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Break up Patch up (Swasan ts) shot 3 part 2 by Mars

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Break up Patch up(swasan ts)
Shot 3(part 2)Last part.
On the road:
Sanskar was losing his conscious while swara is jerking him and crying.
Swara: sanskar don’t close your eyes we will go to hospital.
Swara somehow made him sit in the car and then drives to nearly hospital.

Hospital:
Sanskar was taken to ICU while swara was standing outside. She was not knowing what to do. She looked at sanskar phone in her hand and then thought to inform his parents. She dialed Ram’s no. and informed about the whole incident.

Later, swara is sitting on the chair in the corridor looking down and tears flowing down her eyes.Sujata and ram came running to her.
Sujata: where is my son?
Swara(look at her): Aunty doctor is treating him.
Ram: how all this happened?
Swara:I don’t know uncle some man came and stabbed Sanskar.
Sujata(angrily): this all is becoz of you (to swara): why don’t u leave my son.
He was happy when u were not there.
Few fresh tears fell from Swara’s eyes listening all the blames. What was her mistake just that she love Sanskar.
After one hour:
Doctor came out. All rush to him.
Sujata:how is my son he is fine?
Doctor: yes he is out off danger. U can meet him.
Swara signed in relief.
Sujata and ram went to the door. Even Swara was about to come when sujata
Stopped her
Sujata:no need to come inside. Just go from here and my son’s life. Stay away from him.
Sujata and ram entered inside the cabin while swara left with no other option came out of the hospital and sit on the stairs. She was crying bitterly. How much she is craving to see sanskar fine.

Sanskar’s Cabin:
Listening to the door opening sound, sanskar opened his eyes.Sujata and ram came near him. Sujata hugged him and said
Sujata:how are u Sanskar??
Sanskar: I m good mom.
Sanskar’s eyes are searching for one person and she is swara. He was expecting her to be the first person who will enter inside and hug him but No.
Sanskar being desperate asked
Sanskar: mom dad where is swara?
Ram: She is outside beta.
Sanskar:why?
Sujata:bcoz I said. How many times I told u to be away from her but u never listened me.
Sanskar: mom I love swara
Sujata:but she is not good for you.
Sanskar:dad plzz call swara I want to meet her.
Sujata got angry and ram left to call her.
Ram searched her for sometimes and found her sitting on the stairs.
Ram:swara
Swara looked at him with puffy eyes.
Ram:plzz come Sanskar is calling you.
Swara stood up happily and wiped her tears.Then she went inside.
Swara entered inside the cabin and hesitately went close to sanskar’s bed as sujata is also standing there with stern face.
Sujata moved little back.
Swara: how are u feeling now Sanskar?
Sanskar(smiles): after seeing you very good.
Swara smiles with tears in her eyes.
There was silence between them as ramta were also there. Ram sensing the situation took sujata out.
Sanskar; they went Swara.
Swara looked at him and throw herself on him and started crying.
Sanskar: swara how much you will cry.
Calm down.
Swara: if something happened to you then.
Sanskar(wipe her tears):shhh nothing happened just relax.
Then they keep on talking for sometimes.
Swara:sanskar I think I should go to home once.
Sanskar: okay.
Later swara went to gododia house.

Gododia house:
Swara is standing on the door all shocked. In the hall shekar and laksh are talking oblivious to swara’s presence.
Shekar:don’t worry laksh, swara will marry you only.
Laksh: but she loves Sanskar.
Shekar(smiles evily):that Sanskar will be dead in some times then swara will be left with no other option except marrying you.
Then he explained laksh how he planned Sanskar’s death.
Laksh:ohh that’s good plan.
Swara(shouted): Dad how can u do this.
Shekar and laksh got shocked seeing her there.
Swara: so it was you who tried to kill Sanskar then there is bad news for you Mr shekar gododia bcoz sanskar is fine.
Shekar: swara listen..
Swara: I had listened whatever I had to.
Just forget that you have a daughter also bcoz I don’t want such cheap father.
Swara left from there.

