build your own story | a perfect love in the world of imperfections

SHE WALKED ON AND ON UNTIL….she reach the gate without anyone’s notice ….by seeing the guards she hides behind the bushes. When the guards leaves she rushes outside the gate and continuously runs in the middle of the road……

Her hairs were flying in the air, tears were rolling down her cheeks, her foot is deeply hurt….but she is not at all affected by the pain of the hurt…..

The day is overcast and gloomy..dark clouds heavy with rain is ready to brust…the clouds thundered and flashed streaks of lighting across the sky line. Then the droplets started falling few at first,with in a short time it turns to a heavier rain…

But the girl doesn’t bothered anything…she just runs and runs in the middle of the road…

Suddenly a car comes from the opposite side..

The driver was really shocked to see the girl running in the middle of the road,… he shouts at her to move while trying harder to handle his car…

But the girl was not at all hearing or seeing anything …she was in her own thoughts…

The girl and car moves closer and closer….

At last the driver stops his car with lot of struggle at the nick of the time eventhough the girl slightly falls…

The girl falls in the sitting position in the heavy rain. Her hairs were scattered all around her face, raindrops were rolling down her body, and was shivering badly…

She stares at the driver through her hairs….

The driver too looks at the girl with his head on the stearing…..

After sometime…the driver comes out of the car and stands in the rain looking at the girl who is continuosly staring at him …..

He slowly walks to the girl angrily but his anger vanishes in the air seeing her frightened state and the tears in her eyes through her hairs…

He hold the shoulders of the girl and asks “Are you OK..”

The girl didn’t utter a single word..

Suddenly he feels some weight in his hands….he looks on shockingly…

The girl has fallen unconsious in his hands…he gets tensed seeing that and moves her hair to tap her cheeks….

But he gets more shocked to see the girl’s face….He takes her in his arms and places her in the car and drives to his room…

At his home,,
He makes her lay in the bed and by seeing her shivering he calls her caretaker ramya kaki…and asks to change the girl’s cloth while he calls doctor….

Aftersometime,……the doctor came and examines the girl..

Doctor; Mr.Kunj Sarna..[[yes he is kunj]]…she is very weak …and too has high fever…she needs proper rest and make sure She eat healthy food and on proper time…

Kunj nods….

Doctor;; And here are the medicines…give her on the correct time as written…

Kunj;; sure…thank you doctor…

Doctor leaves…

Kunj comes near the room where the girl is and stares at her …Ramya kaki comes from behind and says “i will take care of her…”Kunj nods and leaves to his room by giving the prescribed medicines to ramya kaki…

At his room…

He opens his dairy and writes…

“SHE CAME BACK IN MY LIFE AGAIN……”

And continously stares at that one statement without any emotions for a long time…

Slowly he falls asleep…

At morning…

Ramya kaki came and knocks at his door…He wakes up and opens the door in half asleep stage….Ramya kaki with a flooding and warm smile wishes him “Good morning my lazy boy…”

Kunj smiles naugthily and wishes her back…

Ramya kaki leaves by keeping his morning coffee in the table. He freshes up and moves to takes his coffee…but he stops by seeing the statement in his dairy…he recalls about the yesterday’s happenings…

He walks out of his room to the girl’s room and sees her peacefully sleeping hugging the pillow tightly…He walks near her and looks at her pale and weak face…

Kunj {in mind..}

Last time i really didn’t know when you came in my life and went off. I have just spended the five hours with you that time….it was the five hours which i can never forgetten. The first touch of you which made me feel the shock which passes through my body….and the last touch which made me feel odd and shock were really unforgettable thing…

His thoughts were distrubed by someone’s murmuring….He looks around and sees the girl , shivering and murmering..’plzz…plzz….leave me..plz..”

He cups her face and says “calm down twinkle…calm down..” [[yes…she is twinke…]]

She slowly comes down and sleeping hugging his waist…he stares at her…

Kunj {in mind}
twinkle….what happen to you now….? how you reached kolkata..?and for what?….why were you running in the road lonely?….where can i get the answer for my questions…

He slowly takes of his twinkle’s hand off from his waist and kept it in the pillow ….

He walked to his room and opens a shelf and takes some photos…
it’s of pics of ……Twinkle and kunj’s marriage :0) :0)

kunj{in mind}
after some days of the marriage when the photographer came with these pics maa throwed it out. Don’t know why but me unknowingly moves and takes it….i keeped it safe with me…..i really don’t know why i did it……don’t know why i feeled sad when my maa talked ill words about you to others after our marriage….

