Break up Patch up (Swasan ts) shot 3 part 1 by Mars

Hlooo guys!! I m back with second last part. Thank you so much for your response on previous part.
Let’s Begin:

Break up Patch up(swasan ts)
Shot 3 part 1:
After 3 years:
Swara comes out of the airport with a boy walking beside her. She is not same happy and cheerful now. The boy held her hand which annoyed her.
Swara:I know the way laksh no need to hold my hand.
Laksh:its my love for u baby.
Swara didn’t replied as she is in no mood to talk to him.
They sit in the car and left from there.

Swara’s POV:
I m back to India after three years. I had lived in USA for long time.I hated my life living there bcoz I was restricted by my father. Now I m graduate so my dad has fixed my marriage with the son of his friend laksh, I don’t like him even a bit, he always drool over me. Next week is my marriage with my so called fiancΓ©e but I m not happy bcoz I love someone else yes I love my Sanskar.
I still remember time when we used to have great fun but I can’t do anything as it was not any serious relation and I m damm sure he must have found someone better than me. Distance made me realize my love but it’s too late now. I never contacted him after that last meeting in the college backyard.I just hope to meet him once.
Swara’s POV ends.

Gododia house:
A car stops out of the mansion and swara and laksh came out and went inside. Shekar was already waiting for them in the hall. Swara hugged him and laksh took his blessings.
Shekar:so the new couple is here.
Laksh: yeah
Swara just give fake smile.
Shekar: now u can take rest. U both have to attend one party tonight.
Swara left to her room and laksh to guest room.

Maheshwari Industries:
Sanskar is working seriously in his cabin when pavan(Sanskar’s friend and pa)came running.
Pavan:sanskar tonight there is party and u should go.
Sanskar:are u kidding with me. U r well aware that after she left I stopped attenting parties.
Pavan:I know since swara has left, u have become devdaas in her memory.
Sanskar (glare him): just shut up.
Pavan(smirks): what if she will also come to the party.
Sanskar (instantly ): are u serious.
Pavan:ofcouse yarrr I never say anything wrong when it comes to Swara bcoz I m least interested to be killed by you.
Sanskar:ohh god then I should leave as I have to get ready for her.
Pavan(laughs): okay.

Royal hotel:
Party hall:
Sanskar is waiting desperately waiting for swara as he can’t wait to see his lady love after three years.
Sanskar:when she will come pavan.
Pavan: have some patience sanskar she will come.
Sanskar (rub his hands): I just can’t wait.
Then only Sanskar saw swara looking breathe taking in his favourite colour blue gown. He fell for her all over again.
The next sight he saw raised his temper.Laksh place his hand on swara’s waist making her uncomfortable.
Sanskar’s face turns red in anger.
Sanskar(mumble): how he dare to touch my girl.
They went to the host of the party and were talking. Laksh is not ready to leave Swara and she has plastered fake smile on her lips.Sanskar fisted his hand tightly.
Swara looked around and got astonished seeing Sanskar who was already staring her. Their eyes met and they shared an eye lock filled with passion, hurt,pain and above all love for each other.
Swara looked other side not able to meet his intense gaze. How much they both want to engulf each other in their warm embrace.
Swara need to relax so she said
Swara:laksh I will be back soon.
Laksh; okay.
Swara went towards washroom. Sanskar saw her going alone. He took the opportunity and went after her.

