Broken heart:But still it beats for you my ladoo (raglak) epi-7


A big sry guys. I know I know I promised you people to update soon but couldn’t make it. Plz forgive me guys. Here after I will try to give an update on every other day.

Note: in last epi I mistakenly noted raglak baby name as rajesh. Its ragsh guys sry for d typos.

In landon
Laksh is shown sleeping. Suddenly his faces shows restlessness nd he was perfusely sweating.
He got up with a jerk nd shouted
(laksh) ladooo( mean while in India ragini who were busy with her ward rounds got something weired. She felt uneasy her breath got depended. She felt her laksh around her nd her vision blurred

Kaka who were in kitchen rushed to laksh room to find a scared laksh. He was breathing
heavily.Kaka patted his back nd made him
drink water.

(kaka) once again bad dreams. Why r u pushing upset baba. U love her most. U r dying with out her every second. Go nd get ur answers. Go nd get ur ladoo baba.

(laksh) kaka. I don’t have d courage to meet her eyes. I know I left her while she needs me most. I saw her eyes which had pain for while everyone were accused me. I ran away from my life. I ran way frm my responsibilities kaka. Let her live happily.

(kak) do u think she can live happily with out u. I never met her. O know her by ur words. My hearts says that she is waiting for u. Why r u punishing her baba. My experience says that she can never betray u. There is strong reason behind her silence. Go and get ur answer. Go nd get ur life.

Laksh gave a painful smile to him nd walked towards the washroom to get freshen up.

When ragini’s eyes opened she found herself in bed. She got out d bed
(nurse) u r still weak mam. U r a br*ast feeding mother. If u r not healthy it will affect ur child mam.
Ragini gave a weak smile to sister ruth who attended her during her pregnancy . Who never let her feel her ma as much as her sujata ma did.
Ragini instructed sister ruth to send patients to her cabin.

After a while ragini was busy in check up. A pt cm to her she asked his name with out looking up

(pt) shekhar gagodia.
The name made world froze for her. She looked up d man In front of her. It was her first face of with him after d terrible memories. Ragini behaved normally as much as possible to her. With a stern face she examined him nd wrote sm medicines.

(ragini) I wrote sm medicines. Plz take it on tym. If anything more u feel let me know

(shekhar) princess won’t u ask ur dada hw is he?
(ragini) plz plz don’t bring my personal matters here
(shekhar) plz forgive ur dada na princess . He is longing for his princess smile
He said with folded hands
(ragini) u lost d rut to call me princess when u betrayed me on that nyt. When u supported her on her lie when I found that my dada showed difference between his duaghters

Ragini sobbed hard
( ragini) u r longing for my smile. U know frm past 3 yrs am longing a glimpse of my love my Laksh. I will forgive you go nd bring my happiness my Laksh. Can u given back 3 yrs I spend with out him. Can u erase d dreadful nyt frm my life. No na then leave me leave me alone. Let me live my life.

She fell on her knees nd cried her heart iut
( ragini) plz don’t show any pity one. I deserve this for betraying my love. I kept silence for d man who never loved me. I betrayed d man who love me most.
Tears were falling dwn frm both of their eyes. Shekhar silently went on leaving a miserably crying ragini back.

Laksh was out for a meeting with a client in d hotel. His meeting went well. He was really disturbed frm Kaka’ words. “GO AND GET UR ANSWERS NA GO AND GET GER” thesecwirds r echoing his ears frm mng. After meeting he headed towards lift to go back his work. He was busy in his phn. As soon as d lift opened he saw a couple who were kissing passionately. Sudden jerk of d lift brought them back reality. They were embarrassed nd ran out. Laksh nodded in disbelief.
But the sight infact of him brought a beautiful memory of him with his ladoooo
Raglak were in there gav with parents to celebrate summer vacation

Ragini is wearing beautiful leghenga saari of red nd cream combination nd was in garden.
Suddenly her eyes fell on d mango on d tree. She plucked her pallu on waist nd started to jump to place mango. But all went in win. The garden were open village boys who were passing by d garden stopped there to watch ragini. Ragini who is un aware of there present continued jump to pick mangoes.
Suddenly someone pulled her. She landed on strong sweaty chest. Laksh gave a strong look d boys who rand off

(laksh) what r u doing
( ragini) watch leave me laksh it paining
( laksh) first give my answer
( ragini) mein tho aap thod rahede
(laksh) aise
She showed her visible waist which is exposed due to her jumping
(laksh) do u hw d cheek boy looking at u
( ragini) if they r starring me its their problem. Not mine
She said escaping from laksh. But he suddenly pulled her behind d tree nd pinned her against tree
Laksh eyes were red hot nd leaned towards her lips nd kissed her hardly. Ragini’s eyes were wide open in shock. She was trying to push him. He got of his hand kissed her until his anger cooled dwn.
(laksh) u r mine. Only I have d right to stair u
(ragini) yeh kya bathameezi hai laksh
(laksh) it same as when ever night u gave me gud nyt kiss without my knowledge
He back hugged her nd kissed her shoulder

(laksh) ur mine as much am yours.
He took a turn nd placed his head his forehead while his ladooo hugged him tight

********, flashback ends
Laksh was smiling insane abt their fist kiss, hw he claimed her his as apo side lover kavya ‘s voice brought him back to reality

(kavya) thinking about her
Laksh nodded in yes as he can not lie to his besti.
(kavya) I met her while am on india tour with nikhil
Laksh eyes showed sm hopes.

