BLIND LOVE

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I am really sorry for not updating man mayal guys as I was confused about one thing in the story but thanks to maya the confusion was cleared (thank you). The other reason is that my exams are nearing. I will update it but if I am not able to then It be updated in march. I am so sorry for the inconvenience .

This is actually an essay I wrote. I am just changing the characters coz when I got this topic the idea of it was over whelming. One shot here we go
A man is shown exiting his SUV. He looked very handsome and dashing in his white hoodie and blue jeans. He took of his coolers and saw a girl playing cricket with children. the was batting. She was getting ready to play the next ball. A boy shouted “ come on sis on a six is needed to win’. The bowler took his position. The girl said “ chalo abhi how long will u take come on”. The boy was standing at the back of the bowler. He pointed towards himself and said me. Pragya haan why are u afraid. The boy and the bowler both started to move simultaneously. As the bowler bowled the girl hit it hard.

A few minutes later
The boy was lying on the floor half conscious in the girls lap.
Lets see what happened

Boy’s POV
I stepped out of the car to see an angel playing cricket. Literally she was sooo beautiful. Wow. I just fell for her at that moment. Ahh they say it na … love at first sight. Well I heard her shout no shout would be rude but call out in her sweet voice “come on abhi” and I was like is she calling me so I just like indicated me and she just nodded and said that why are u afraid to come. So I just started to walk towards her and the next moment black out
Girls POV
I shouted at abhimanyu aka Abhi to bowl. I hit the bowland it hit a man walking towards us right in the head and he fell down holding his head.(she gave an oh no expression) and rushed to him.i held his head in my lap and asked Abhi the other Abhi to get water. His face looked familiar but I wasn’t able to recognize him. My maa walked out of the house and was astonished to see the scene in front of her
POV end

Pragya , maa I can explain its not what u think and told her what happened. Sarla, Pragya u hit him with a ball stressing on the world him. Pragya , it was a mistake na. Sarla, do u even know who is he? Pragya sat there clueless about that guy in his lap
Pragya: a stranger
S: his is the boy ( stressing on the word boy)
Actually Sarla had fixed pragya’s marriage with a boy an d even shown her the picture to which Pragya had agreed for her maa’s happiness.
P: u mean the boy Pragya with a worried and oops expression
S: yes the boy now all of u children help di to bring him inside
Abhi who was half conscious and heard the maa beti conversation couldn’t help but smile to pragya’s cute antics
They took him inside and sprinkled water on his face. Abhi gained his conscious
A: Namaste maa and touched her feet
S: Namaste beta
And tried to get up
A; where is Pragya my to be wife
Sarla was astonished and asked : how do u know
A: I saw her picture …………….. after a pause actually when daidi was aying this I wasn’t paying any attention the fact that I heard your conversation whit your daughter so only . I don’t like to lie to my maa
Sarla who was quite impressed by his truthfulness just hugged him
Abhi broke the hug and again asked about Pragya.
She is in her room. Upstairs towards the left. Abhi left towards the room as he was walking upstairs pragya walked out of the room dressed in white and red( just like in the show)
Both of them were not looking upwards as Abhi was busy in a call and Pragya was adjusting her duppata and both collided with each other and Pragya fell into Abhi’s embrace
Both shared an eye lock (allah wariyaan played) which was broken by Pragya
P: let me go
Abhi let her go and she fell down. Abhi who wasn’t in his sense came back to them when Pragya shouted OUCH
A: what happened
P: I didn’t mean that
A: what

