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Blushing Beauty (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu

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Hello guys!!!! I m back with another one shot. It’s just a simple story that strikes my mind so here I m presenting it.
Hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin:

Blushing Beauty(SwaSan One Shot)
Hotel Hayyat:
A very huge and beautiful hotel can be seen with the tight security at the gate. A luxurious car stops in the parking area and a man dressed in black suit came out of the car and keeping his right hand in his pocket, he moved inside with a killer look.
He is looking handsome to the dangerous level. His little scattered hairs on his whitish face is enhancing his charm. As he reached at the door, a man opened the door for him and he entered inside moving straightly to the reception.
Reaching there, he place his arm on the counter and said
Man: excuse me
A beautiful girl dressed in blue clothes that’s the hotel uniform is present at the counter. She is busy in her work looking at the screen of her laptop. Listening to the manly voice she raises her eyelashes and said politely
Girl: yes sir
It was the first time she saw him and her beautiful hazel doe eyes are not ready to leave the gaze of that man. His handsome look, stern attitude was enough to make any girl go flat on him.
Revealing the identities,
Man is Sanskar Maheshwari, 25 Years old richest and the most successful businessman of the country. He has only his mother sujata maheshwari in his life. He have that typical personality of a tough businessman but when someone know him closely he is very soft hearted person.

Coming to the girl, she is our beauty
Swara Gododia, 24 years old graduate and currently working as a receptionist in the Hayyat hotel. She has her parents, shomi and shekar who are always tensed about her as there is a hidden secret about swara which only swara shomi shekar know.She is extremely beautiful.

Swara looked at Sanskar and got lost in his dark brown shades. She don’t know why but her cheeks started getting heated up and turn slightly pink. Seeing her lost, sanskar tap on the counter and said
Sanskar: hello miss???
Swara came in her senses and roll her eyes and tried to act normal.
Swara: yes Sir how can I help you??
Sanskar: I m sanskar maheshwari and where is the hall where business meeting is going to held today?
Swara: one second Sir.
Swara said trying hard to stabilize her ever increasing heart beat.After checking she said
Swara: it’s on 4th floor our man will guide you plz wait for sometime.
Sanskar: alright
He said while busy on his mobile.
Swara told one man to call someone who can take Sanskar to hall.
Soon a boy came and sanskar leave with him. While going sanskar felt a constant gaze on him and he turn only to see Swara staring him.
As soon as swara saw him looking at her she turn her face and pretended to be working.
Sanskar smirks seeing his effect on girls but even he can’t neglect the fact that her pink cheeks did something in his heart. It was the first time he saw a girl blushing profusely after seeing him.
Leaving all that he went from there.

After few hours,
When the meeting ended, Sanskar came down. Unknowingly his sight moved towards reception as if he wants to see that blushing girl once before leaving. Swara is so much busy in talking to her friend, kavita who is also present on the counter working with her.
Sanskar admire her the way she is moving her hands while speaking.
Swara accidentally look towards his side and their eyes met. She instantly looked down as she was not able to stop blushing. Sanskar smiles and left from there. Kavita who noticed this teases Swara
Kavita: what’s going on???
Swara: nothing
Kavita: then why are you blushing??
Swara(fumble): no I m not
Kavita: u know who is he??
Swara: who!??
Kavita: sanskar maheshwari he has huge girl fan following.
Swara didn’t like this thing that so many girls like Sanskar its only her right.
Swara (scolds herself): stop thinking rubbish swara
She started working ignoring him.

Next morning:
Swara came at the counter when kavita placed few magazines in front of her.
Swara(confused): what is this??
Kavita: open and see
Swara took the magazine and saw sanskar on cover pic. For a second she forgot to breathe. As usual her cheeks got warm.
Kavita: he is hot
Kavita said making Swara flinch at her place.
Swara: I don’t care
Kavita: ohh really??? Stop acting i know you like him.
Swara: its just attraction and now I will never meet him so forget it.
Kavita: who knows what’s in destiny(winks)
Swara signed and started working.

