Broken Without You- Shivika OS by Luna

Hi guys….Just out of nowhere I thought of writing an OS on Shivika…..I’m not at all liking the current storyline of Ishqbaaz and how the makers have butchered the characters of Shivaye and Anika…So I thought of writing some romantic scenes between Shivika….So here it is:
The story is set after Shivaye and Anika confessing about their love and accepting each other in their life:
Scene 1(New York): Shivaye is in New York…he enters in his room in anger…he starts breaking the things to take out his anger…..He bursts into tears and breaks down.
Shivaye(crying and shouting): No…no…it…it can’t happen!!!!! It can’t happen!!!!
Shivaye(looking at the photo of God and shouting) : u can’t do this to me…u can’t do this to me!!!!! Did u listen???? U can’t do this(Shivaye’s voice gets low pitched ) plz…plz…don’t do this…plz!!!!

Anika enters the room and she sees Shivaye completely shattered….She goes and hugs Shivaye….Both cry while hugging each other.
Shivaye(crying): Anika….I’m sorry…I’m really really sorry.
Shivaye(in a low voice): shhh….don’t say anything…don’t say anything Shivaye!!!!!
Shvaye(crying): Anika…

Anika: plz don’t say anything Shivaye otherwise I’ll also lose it( saying this Anika breaks down).
Shivaye( putting his hand on Anika’s cheeks says in a low voice): Don’t worry Anika!!!!! Nothing will happen to u.
Anika(crying): Shivaye…I… don’t have… much time…I’m dying.
Shivaye(crying): Don’t…don’t say it…we…we’ll do something….don’t think like that we’ll do something.
Anika(putting her hands on Shivaye’s cheeks): Shivaye…plz try to understand…we have to accept this truth.
Shivaye(crying): No….No…I said na, nothing will happen to u…u will be completely fine….completely fine!!!!!
Anika(crying): Shivaye!!!!! I’m suffering from cancer….This…New York was our last hope…..but even here also the doctors can’t cure my disease…plz understand!!!!
Shivaye: Anika…it’s u who is not understanding!!!! We’ll go to some other doctors…they will definitel cure ur disease.
Anika(shouts in anger): Shivaye, why don’t u understand???? I’m dying!!!! I can’t live anymore….I don’t have much time.
Shivaye(shouting): Just shut up okay!!!!!! Just shut up!!!!! Say that again and I’ll slap u….don’t say that.
Shivaye starts crying.

Shivaye(crying): plz…plz…don’t say that!!!!!
Anika(crying): I’m sorry….I’m sorry Shivaye…plz…plz forgive me…plz forgive me Shivaye but…I have to leave u….i have to leave u!!!!
Shivaye: I said don’t say it….don’t say it…plz…plz don’t say it (Shivaye cries).
Anika(crying): u know Shivaye??? Life is like this only…we aren’t going to be together till the end….we have to separate……we have to break apart.
Shivaye: I don’t want to know how life is…I can’t live without u Anika…I can’t….u…u can’t…u can’t leave me like this.
Anika(crying): I’m sorry Shvaye!!!!
Shivaye(crying): No!!!! no!!!! no sorry…..no sorry Anika!!!! U can’t leave me like this…it was u…it was u who made me realise that…that love can overpower everything …everything…be it money, status, lineage, so…so how can love not overpower death????
Anika looks at Shivaye for a moment…then she closes her eyes and says: I was wrong…..u were right….love can’t overpower everything.
Shivaye: No, that’s not true…that’s not true…love can overpower everything…love can conquer all.
Anika(crying): I’m feeling very weak….A lot of pain is there in my body…not bcoz of my disease but bcoz of our love….This love is giving me a lot of pain Shivaye….I don’t now what to do???? Plz tell me!!!!