Pragya told him what happened and Abhi felt embarrsed as hew had not been in his senses and let her fall down. He wanted to be in her good booksbut to his dismay he had talen the very step wrong.
P: abb othao gay yaa asaiy hi kharey raho gay(now will u help me get up)
Abhi who was lost in his thoughts came back to his senses and helped her up
They came into the hall and sat down. Pragya who was a little shy kept on fidgeting with her duppata where as Abhi kept on ogling at her.
P: so we are getiing engaged tomorrow
A: yes we are here and gave her a rose
P: thank u
A: what are your like
P: flowers music and reading. yours
A:well music is my passion. I like working out oo
P: oh I see
Hours went by and they kept on laughing and talking.
A: now I should be going dadi must be waiting then we shall meet tomorrow
P: on our engagement ( blushing)
A: yes bye
P: bye
A: see ya later
Abhi reached his car but then again came to the door
P: what happened did u forget something
Abhi rubbing his head: wo actually I don’t have your number
Pragya smiled: u want my number u can say that simply here
Both exchanged their numbers
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A month passed
Both of them were now married,. Pragya took care of Abhi and all his family members. Both were the best of friends but still had a little awkwardness between them. They loved each other but hadn’t expressed it.
Abhi’s POV
I have to propose her
Pragya’s POV
I have to propose him but how
At that moment dadi called to her room
A: yes dadi
P: g dadi
D: I have booked 2 tickets to Switzerland for your honeymoon so get ready your flight is a day after tomorrow
Abhi thinking so only me and her yes I can propose her there
The same was going on in pragya’s mind
Both of them nodded and started to pack their bags . the next day they left for their flight and reached Switzerland. They reached the resort and got to their room. The suite was well decorated and and on the door was written inside a heart happily married couple abhigya
Both of them then started to plan for the proposal.
A: Pragya lets roam around as we are tourists
Pragya who was reading a book threw it and jumped from the bed and checked his head and asked are u my abhishekh or an intruder.
Abhi who was irked by this but realized what she said now decided to tease her
A: I am the same but what do u mean by MY abhishekh
Pragya who too realized the fact just blushed and left to the changing room here Abhi was smiling and he to decided to change
Both of them got in a jeep and started their tour
They were travelling the scenery of mountains covered by a white sheet. Pragya started to sing to express her feelings indirectly
haan Hai Koi to wajah
To jeena ka maza yun aane laga

Yeh hawaon mein hai kya
Thoda sa jo naasha yun chane laga
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri raahon mein aakar Pucho na pucha na
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri bahon mein aakar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Todi mene sare hi bandhan zamane Tere
Todongi na mein vada
Aadha hissa mere to dil ki kahani ka tu
Piya Mein baaki aadha

Dekho na dekho mujhe hua hai
Teri yaadhon mein kho kar

Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri baton mein jeekar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Mere jaise lakho mile honge
Tujhko piya
Mujhe to mila tuu hi

Tu hi mere hooton ki khilti hui se hasi
Gila bhi piya tu hi

Dekho na dekho mujhe kya hua hai
Tujhe sapno mein lakar dekho na dekho

Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri baaton mein aakar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

haan Hai Koi to wajah
To jeena ka maza yun aane laga

Yeh hawaon mein hai kya
Thoda sa jo naasha yun chane laga
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri raahon mein aakar Pucho na pucha na
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri bahon mein aakar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
He the while Abhi kept on admiring Pragya
After that both of them went back to the resort
Abhi and Pragya texted each other to come to the beach
On the beach their was a decorated area with loads of pictures of abhigya
Both of them arrived and were astonished to see the sight
A: I want to tell u something very important
P: me too
A: u tell
P: no first u
A: ladies first
P: like u are the biggest gentleman huh bol par
A: why not go together
P: good idea
Both of them turned around closed their eyes took a deep breath. Simultaneously both of them turned around bent down and held each others hand. Their eyes still closed.
Both of them opened their eyes
(female sanam re plays)
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karu
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karu

Khudko main yu kho du
Ke fir na kabhi paau
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawale karu

Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Karam re karam re
Tera mujhpe karam huaa re
Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam huaa re
A: from the day I saw u for the first time miss Pragya I fell for your beauty and your nature I ……………. I love u
P: mr Abhi u were the one who brought light into my life u were the one who cared about me and I …… I too love u
Both of them hugged each other
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It was holi abhigya were going to perform. The song played and both of them got on the floor
O uh ho o o ho..
O uh ho o o ho..

Dil ka dimaag se
Jhagda lagaaya kise
Peechhe ke darwaaze se ae..
Dabe paanv aaya kaise
Thoda sa kameena
Thoda bechara hai
Ishq bhoot sahi par yeh
Bhoot bada hi pyaara hai

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O….

