“BROKEN WITHOUT YOU” FEW SHOTS ON SHRAMAN (1)

Hi , guys,lets take a break before I upload my next episode, I thought to write an os,but it turned out to be few shots on shraman. I know this story will be a bit disappointing but I will try to bring out the best in it guys. Hope you will like it, do comment and encourage. just an idea. Its your encourament that makes me write, so encourage me as much as you can, ok?
So lets start.
It was a bright Sunday morning, it seemed as if the sun spread all its bright rays on a big, gigantic bungalow that read “ shraman”. Oh yeah, you were right, it was the beautiful mansion of our beloved couple suman and Shravan. The house seemed pretty good from outside but deep inside there, the atmosphere was all filled with gloominess . it seemed like the past few hours inside the mansion was only spent crying without even a pinch of happiness. There laid a handsome young man, who was probably in his 30’s. he seemed so broken from inside, yeah, peeps, its none other than our Shravan malhotra. People around him wanted him to smile, but he was always an arrogant- young man.
people even had a query whether he had smiled at least once in his life, oh yeah he has and even now he does smile. the young man’s thoughts were disturbed by the ring of his mobile. He quickly picked the call , only to hear an young lady on the other side of the line.
Lady: hello, sir is this shravan malhotra, father of mirra malhotra?
Shravan: yes
Lady: sir,its been 15 minutes since ur ward’s school is over, please pick her up.
Shravan: thankyou, I will be there.
Shravan took a quick glance at the time , oh yeah it was 2:15 , he had to pick his daughter.
He rushed to the school and found his princess right there. He rushed to her.
The cute little 7- year girl ran and hugged him, oh yeah, she was none other than the symbol of shraman’s love, mirra malhotra, the only person who has bought a smile in shravan’s face after suman.
Mirra: papa.. you were late today, by fifteen minutes.
Shravan: sorry baby . papa will promise you, this will not happen the next time, ok?
Mirra (with a little smile on her face): its ok papa, but you have to get me an icecream
Shravan couldn’t help but adore his daughter and her cute antics, she has got all these traits from suman, she was indeed a miniature version of HIS SUMO. Shravan was in deep thoughts, his sumo, his mirra, their common features, antics, how much he loves both of them.
Mirra(nudges his shoulder) papa… where are you lost ? come let’s go have an ice cream.
Mirra: you know what papa, I got 10/10 in my English test, its such a good news right?
Shravan: yeah baby, its indeed a great news, even sumo used to top in English.
Mirra: sumo? Who’s sumo papa?

Shravan: ummm nothing
Shravan and mirra reach the icecream stall,
Mirra:Papa, I want chocolate icecream, you know its my favourite flavor.
Shravan: ok, even sumo used to like chocolate.
Mirra:Papa, tell me who’s sumo, please
Shravan: err nothing mirra, she was just a friend of mine.
Mirra oh…
Why does Shravan hide things about sumo to mirra? Is suman alive or dead? Want to know shravan’s past? JANE KE LIYE, KEEP READING “BROKEN WITHOUT YOU” FEW SHOTS ON SHRAMAN.
LOTS OF LOVE,
TAKE CARE
LOVE,
YB

9 comments

  1. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwww😄😄😄 cute one yar 😍😍😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😍😍😘😍
    Full of suspense .. waiting for next part
    Update soon 😊😊😊
    Take care 😻😻😻

  2. Alina

    |Registered Member

    Nice story dear..excited to know what’s next… N good yaar u make yourself shraman’s daughter👍👍😂 good keep it up..post next soon

  3. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey di!!
    It is a wonderful plot whichhas been well thought of!
    Suspense, huh? I’m lovin’ it!!
    But yes, please do try to post the next episode for your ff as well!
    Post soon!
    Love ya!<3

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