Swara is moving when she felt that someone held her wrist. She turns only to see sanskar.
Swara:hi Sanskar. How r u?
Sanskar got hurt as he never thought that his best friend will be this much formal with him.
Sanskar: hmm I m good.
There was awkward silence between them. They both were not knowing what to say.
Swara:so u r married??
Sanskar give her unbelievable look as how can she think I will marry someone else except her.
Sanskar: no I m in love but don’t know whether she love me or not.
Swara’s heart stops for a second just listening that her sanskar love someone else.
Swara:who is she?
Sanskar(looking directly in her eyes): YOU.
Swara got shocked. Her happiness has no bound.Her smile reaches her eyes. She don’t know whether she listened right or not.
Swara: really???
Sanskar (teary eyes): yes.
Swara crushed her petite body against his and hugged him tightly.Seeing her reaction he get to know she also have same feeling for him.
He squeezed her figure on his pulling more closer.
Their eyes were closed in ecstasy.
Unwillingly they broke the hug after long time. Sanskar’s hands were still on her waist.They were hell close to each other. Sanskar smashed his lips on her. They were busy in kissing each other passionately.
Laksh who came to see swara got shocked seeing them kissing.
Laksh(shouted): swaraa.
Listening him swasan broke the kiss and look at laksh who was staring them with blood shot eyes.
Laksh went to Swara and held her shoulder.
Laksh: how dare u to cheat me.
Swara(feel pain due to his tight grip): laksh listen plzz.
Sanskar pushed laksh and held his collar.
Sanskar: u tried to hurt my swara now face the consequences.
Sanskar tightly punch in his stomach.
Laksh also beat him.
Laksh: she is going to be my wife.
Sanskar punch hardly on his mouth making him bleed.
Sanskar: she is mine and only mine. She will become my wife Swara Sanskar Maheshwari put that in your little head.
They were fighting with each other.
Swara went in between to stop this mess.
Swara: Sanskar laksh plzzz stop.
But both were in rage.
Laksh was not getting chance to beat him as he was bleeding.Swara saw his condition and said to Sanskar
Swara: sanskar plzz stop he will die.
Sanskar: I will kill him how he even tried to keep eye on you.
Swara: u have my swear Sanskar u will not beat him.
Sanskar’s hand stops in the middle.
Laksh took it as the chance and punch him which results in bleeding. But he didn’t attacked back as swara has sweared him.
Swara(join her hand): laksh plzz go.
Laksh: I won’t leave you both.
Saying this he left. No one get to know about the fight as all were busy in the party.
Swara looked at sanskar whose corner of the lips has blood. Swara place his palm on his cheeks and lean to kiss on his wound.Sanskar closed his eyes in pain and pleasure. He can’t control anymore so place his lips on her and kissed each other. After getting out of breathe, they broke the kiss. Sanskar remove her gown little from shoulder and kissed there . Swara very well know now where it will lead to. So she stopped him.
Swara: Sanskar not here.
Sanskar: I need you plzzz.
Swara looked in his eyes which were filled with longing and love.
Swara:we will go in the room.
Sanskar; I will bring Keys.

Sanskar entered inside the room only to see Swara waiting for him.
He went and sit in front of her and said
Sanskar: how was your life without me?
She hugged sanskar and started crying.
Swara:I missed you soo much.I love you.
Sanskar: love u more.I was craving for you.
After sharing about their life and spend quality time with each other.

Gododia house:
Laksh came inside all wounded. Shekar saw him and got shocked.
Shekar:how this happened laksh ?
Laksh: ask your dear daughter.
Shekhar:where is swara?
Laksh: this all is done by Swara’s lover and now she is with him only.
Shekar(angry): who was he?
Laksh:some Sanskar.
Shekar fisted his hand and mumble
Shekar:he is again back in swara’s life. This time I will completely end his chapter.
Shekar tried swara’s no. But swasan are busy in love making and swara’s phone is vibrating but they didn’t get to know.
Shekar cut the call.
Shekar:laksh go and take rest, servant will do your dressing.
Laksh left from there.
Shekar called someone and said
Shekar:listen carefully, stand on the way to my house swara and sanskar will come from there only. Just kill that Sanskar.
OP:okay sir your work will be done.
He cut the call and smirk.

Hotel room:
Swara is lying on Sanskar’s chest.
Swara:sanskar I m really worried whether dad will agree for our relation or not.
Sanskar:don’t worry I will talk to him.for now get ready we should leave.
Swasan got freshup and left from there.

On the road:
Swasan were coming back when some big body build man stop the car.There is hardly anyone on the road as it is early morning.
Sanskar:Swara u sit I will see.
Swara nodded.
Sanskar went out.
Sanskar:yes what u want.
One man punched him. Swara got shocked so ran outside.
Sanskar: swara go inside.
Swara:no sanskar.Who are u?(said to man)
Man:we are asked to kill him(Sanskar).
Swara:no u can’t even touch my sanskar.
Before swasan could say anything, man stabbed sanskar twice in his stomach and all ran from there.
Swara(shouted): sanskarr.
Sanskar fell in Swara’s lap and jerk him. Tears were flowing from her eyes which fell on Sanskar’s cheeks.
Sanskar with great difficulty opened his eyes to make swara little relief as he know she is scared.
Sanskar:swara I m OK(breathing heavily)
Swara: no plzz don’t close your eyes Sanskar.
Sanskar:swara I love u.plz move on in your life. U will get someone better than me.
Swara vigorously shook her head in no.
Swara:nothing will happen to u i m there na.
She is crying bitterly.
To be continued….

Precap:last part.