Maheshwari house:
After few days, sanskar came home and swara told him that it was her own father who tried to kill him.
Sanskar: we will get marry swara and then u will belong to me in all sense.
Swara hugged him tightly.
In hall:
Swasan and ramta are present when Sanskar said
Ssnskar: mom dad I want to marry Swara.
Sujata: what??? Don’t u find some other girl.
Sanskar: mom I will marry swara only whether u agree or not.
Swara: Sanskar
She pointed him as the way he was speaking to his mother was wrong.
Ram;okay we are ready.
Sanskar:we want simple marriage in temple only.
Ram agreed for it but sujata does not said anything.

After two days:
Gododia house:
Swara went to her house to bring her belongings as today after marrying Sanskar she will leave this house.
Sanskar also came with her.
Sanskar went to shekar to talk though Swara had denied but sanskar said its our duty to tell.
Sanskar: baba today is mine and swara’s marriage so plzz if you can bless us.
Shekar looked at swara who was not looking at him.
Shekar: hmm when u had decided to marry then I can just hope that u will keep my daughter happy.
Sanskar: thanks baba I will never give chance to complain against me.
Shekar: hmm I m sorry Sanskar, I know I did big mistake and now I got punishment also after losing my daughter.
Swara is standing with emotionless face.
Shekar hugged her and said
Shekar: I m sorry swara and be happy always.
Swara just nodded and then swasan left.

Swasan got married in the temple in very simple and only ramta were present.Ram blessed them happily but sujata unwillingly accepted swara.
Night:
Swasan came inside the room and found it completely decorated as its their first night.
(Skip this part if you don’t want romance)
Sanskar: go and change swara.
Swara(naughtily): why don’t u want to celebrate your first night.
Sanskar looked at her shockingly.
Sanskar (pull her closer): so my shona become bold.
Swara: yes
Sanskar stare her for sometimes then smash his lips with her. He was chewing her lips. Swara also responded with equal passion. Their eyes were closed and they kissed each other passionately till they were out of breathe. Sanskar picked swara in bridal style and made her lie on the bed. She closed her eyes when she felt softness of rose petals on bed brushing her skin. Sanskar kissed her forhead then closed eyes. He removed her saree pallu and kissed her shoulder. Swara clutched his shirt and moved her head other side giving him more access.
Sanskar hugged swara. He rubbed his hand sensuously on her bare back.
Swara tighted the hug. He opened the knot of her blouse loosing it. Swara with shivering hands started opening his shirt buttons. Both were breathing heavily. Soon their clothes were lying on the floor and both got busy in passionate love making.
Later both were sweating profusely and Sanskar took Swara in her embrace.
Sanskar(kiss her forehead): we had make out many times swara but today was different and I had best feeling of being yours today.
Swara: bcoz today we loved each other with pure feeling. I always want to be yours.
Sanskar: I love you sooo much.
Swara: love you.
Soon both got drifted to sleep due to tiredness.

Next morning:
Swasan came down after getting ready.Sanskar was teasing swara and she was blushing.Sujata saw them and got angry.
Sujata(loudly):swara why are you late?
Swara got scared.
Sanskar:mom actually….
Sujata: I asked from Swara so don’t interfere.
Swara:I m sorry mom. Next time I will be careful.
Sujata:u better.
Sanskar angrily left from there.

Like this days were passing , swasan are Happy with each other. But still sujata didn’t accepted swara and always behave rudely with her, taunt her.Sanskar was observing this and he always say to sujata but no change.
Even he was angry at swara as she neither protested nor talk to him.

Night:
Swasan room:
Sanskar came from Washroom. As soon as he came swara wipped her tears but he had seen them.
Sanskar(sternly): why are you crying?
Swara: no I m not.
Sanskar(angry): for God’s sake stop lying Swara. Why don’t you share with me.
Swara: its not like that sanskar.
Sanskar: and u don’t like the way mom misbehave with you but then why don’t u say anything.
Swara: I had only this family sanskar I don’t want to lose it.
Sanskar signed and left From there confusing Swara.
Later he came and said
Sanskar:swara next week we are going to USA
Swara: for a trip?
Sanskar: no permanently, I had talked to dad and he has no problem. There I will handle our company branch.
Swara: but why??
Sanskar: see swara I had tried a lot to change mom but she won’t that I know and I can’t see u like this.So it will be better if we will live separately.
Swara: I don’t want to snatch their son Sanskar.
Sanskar :its nothing like that some relations are like this only so we have to adjust. Understood.
Swara nodded.

