secret documents but nothing has been done till now??? this whole thing is related with politics ……………
      There are so many hidden secrets………..
      Sirf public se chupa hua hai……..
      Can u tell me who built taj mahal ?

  26. Rabindra bath jayanthi….my belated wishes Dr..

  27. […] Sanskar: “Mom don’t worry, she is taking medicine,I will take care”. “Hey what’s happening here.we r tired and hungry Mom”, AP and Sanskar.. Look at them they r exhausted. “Oky first u changed ur dress and I will serve u all lunch”. They all seated on grass. Ap looks at Sanskar “Sanskar today I will feed u “, “What mom am not a kid”. “But u r my son” Uttara:”only for Bhai not for me”.she made a pout face. Ap:”oky baba everyone have share ” Golu:”I also want to eat from ur hand mumma”. Sujatha: “oho open ur mouth golu”. They enjoying the lunch together suddenly Mitti start crying. Everyone shocked. Mitti beta what happened why u crying “..but she didn’t stop crying start to roll on the grass. Sanskar in mind “iss pee thoo Ragini ka bhooth chadaa hey kya” Sujatha get angry and pick her from ground Mitti:”I want to see my mom now.. Mommy..mommy”. Sujatha: “But suddenly.. What happened to u.its not possible now.” Mitti: “mommy ..mommy..”. She is continuously sobbing Sujatha: Why u want ur Mom bachaa”. Mitti: “I want to see her..I want to eat from her hand now..mummy..???? Annapoorna: what to do now suju”. Swara:”let’s go home mom”, They returned to home immediately . ******************************* Guy’s may be its a boring epi…sorry.. I Found my name in many Ff analysis… Thanks guys for encouraging me .Love u all.. Previous link : […]

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