Dekho leke aaya hai
Pocket mein sharaaratein
Tere jaisi hai zara aa
Iski bhi aadatein
Upar se garam hai
Andar se naram hai
Thoda shareef bhi hai thoda
Thoda sa besharam hai
hai hai…

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Uffo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O….

Hairat ko bhi hairaaniyaan hone lagi
Ab hosh mein nadaaniyan hone lagi
Baithe hain dil ek dillagi pe haar ke
Mehangi badi manmaaniyan hone lagi

Yaari ke bahaane kandha sehlaata hai
Phir mauka milte hi ye par phailata hai
Haathon ke paar hi iska ishara hai
Ishq bhoot sahi par ye bhoot bada hi pyara hai
Aye ae ae..

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O Uf oh.. Uf ho.. Uffo…….

The song ended and both of them were happily talking with each other.
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2 years passed
Pragya had now started to develop a skin disesase which was taking away her beauty every single day. She was afraid that Abhi might not like the look of her.
In those days Abhi received an assignment and had to leave to pune.
On his way back he got into an accident due to which he lost his sight
The skin disease of Pragya took away all her beauty but Abhi who couldn’t see kept on loving her the way he used to. Pragya too cared about his needs.

Tere liye khudko badal de
Tere liye kuch bhi kar de
Vaada hai tujhse mera
Ab sada ke liye
Pragya tried to feed Abhi soup too which he agreed whole heartdly.

Tere liye saansein le rahe
Tere liye har din jee rahe
Tu hai mera, main hoon tera
Ab sada ke liye

Khud pe koi haq raha na humara
Tere liye hum hain jiye
Phir ab na hoga ye ishq dobara
Tere liye hum hain jiye

Tu hai mera main hoon tera sahara
Tere liye hum hain jiye, wo..
Marke bhi de dunga ye kaffara
Tere liye hum hain jiye
O.. tere liye hum hain jiye

Jism ka nahi tera mera rishta
Roohon ka ye rishta hai
Koi dekhe jab soorat meri
Toh dikhe tera chehra hai

Tu panaah meri, main saaya tera
Tu makaan mera, main basera tera
Tu manzil meri, main musafir tera
Tujhpe hi main aake ruka

Khud pe koi haq raha na humara
Tere liye hum hain jiye
Phir ab na hoga ye ishq dobara
Tere liye hum hain jiye

Tu hai mera main hoon tera sahara
Tere liye hum hain jiye, wo..
Marke bhi de dunga ye kaffara
Tere liye hum hain jiye

Ik din ye umr dhal jaayegi
Zindagi poori ho jaayegi
Tab bhi tu rehna paas yun mera
Jab dil ki dhadkan tham jaayegi

Teri baahon mein dum
Nikle mera sanam
Hai bas ab yehi aakhiri duaa

Khud pe koi haq raha na humara
Tere liye hum hain jiye
Phir ab na hoga ye ishq dobara
Tere liye hum hain jiye

Tu hai mera main hoon tera sahara
Tere liye hum hain jiye, o..
Marke bhi de dunga ye kaffara
Tere liye hum hain jiye
O.. Tere liye hum hain jiye
……………………………………………………………………………………….
It was evening both of them were sitting on a cliff Abhi who was lying in pragya’s lap while she caressed his hair.
A: fuggi how many stars are there in the sky
P: is that even a question u know it cannot be answered
A: fuggi u know na I love u alooot
P: I know and I love you too
A: u know how much
P:how much
A: how many stars are there in the sky uncountable right
P: yes
A: that much
Pragya had tears welled up in her eyes and she just hugged Abhi tightly to which he reciprocated. They kept on living happily.
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Years later
It was raining hard. Every body was standing there with an umbrella while a man who was bowed down towards one grave kept on crying badly.
It was pragya’s funeral. The man who was crying is Abhi. They final rituals were done and Abhi was about to live when a man came to him and said
“ now who will take care of u your wife was there but now who will” said the man.
Abhi just smiled back to him and said that I can take care of myself I was never blind I never lost my sight. I could see every single thing but not my wife’s sadness which she was facing due to the skin disease of losing me so I bribed the doctor to tell everyone that I had lost my sight so that she would never worry about her beauty or have sadness that she is not worthy of me .
The man just said bless u men like u are very less in this world
The story ended with Abhi standing on the same cliff looking towards the sky remembering how Pragya had told him that she would be always looking at him even if after she died.
A: I miss u and love u