After one week swasan left to USA and they started their new life. Sanskar handle his business while swara used to help him.Both are living happily.
Every year they used to come to India for few weeks. Sujata had also changed and almost accepted swara.
Swasan went to meet shekar also. Though the broken relations can’t be mended completely but one should not leave them.
After 4 years, Swasan were blessed with baby girl and then they lead happy life with their tiny family.
The End.

Thank you

61 Comments
    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  1. Phoniex

    Cute story

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  2. Raina

    beautiful ending..
    loved this short story..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  3. Pnap

    cute ending
    loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  4. Epilogue I want epilogue 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear I can just try to give epilogue dear

  5. Amazing marss 😊😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  6. awesome loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  7. Lovely..tc..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  8. Tamil

    Amazing dear loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  9. Rosey

    wow mars its superbbbbbbbbb
    great ending i love it….
    now post beast’s soulmate too

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear I will post beast’s soulmate also soon

  10. Samaira_khan

    Awsm yaar ur just amazing love it….m very cute and outstanding ending but they could have convinced sujata right nd live happily ever after …. But this was something new so yeah it’s gud

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  11. well its nyc but i think u ended hurriedly

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and even I felt while writing like I m running but as its ts so I had to complete it. Sorry for that

  12. loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  13. Simi

    Beautiful ending.. 😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  14. Neptune

    i wished everything was all okay between all of them….but this is also good….
    marsuuuuuuuuuu please write epilogue for this dear….
    loved this story sooooooooooo much..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much nepuuu I will try to post epilogue .

  15. Pramudi

    Awesome dear. But i think you have rushed the ending. Never mind. This is also good.
    Waiting for your other stories. 😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and sorry for abrupt ending. I will post my others stories also soon.

  16. Kanha

    Awesomeβ™₯️ Awesomeβ™₯️ Awesomeβ™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ Sanskar theek ho gaya but mujhe Swara ke liye bura laga. Uske Dad ab uske saath nahi hai aur woh ab Sanskar ki family se bhi door hai. Sisooooo, ho sake toh epilogue mein family ko unite kar do plsssssπŸ™πŸ™ I will miss this storyπŸ˜ͺ Loveeeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sisooooooooooπŸ˜—πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜š

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and I will try to give epilogue. Love u siso.

  17. AnuAnn

    Loved it dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  18. Nice….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  19. SHAN

    Wow awesome and cute!!! But i felt u rushed this part!!! Anyhow its awesome!!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much di and sorry for abrupt ending.

  20. Sumayyah

    Marsuuuu !!!!!
    u planned the ending above awesome it should end like this only ….
    mature Swara and mature Sanskar hihihi
    loved it
    love u tooo
    tc
    bye

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much sumuu love u too

  21. Adishu

    haha what’s that tiny family :p it’s was very nice… n please tell me one thing… r u seriously human or some robot… how do u write this much…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and I m human only hihi

  22. Gayathri.visu

    Amazing ending dear. And I felt u rushed this part! But why??

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and I ended it quickly bcoz its ts so have to complete. Sorry for that

  23. Sweet love story of SwaSan 😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  24. Soujanya

    Awesome….😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  25. NDSG

    At last EVERY thing become OKπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thanks for saving my sanku sab kuch jaldi jaldi ho gaya but OK, I’m happy at last all became happy family… Is pyar k dushman shekhar ko punishment ku nahi di…πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ I don’t like this guy… Chalo chodo ab Jo bhi hua… Maine bhi sekhar ko maf kr dia…

    Bye take care

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much depuu dear and I also don’t want to drag shekar part so jane diya use.

  26. Awesome….lovely ending. Loved it.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  27. Vyshu10

    superb dear

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