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Broken without you#shivika OS

_candy_By _candy_May 7, 2017Updated:May 10, 201882 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys I am with other os and thank u so much for responses u gave in the previous os and I love sad endings so this is also a sad ending story but next story will be happy ending pakka

Shivika room (night)
Anika pov
Does shivay remember what is tomorrow, I am sure he doesn’t remember what is tomorrow as it is a small thing for him but that’s not a small thing for me, I hope shivay knows that tomorrow is our 1st Aniversary
Shivay pov
This anika will surely forget that tomorrow is our anniversary only fights matter to her, she is fighter cock, if she was lawyer then anika would surely eat everyones brain, donno if she remembers what is tomorrow, if I ask abt the fight she will say history but wont remember what is tomorrow
They both sleep with a smile on their face hoping that their partner remember what is special tomorrow
While pinky in her room
Pinky pov
Tomorrow is their anniversary and I will make it memorable tomorrow will be anika’s death anniversary I don’t want shivay to listens to her tomorrow is the last day for anika
Pinky sleeps giving a wicked smile

Next day morning
Anika pov
Shall I wish him or will he wish me, I am sure he wont wish me keeping his ego aside
Shivay pov
I know that fighter cock wont wish me I have to wish her
Happy anniversary says both together
Wow!the tadi baaz bagad billa know what is today this moment will be written in the genies world book of records with golden letters says anika happily but in a teasing tone
Whats your problem when I wont wish u also problem when I wish also problem says frustrated shivay
Anika shows him finger
Ok I think we shouldn’t fight on our 1st anniversary says anika
Yah lets make it memorable says shivay
Ok first lets go to pani puri stall then we will go to a dinchack movie and a ride that too on my champa, it will be exciting billu and billi with champa ki sawari says anika
It will not happen like that first we will go on a bruch then watching horse race and decent English documentary film and at last at coffee shop says shivay disagreeing with anika
What horse race see shivay horse race is waste tell me will there will be willian in story who wil be hero that horse how police will catch thief will he catch theif if he catches also where he put handcuff at his leg it’s the worse idea shivay says anika arguing with shivay
What r u speaking are u in u r senses says a confusing shivay
Ok I accept I said little bit weird but I don’t like that says anika
Lets do 50-50 says shivay
Ok u r bruch idea my champa ki sawari and u r coffee shop and my dinchack movie idea says anika
All r u r favourites but still ok says shivay agreeing with anika

Lets go says anika
They both set to leave
Where r u going what did u make planning shares with me says pinky trying to know their whole day plan
Mom we are going for a brunch then a movie and coffee shop accompanied by champa
Champa? Asks pinky who is a bit confused
Its my scooter name says anika trying to speak in between
Ok first take dadi’s blessings and go says pinky
They both leave to take her blessings
Afterwards
Shivay here is my champa u will drive and I will enjoy ok says anika instructing shivay
Ok but wheres the helmet asks shivay
Anika gives the helmet and both sit on champa and goes
Pinky smirks
The weather is cool and romantic perfect for their champa ride
Shivay drives fast
Shivay drive slow I am getting afraid says anika
No its all fun says shivay
No its not at all fun says anika
Anika will u do one thing remove my helmet and wear it on its spoiling my hair style says shivay
Anika removes his helmet and wears herself
Suddenly they get hit by a tree
Shivay dies and anika survies

FB shows
Chamapa ki sawari.. says pinky thinking abt her plan
She calls ram her servant to parking area and tells him break the fails of scooter
Wont shivay die asks ram
No he wont bcoz he will wear helmet and only anika will die
He works on the scooter
Pinky and ram leaves
FB ends

Shivay knew that the break have failed and to save her lady love he has sacrified himself
Anika was hell shocked and stood there like a stone, a drop of tears falls down
She breaks down and shouts shivayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
I know its not nice

Do read and comment u r views
Critisicm is always welcomed

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    82 Comments

    1. ishuyamjha on May 7, 2017 3:08 am

      Oh my poor shivaay he died but the os was nice

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:23 am

        thank u so much dear it means a lot to me

    2. ARJS on May 7, 2017 8:14 am

      Omggg my bhai deid in the OS even though I know that before i read fully.i didn’t cry but I m sad that my bhai died??????????????.n I want to beat that pinky???????????because of her Shivaay died.cheap kamina pinky she doesn’t think about her son’s happiness at all.selfish mother.shivaay sacrificed his life for anika??????. N anika is a fighter cock??????? n both wishing together was the best. N awesome work Candy.u made pinky the villy.billu n billi nhok jhok was too good.awesome but next one happy ending Pls

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:38 am

        yah next time happy ending pakka thank u rufiiiiiiiii for u r lovely comment and so sad u r bhai died in my os but next time happy ending pakka and once again thank uuuuuuuuu

    3. dwet on May 7, 2017 9:09 am

      Nice. But please don’t let shivay die.

