Bz I loved her..Sanskar’s love story (Episode 10)


Its morning someone knocked their room .Bidya aunty and Bobby.Seeing them swara become happy , saying “mumma mumma”Bobby jumped into her hand.
Bindya Aunty: “kemon achis beta(How r u beta).”
Swara:”Ami bhalo Aunty”.(am fine)
Bidya Aunty: “Today u r going to back to home .Sanskar plz tie this thread to her hand and swara you also” .we both tied that thread on each others hand.
Bidya aunty:”Sanskar you know today in temple I did a special pooja for both of u. This day maa paravati got shivji as her husband.Today evey married couple or who gonna maary will tie this thread to each others hand for long life relationship.This is very auspicious thread this will not separate u.plz keep this thread beta atleast 3 months after your marriage. ”
Sanskar” But aunty u misunderstood us we r not couples”.
Aunty:”I know you r friends,

After sometimes u both get marry right”.
Sanskar: “No Aunty,she is..” But she intrupted
Aunty: “I know u want sometime to settle in life then marriage its oky. Todays generation may have no such belife in this rituals.Seema has some complications in her delivery ,for her safety I asked him to tie this thread on her hand .But my son don’t believe in this he is a strong party member and removed it from her hand. Am not saying removal of that thread is the reason of her death. At that time she is weak and scared.I just want to bring her confidence back ,try to make her belive nothing will happen to her until shivji’s blessings with her.I strongly belive Sometime these small small things give u a hope that god is always with u and that will increase ur inner strength.You both are the pillars of each other.Let my god to tie this bond to even more stronger.”
They looked at each other.sometimes in life strangers become our well wishers their love tied into our life like this thread.

After some time she left with Bobby.
Swara:”Sanskar we will miss Bobby”.
Sanskar: “yah that’s true,Let me remove this thread,i should give this to Lucky”.
Swara:”No San she tied this with lots of love and prayers, I don’t want anything bad happened to u.let it be there”.
Sanskar:”You r silly”.
Shekhar and Laksh reached the hospital.
Laksh:”Bhai we r going to my flat ,uncle is also staying with us”.
Sanskar:”Lucky u both go,I have to go back to Kolkata asap Neha again called me this time I can’t neglect her.There is lots of preparations still pending for your wedding, mom and dad needs my help.After 2 three days I will be there in Mumbai, take care swara”
Hearing this she become sad and they moved to Mumbai.

After 4 days I reached the flat Everything seems to be normal.
Laksh:”I want to talk to you , pls come to my room”.
Sanskar: “Yes Laksh tell me “.
Laksh:”Don’t misunderstand me bhai,voo 1 week before when you came out of the room to talk with Ragini, Me and Swara discussed about our marriage and after that I..”. He lowered his head.
I look him with questionably
Laksh: “She screamed Bz of me,believe me Bhai I didn’t do anything.. It was a forehead kiss,but i didnt expect she will react like this”.
Sanskar: “Lucky u know very well,she is not completely recovred from that incident, it will take time”.
Laksh :”But here in flat she kept a distance with me like am a stranger,Whenever I try to come close, for a casual talk she become scared ”
Sanskar: “May be she is not comfortable ,give her some time Lucky”.
Laksh: ” ha i know she is only comfortable with u”.
Sanskar :”Laksh…” My sound raised over him.

He left the room.I hold my head with my palms,my heart is paining and eyes become moist..
Someone tapped my shoulder ” am sorry “.I turned.
Laksh:”I didn’t mean anything am sorry for hurting u”.
Sanskar:”Its oky Lucky, come with me”.They entered into the kitchen. He give him a cup of soup.”Someone told me that when we feed each other with our hands love increases, so go she is there in the dining table” He smiled at me.