After one month:
Night:
Sanskar is coming in his car from some meeting and his pa Avni is with him. Suddenly his car stops, avni who was till now busy on mobile asked
Avni: what happened sir
Sanskar: I think there is some technical problem.
Sanskar tried to start the car but it didn’t got started. And hardly any other vehicle was there as its night.
Then Sanskar saw the board of hayatt hotel.
Sanskar: there is hotel here we can stay there tonight.
Avni: okay sir
After walking for little distance they reached inside the hotel.
Sanskar went to reception and look for swara but she is not there as some other members have night shift.
Sanskar:excuse me
Man: yes sir
Sanskar: we need two rooms for tonight.
Man: sure sir
Sanskar waited and soon they Gave them keys of two different rooms.
Sanskar and avni went to separate room and then slept.
After their first meet Sanskar came to this hotel twice for some meeting and all. Every time when he saw swara she always used to blush looking at him.

Morning:
Swara came on duty and as she came, kavita show him the list of guests who came yesterday and there was sanskar’s name.
Kavita (whisper): still he is in the hotel
Swara: really??
Kavita: yes wait wait
Swara accepted that she has feelings for Sanskar but she told this only to kavita.
Later, swara is impatiently waiting for sanskar. Her face is glowing just thinking that she will be able to see him after many days.
Soon her wait was over when sanskar came down. He is wearing white shirt with blue jeans and his hairs are messy.
Sanskar saw her and smiles. She also smiled back shyly. Her shy nature always flutter his heart for her.
Swara’s smile vanished as she saw Avni beside sanskar.
Sanskar observed her changing expressions. Firstly he didn’t understood but then saw avni and got to know that she didn’t like avni.
Swara’s eyes turn glassy and she was feeling uneven.She gulped her saliva and tried to inhale.
Swara(thinks): I think she is sanskar’s girlfriend. How can you be so stupid Swara to think that he likes you its just he smile at me and this is common for rich people. Stop thinking all these rubbish and suppress your feelings.
The thing that is making swara suffocated is he was alone with some girl whole night what that means???
Sanskar: avni u go out I m coming.
Avni: okay sir.

Avni went out and sanskar to counter. Seeing him coming near swara started working on laptop ignoring him. He smiles and intentionally went to kavita to pay bill and all.
Swara didn’t even looked at him once while he was looking at her with the corner of his eye.
He was about to leave when he went to swara’s side. Swara was knowing that he is standing near but she didn’t dared to look up.
He clear his throat trying to gain her attention.Swara looked at him and asked casually
Swara: yes sir
Sanskar lean on the counter and said
Sanskar: she is just my PA and we were in different rooms yesterday night.
Swara’s tensed face relaxed and again that blush came on her bubbly cheeks.
Sanskar chuckles and went from there.
Kavita who saw all this said
Kavita: he also feels for you.
Swara:may be.
Swara place her palms on her cheeks breathing heavily still she can’t believe he said this to her.

After 3 months:
Another months passed and now sanskar frequently started coming to the hotel just to see his blushing beauty. Both of them never talked just share eyelocks and smile at each other.

Gododia house:
Swara came from hotel when shekar said
Shekar: congrats swara you got the govt job.
Swara(jumped): omgg I m so happy.
Swara has applied for the govt Job and here she got.
Shomi feed her sweets.
Next day, swara went to hotel with sweets and also to give resignation.
She feed sweets to kavita
Kavita: I m so happy for you swara.
Swara: thank you.
Later, swara was about to leave when kavita said
Kavita: how will you see sanskar now.
Swara: that I didn’t thought but I don’t think he will come now as he didn’t came from two weeks.
Kavita: yeah possible.
Swara: but if he will come then plzz tell me.
Kavita: of course I will tell
Swara: bye
Kavita: bye
Swara left from there.

After two weeks, Swara called kavita
Kavita: hey swara how are you??
Swara: I m good u tell.
Kavita: I m fine but missing you a lot.
Swara: me tooo okay tell me Sanskar came???
Kavita: no not even once.
Swara(disappointed): ohh
Kavita: may be he is busy
Swara: hmm okay bye kavita I m in school now will talk later.
Kavita: bye

Swara’s POV
He didn’t came from one month and why the hell it is hurting me. We were not having serious relation and we never talked so one day this has to happen and I should accept it. Moreover he is having high status and why he will care for some middle class girl. I will also soon forget him.
Swara’s POV ends.
Swara didn’t realized that she was crying. She quickly wiped her tears and went from there.