Hey guys!! Actually I want to know is there any Punjabi reader bcoz I m thinking to write a story on one Punjabi movie.The name of the movie is Jindua and lead cast is Jimmy shergill, Sargun Mehta and Neru bajwa.
So tell me how many of u had seen this movie. I know hardly anyone must have listened also about it as I don’t think anyone is here from Punjab.
I will completely show swasan story u won’t feel that its any movie but the concept will be same.
I love that movie so I wished to write but if u all want.
I don’t want to be blamed for copying so before only I m saying it will based on jindua movie.
Plzzz tell me your opinion fast so that I should think whether to write it or not.
And if u want to me write it then there will be love triangle. So whose love triangle u want.Choose one
Swasan and kavita
Swasan and kavya or any other from your side.(swasan will be same third character u can suggest)
One more thing, all three lead characters will be positive no negativity.
So do tell me and if many readers had seen the movie then i will not continue it as it won’t be interesting.
Waiting for your answer.

Coming to break up patch up:
Tell me whether u liked the part or not.
Plzz leave your feedback as this is second last part. Plzz don’t be silent.
Thank you
Take care.


  1. NDSG


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    If anything happened to Sanskar be ready for the consequences😠😠😠😠 and I’m serious😑😑😑.

    Awesome chappy, Swasan loves, their kiss. And this pyar k dushman shekhar GadodiaπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜ har jaga apni tamg adata h.

    Lucky k pitaiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Maja a gaya, I wish live najara dekhne mo milta…

    For new story my choice is Kavita. Because I like NikitaπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ no kavya please

    • Mars



      Thank you so much dear and even I like Nikita she is such a cutepie. Will try to take it if I will write it.

  2. Darlzz002

    Hi di….!!!
    Im really sorry… i couldn’t comment on ur previous ff’s as i was stuck with my examz.. really sorry….
    Btw all ur ff’s are really mind blowing…
    Coming 2 dhz ff…..
    It was nyc……. loved it…
    Plz save sanskar and unite them soon….
    And i think u forgot 2 post the next epi of my better half….πŸ˜‰…
    Post it soon di

    • Mars



      Hey dear don’t be sorry its alright.
      Thank you so much for your comment and about my better half I remember it but as I had created little mesh in last part so that’s why it is delayed.
      Will post soon.

  3. saki

    awesome dear but unite swasan and teach shekar a good lesson mars.and i’m ready to read and comment for all the stories which you write dear and post soon

  4. AbrahamEzra


    |Registered Member

    I just loved it. Finally my swasan had met after 3 long years. And this shekhar gadodia what’s wrong with him yaar. He always become the kabaab mein haadi. I will kill that moron. And don’t let anything happen to sanky.
    And plss do write that story . I don’t even heard its name.

  5. Chaitu

    Ohh…god San kuch tik hote huye bhi nahi hua but its OK we trust u to give happy ending..,.. Teach a lesson to that shekhar and about movie I didn’t heard that name only because I watch selected Hindi movies as I am kannadiga……

  6. Rosey


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    Wow Swasan patch up was so intense I really loved that..😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍and that kiss..and than Sanskaar beating Laksh…a,d that Laksh cheap beat Sanskaar when he stop due to Swara…and than that sheckar Gagodia…😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑I’ll kill him do,t let Swasan forgive him…I only want Swasan at end without that chipku Laksh and that Shekar…

  7. Kanha


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    Bechara LakshπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Usne hamaare Sanskar ko maara😀😀😀 How dare he?😀😠😠😑😑😑 Yeh uske liyeπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š meri taraf se. Sisooo, aise fight sequences zyada likha karo. Mujhe bhi isme hissa lena haiπŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜œ This part was awesome. Finally, hamaare Swasan ek huye😍😍😍 Lekin Sanskar ko kuch nahi hona chahiyeπŸ˜”πŸ˜” Swasan and kavitha acha hai. Loveeeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuu lotssssssssssssssssπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜š

    • Mars



      Thank you so much sister and will add more fight scenes and even I will invite you also to support sanskar .

  8. Kumu

    I don’t know about the movie so want u to write it on swasan and my choice is

  9. Neptune


    |Registered Member

    lovely epi marsuuuuuuu….
    quite painful for SWASAN…..
    well am excited for their union…….

    about love triangle you can use anyone….. i just want swasan the others don’t matter for me…….
    excited for the next epi…

  10. Simi


    |Registered Member

    Amazing update dear… Want to beat Shekhar 😑😑
    About other ff i like nikita sharma

  11. Gayathri.visu


    |Registered Member

    Oh……no! Don’t do anything wrong with Sanskaar!! Eagerly waiting for next part dear.

    And about movie I don’t know anything about it. Third lead u can choose Kavitha no kavya plzzzzzzz…

  12. Raina


    |Registered Member

    uff… this shekhar is just toooooo cruel..
    loved the chapter..
    they finally got each other but the last thing, i just hope nothing happens to him..

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