Broken heart: But still it beats for you my ladoo (prologue)


Hey guyss am( Fouzarshi16) back with my new ff. Hope u people will shower d same love nd support on this ff too. And thanks for making my previous ff “raglak that nyt changed my life” a successful one. Thanks for d warm response on my both OS “mr. Arrogant and his personal sl*t and a medical love story

Let’s start our story

A boy is shown running on treadmill. He is on his boxers nd head phone plugged in. His beautiful brown eyes r shown then his lips which a sad smile. Then camera rolls on his sweat wet bare chest nd his hot abs is shown. He was running countinuesly but his brown eyes were sticked in photo just infront of his eyes. Its was a photo of a chubby girl with
beautiful round eyes nd pink soft lips. He was just looking to her eyes.

(Boy’s monologue) why ladoo. Why u stepped back when I need u badly.our love is that much weak that u could not trust me. U broke my heart but still I don’t know why still it beats for u dr.
He stopped d treadmill nd took of his headphones nd walked towards d photo. He stood just infront of it. Caressed it nd kissed on her forehead

(the boy) I saw pain in ur eyes when everyone accused me. Then why u kept mum. U could have stood with me ladoo. If u had done it, atleast I could have u by my side. I left all alone this world. But still I love u laddoo. Ur my childhood love. As days passes am falling more in love with u dr.
His trance broke by his servant shyam, he use to call him kaka. D one nd only person who is for him in this world.

( shyam) laksh beta. Here is ur ginger to tea.
The boy revealed to laksh maheswari
He takes blessings from his kaka.

( shyam) if u love her this much. Go and get her back beta.
(laksh) she doesn’t trust me kaka. Her memories r enough for me to live my entire life.

(shyam) I just know abt her as per u words. But my mind says u r missing smthng, I think she had her reason for it. She loves u from her young age. There something which is not visible go nd find her my heart says she is waiting for u beta.

Laksh gave a painful look. Took his towel nd cleaned his face. He took a sip of a ginger tea nd smiled

(laksh) ladoo I hate ginger tea. But u made me have it. Still remembers our nok jokh on ginger tea.

A small girl shown drinking ginger tea. A boy cm nd snatched cup from my hand nd took a sip.

( the boy) yuk ginger tea.
( the girl) lucky give back my cup. If u don’t like it then why did u snatch my cup everyday nd drink it from me.
( the boy) for teasing u

(laksh) ladoo its just an excuse to share ginger tea with u. I loved to drink d ginger tea from ur cup.
He said smiling

In India.
A girl is shown with doctor ‘s coat nd steth . She was tired after her ward rounds. Nw she was back to her cabin nd thrown herself in d chair. She closed her eyes for smtym. Then she took a photo on his table. The photo revealed to be laksh.

(the girl) where r u laksh. I know I broke ur trust. But laksh I was forced to keep mum laksh. I had a reason.I should have been stand with you. I was already shattered in that tym lucky. Laksh plz cm back. Ur laddoo is still waiting for u. Plz laksh cm back to me for once. Then u want to leave me then u can. But let me give a chance explain my part laksh plz laksh.

Suddenly a nurse came to her.
(mam) Dr. Sanskar maheswari is here to meet u
Girl look forward nd she revealed to be ragini. D name plate on her table showed her name
“Dr. Ragini laksh maheswari.

Screen freezes on ragini nd laksh face

Whether raglak is a married couple?
What happened in their past?
Why laksh is away from his laddoo?
Why Sanskar is here to meet ragini?
Why ragini did not stood with laksh?

Hey guyss plz give ur suggestions. Shall I continue or not

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  1. Shana98

    Can’t wait to read more you this ff awesome b xx

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank u my dr

  2. Wowwww super interestng ff dear…omg u again nailed it!! Thanku so much for starting a raglak ff πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ …m very eager to know about wt had happened btween raglak?? Loved it ..n keep on rockng my dear doctor πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Wait my dr soon it will be revealed my Dr. Doll?????

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you lovely

  3. superb interesting

  4. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
    Welcome back dear
    Loved the epi
    U just rocked it
    Waiting for the next one……………

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Will upload soon

      1. SPP

        Will be waiting

  5. nice waiting for next part soon

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you nikky

  6. omg.arshi u ended ur previous ff…..did i miss the last episode……can u give me the link?????

    1. wonderful story with many questions/suspense………………good start……….plz continue… the updates whenever u have time……..

    2. Fouzarshi16

      Yup dr. It ended before one week. I can’t give u link becoz am using my mob to upload it my ff. U can Search on google like this raglak that nyt changed my life epi 37 last episode

      1. Fouzarshi16

        Anonymously i wrote two os
        Plz read it too
        Mr.arrogant nd his personal sl*t
        A medical love story

      2. Hey I read the first one….I liked it very much…how laksh found he was first man for ragini……and A medical story…..I didn’t read it…but I will read it for sure

  7. Sindhura

    Nice dear

  8. Nice.sounds interesting.eagerly waiting for next part

  9. Wow awesome… U r superb writer like Always

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Savi dr thank u so much

  10. Ragz_teju

    Awesome plzz continue

  11. It’s interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz update ASAP

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I am working on it . I will update it soon

  12. Nami

    Glad u r back with another raglak ff. The story seems interesting. Looking forward for the next update.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr. I am feeling little bit low. I will try to update soon

  13. Concept is very interesting. Please continue

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you gayu

  14. Teja

    Awesome yr plzzz continue

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you teja

  15. Superb intro.. excited.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you nitu


    arshi this one is awsome… post next one asap… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ n yeah my nephew is in my DP.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚


      OMG..!!! not this one my previous DP..

      1. this DP only yaar..

    2. Fouzarshi16

      Yup my dr.working on it soon Will upload it

  17. Anees

    Hey fouzi u r back.. Cnt wait to read ur ff…

  18. hi i am happy you are bk with ragluk ff again πŸ™‚

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr

  19. Sreevijayan

    Nice update dear…

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you sree

  20. Megha123

    It’s damn interesting can’t really with for it to start

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Soon u will get it dr. Plz wait for smtym,am not feeling well nw so I will update it by tomorrow or day after tomorrow

  21. Fats

    Wow, great start. All the twists in RagLak’s relationship sounds really interesting. Can’t wait to read more ?

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr thanks dr

  22. Akshata

    its quite interesting with so many hidden secrets. update soon

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr

  23. superb and waiting 4 nxt

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you athulya

  24. Aasthu

    do update sooooon……….I’m sitting with my fingers crossed 4 the nxt 1………I loved all the prev updates of urs……..but my fav is “my doc love”…….going to read it again……….

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr. I will update asps

  25. Aasthu

    sry I meant: medical lo……….

  26. Mindblowing πŸ™‚ waiting for next epi

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you emz

  27. interesting

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you lisa

  28. Loved introduction and it’s interesting

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you malu

  29. Rafeee


    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr

  30. Loveleen

    sry fr late m glad u r back wid another raglak track….i loved ur previous ff alot……n dis one is also having great strt wid suspense

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Don’t to be sry dr. U cmmnt its enough for me

  31. Interesting dear

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