Maheshwari Industries:
Sanskar came today only from USA after one month and that was the reason he was not able to see swara.
Now he is sitting on his chair and smiling remembering Swara’s blushing face.
Don’t know why she always blush after seeing him????
Laksh, sanskar’s best friend came inside the cabin and saw Sanskar smiling and lost somewhere.
Laksh(loudly): who is the girl???
Sanskar came back to senses after listening to him.
Sanskar: which girl???
Laksh: about whom you are thinking.
Sanskar: I m not thinking about any girl
Laksh: see don’t pretend just come to the point and tell.
Sanskar: I think I love her yrrr
Laksh: what’s her name???
Sanskar: blushing beauty
Laksh (weirdly):what kind of name is this!??
Sanskar: no I had given her this name actually I don’t know her real name.
Laksh(shock): you don’t know her name but you are loving her great.
Sanskar: I never talked to her.
Laksh: tell me clearly.
Sanskar explained how he saw swara and she always used to blush and he got attracted towards her.
After listening his story laksh started laughing and said
Laksh: she was blushing and you were smiling wooowwww what a love story.
Sanskar: stop making fun
Laksh: just go and confess yrr or you both want to live throughout their life with eye to eye talks.
Sanskar: tomorrow only I will go and talk to her.

Next morning, sanskar went to hotel to meet swara but she was not there and kavita told him that she resigned as she got govt job. Kavita gave swara’s address to Sanskar.
Now here sanskar is standing outside swara’s house leaning to his car. He is waiting that may be she will come out. Fortunately swara came in her balcony and saw sanskar standing there.
Sanskar wave his hand and asked her to come down. She was soo shocked as she didn’t expected him here so she nodded her head in no. Sanskar gesture that he is coming inside so she agreed.
Swara was in her night dress as it was early morning. When she came sanskar was mesmerized seeing her as she looks so fresh and beautiful.
Swara: what are you doing here sir??
Sanskar: I want to talk to you.
Swara(nervous): what??
Sanskar: not here come to nearly coffee cafe at 4 in the evening
Swara: I will think
Sanskar : if u ever felt something for me then plz come I will be waiting.
Swara: okay but now u go
Sanskar: okay bye meet you soon
Swara: hmm
Swara ran inside and sanskar also went.

Evening
Swara decided to go as she loves him and now she don’t want to suppress her feelings.
She went to the table where sanskar is already waiting
Swara: hi
Sanskar: hey BB you came plxz sit.
Swara(confused): what is BB??
Sanskar: I kept your name blushing beauty.
It didn’t took time when swara’s cheeks again turn to the darkest shade of pink.
Sanskar (smiles): BTW what’s your real name?
Swara: swara gododia.
Sanskar: see swara I don’t know anything about you not even your name and people may make fun but I really want to confess….
He got up from his chair and kneel down in front of her and said
Sanskar: I love you and you are my blushing beauty and will always be. You are the first girl for whom I have such feelings and you will be the last one so will you marry me????
He said extending ring towards her.
Swara was beyond shocked. She never thought he will confess suddenly and that too like this. But for now the thing that matters to her is that sanskar also love her
Swara: yes I also love you Sanskar maheshwari
Sanskar smiles and stood up. They both hugged each other. People who were present in the cafe admire them and clap at their confession.
Breaking the hug, Sanskar held Swara’s hand and make her wear the ring later kissing her hand he mumble
Sanskar: now you are mine
Swara smiles.
Later, they had coffee and they shared everything about their life what they do or who all are there in their family.
After an hour, swasan came out near sanskar’s car.
They sit inside when sanskar turn to swara and said
Sanskar: plzz may I kiss you if you don’t mind.
Swara looked at her lap and blushes.
Sanskar got his answer she blushes means it’s yes.
Sanskar lean and place his lips on her and they shared a soft sweet lovely kiss which was their first kiss.

After one year:
Swara’s POV:
I m sooo happy bcoz tomorrow I m going to marry him. Yes it’s our marriage tomorrow. And here I m staring at his name in my hena on my hand and smiling idiotically. He is the best thing that happened to me in my life. After our confession we were in relation and later we told our parents and they didn’t have any problem and here we are going to be one. I had not told him one thing about myself and I will tell after marriage and I know he is going to understand bcoz I trust him and our love.
Swara’s POV ends
Shomi enter in swara’s room breaking her chain of thoughts. She came near and asked seriously
Shomi: did you told Sanskar about your accident?
Swara: I will tell after marriage.

