Broken hearts…(episode 6)

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Episode starts..

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At maheshwari mansion…

Ragini comes to AP and DP’s room and hears there talking

AP is caring laksh’s photo..
AP;; laksh….where are you…plzz come back….why did you leave your maa….

DP{hurtly};; He has gone away because of me…

AP{cryingly};; nahi ji…

DP;; yes….he has gone away bcoz of me…..When he was near me i just scolded me and showed him down infront of all..i just never try to understand him…i never understood his pain when my words hurted him….every morning i scolded him when i see him dancing. I told him he will never reach anywhere with his dance. But now…. my morning is wrost…i miss his naughtiness and his dance…i have always forced him to do office works without understanding his passion towards dance….in office also he has done his work doing dance steps……i am the wrost father….will any father call his son unlucky? will any father compare his sons?,,,{tears were continously rolling AP’a and DP’s cheeks…}…..why didn’t i understand my son’s pain..the sadness of everyone in this house was bcoz of me.i only give my son pain….and that’s why he left us…

AP cringly consoles him by hugging him tight…

Tears were continously rolling through Ragini’s cheek who was witnessing thiss…….

Sanskar who was coming that way sees ragini like that and goes to her and then looks at ap and dp……he undesrtood the situation and feels hurt….but fakes a smile and wipes ragini’ss tears….

Ragini who sees sanskar hugs him tighly controlling her emotions….

sanskar;;we want to cheer up the family..

ragini breaks the hug and smilingly nods….sanskar smiles…

They both knocks at the door and looks down…

AP and DP by seeing them…wipes there tears and fakes to be normal..

Ap;; sanskar…ragini….come in….

Sanskar;;; we are sorry….i don’t know romance scene was going on…

AP and DP looks shockingly each other whereas
ragini and sanskar naughtly smiles….

Sanskar notices Laksh’s photo in AP’s hand . He cups AP’s face and says “maa…our lucky will surely come back..one day god will bring lucky infront of our eyes..”

Raginin;; And papa…never blame yourself …everything has happened for something good. And laksh will come infront ofour eyes soon….god won’t make a lucky son away from his sweet father and mother…”

Ap and DP lightly smiless…they were somewhat convinced by ragsan words..
The strong believe of ragsan that laksh and swara will surely come back was making them more convinced…

AP , DP and ragsan share a huge hug…

Ragini;; now you both come down and have lunch..

Ap and Dp nods….ragsan leaves…

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At london…

Laksh, adarsh, james, jack, adam, sahil aare practising…whereas swara is watching there practise.

Laksh notices swara slighlty moving her hands and legs according to the beat of the song.. Laksh smiles and continues with his practise….

After some time..Laksh is at the place to submit there registrationform for the dance competition..

The staff gives back the form to laksh…

staff;; sorry sir….you have not written the girls name of your group as one girl should be compulsory in all groups which take part…

Laksh;; what? a girl?

staff;;; sir….now its 12;45 and the submission will close at 1:00….and today is last day…

laksh;; what?…mmm…..ok…

Laksh{to himself};; what to do…

suddenly some ides click in his mind and he fills the form and submitted it…

after submitting…..

Laksh;; oh….man….what have you done …..ohh…..no….surely now you are gone…

laksh reaches back the academy…..

swara and all others came running…

swara{happily};; you have submitted the form naa….

laksh nods…

adarsh;; but why are you looking worried…

laksh;; vo…

swara;; tell laksh…

laksh;; voo…that there is a rule that a girl should be compulsory in every group which participate in the competion

swara;; ohh.no…

all sits down sadly…but swara suddenly jumps and says…
“now…you said you submitted the form that means….you have given a girl’s name….who mis the girl yaar?how did you got the girl…

laksh;; vo..

james;; ya…who is the girl?

laksh;; vo…the girl is…is..

jack;; tall man…why are you soo worried…

laksh;; voo…i have given swara’s name…

swara;; oohhh….

suddenly shouts “what….” understanding what he said..

swara {unbelievely} ;; does i have any problem to my ears….laksh tell me who did you say now? whose name yu gave?

laksh;; you heared it right swara…..i gave your name…

swara sits on the floor shockingly…

laksh sits and holds her shoulder…

laksh;; swara listen …you really had the potential yaar…..