THE END

Sometimes it is good for us to act blind and ignore one anothers short comings in order to be happy
So guys how was this one shot
Please do comment and pray that I get good marks in my exams so I can be back here on regular basis
Stay safe and until next time we meet
bye

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37 Comments
  1. Simply super dear….. Last of abhi words is heart touched dear…. Super….

    1. Prabhi

      thank u sugan

  2. Aditiroy

    It was just amazing…I got tears filled my eyes..really yaar…hands off to you…just word less….super…

    1. Prabhi

      thank u aditi
      love u

  3. Reshma_Pradeep

    Its Goodddddd!!!!!!!!! Best of Luck for ur Exams……….

    1. Prabhi

      Thanks reshu

  4. I was about to cry nice one

    1. Prabhi

      Thank u even I was

  5. B.k.maha

    Superrrrrrrrrrr…….

    1. Prabhi

      Thank u maha

  6. Nithyashreeraman

    Nice shot di and all the beat for ur exams,do well

    1. Prabhi

      Thank I for your sweet wish

  7. Omg.I can’t expected the story end…supr.very emotional….

    1. Prabhi

      In college when I got the base plot which was the moral even I didn’t expect myself to end it like this

  8. Sowji

    Nice story…all the best for your exam…do well…

    1. Prabhi

      Thank u sowji update yours soon

  9. nice n super yaaaaaaaa

    1. Prabhi

      Hey thank u and what’s your name coz I can’t call u di

  10. Prathi

    Superb dear ??

    1. Prabhi

      Prabhi thanks dear but where are u oh I remember u told but still miss your ff

  11. Nice story without villains…. bit last part is very emotional dear…really made me cry….keep writing like this….prepared well and score well… I ll pray for you… please come back after your exams…. waiting for your ff….take care…. bye dear….

    1. Prabhi

      Thanks will,try to update it

  12. sweetness it was sooo awesome dear I really like it sweetheart keep going

    1. Prabhi

      Thank u Lopez u comment every single ff i see thank u for the support

  13. Superb dear…

    1. Prabhi

      Thanks buddy

  14. Maya

    Thanks again? but i never do anything big lol…anyways this os was awesome and very heart touching and no wonder your teacher praised about this!! Very true words especially at the ending and very emotional too…..

    1. Prabhi

      Yaar maya its because of u my confusion was cleared about that ff and that because if u this is came up in my mind to post here thanks
      Be back soon
      Miss u
      Love u???????

  15. i absolutely love this story???…it was sad and sweet…great job dear!

    1. Prabhi

      Thanks Trisha please u post your ff

  16. Nivethaa

    awesome dear!!!! i loved it.. & as u said… i too read it somewhere with diff char..!!! but, i forgot where i read .. if u don’t mind can u tell me where u read it!!! only if u like to.. if not no prbs..!!! u narrated it in such a cute way …. i loved it!!!!!!! & s!! waiting for ur next works!!! do well ur xams!!!! alll the best dear!!!!!!

    1. Prabhi

      I read the basic plot on Facebook then my teacher gave it as an essay so I wrote it with different character
      On Facebook it was a really short paragraph about a wife and husband ‘s relationship and it even suited to our abhigya so only
      Thank u for your comment waiting for your ff that sunshine one (sorry forgot the name) update soon
      Love u

  17. Nivethaa

    than q dear!! well it suits abhigya!! i think u missed to read it.. i had finished tat ma!! only 3 shots.. u r my sunshine in my day & my moon in night!!! try to read it if u get time.!! love uuuuuu!!! dear!!!♥♥♥

  18. Saranya24

    Oh dear recently i read a similar one in watsapp da tat was awesome loved it a lot love u????

  19. wow heart touching story sis pre marriage scenes of abhigya are so cute at last with beautiful meaning to love loved it

    1. All the best for your exams write well sis

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