Shomi: are you mad swara is this the thing to be hidden what if he will leave you after marriage
Swara: he will never do that ma I trust Sanskar.
Shomi: call him here and tell him now
Swara: ma
Shomi: do as I say
Swara signed and dialed sanskar’s no.
Sanskar : ohhho my would be wife is missing me.
Swara: sanskar plz can you come now I want to talk.
Sanskar could sense seriousness in her voice and asked
Sanskar: everything alright???
Swara: yes but plzz you come
Sanskar: okay I m coming.

Swara is waiting for Sanskar outside the house. All are sleeping inside as it’s late night. Sanskar stop the car and hurriedly came out.
Sanskar: swara u okay what happened??
Swara: I m sorry Sanskar
Sanskar: why!??
Swara: I didn’t told you something which I should have told earlier.
Sanskar: say clearly
Swara: I will never be able to give you the pleasure of being father.
She said looking down.
Sanskar didn’t said anything just keep on staring her.
Swara: I can’t conceive.
(Swara met with an accident when she was 15 and due to injury she will never be able to conceive)
She said without any regret or sadness.
They looked at each other when swara said
Swara: I don’t take it as my weakness its your choice if you don’t want to marry me.
Sanskar pull her closer and she lands on his chest
Sanskar: just shut up swara I want you as my life partner not a machine to produce children. I love you, your soul and I m not marrying you to fulfil my needs get that into your little mind.
He was angry how can even she think like that.
Swara( teary eyes): I m sorry Sanskar even I don’t have any problem with my this lackness what is my mistake if I met with an accident and all this happened.
Sanskar: you are right swara girls have much more other works to do in this world and their life didn’t end if they can’t become mother.
Swara: hmm and I trust you sanskar and I was knowing you will react like this that’s why I thought to tell you after marriage but now ma was adamant that I should tell u know this society.
Sanskar: its okay I can understand and we are enough for each other.
Swara hugged sanskar and he kissed at the top of her head
Sanskar: so madam now go and sleep bcoz tomorrow night also I m not going to let you sleep (winks)
Swara blushes profusely.
Sanskar: wow back to blushing mode I like it.
Swara: good night.
Sanskar: good night and dream about me.
Swara: sure.
Sanskar left from there and swara also informed shomi about sanskar’s reaction she was relief and happy.

Next night:
Swasan got married with all the rituals. Swara is waiting for sanskar in room and door opens and here comes sujata
(Not SanskarπŸ˜›πŸ˜›)
Swara got up seeing her. Sujata came near and said
Sujata: I should not have come at this time but I wanted to talk.
Swara: yes aunty Ji
Sujata: its mom for you and sanskar told me about your accident and all that u no need to worry bcoz I support your thinking and you are my daughter so never hesitate from me.
Swara(hug her): thank you mom
Sujata; no need
They smiles then only sanskar came inside but stopped seeing sujata.
Sujata: okay I should leave
Sujata left and sanskar came inside after closing the door.
Swara was nervously twisting her fingers. Sanskar move forward and she moved back. She keep on stepping back till she strike with wall.
Sanskar block her way and said
Sanskar: now where you will escape.
Swara is blushing profusely.
Sanskar: okay tell me one thing why u always blush after seeing me.
Swara: I don’t know it happens naturally.
She said slowly.
Sanskar:awww so sweet.
He kissed her both cheeks and then her lips.
Finally they become two bodies with one soul and completely become of each other.