Shivaye hugs Anika tightly….both cry…O jaana song plays.
Shivaye(crying0: I don’t know Anika…I don’t know…I’ve never felt so weak and helpless ever in my life….why our love has to end like this???? Why???
Anika gives a smile on her sad face….she wipes Shivaye’s tears and says: bcoz…our love is special!!!!!!
Shivaye and Anika share an eyelock…O jaana song plays…..
Anika(crying): Shivaye…u know??? I never thought…. That our love story will meet such a fate….but now I realise that every love story meets with this fate only…..no one…no one can be with u till the end!!!!
Shivaye(crying): I don’t understand all these philosophical things….I only know one thing….that I can’t live without u Anika…I can’t live without u.
Shivaye hugs Anika and both cry a lot…..Hamari Adhuri Kahani song plays.
Few days later……

Scene 2(India): Anika is in hospital on her death bed taking her last breaths, Shivaye is sitting beside Anika holding her hand.….Shivaye is teary eyed….Anika is looking at Shivaye with pain in her eyes and smile on her face….
Shivaye(crying): Anika….
Anika: what Shivaye???? Say whatever u want to say….I don’t have much time…I have to leave.
Shivaye(crying): just shut up!!!!!
Anika isn’t able to control her emotions and bursts into tears…..She hugs Shivaye and both cry like children.
Anika(crying): I don’t want to leave u Shivaye!!!!!!! I want to be with u!!!!!
Shivaye: I can’t live without u Anika….plz…plz!!!!
Anika(crying): Shivaye…….u have to live…u have to live for ur brothers….for ur mom, for ur dad….for Dadi…for ur family….promise me Shivaye…promise me that u will not destroy ur life mourning over my death.
Shivaye(crying): just shut up!!!! Just shut up Anika!!!!
Anika(holding Shivaye’s hands): promise me Shivaye…plz.
Shivaye(crying): No….no…I can’t …I can’t do that.
Anika(with teary eyes): Shivaye….tumhe pata hai???? The person who doesn’t has a family can only know the real value of a family….ask me, how it is to live without a family…to live without anyone caring for u….to live without anyone thinking about u….u r really lucky to have a family Shivaye, who love u, who care for u….u have to live and be happy, not for me, not for urself but for ur family…u have to forget me Shivaye..
Shivaye(crying): How easily u said that I have to forget u…..sorry Anika, but love isn’t a thing to forget and I learnt this from u only….and the pain…the pain u get in love!!!! That u alsou can’t forget and the pain u r giving me right now, I can’t forget it!!!! I can’t forget it till my last breath.
Anika (crying): plz Shivaye…plz fulfill my last wish…plz.
Shivaye(crying): How Anika??? How??? I’m sorry but I can’t lie to u….I can’t cheat u….I’m sorry Anika but I have to say this…my life is nothing….nothing without u!!!!!!
Shivaye and Anika bursts into tears…O jaana song plays…..
Anika(crying): ur words are hurting me Shivaye…I can’t see u like this.
Shivaye(crying): I’m sorry Anika….but I have to be honest to u.
Anika:(crying): Shivaye……was our love so weak that u can’t even fulfill my small wish???? Shivaye, I want to see u happy!!!!!
Shivaye(crying): How can I be happy Anika???? How????
Anika: There are millions of reasons in this world to be happy Shivaye.
Shivaye(crying): But I want u to be my reason for my happiness!!!
Anika: Shivaye….we don’t get what we always want but…..then our life doesn’t ends there….we our life continues….happiness comes and sorrows too…..they are a part of our life….but our life doesn’t ends there.

Shivaye: Anika…I don’t these philosophical things.
Anika(holds Shivaye’s cheeks): but u have to…u have to understand Shivaye.
While Anika was holding Shivaye’s cheeks, Shivaye holds Anika’s hand.
Shivaye(crying): Anika….I…I don’t know what to say????
Anika(crying): promise me Shivaye…plz…promise me that u will not go in deoression…that u will live ur life happily with ur family without me…promise me.
Shivaye(crying): Okay… I promise.
Anika gets emotional…she hugs Shivaye……both cry…O jaana plays.
Anika(crying): Thank you Shivaye…thanks a lot!!!!!
Shivaye: okay…now u should take rest now.
Anika doesn’t responds and Shivaye realises that she died when they were hugging……Shivaye gets shocked….He lays down Anika on the bed.
Shivaye(crying): Anika…..plz wake up….plz…..u can’t leave me so soon…u can’t leave me like this…..I want to talk to u more……u have to also meet Sahil, Om, Rudra…u can’t go like this….plz wake up….plz Aniika…plz!!!!!
Shivaye hugs the dead Anika and cries….Hamari Adhuri Kahani song plays.
Anika’s voiceover comes:
“ love is sad tale which always end with death…It doesn’t matters if it ends sooner or later”
Thank you for reading…sorry, if u didn’t liked it…..I’m also thinking of writing an OS on Ishkara….I hope u all will also like that.