(kavya) she is no more d ragoo who were chirpy, bubbly. She went so calm. She lost her charm laksh. She went pale. She is a lifeless body with out soul

(voice) go nd get her man. Go nd fill her soul. She becm pain jain plz bring back our ragoooo
Nikhil who just ended with karni 1 yr old boy said with a pain fud voice.

A tear escaped laksh eyes nd he seemed to be determined

Screen freeze on laksh face.

Sry for typos
Fingers crossed
Hope u people will like it. Plz throw ur valuable cmmnt on cmmnt box

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  1. Sindhura

    So nice i missed you

  2. Asw

    A long wait raglak are rocking yaar keep going

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Sry for d long gap

  3. Nice,waiting for next part

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr. I will update asps

  4. Yesterday I thought about your ff…
    Today I posted it

  5. Yesterday I thought about your ff.
    Today you posted it

  6. Yesterday I thought about your ff
    Today you posted it
    It’s unbelievable
    I’m happy to see you back

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Sry dr for d late update here after o will try to be regular dr

  7. Yesterday I thought about your ff
    Today you posted it
    It’s a sweet shock to me

  8. Dharani


    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you dharam. Post ur ff soon

  9. Jazzy

    Amazing and I missed this story a lot
    Next part update soon

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Sry for d late update. I will update asps

  10. Awesome

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thanks for commenting dr

  11. Superb dear.missed this ff so much

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you ammy sry for d late update. Will be back soon

  12. Ragz_teju

    waiting since long…. amazing chappy… hope Laksh comes to her ladoo soon…. raglak flahback is so cute… loved it

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you dr. More to unfold abt their past. Glad that u enjoyed d epi

  13. Superb nd plz update next part soon

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I will be back with an update asps

  14. Finally u posted and as usual awesome episode. I miss u a lot

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Sry for being late. Thanks u dr. Will update soon

  15. Asra

    awesome dear….loved flashback….plz update soon…tkcr dear….

    1. Fouzarshi16

      More to unfold abt their past. I will update asps

  16. Akshata

    its so emotional but i like it. finally laksh ko akal to aai…… poor ragini, suffering so much, actually poor laksh also.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I think u ra big tej fans. Hona bhi chahiye our doll look cool. Don’t worry he will be back to get his lyf his ladoooo

  17. My raglak scenes r so cute di.Superb epi

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you kiddos.

  18. Hemalattha

    awesome.there are so emotional scenes of laksh and a father’s and a daughter’s pain.please unite raglak.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you hema. I can’t promise abt raglak union

  19. Fairy

    Dear doc.. I misssssed u so so soooo much yaaaar.. 🙁 .. bt m sooo happpy to seee u back!!!!!update ws soooooooooooooooooooo amaznggggg!!!loved it soooo much ….m feeelng reallly sad for raglak…plz unite dem sooon ddrrr!!!u r reallly a fab. Writer sweeety …u always made d readers to get involved in ur storiesss…hatts off to u…raglak scene ws superbb!!dis shows dat dey love eo immensivelyy!!!keep rockng n stay blesssed dear 😉 😉 love u lotzzzz 🙂 😉 🙂

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Hold my dr doll. First tell me hw ru? Hope u r fine dr. Am glad to this long cmmnt dr. I will not say thank u. Abt raglak union it will take time. But they will meet with in 2 to 3 epi. Hold on my dr doll time to unfold their flashback. Love u lootsss????????

  20. Awesome

  21. _Angel_

    Thai was awesome I lived it as I actually really missed this ff and u ??where were u??anyways happy to see u back

    Can’t wait till the next part

    Till then
    take care
    Keep smiling ?

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thanks u angel dr. Am Dam happy that u liked it. Keep supporting . I was down with sm health problems. Nw am perfectly fine will be back soon with another update

  22. Feeling bad 4 raglak nd unite them asap

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Hold on dr. It will take sm tym. First I have to unfold their flashback fully

  23. It’s so emotional but awesome….. plz update next part soon…..

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you bia I will update asps

  24. nice next part soon be regular plzz

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Yup dr I will update asps

  25. Fats

    Aww it’s great to see you back with a wonderful update. I love the cosmic connection between RagLak. Despite being far away from each other, Ragini could still feel Laksh’s calls for her, how cute ❤️. And wow, I like Laksh’s determined nature. It will be interesting to see RagLak’s reunion and Laksh meeting his baby. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

    1. Fouzarshi16

      It will take to unite them. Up coming updates will unfold more abt raglak past. Hope u people will enjoy it

  26. A.xx

    nice loved the flashback and update soon.xx

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I will update asps

  27. Good one

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you tani

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