He gets out of his thought hearing the ringing of his phone…

Kunj;; hello…

Usha[kunj’ maa];; where are you now…

kunj;; at home…

usha;; didn’t you go to office…

kunj;; today is sunday maa…

usha;; ohh…i forgot, anyway i had send few pic of girls to your phone……choose any one and infrom…then i will go to there house for her hand…

kunj keeps quite….

usha;; did you hear me…

kunj;; mm..

usha;; bye…call me soon…

He takes his phone from his ears and keeps it in the table….

Kunj {in mind}
Why maa always talk about marriage…i really don’t want to get married like this……it’s because i want a girl which i like not by choosing someone by seeing the pic…

Suddenly his thoughts got disturbed by some sound…

kunj;; from, where is this sound coming…

suddenly he understands it’s from twinkle’s room and he fastly runs to her room…

He was shocked to see what was happening there…twinkle was throwing everything she gets on hand and ramya kaki trying her best to control her…She was to screaming “i will kill you….”

Kunj moves towards her and holds her hand from throwing things…She looks at him angrily and pushes him with her leg….

With the force Kunj falls on the bed….Twinkle takes a piece of glass piece and was to stab him…..But he rolls in the bed saving himself…eventhough he get a small hurt in his hand…

Ramya kaki who was shocks seeing this throws away the glass piece from twinkle’s hand with much difficulty….and ties her in chair…

Twinkle screams “Untie my hands….leave me…”

Ramya kaki runs to kunj and cares and aids his wound…But kunj just stares at twinkle who is screaming….He stands and goes to twinkle and cups her face…

“Twinkle…calm down…..why are you screaming…calm down…”

Twinkle gets calm by his words and stares at him continuosly..

Kunj;; nothing will happen to you ok…i promise you….I will untie your but behave like a good girl…

Twinkle nods….kunj unties her…Twinkle stands looking down…

kunj;; ramya kaki …give her breakfast, and do not forget to give medicine after it..

ramya kaki;; yaa…but your hand is wounded..

Kunj;; I will manage it…

He leaves from there…ramya take care of twinkle…

kunj in his room is aiding the wound recalling the past…

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Flashback………

SIX months before….

Usha calls kunj…

kunj;; hello maa..

usha;; hello…i have called to say that i have fixed your marriage…so come home with in one week…

kunj;; what….marriage?

usha;; ya…marriage with daughter of taneja…

kunj;; maa…but i don’t want to gat married now..

usha;; are you going to get married after my death….You should come home within one week and should get married to Twinkle Taneja…

Without any choice as a obedient child kunj goes to punjab his hometown from kolkata where he works…

On the day of marriage..

kunj is sitting on mandap…
kunj{in mind..}
Today….get married to a girl..a strange girl who i had never seen till now…don’t know how will be the future of this marriage……

Disturbing his thought’s he see a girl coming to the mandap….in a beautiful lehega covering her face….

the marriage rituals start..during it when he held the hand for puja he feels a shock passing through his body….it’s the first time he was feeling something like that….

At last twinj gets married in that beautiful mandap….

After the marriage twinkle’s mother leela took her to kunj’s room…

And after sometime…twinkle’s family and guests leaves..
usha asks kunj to go to his room…he leaves..

At room….
Kunj enters and sees twinkle sitting in bed covering her face….

He moves near her and takes of the veil to see her for the first time…

He sees..his wife ….

but he feels odd when she touches him like a kid and plays with his hand like a kid….

suddenly some paper falls near his leg from twinkle’s suitcase which is arranged in the corner…

He bends and takes the paper looking at twinkle….

He shockingly looks at the paper….

Kunj{in mind};;
what….how can this happen….ya this is true…what i read is true..i can understand that by seeing twinkle…yes…She is mentally unstable….she has sick in the head…..She is ” MAD” :0) :0)

He was shockingly standing seeing her weird behaviour…..she was playing with the pillow like a child…..That time usha enters and looks at kunj and twinkle…

she was not understanding anything……Kunj hands over her the report…

:0) :0) usha;; what…how can this happen….she is mad {says in disbelieve..}

Kunj starts recalling the previous moments…..when twinkle maa forcily takes her hand in her to take the pheras…when her maa stares at her angrily when she touched his hand button of sherwani….when her maa took her to the room as soon as the marriage finished…

usha recalls……how twinkle’s family requests them for doing just the marriage cancelling all other functions….how twinkle’s family denies to make the groom see the bride as a custom..etc…

usha shouts angrily.;; no…..how can they do this….they cheated us…they made there mad daughter marry my son….nooo….i will throw this girl out…..