Next day evening :
We decided to return home tmorrow morning.She is packing her bag.
Sanskar :” Where is Laksh ..?”.
Swara:”He is in office,am surprised he is very bcy these days still he managed to find some time for me “.
Sanskar you know am very lucky to have him as my life partner.”
she again fold her dress and placed into the bag.I simply smiled at her.
Sanskar:”Oky u continue ur packing ..”
“Wait San ..I want to go beach”.
“Oky I will call him”.
” No he is bcy”.
” k we will go tomorrow “.
“No San I want to see sunset, tomorrow we are going back to Kolkata.
“Oky then come let’s go”
We reached the beach side Sat there on sand.sun is become red.She in deep thoughts.A cool breeze touched her warmth of the cheek
“Hey hello..r u dreaming..”
She smirked.
“After 1 week I will tied to new relation, new life and new hope is in my door step”.
Sanskar:” Time flies like in blink of an eye, i still remember u as a 10 th grader when I saw u first time at school library.Now u r going to marry”
Swara:”Yah after marriage he want to settle in U S A..”
“Oh that’s good na..u always like to settle in USA..your dream to study in abroad,Now you can make it reality”.
“Ha but I don’t know San..I really gonna miss something.. I have a strong feeling that I gonna loss something that very precious to me.”
Sanskar:”You already told me this in your engagement day, don’t be silly”.

She stood from there..walk towards the sea, waves r touching her ankle.she starts to play with them.
Sanskar:”Don’t go so far come here shona”.
I stood from there held her hand pulled towards me.
Sanskar:”am surprised u r enjoying , I know how much you afraid to go near sea before. ”
Swara:”Ha but not now,you are always with me na,so why should I afraid”.She took my hand in her palms.
We both looked at each other. I slowly release my hands from her.
“I want to talk to u something shona”.She looks at me questionably.
“After one week u gonna marry Laksh.I want from today itself he should be ur first priority,he should be ur best friend than me.You know swara I believe in that 7 phera’s that we took on marriage.That 7 vows are a promise to each other for being 7 lives together.After marriage your husband should be your best friend, other than anyone else.I wish your journey start with lots of love and trust.He should be the one you always find safety in his arms.You know swara Laksh also believe in this,my mom teach us this values.” I can see waves of emotions in her face.she sighed.
Swara:”Sanskar I respect Laksh more than anything else.He invite me to his life that am not deserving. It was not like that am not liking him. It was bz of that incident made me weak.I am scared when sorry about that incident, I really don’t know what happened to me at that time.” she stopped for a while and again hold my hand.
“Look at that sun sanskar,who is going to fall down on sea.Let the sun be the witness of my promise.I will definetly full fill that 7 vows gonna taken with him. My husband will be my best friend after my marriage.I will love him from this lives to those 6 lives.I promise I will be his strength and stand by him in all tough times..I never let him down and honour him with all respect and love.”..

Precap:Swalak marriage twist(that u all know what happened)

Guys I just typed this in a hurry..I know its a short update. Today is my birthday I thought to write a lengthy one but didn’t happened sorry..Except last para I am not satisfied with this chapter…Thanku for the support my friends and my silent u all…

Credit to: Malar

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  1. good one …and happy birthday. ….

    1. Thank u dr

  2. loved it..!!

    1. Thank u shreya for the support

  3. Its really nice dear

    1. Thanku anu

  4. Happy birthday Malar. Thank for this update.

    1. Thanku dhara for the continues support

  5. happy birthday dear….:-)
    its nice dr…..