swara looks at laksh shockingly….then angrily….and then starts beating him ….

swara;; what have you done yaar….are you in sense…you know i don’t no anything…even abcd of the dance…….. then also you…

laksh holds her hands from stop beating…and twist it backwards…

laksh;; swara…calm down…just listen….you have the potential…just try…swara….you will be able to do it….plzz…swara just try…you can…

adam;; yes swara…i to think you can do it…

jack;; ya laksh is saying right…you can swara…you can…

all starts supporting laksh…

swara who is getting confused shouts…”stop…..”
she looks angrily at every one…

swara;; are you guyz out of your mind…how can i…

laksh;; why are thinking negatively…just be postive….plzz..swara…for me plz try it once..

swara {in mind];; if i didn’t try it will be big lose for laksh…this is a big chance for him…i cannot destroy this…..laksh has lost a lot…but i don’t laksh to lose is passion to…yes i should try…may be laksh is right..i will be able to…

laksh shakes swara…..swara comes out of her thought…

laksh;; swara…tell will you..

swara nods “i will try…’

laksh gets happy and hugs him…

all others too gets happy…and they all share a huge hug…

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At maheshwari mansion…
ragsan room….

ragini is holding swaragini’s pic…Tears were rolling down there eyes…

ragini;; “swara….i am really sorry…..i was also one of the reason for what all happen to you…i am really sorry…no one loved me like you do swara…aahh….i know now that love has changed to hatred….hatred of taking away your love…making you away from family,…but i did all this for you…i never wanted to hurt you swara…you always had fighted for me from childhood….if i cry you have scolded the person who has the reason for it…even it is maa, papa or dida…..you always taken the punshiment yourself eventhough it was mine…plzz swara…plzz forgive me….i don’t deserve a sister like you…actually you were more than sister…i am sorry swara…i am really sorry…i miss you swara..”

B saying she hugs the photo tightly…

on the other side sanskar is driving to his office…
He sees two little boys fighting for the ball in the roadside…. suddenly the ball went of there hands and falls in the middle of the road…one of them rubs to take the ball…sanskar shockingly stops his car and gets of he car seeing a truck coming near the boy…before sanskar can save the boy…the other boy who was fighting pulls him..and saves him…Both of them hugs each other cryingly in the fear of losing each other…

sanskar adores there connection, love ,care….he smiles at them and recalls his past moments with laksh…
When they both used to fight…and then also if one gets hurt the other starts to cry…when they both hold there hands assuring each other to be there for each other when any difficult situation comes…when laksh used to encourage him …when laksh used to take all the blames on him eventhough it was him…how laksh teased him when he was dreaming about swara….how laksh used to throw water on him to make him wake up…….

tears were unknowingly rolling down his cheeks…

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at london….dancing academy…

it’s been lot of time swara is trying to dance…but always stumbles or slipped

swara;; no….i am not able too…i can’t do it..

laksh hearings goes near swara

laksh;; swara…listen…never lose hope…you can do it..

By saying he holds her hands…

laksh;; just close your eyes…and try..

the music starts playing…

laksh makes swara dance….they dipped each other within the beats…he twriled her around…he slowly removes his hands from her and starts moving away…swara who was dancing closing her eyes thinking laksh is with her dances without any mistake….beautifully..all others smiles ……adam starts making video of her dance…suddenly the song ends…swara stops her dancing and starts breathing heavyily…she is still closing her eyes….she happily opens her eyes and turns to side to see laksh….but she sees him missing….but suddenly she turns in the direction laksh sitting in the chair and smiling at her…she confusingly looks at everyone who was smilingly staring at her….adam comes towards her and shows her the video..she shockingly looks at it…and then towards laksh who was naughtily smilingy at her…

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Precap;; ragsan been send to honeymoon by family to london… swalak dance competition audition….

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Thankzz for reading 🙂
sry for the mistakes.. 🙁

17 comments

  1. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Brilliant Chapter Di…Superb…Amazing…Just loved it..😊😊😊..

    Sorry for late comment😥😥😥😥
    I Know you must be waiting for my comment..😉😉😉.
    BTW Thank you so much for posting it..You don’t know how much I missed it..
    Keep Writing like this Di..
    Keep Smiling..
    Love u loads😘😘😘😘😘

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