After 2 years:
Life was no less than heaven for swasan being with each other. They were happy and satisfied with each other. Sujata is also happy to see swasan together. Swara is running one orphanage as she wants to help the children who are in need.
Evening
Sanskar came to orphanage to take swara. Whole day swara spend with kids and at night there are staff members who take care of children.
Sanskar met the children and then went to swara
Sanskar: let’s go swara.
Swara(smiles): hmm
Swasan were about to leave when a nurse came inside with a small baby in her hand.
Nurse: excuse me I want to meet the owner
Swara: yes I m only owner.
Nurse: actually I want to leave this baby here.
Swasan looked at the baby who is sleeping peacefully.
Swara: where are baby”s parents??
Nurse: they died in accident today she was in cradle so got saved now she have no one.She is just of three weeks
Swara: so sad that’s she lost her parents at this tender age.
Nurse: so keep her here plz
Swara: sure
Swara took the baby in his hand.
Sanskar: plz you fulfil the formalities at the counter
Nurse: okay.
Nurse left from there.
Swara: she is so cute sanskar.
Sanskar: yes like you.
Swara: I think we should take her home Sanskar: even I was going to say that only she is so small to leave here.
Swara smiles and try both left from there.

Maheshwari House:
SwaSan Room:
Swara and sanskar are sitting on the either side of the bady and she is lying in between. They are playing with her and she is giggling. She is so small to understand that they are her real parents. Sujata entered inside with milk bottle.
Sujata: swara feed her milk she must be hungry.
Swara: yes mom
Sanskar made baby lie in Swara’s lap and she feed her milk.
Swara: sanskar I was thinking that..
She was hesitant to say when sanskar said
Sanskar: we are going to adopt her.
Swara and sujata: really???
Sanskar: God has send her for us only swara its just his way is different.
Swara: yes she is our baby now.
Sujata: ohh god let me bring sweets.
Sujata ran out of the room excitedly.
Sanskar: see her cheeks are also pink like you. she is born blushing beauty.
Swara(blushes): Sanskar.
Later, sanskar picked the baby and said
Sanskar: okay angel now you are my little blushing beauty like your mamma.
Swara smiles and hug him.
Sanskar kissed Baby’s cheeks and swara’s forehead.
After the legal procedure ,swasan adopted the little Angel.

” True Love doesn’t need words or physical contact to express the feelings”
” Don’t make your lackness as you weakness”

The End

Phewww!!!! Done with this.
Now share you views about this os. Healthy criticism is welcome but no bashing plzzz
Thank you
Bye
Take care

77 Comments
  1. Nice. Plz post MDBCM next part plzzzzz. I am waiting from many days.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post MDBCM soon I’m sorry for the delay tc😊😊😊

  2. Independent

    Superb dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dii tc😊😊😊

  3. Its awesome nd vry nice concept……

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  4. Bush1122

    Oh wow… it was awesome….πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    Blushing Beauty…..😁 Their love starts in blushing… superb…. loved it…πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Just loved the answer Sanskar told Swara about being parents… Nice…πŸ˜€
    A beautiful OS

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc glad u liked it tc😊😊😊

  5. nyc thoughts you presented dear in simple but amazing way

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  6. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  7. Wow what a cute cute cute and a lovely os dr loved it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊😘😘😘

  8. I love ur ff….keep writing..with lots of love…

    1. Mars

      Aww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊😘😘

  9. awesome os dr

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  10. NDSG

    Sooooooooooooo beautiful…. Blushing beautyπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ .
    I loved their unique way of love… Without talking they fell for each other… This is Γ§alled true love😊😊😊😊😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍
    😊😊😊😊😊😊 .
    And the last thing being knowing her reality he didn’t left her… Because most of people thinks girl baby producing machine 😭😭😭😭😭 hate such type of people😀😀😀😠.

    At last they adopted another blushing beautyπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‡

    1. Mars

      Yuppp me tooo hate those people who blame girls for not becoming mother😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 cheap mentality
      Yupppp God gifted them with another blushing beauty😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Thank you so much depuuu dear tc😊😊😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      1. Thank to u mars for bringing such a beautiful story.