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:32 am

        thank u so much dear and sorry shivay died

    4. Ahaana on May 7, 2017 9:15 am

      Amazing

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:32 am

        thnx ahaana for u r support

    5. AditiB on May 7, 2017 9:34 am

      It’s good but the ending was sad again…..well I’m not such a fan of sad endings….but the reason shivaay gave to remove the helmet was I think amazingggg….but taking the ending I am sad that Shivaay died…..you described it really well….dear go on and give good stories like this one…. :-))))

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:39 am

        thank u so much aditi and i decide to write a happy ending as well next ending will be happy once again thank u dearrrr

    6. Kriti249 on May 7, 2017 9:40 am

      Poor Shivaay he sacrificed his life to save Anika. Amazing one

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:43 am

        thank u so much kriti for u r comment thank u so much

    7. RoopaliVaishali on May 7, 2017 9:43 am

      Please please write more sad endings like this!!!

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:46 am

        so u too like sad endings hi5 thank u for comment but my frnds want a happy ending i will surely write both

    8. Adi on May 7, 2017 9:50 am

      Killer why u kill shivay ???????I hate u killer …… coming to Os I love it ???

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 11:02 am

        i love killing next os me tu maregi and comment karke koi aeshan nahi kiya lekin phir bhi thnx

    9. Deepika12 on May 7, 2017 9:54 am

      ??????????????????????????????????di aapne mujhe phirse rula diyaaa??????????but iss baar main chup nhi houngi kyunki iss baar stry kuch jyada hi heart touching thiii????????shivu ne apni jaan dedi aniku ke liyeeee????????mere shivikuu???????

      But agar os ki baat kahu toh bahut hi acha tha. Aur heart touching bhi??

      Pichli baar aniku ko maara tha. Iss baar shivu ko maara h. Ahli baar dono ko milana h warna dekh lenaaaaa. Aapko chodungiii nhiii.

      Aur aap bahut aache OS likhti h. Aapko hamesha likhna chahiyeeee. Love uu dii???

      • Deepika12 on May 7, 2017 10:14 am

        Post next os soon

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 10:55 am

        agli baar mein shivika to milaungi and jaldi post karungi dekh na tera shivku kitna achaa he
        waise thanx for reading i will post next os soon love u

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 10:56 am

        agli baar mein shivika to milaungi and jaldi post karungi dekh na tera shivku kitna achaa he
        waise thanx for reading i will post next os soon love u
        next time i will give a happy ending and enjoy u r shadi

      • Deepika12 on May 7, 2017 11:13 am

        Woh toh h mera shiviku bahut acha j. And remember no thank no sry in frndship?? Khak enjoy karu shadi toh kal h. Aaj toh bas inn ceremonies se bore ho rhi hu

    10. shivikaanshi on May 7, 2017 9:54 am

      Its was aswm….i like sad endings…plzzz write more sad endings

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 10:57 am

        i will surely write sad ending thank u for u r comment

    11. Chanya on May 7, 2017 10:08 am

      I am crying ya…You made shivay die… Emotional and awesome dear… Write more..

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 10:53 am

        love u dii and i will surely write more

    12. kojagorimalik on May 7, 2017 10:53 am

      Awesome but again a sad ending next time happy ending plzz plzz plzzzz

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 11:03 am

        ya sure next time happy ending pakka and thnx for it

    13. JanviSingh on May 7, 2017 10:53 am

      Kya yr…. U killed my Shivay…. ????????
      Par koi nh tumhe maaf kiya…..
      N it was awsm yr…
      U know u r great at writing OS….
      U keep it short yet effective… N that’s the best part…..
      Hope to see your next OS soon….?

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 11:03 am

        i love short and sweet stories and thnx bura mat manna i will surely send u link of other os when i write ok
        love u

    14. Arni on May 7, 2017 11:01 am

      Wow wow its amazing loved it

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 12:21 pm

        thank u dear

    15. Jerry_36 on May 7, 2017 11:17 am

      Lovely?

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 12:21 pm

        thnx

    16. Rhea on May 7, 2017 11:36 am

      It was awesome os and again a sad ending even I like sad ending toh please write more sad ending os and one happy ending plz…..and post it soon….

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 12:22 pm

        yeah sure i will write more sad endings and thnak u dear

    17. CrazygirlS.P on May 7, 2017 11:51 am

      Awesome, omg????

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 12:22 pm

        thnx u and sorry

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 7, 2017 12:37 pm

        You don’t have to say sorry, because not every story has an happy ending?

    18. Niriha on May 7, 2017 12:19 pm

      O my god so sad ending but I like that becoz all story not have a happy ending right…awesome dear waiting for ur next work and give us treat like one happy ending story…… love you ??????

