My business tycoon…….A twinj story (episode 1)

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Hloo friends….I hope u all are fine…So let’s start with the episode…..

Scene 1

Taneja Mansion

A girl is shown sleeping in the room…. The sound of the alarm disturbs her sleep….She got up from her beauty sleep….After freshing up she went downstairs……A lady was working in the kitchen….The girl went inside the kitchen and wished her good morning….

Girl:- good morning maa

Lady:- good morning my bacha…

So the lady was leela and the girl was avni….

After that avni went in the garden a man was sitting there reading the newspaper….

Avni:- Good morning papa

Man:- Good morning avni

So yess the man was Rt…..Then leela called avni and asked her to wake up her sister….

Avni went upstairs…She enter into the room…A very beautiful girl was sleeping in that room who is very particular with her sleep….She can miss anything but she can’t miss her beauty sleep….Nd for avni it is most difficult work to wake her sister up…

Avni:- di get up u r getting late for the meeting…

Girl:- no answer

Avni:- di get up….Maa is calling u downstairs for breakfast…u’ll get late for ur meeting…

Girl:- Again no answer

Avni:- oh babaji which type of girl she is….How does she became the business tycoon u only know….

Avni was having a very hard tym in waking up her sister….She saw a jug full of water nd smirks….She lift up the jug and pour all the water on the girl’s face…..Girl at once got up…..Nd she shouted avni at the top of her voice…..Avni receive a very bad scolding from her di and after that very innocently apologizes to her….

Avni:- sorry twinkle di

So yes the girl was our drama queen and our hero’s siyappa queen TWINKLE….

Twinkle who was hell angry on avni went inside the washroom nd she quickly got freshunup and went downstairs….

Leela:- Good morning twinkle puttar

Twinkle:- Good morning maa

Rt:- Good morning twinkle

Twinkle:- Good morning papa

Leela:- Twinkle puttar wht happened why r u so angry??

Twinkle looked up at avni and gave her an angry look while avni gave her an innocent look….Then twinkle told the whole incident to leela and rt…

Leela:- avni why u did this

Rt:- yes avni she is ur elder sister nd u should not have done this….

Avni:- Then what should I do…I was having no other option….She is kumbh Karen’s sister….It’s very difficult to wake her up….I really feel pity on her future husband….Twinkle passed her a death glare…

Twinkle:- what do u mean that u feel pity on my future husband….U know what I feel pity on your future husband because he will get a wife who is always ready to fight……Ayi bdi mere future husband par taras khane wali…Hmm…

Leela:- Enough guyz finish ur breakfast….

After finishing the breakfast both the sister left for their respective works…..

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That’s it for now

Hope u guyz like it……

Precap:- kunj nd niel entry and twinj and avniel meet….

Sorry for the short update next one will be the longer one…Ignore grammatical errors…Do comment and hit like nd dislike buttons….See u soon……..

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13 Comments
  1. Cheena2001Cp

    Sweet and short!!! Such a patakha Twinkle is!!! Avni was so sweet!!!

  2. Hi sonia thanks for an awsm update sorry but it was too short I guess and also it did not have many scences only twinkle woke up and wished her parents and went to office it was really so short I wish I could get a long update sorry if my harsh words hurt u literally sorry for writing such things but u can improve many things in ur ff then it would be a great ff it’s just for suggestion and I liked one thing about u is that u r posting soon thanks very much dear hope u understand my feelings and make some changes love u sonia

  3. Hi sonia thanks for an awsm update sorry but it was too short I guess and also it did not have many scences only twinkle woke up and wished her parents and went to office it was really so short I wish I could get a long update sorry if my harsh words hurt u literally sorry for writing such things but u can improve many things in ur ff then it would be a great ff it’s just for suggestion and I liked one thing about u is that u r posting soon thanks very much dear hope u understand my feelings and make some changes love u sonia. 😊😊😊

  4. Superb episode post next part soon can’t wait to see twinj n avneil meet

  5. Heyyy Awsm …
    their family scenes was nice …

    Waiting for nxt…
    I hope nxt would be long one not that much short…

    Wlcm to the tei family as a new writer…

  6. Nice epi…bt make it longer

  7. nice epi …
    looking forward to read more…

  8. It’s awesome dear ….Love the bonding of Avni & Twinkle ….Really loving their family moments….They are so cute ….Looking forward to next part…….Update soon & love u

  9. Nice episode dear
    Yrrr ye bahut short tha plzzz next time thoda long post krna plzzzzzz
    Post soon dear
    Luvvvv u

  10. awesome i love it
    loving the bond of avni and twinkle
    love the family moment
    update soon

  11. SSK

    Amazing episode πŸ™‚

  12. Ramya

    Awesome

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