    1. Thanku shan..keep reading.. Have a doubt r u abhirami in fb

  6. Happy Bday dear….have lots of fun and enjoy ur day…..and the episode is nice….swasan bonding is amazing…..

    1. Thanku ashu..I think this is the time ur comments here..thanks for the support

  7. Hey nice one and happy birthday to u dear may good bless u

    1. Thank u Dheemahee different name…cute..

  8. Too good…
    Wish u many more happy returns of d day…have a good day…update next part soon…

    1. Thanku so much seeba for ur support and wish…

  9. It’s too good waiting fr next pls upload asap

    1. Thanku MM for the support.. I will try..

  10. Wish you happy bday dear… today my bestiee bday also… 🙂 🙂 and cmes to dis epi I’m fully satisfied yaar… I think swara also loves sanskar but she s doent realising it… waiting for your twist…

    1. Thanku also ur friend na..and your guess is rite yaar..Everytime you easily understood what I really want to say…thanks for the continues support

  11. very nice and wish u a very happy birthday dear 🙂

    1. Thanku pratheeksha…

  12. vry nice…plz dear show laksh pov
    also..y he left he also loves her..after that accident he s not behaving bad we swara..nd plz come back to present

    1. Actually this is Sanskar POV…want to show fb in one go..Bz some of the incidents in fb related to present that’s epi will tell u why he left her..I really don’t I could convince you all with my reason..

  13. Happy birthday dear.May god bless u with loads of happiness. Awesome episode.It was just beautiful. Emotions flew through out the episode ans i was overwhelmed while reading.

    1. Thanku needhi for liking my Ff..

  14. Happy birthday dear:)!!!!! Hope all ur wishes come true…….may god bless you… episode waiting for next part….

    1. Thank u sweety..ur name remind me about one of my friend.her name is also sweety. ..

  15. Happy B-day,best wishes. Today’s EPs. Was good,waiting for next. Curious to know what’s next for swasan.

    1. Thanku Rosh..for the support and encouragement…

  16. happy bday malar……….nice update

    1. Thanku priya for the support

  17. Happy birthday dr pls update next part soon as birthday u hv great future

    1. Thanku Dr..I was bcy with whole day..not only this day every time..reached home late so I wrote few lines that’s it..

  18. Nyc episode .and Happy b’day dear

    1. Thanku Aruba..plz keep reading

  19. Happy birthday dear…may this day brings all happiness n success to ur life..lots wishes…

    1. Thanku musku

  20. sorry couldnt post comment yesterday
    u write very nice
    plz continue

    1. No pblm will read my Ff…thank u for the extreme support

  21. oh and happy birthday
    many many happy returrns of the day
    may your birthday be as good as a writer you are

  22. Wish u many many happy returns of the day..
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY “MALAR” may ur all wishes n dreams complete n God bless u dear.. with lots of love 🙂
    n about episode.. its owesome.. n in hurry u wrote but it’s too good as usual..
    Shivaji’s thread part was too nice n last para i just loved it.. n i told this line 2nd time.. “Don’t underestimate ur skills”

    1. Thanku so much Falguni.. Everytime your comments motivate me and give more confidence in me..i promise today itself will not doubt myself ..

  23. Happy birthday dr sethu…. many more happy returns…. may god bles u nd ur wishes com true…
    Today epi ws good nd cooll… waiting for nxt epi.. plz post is asap..

    1. Navi thank u Dr …for the wishes….

  24. HAPPY BIRTHDAY…..mny mny happy returns of the day… stay blessed… 🙂
    the chapter was really nice espcly the last part….waiting fr d nxt part 😀

    1. Thanku pari for ur support..keep reading..

  25. It’s too good dear,
    Wish you a very happy birthday dear

    1. Thanku u sus for the support

  26. Happy birthday malar…

    1. Thank u meghs…

  27. UR welcome dear.. n Hey Malar pls tell VINIDi that we r waiting for her next update desperately..
    pls …

    1. Ys Falguni she will upload today. .we had a talk yesterday..

      1. Ty ty ty ty sooooooooo much dear.. 🙂
        i m so happy.. ty 🙂

  28. hey when will u update ur ff..?

    1. Ys uploaded dr

  29. The comment which I typed now is not seen..some error,belated birthday greetings ,dear,may God bless u..absolutely loving your ff n reading it with interest,narration is conveying the feelings to us.Do u write in malayalam?reading this, I have that doubt..keep going..

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