Swasan TS: My bride in a veil – Prologue and Character Sketch

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Hii, well neither I am silent reader nor new to telly . I just became bore by mine previous I’d??? .]

So new story with new id . Those who come to know who am I?can try their luck.
Now stopping my boring talks.
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Guys, it’ll be love triangle between swara, sanskar and ragini.
Let come to story.
Prologue

Boy’s pov
Welcome in my marriage, today supposed to be most happiest day of mine life but here it turned most sarcastic day. I standing between two girls, both are standing in Lehnaga and long veil. Let me introduce my both would be wives. One is Ragini gadodia with whom my marriage fixed and all pre marriage rituals happened. And other is Swara shekhwat with whom I took three phere.
Now I am in utter confusion what to do neither I marry both girls nor I leave them like. If I’ll do then not only them but also their parents have to suffer.

I looked towards theirs parents who already giving me pleading look then I saw towards mine parents they told me whatever mine decision they’ll be happy. How can I supposed to take such discussion alone. I gave plead look to mine brother laksh who suggest me choose that girl whom I love and wanna spent whole life but little he knew I don’t love anyone of them. About spending life it not matter because I just doing this marriage for my grandmother as she wanna see her granddaughter in law.

I thought to ask girls only, I turned towards them and asked who wanna marry me.
One of them come forward, she removed her veil and held mine hand and told she wanna marry me. I looked toward other bride who’s just looking down. I went near her and asked she doesn’t wanna marry then why she’s here.

Before she could speak her parents come near me and told she’s little shy.
I again looked towards her who’s still looking down, another girl come near me and told he should marry her as she’s more suitable and match his status.
I just looked at her and held other girl hand who was still Veil. Other girl looked at me and tried to speak.
I: I took my decision I’ll marry her.

That girl first time tried to looked at me but not able to as her Veil was really long.
Before I could say further other girl parents fall in mine feet and started to pleading me. I looked towards Veil’s girl parents who was just standing with joining their both hands. I bowed and make other girl parent stand.

I: Uncle aunty I understand but I can’t marry your daughter but I promise till she not marry she’ll be mine responsibility.
That girl came towards me and join hands. I again saw towards Veil girl who’s just standing like statue. I just moved towards mandap and told priest to start mantra.
After sometime that Pandit finally declare me and my veil bride as couple.
Other girl parent started to curse their daughter and told that they’re disowning her. She fall down listening it and cried miserably.
My bride went near her and tried to console her but she jerked her hand and told don’t try to act.

That girl fell down and became unconscious, my bride looked at me and signal to help her. I looked towards that girl parent who just went from there. I unwillingly lift her and moved from there. My bride also follow me.
In these things I forgot to tell you most important thing who I am well I am sanskar Maheswari.

Character sketch

Sanskar Maheswari; 25 years old,Well known business man , try to show himself as rude and arrogant. But just opposite to it who loves his family very much.
Laksh Maheswari: 22 years old, naughty, prank master but yet caring.
Ragini gadodia: 24 years old, ( more things come about her as story will proceed)
Swara shekhwat: 22 years old (more thing come about her as story will proceed)
Ram and sujata Maheswari; love their both children. Support their every decision.
Anjali Maheswari: Sanlak grandma , kind hearted lady.

Shekhar and janki gadodia: loves their daughter but at same time strict also.
Raghav and shomi shekhwat; love their daughter but never show it. Just want good future.

future for her.

So start guessing why two brides were there and whom sanskar married.
Don’t need to vote or suggest main pair as I already decided it. Well sorry if you felt i am rude but I don’t believe in voting for pairs. It should be writer wish they have liberty to write whom they like.
Most important thing cmnt will decide future of this story.
Sorry for typos and grammatical errors.

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39 Comments
  1. Follybraverl

    Awesome all the best dear well title is crispy

  2. Lovely7

    Ragsan please

  3. nyc continue

  4. Swasan plz….

  5. lovely
    i would be happy if it is ragsan but ok with any pair because the plot is awesome and i have no words to describe

  6. nice…all the best n would love to read if swasan☺

    1. Good… Yo itself decided pair…

  7. I know u decided pair but i vl be happy if it vl be swasan as now a days everyone is posting ragsan ff

  8. SammieR

    Swasan

  9. Seebu_s

    nice dear…if it is swasan i’m in?orelse all the best?

  10. nice..swasan..

  11. KK..As you have already said not to vote 4 pairs as uh have already decided…. So will not going to vote but ya I have one request before starting ur next part reveal the pair…. Because here swasanians can’t bear rag….. . San ND there FF as 4 us they r purely Bhai behen Jodi…. So plz reveal the pair before starting as we don’t wanna get hurt later on..

    1. Ohhh so sry dear I didn’t notice the title…Sorry 4 big Wala gyan

    2. Doremon

      No need to say sry, i understand it. I also gone through same feeling. I just wanted to create suspense my intention were not like that. It’s swasan only as i. Swasan fan. I can’t even imagine my swara or sanskar with anyone

  12. Make it swasan

  13. Rabia

    Ooooo good concept dear letss see whom u make as a pair ??? continue soon ?

  14. nice…n thank u for making it clear by tittle?

  15. Swasan please……….

  16. I came to know it’s swasan by its name and am happy for that and it was just awesome

  17. Praju

    Seems interesting

  18. Maryum

    Nice concept dear

  19. nice…..vaiting fr next dear….m happy that its swasan

  20. Pramudi

    Very interesting. Hope it’s about swasan as the title says.
    By the way dear, your dp is so beautiful. Helly is looking gorgeous in that pic. ?

  21. Mumpi

    its really nice yaar!! update soon.

  22. Shiksha

    Hey! It’s interesting.. Continue.. n update soon..

  23. Nice Swasan

  24. Rachna

    No word for described it…
    Really its awsm concept…
    Very interesting ..
    Cant wait for next part…
    Update soon

  25. Simi

    Hope its swasan ?
    Ur dp is very good.. Helly look gorgeous ??

  26. Jannatul.Nayma09

    Interesting ??
    Eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
    Update soon

  27. Interesting concept………. Continue….

  28. really very interesting….continue soon?

  29. Saeedah

    Awesomeeee. Looking forward to read this story if it is swasan as the title says

  30. Arshaanya

    From title its clear its swasan story only ??..
    I hope my guess is right abt u
    Wil tell rst of d things in nxt part

    1. Doremon

      I changed tittle later, me sure you’re thinking 100% wrong

  31. SNY

    Amazing dr…..Nxt one soon….♡♡♡

  32. I just want to say is that I really like your concepts it looks good. You decide which pair you want to b together as its your story and your thoughts.

  33. Awesome and thanks a lot that you’ve already chosen the pair cause I am a big swasan fan and can’t bare if anyone of them is paired with someone else. Now a days all I see is people pairing rag——-San ffs and I hate it cause for me they are like bro sis they were like not a couple at all.

  34. Vyshu10

    interesting doremon jiiiiiiii??

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