39 comments

  1. Dowlath

    Luns you r impossible what a person you are u made us cry more ya words above shivika conversation r superab it can’t exclaimed by a word too emotional nice ya keep on doing. …….!

  2. Nansshivika

    Nansshivika

    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 that’s what I am doing reading this.its so painful.I love it a lot.u nailed it.its really painful…..awesome

  3. Haripriya

    It’s really heart touching yar. I cried whole the epic it’s really nice,♡ i remember of the film sanam Teri kasam by your os it’s awesome dr

  4. Bhavana

    You said it was a romantic one but it turned out to be an emotional one……..😢😢😢😢😢😢 but phir bhi i loved it….. It was awesome……

  5. Puvi

    Puvi

    |Registered Member

    luna its so hurt touching dear u made me cry u nailed dear its so painful to be far from our loved ones it feels like dying every movement without love is that word which brings happiness in our world together with pain and hurt i loved this ff so much the pain 2 lovers potraited in awesome way

  6. Akansha

    Akansha

    |Registered Member

    Bought tears to my eyes.. It was diff n nyc… Yea, but I have to agree dat I was a little greedy thinking anika all live fr shivaay but d msg u wanted to convey thru anika voiceover was nyc…. Loved it

  7. priya

    Your ff is killing me with pain.
    There is no words for me to say about this ff.
    Hats off to u.
    U just nailed it…

  8. Shivika

    I never ever want to read your os. Sorry it’s really hurting to the core. Don’t write these type of stories.

    • Luna

      Luna

      |Author

      I’m sorry for hurting u….I’ve written light hearted stories too….my another f2f on Ishqbaaz is mix of light heartedness and intensity….my Ishkara ff will also be quite light hearted if u wanna read.

  9. Luna'sFan

    Hey Luna!.. You know i read read the 17th episode of your “8 years later” series nd was amazedd damnn your suchan amazing writer… I went back to episode 1 and read all the way till the 17th episode… your writing just touches the heart! Im seriously dying to know what happens in that series could you pleaaase give the update faster? I have been desperately waiting for the 18th episode pleaaaase dont make me wait longer its killing me!!! Love yaaaaaa :**** p.s. dont you dare stop writing this talent shouldn’t be kept hidden and wasted :*

    Waitinggggg for Episode 18!!
    :* -Fan of an amazing writer

    • Luna

      Luna

      |Author

      OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u made the ID using my name???? it’s such a huge compliment…thanks a lot dear……plz keep supporting me like this dear…..It really means a lot to me….and no, I’ll not stop writing until and unless I stop getting support from amazing people like u all….thanks a lot dear…I’ve just now submitted the next episode of my ff…..it’ll be posted after few hours.

  10. Mrunal

    Mrunal

    |Registered Member

    why it has sad ending…..😞😞😞
    i don’t like sad ending…

    but ur writing was awesome…
    definitely i didn’t liked this sad story…
    but as a writer u rocked it dear…
    every emotion of shivika reached perfectly to my heart…
    it’s so painful to see them like this…
    i really cried while reading and this is proof of this thing that as a writer u did a fantastic job in conveying their state, their emotions, their love…..😇😇

    i am sorry if u don’t like my comment…
    but whatever i feel i say it.. I don’t have that habit…

  11. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Luna…….what should i say now.,…..my dear ishqie…….what an amazing work….hats off……..literally am crying……because……..am also in pain …….right now……and its so emotional and it touched my heart…….seriously am not able to continue my words as this one is reminding me certain ups and downs of my real love,,,,,,,,Am unable to type……because……am just crying only………..

    • Renimarenju

      Renimarenju

      |Registered Member

      By the way i will read ur ff later….because right now am bit busy……and still am crying…..luna…..don’t know when i will be able to stop my tears……

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.