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Fan Fiction Swaragini

Broken hearts…

administratorBy administratorAugust 3, 2016Updated:August 3, 201623 Comments5 Mins Read
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This is a story of two broken hearts….
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In 2014 february 13

…In a big mansion…in a beautiful room…a girl is lying in floor crying…
girl shouts ….
why did he do this….?how can he leave me…?what mistake have i done…?why god….why did he leave me…? how can he marry any other girl..?was my love that much weak…?and…ragini..how can you snatch sanskar from.?.how can you?….i hate you both….yes me swara gadodia hates you both…

on other side…
In a another big mansion..
in a beautiful madap…..a boy and a girl is getting married….in back we can see a board in which it’s written…”SANSKAR WEDS RAGINI”….(yes…the boy is none other sanskar and the girl is ragini)…sanskar put sinddor in ragini’s forehead….and makes her wear magalsutr …they take seven vows…at last the pandit declares….they both are married…

On the same mansion….in a room…
a boy is shown crying hardly….
he shouts…
why…why did this happen to me ?…why ragini? how can you do this to me..?..how can you cheat me..?…why bhai….how did you snatch my love…?…and how can you cheat swara ..bhai…?..i loved ragini and you more than anyone in this world…?but now i hate you both…more than anyone in this world….yes…me laksh maheshwari hates you both

on the marriage area…sanskar and ragini takes blessings from the elders…and gadodia family leaves…
dp;; where did laksh go?….
uttara;; he may be in his room…i will go and call….

aftersometime…
uttara shouts;; maa…papa…bhai…
everyone hearing that runs to the room…all see uttara crying…
uttara forwards a letter to Ap cryingly…he opens and reads…

*
“DEAR MAA,,….
i know you will be heartbroken reading this….but…i want to go away….i am sorry maa….i know you love me…but never showed it..and i also know that …the love you showed was nothing when compared to the love you give to sanskar..why maa..why…you always scolded me…but not sanskar…from childhood i bear the statement “look and study from sanskar”…then also i loved sanskar….And papa…he always said naa…”sanskar is lucky to him and everyone”…yes maa..papa is right.. sanskar is lucky…eventhough my name was lucky…i was not at all lucky….i was unlucky for everyone….i cried a lot daily for love…when a person came to me with the love…i think that i am not unlucky…i am lucky…but it all destroyed today…
Today..i came to know that nothing is true in this world….as the one who loved had cheated me today….
Don’t worry….i won’t go away from this world…but from you all..and plzz…if you had loved me a little then don’t search me…and i know it’s hard to hear this…but i don’t have anyother option..”plzz..don’t ever come infront of me…if you see me by any concidencethen…plz ignore me and go..plzzz”
If you love me or not….i love you maa and papa…
And my cutie..”uttara”…i love you a lot…i know that you also loved sanskar more…

FROM YOUR…
LAKSH {UNLUCKY}
*

After reading the letter….everyone breaks down…
Ragini and Sanskar who were standng near the door seeing this looks sadly…tears were flowing from there eyes….ragini runs from there cringly….sanskar seeing that follows her…

On the otherside
gadodia family breaks down by reading another letter…

*
“DEAR..maa..papa…dida…
I love you all a lot…..but i am really really sorry to say that i am going away from you all…and will not come back…i really can’t say the reason why i am leaving you all….i am really sorry for that……..it’s just because..i can’t leave my life here…as it can make me more and more weak due to some reasons…..i will be able to live rest of my life with your memories…
Dida…i am sorry….when you got a small fever when i was small..i made you promise me that you will never me….but today..i itself is going away…i am really sorry dida…in the rest of your life..i won’t be there to scold you for making you eat medcinies…but for my sake…plz..don’t skip the medicines…plzz…
Maa…Thank you soo much for giving me a life…i am really really lucky to get a mother like you…and i will miss your scolding…and maa don’t worry..in your rest of life you don’t need to complaint to god…as i irritate you all the time….because i won’t be there maa….
Papa… love you a lot..thank you soo much papa….your my cute prince..and papa…plzz don’t tease my maa always ok….and papa i don’t know how will i live my future life…but i want to leave papa..

FROM YOUR
SHONA..
*

at airport…
it’s shown swara entering in an aeroplane…
she gets settled at her seat…and sits staring outside…with the eyes which is fully filled of pains..
after somtime…a boy comes and sits near her…
The plane flys up…
the boy looks at swara and was shocked….he mutters”swara..”
swara by hearing her name shockingly turns and was shocked..swara painfully mutters “laksh..”
By seeing laksh swra’s eyes got filled with tears ….while laksh looks at her sadly…

Screen freezes..

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precaps;;
the two broken hearts steps at london…while the whole world was enjoying “valentians day”

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Thankz for reading 🙂 …and really sorry if any mistake…
plzz say…if i should continue or not..
and this will be of few shots..

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23 Comments

  1. shiksha on August 3, 2016 6:40 am

    It’s a amazing plot.
    Please continue it,soon.

  2. G.chandu on August 3, 2016 7:24 am

    awesome…!! waiting for next part..!!

  3. Akshaya on August 3, 2016 7:59 am

    Swalak and Ragsan? ?????

  4. Shagun on August 3, 2016 8:28 am

    Is it swalak
    Its awesome

  5. j on August 3, 2016 8:54 am

    superb

  6. drishya on August 3, 2016 9:44 am

    Please make it swasan and raglak plz

  7. esha on August 3, 2016 9:52 am

    Amazing …waiting for next part!!

  8. pbutt894 on August 3, 2016 10:47 am

    Awwome amazing

  9. Akshata on August 3, 2016 12:18 pm

    interesting concept, but is it swalak and ragsan?

  10. Arunika on August 3, 2016 12:35 pm

    Awesome!!!
    Is it Swalak & Ragsan?

  11. Abdul hafiz (Uma) on August 3, 2016 12:55 pm

    Amazing dear. Keep going.

  12. aditiya on August 3, 2016 1:45 pm

    amazing

  13. Vaikha on August 3, 2016 2:58 pm

    Awesome… Pls update next part soon dear..

  14. Paru on August 3, 2016 3:11 pm

    Am a swasan Raglak fan…still loved this one….that letter from Laksh really heart touching….. Interesting keep going…

  15. Prakriti19 on August 3, 2016 4:01 pm

    Amazing Di…I am surely going to read it…Nice concept..

  16. silent_writer on August 3, 2016 4:26 pm

    Awsme

  17. khusubu on August 3, 2016 8:45 pm

    wow very Nice continue with swalak

  18. hemalattha on August 3, 2016 9:30 pm

    awesome

  19. shona on August 3, 2016 9:50 pm

    omg!!!…really amazing

  20. jaan on August 3, 2016 9:51 pm

    wonderful do continue…
    amazing plot…
    loved it….

  21. pooja on August 3, 2016 11:49 pm

    plz update next soon…this was lovely

  22. lisa on August 4, 2016 12:57 am

    i love rags

  23. Aanya on August 4, 2016 6:59 pm

    Plz make its swasan n raglak

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