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 2:59 pm

        thank u so much dear and i will surely give u treat

    19. neehaa on May 7, 2017 12:38 pm

      Troll a it’s too senty you made me cry

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 3:00 pm

        awwwwwwww thank u so much sweet heart

    20. Vanisha on May 7, 2017 12:53 pm

      os was amazing …. Loved it??

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 3:00 pm

        thnx diiiiiiiiii

    21. ananyagour on May 7, 2017 1:29 pm

      Amazing…..feeling sad for shivay and anika

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 3:01 pm

        thank u soooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    22. thedreamsoul on May 7, 2017 1:51 pm

      Omg , this is again touchy . Awesome one dear , Shivaye saving Anika by sacrificing himself was great . what kind of Mother does this things , Pinky I will surely kill you. Both their fight was funny and you wrote it so well dear . Waiting for the next happy ending OS .

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 3:01 pm

        i am really happy to see u r comment thank u so much

    23. alekhika20 on May 7, 2017 2:49 pm

      Interesting os

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 3:01 pm

        thank u

    24. Archisha on May 7, 2017 3:34 pm

      That was nice. But it is one of those sad love stories on youtube abd sad stories. Right ?

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 4:13 pm

        u r right chota don and thanks if that was appreciation

    25. anujohnson on May 7, 2017 5:04 pm

      OMG…Candy tune mujhe hila Dala

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 5:42 pm

        achha hua hil gayi agar tarif ki he toh sukriya

    26. Shivika1233 on May 7, 2017 5:23 pm

      Amazing but feeling sad for shivaay

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 5:42 pm

        thank u sweet heart

    27. Soumya85 on May 7, 2017 5:49 pm

      It was again soo emotional swathi ????but u know what even I love sad stories…loved it yar it was amazing…waiting for your next OS..Love u??keep writing

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:30 pm

        pls call me candy and thank u so much vk ki sis even i am waiting for u r yeh he aashiqi

    28. fenil on May 7, 2017 6:48 pm

      Nice OS
      Sorry for last Mistake you r Candy Dii !! Right ?

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:30 pm

        i am not dii i am u r behen ok and thank u bhaiyya

    29. Anu16 on May 7, 2017 8:00 pm

      Hearttouching n emotional….. good mix of happy n sad moments…

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:31 pm

        thank u sweetheart for u r sweet comment

    30. Swetha on May 7, 2017 8:08 pm

      I’ve read similar stry on fb!! In a page I liked?

      Anyways I loved.. The way you described…?

      • trolls.ib on May 7, 2017 9:32 pm

        hey r u chandranandini swetha and yah i took it from insta and modified a bit thnx u

    31. saidha on May 7, 2017 9:54 pm

      one more sad ending u made me feel so much yaar

      • trolls.ib on May 8, 2017 11:14 am

        thnx u if it my tarif

    32. nandhininandhu on May 8, 2017 10:38 am

      Mera comment for my naughty emotional writer. Awesome dear .

      • trolls.ib on May 8, 2017 11:14 am

        thnx u diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii for u r comment

    33. Aliza111 on May 8, 2017 12:08 pm

      so tragic ending> well done. nice story. nice di

      • trolls.ib on May 8, 2017 1:31 pm

        thanks aliza

    34. aleya.marzan on May 8, 2017 1:29 pm

      soooooooo sad ending but awsome writting skill.

      • trolls.ib on May 8, 2017 3:00 pm

        thnx

    35. Trolls.Nets on May 8, 2017 3:14 pm

      Again again????????????????????????????????? your writing is jhakkas but always sad ending, is that necessary? Shivaay??????????????????? he is so sweet. Go to hell Pinky. She is the worst mother. I hate her! Even though it’s not real but still. I jate her. and I love u. Muaahhhhhh???????? *flying kiss* I loved it

      • trolls.ib on May 9, 2017 11:39 am

        replied down check

    36. trolls.ib on May 8, 2017 3:46 pm

      Thank u so much neeti I was waiting for your comment. Neeti next time I will surely write an os with an happy ending. And u said u love srk I to love him and I decided that I will give u his 15% take only his feet ok. Sharing is done

      • Trolls.Nets on May 9, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thank u???????

    37. christie123 on May 9, 2017 8:05 am

      kya yaar kya likhte ho jo ladki kabhi nahi roti use bhi rula dia. awesome!!!!!!

      • trolls.ib on May 9, 2017 11:39 am

        thnx yaar

    38. IME on May 9, 2017 10:39 am

      Awesome!!
      Loved it!!
      Emotional!!
      Amazing!!
      Superb!!
      Write more!!
      love u
      take care
      byee

      • trolls.ib on May 9, 2017 11:40 am

        love u ish than* u

    39. lokha on May 13, 2017 1:22 pm

      Awesome and Emotional one dear??…
      Feeling bad for shivaay…

      • trolls.ib on May 13, 2017 2:56 pm

        thank u so much lokha

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