Usha angrily drags twinkle from bed …while she cries and says “leave me….leave me….” Kunj was just staring at her…

usha throws her out of the house….and hold her hair tightly…

usha;; you mad girl…you can never be my bahu….

all the neighbourhoods surrounds there…

one of them;; ushaji what are you doing…throwing your newly bahu out of the house…

usha;; noo….she is not my bahu..

neighbour;; what…?

usha;; Her family has cheated us…This girl is mad…mentally ill…

neighbour;; ohh…

neighbours shockingly looks and starts discussing about it…

twinkle cries like a child sitting in the road…

usha leaves inside angrily and dails leela taneja…

but she doesn’t pics up…

she tries to call all the members of her family…..but no one pics…

usha angrily throws her phone in the ground…

usha;; how can they do this big cheat…

usha’s driver enters…

usha;; what happen…

driver;; voo…there whole family has left to london…

usha;; what….

driver;; i think it’s not right to make that girl stay in road….if anyone complaints it will be huge problem…

usha looks at him and angrily goes outside and makes twinkle sit in the car leaves from there…

Kunj looks on from balcony…

Flashback ends
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After that day i have never seen you….maa didn’t tell where she took you…but after some days from ramya kaki i came to know you were taken to some mental hospital….months later i see you now…that fIve hours have given me a huge memories which i won’t be able to forget in my life…..

Disturbing his thoughts….ramya kaki came and says “breakfast is ready..”

Kunj;; i will just come…

after sometime at dinning area…kunj enters and sees twinkle playing with the food…

kunj sits opposite to her….

kunj;; why you sits like this…don’t you eat…

twinkle stares at him….

kunj;; what happen..?

twinkle looks down and starts continues playing with food…..

kunj starts eating with his hands…..twinkle stares at him and the way of eating continuosly….

Ramya kaki comes there takes plate..fills food and was to make twinkle eat with her hands….

But twinkle pushes her hand and takes the plate from her hands…

Ramya kaki;; what happen….
Twinkle;; ssshhhh….{keeping her hands in lips}

She slowly takes food in her hand and keeps in her mouth looking at kunj eating and coping it completely……

Kunj with corner of his eyes sees her cute and innocent acts…he was take water to drink but it slips falls all over the table. By seeing this twinkle too takes water and makes it slip copying him….

Ramya kaki and sanskar was amused by her doings and smiles….

DAYS passed…..
Twinkle’s bond with ramya kaki and kunj become stronger…..Ramya kaki’s and kunj’s happiness has become the happiness of twinkle…Both of them loved twinkle a lot…They laughed by seeing twinkle’s cute acts and her crazy pranks…..and cries when she gets hurt….

One day when kunj came back home…..He sees ramya kaki sitting cryingly infront of house…

he runs to her…
kunj;; what happen kaki ?why are you crying ?

Ramya kaki;; usha has come..

kunj;; what maa came……

ramya kaki;; your maa…twinkle..

kunj;; twinkle….what happen to her…where is she..?

ramya kaki;; voo…

{interuppted by usha]}
usha;; i send her back to mental hospital…

kunj was shocked to here that…

usha;; why did you bring that mad girl here ?If you told me i wound have send her to mental hospital….?Don’t know why that mad girl is always after you….and why did she ran from the mental hospital….if that mad girl come back again then i will kill her…..

kunj{shouts};; maaaaaa…..

