A Bramhachari got married (DevAkshi fs) Part 3

**********EPISODE 3**********

Next morning the sun rays hit Sona who was sleeping near Dev near the couch. Her neck ached a little but she rotated it left right up and down, later she freshened up and did her work. 3 weeks passed Sona had changed herself a lot, she started wearing anarkali’s and saree’s at home, she left non veg and for Dev even she got somewhat devoted to bajrang bali but ufsos it didn’t affect Dev he tried his best to avoid his wife (in double triple quote’s). Once Dev found Sona sleeping near the couch he sleeps he was worried and angry on her as he never got a clue that she slept near him

Dev: Devi ji….devi ji wake up

He got no response from her finally he screamt


Sona was shivering a bit but she managed to open her eyes little

Dev : Y r u sleeping here, I gave u my whole bed and ur sleeping near the couch
Sona : My wish where I sleep

She got up and went down to do her work Dev followed her as she was holding her head , she felt weak and was about to faint

Dev : Arey Devi ji what happened…look if u faint I won’t carry u haan…

But his words were left incomplete as Sona fell on him

Dev : Devi ji, Devi ji…oh god bajrang bali kya karva rahe ho mujse

He unwillingly carried her to her room and kept her on the bed an called the doctor

Doctor : See Mr. Dixit she is very weak as she slept on the floor in this weather, u must take extra care of her, here are some medicines and the diet u must give to her

He gave the list and Dev brought the things. When he came he saw her awake

Sona : Hubby!!! U came

Without saying anything he went and bought her the soup

Dev : Look Devi ji ur weak and sick so have this soup
Sona : Chi no I won’t have this is tasteless soup and I don’t want ti die eating this yucky soup
Dev : Devi ji please have it please

Sona suddenly starts smiling like an idiot

Sona : U want me to have this soup na

He nodes

Sona : Then call me Sona
Dev : WHAT??????


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  1. Priya12

    Rithu, awesomee yaar….post soon..

  2. Rekhadhir


  3. Asmita...

    Dev : Arey Devi ji what happened…look if u faint I won’t carry u haan…

    But his words were left incomplete as Sona fell on him

    Dev : Devi ji, Devi ji…oh god bajrang bali kya karva rahe ho mujse….
    It is very difficult to imagine Dev like this… seriously yaar… hahahahaha….

    If Shaheer will ever read this,… he will definitely die haste haste…

    1. Erika

      absolutely correct dear ur absolutely right very difficult to imagine dev like this……….

    2. Priya9876

      U r absolutely right Asmita….hahhaa

      Rithika amazing concept..?

      Somebody plz send this story to shaheer….
      Nd as asmita say– he will definitely die haste haste…

      1. This isn’t rhitika concept. She copied it from our swasan page. I don’t know if the writer of this fs knows this or but still she copied it. If she can’t write at her own she must not be coping someone’s else idea. It takes so much time to think about something good. Previously also she copied an idea from krpkab page and almost same posted it as OS on swasan page and its a cyber crime. Coping others and taking credits on your own
        Sorry if I sound rude but that’s the truth. So rhitika kid grow up and stop copying

    3. Rakshita

      I agree with Asmita. I can rarely some this type of guy anywhere and Dev with his dashing look and all Mumbai girls drooling around him presently in show. I cannot imagine doing Devi ji Devi ji. Sonakshi would just smack him down. Good concept. Please share it with sherica. U would see them dying laughing for sure!!!!!?????❣❣❣

  4. Erika

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi rithika and sry to comment late in this and not at all in the previous episodes so comming back to the epi it was fantastic… so update asap

  5. V.V.harshita

    Hey its awsome plzs post soon….and Rithika plzs post My secret admire…also plzs pzlz

  6. Amazing one!!! Bichara Dev!???

  7. Awesome episode dear post the next episode soon

  8. AnuAnn

    hey dear don’t take me wrong.. IS this the same ts written by pikachu about swasan? same story nd dialogues only small small changes…. did u tak her permission… if not plzzz ?

    1. Deeksha

      Yes dear… Even I was seeing that only……!!!!!! It was posted on swasan….!!!!!!

    2. AnuAnn

      yup, DEEKSHA,when I SAW THE TITLE, i have a dbt so just read it… nd find it same story.. if she have taken permission.. then its okkk… otherwise plzzz sop copying

  9. Amazing ❤❤❤

  10. Heshine

    Awesome epi Rithika…! Pls post soon dear…! Desperate to read the next and dev falling fa sona…!????❤❤

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