    2. Mars

      Its all my pleasure depuu dear 😘😘😘

  11. Abirsha

    Awesome dr. Loved it.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dii tc😊😊😊

  12. Awesome os….blushing beauty and smiling hunk 😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Loved it… It was beautiful with a message also lying in it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you loved it tc😊😊😊😊

  13. Superb dearr

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  14. Hey Marsuu…loved it it was just awesome….
    I waiting since long for ur os….😊😊

    1. Mars

      Hopefully will keep writing πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thanks😊😊😘😘

  15. Awesome dear I loved it bb

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear glad u loved it tc😊😊😊😊

  16. Tamil

    It’s amazing dear so Beautiful😍😍😍 loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you loved it tc😊😊😊

  17. Hi Marsuuu….loved it dear
    I was waiting for your lovely os from long…keep writing n tcπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    1. Mars

      Aww you were waiting that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  18. Awwwwww… such a cute os.. 😍😍😍.. Swara was sooo adorable in it being all cute and pink every time she asmuch as just looked at him.. ❀️❀️❀️.. But this one was too much.. she was superrrr sweet.. And how can Sanskaar not fall for our cute and sweet blushing Swara.. πŸ’•πŸ’•.. He finally fell in love with her and proposed her.. What a love story.. 😍😍😘😘.. Beyond beautiful.. And finally Swara’s trust on Sanskaar that his love will not fall weak even after knowing that she can never be a mother.. Awwwww… Loveeee them so much.. They are so made for each other.. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–.. But god finally blessed them with a child.. 😘😘.. who was a blushing beauty as well.. Awwwww… Loveddddd it.. Amazing concept and beautifully written story for us.. Thankkkkk you.. 😘😘😘

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear I m really happy you loved it yuppp swara is sweetheart and sanskar is lovable 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 thanks dear
      Take care😘😘😘😘😊😊😊

  19. Awesome yr as always..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘😘

  20. awesome shot

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊😘

  21. AnuAnn

    It was sooo lovely marssu… My swasan😍😍😍😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much anuu dear tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  22. Marvellous

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  23. Samaira_khan

    Hello marsuu dear omg this is so amazingggg I mean swara was so cute.. And our hero proud of him lobed how u portrayed his character Sanskar is the best! Everyone is not so lucky getting a life partner like him.. Aww swara was really very cute.. Bb of sanskar😍😍 everything was spook perfect.. It was cute as well as u gave a gud msg.. Everything was perfect loveddd it!

    1. Mars

      Yuppp Swara is a cutiepie😍😍😍 and me tooo proud of sanskar the way he took the decision but you are right all don’t get such husband that’s why sanskar is special for swaraπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Thank you so much dear glad you loved it tc😘😘😊😊😊😊

  24. Amazing dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  25. Superb as always

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  26. Japnaaz_gill

    super se bhi uper…ripu dear u always write wonderful stories..always treat to read any story written by u…. πŸ™‚

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much diii glad you liked it tc😊😊😊😘😘😘

  27. post little kitten soon

    1. Mars

      My little kitten will be posted today thanks😊😊

  28. Hiii marsu.
    Too good dear..

    1. Mars

      Hey dear thank you so much tc😊😊😘😘

  29. I m soo soo proud of u.. Like Thank u soo much.. Coz u write on swasan….. There’s so much to learn from this…
    See in reality there are some boys who accept the girls of this type… Bt most don’t….
    Bt this truly gives a message… N I m soo thankful to this… To u specially….
    Thank u soo much Marsuuuu❀❀
    U may think I m fine mad.. Bt no seriously I like people when they take stand on serious topics… 😘😘😘😘 this was amazing.. The story line.. Everything ❀❀❀❀
    I love u soo soo soo much darling…. 😘

    1. Mars

      Awwww that’s so sweet of you vidhuuu dear I’m so happy after reading your comment😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 yeah all boys are not like Sanskar some really have cheap mentality😈😈😈
      Thank you so much for loving it😍😍😍
      Love you toooooooo😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Take care😊😊😊

  30. Super awesome 😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  31. Super cute and lovely os with a powerful msg..
    Loved it❀❀
    Tc😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you loved it tc😊😊😘😘

  32. Harneet

    LOVELY …… IT WAS REALLY NICE AND COULD IMAGINE A SWEET LITTLE SHY SWARA ,,, BLUSHING … OMG ME TOO BLUSHING NOW ..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you liked tc😊😊😊

  33. Amazing…..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  34. Loved it dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😊

  35. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  36. Omg what a story and the message u have given is also awsome …loved the way sanskar and sujata acted knowing the truth πŸ’–
    Take care 😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc😊😊😘😘

  37. Vyshu10

    sweet OS…superb

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  38. Gayathri.visu

    Wow yaar…..wonderful concept for our Swasan! Fabulous os dear…..loved it from the core of my heart!!

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