Usha looks at kunj shockingly by seeing him shouting…

kunj;; Not a word about twinkle maa….not a word….what problem do you have if twinkle is with me…..i love her maaa…..i understood love in these days which i spend with her….i will bring her back she is mine….

usha;; kunj…are you in sense….you love a mad girl….what the hell kunj….you won’t get happiness with that mad girl….society will taunts you…i just want your happiness kunj…

kunj;; what….do you need my happiness maa….you had never valued my happiness maa…..if you had then you would not have forced me to marry or to choose a girl to marry…..if you had valued my happiness you should have supported me without giving priority to any society…..I had promised to myself that i won’t let twinkle go away from me…

usha;; she is mad…

kunj;; noo…she is not but me mad in the love of twinkle…my twinkle….she is not perfect…shehas imperfections…..but if we look close i just sees imperfections…this world is full of imperfections…but the most common thing which perfectly perfect all over the world is love…..and my love to twinkle is one of that…Her imperfections doesn’t matters to me…what matters is she maa…my love…twinkle….

tears rolls down usha’s eyes…

kunj{continues};; i love her maa…do you know how twinkle reached kolkata…..because it’s not a place who treats paitents but mistreats….they sells mentally illed girls body..they sent some girls to kolkata …twinkle was also one of them…there is a lady maid who had cared twinkle and loved her a lot….she made twinkle ran away as she was forced by a man,….the lady hits on his head and make frightened twinkle run away without anyone’s notice……..i came to know this from the lady when i go there to enquired how she reach kolkata….if anything would had happen to twinkle that day then i wouldn’t have forgiven myself for stopping you from sending twinkle there six months back…..Maa…what’s her fault…her parents made her marry us as they want to get of from the responsibilites towards her….there was not a single fault of twinkle maa….

usha was really shocked hearing all that…tears runs down her eyes due to guilt….

kunj;; i had never asked you anything maa….and not done anything against your words……and today i ask you something for first and last time…i want my twinkle maa….i want her…plzz allow me to go…plzz i really don’t want to go against your words…and don’t force me now…{by sayig he folds his hand infront of her..}

usha cryingly holds his hand;; soorry…i am really sorry..i was not ale to understand you…go…go fast….i don’t want any bad thing happen to twinkle…if that people…

kunj{cryingly};; nahi maa…nothing will happen…that people has got arrested few days back and the government had provided new workers there,….

usha hugs kunj….
usha;; goo…bring twinkle fast back…i want to see her…..

kunj nods and leaves….

at hospital….

kunj steps at hospital….suddenly he feels like he is falling bu supports himself in the wall…it’s because twinkle seeing him cryingly comes and jumps on him cryingly…

kunj;; twinkle…calm down…i have came naa….your kunj has came…calm down {says wiping her tears…}

He made her sit in chair and makes her drink water…he slowly cares her cheeks and kisses her forehead….

twinkle amusily looks at kunj…
twinkle innocently toching heer forehead ask : what was that…
kunj ;; love…
twinkle;; can i give to you too….
kunj nods….
nextsecs he pauses he shockingly looks at twinkle who was cutely smiling….she had kissed him in his lips….he smiles at her and pecks her lip….

He walks out of hospital in the rain holding her hands to live in the world of imperfections…with the perfect love….they gets wet in rain and gets drench in love…the perfect love…

***************************** THE END **************************************

” LOVE IS NOT FINDING PERFECT PERSON…BUT IT’S SEEING THE IMPERFECT PERSON PERFECTLY FOR THEM ”

“PEOPLE ARE BORN TO BE REAL NOT TO BE PERFECT”

“THE WORD ” imperfect” ACTUALLY SPELLS “I’am perfect” BECAUSE EVERYONE IS PERFECT IN THEIR OWN IMPERFECT WAYS”

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35 comments

  1. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Whohhhhhhhh….that’s an os….mind blowing….couldn’t think of better than this….pls do keep writing…….
    It was really very nice…..
    Loved it

  2. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    I vote fr dis
    I really loved it n msg u gave it also
    I loved it to core n my name I ramya n in dis os u made ramya kaki it’s weird fr me
    Bt os was superb

  3. sarika

    wow..it’s one of the best os i read till now.
    i always used to guess next the story will be like this….then like that etc…but you made my guesses wrong everytime
    First i thought twinj are lovers when he gets shocked to see her face…
    then i thought twinkle has lost her memory on the marriage day when kunj looks at the family photo
    after that i think twinkle has lost her memory and something bad happened to her that’s why she was screaming…shouting….
    then before i think you gave me a shock that “she is mad..”
    after hearing that i thought twinkle will be becoming normal at last and twinj gets together
    but at last when you ended by making twinj together accepting each other with all the imperfection were really really amazing

    I thinking it’s fanclubs story and was looking for her/his other post…but then only i understood that it’s a competition. ; )

    #i vote for this…..

  4. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Wowww it was awesome amazing mindblowing superb os…… n uniq concept… I just loved it…..
    # I Vote for this

    “Shalini/Neha”

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