Birthday special ShraMaNeeti -os

Hii everyone..How are you all ?? Thank you so much for being so u all I am back with another’s birthday special hope you will like!!

Here story begin..

It’s a pleasant winters’s 6 am and sumo is still sleeping…she was not willing to wake up early today…but her mobile interrupt her sleep it started ringing..Suman taking her phone

Suman-Oh God who is calling me so early yaar

Then she noticed it’s not a call it’s reminder

Suman-Oh shit!! How can I forget..

She jump out of bed and start sailing a no.

A lady(on Phn)-Hello Suman beta

Suman-Hello maasi.,how are you??where is choti I have to talk to her..

Lady-I m fine..n choti is in washroom and angry with you..she will not talk to you so easily

Suman-I know..?? it’s my mistake..ok I will call you in ten mins

She disconnected call and went to freshen up,she took bath and again called and this time also maasi picked up the phone

Suman-where is she..I want to talk to her

Lady- Sorry beta..she is not listening anything ..u use some idea to make her happy

She disconnected the call..

Suman gets upset..she sat on her dressing table and while drying her hair she got an idea..she took her phone and start recording..

“I m soooo sorry Neeti i foget to wish you first..lo maine kaan bhi pakad Lia..n this not my mistake it’s all because of your jiju..

Sorry sorry sorry*100 times pls forgive your dii I m calling u pls pick up now”

She sent her a WhatsApp voice msg

This all is heard by Shravan who is still on bed half sleeping half awake..

Shravan-sumo tmne Kya kaha meri wajah se u r late..hmm??

Suman-Arre shr..wo aisa hai ki meri sbse choti or naughty sis mujhse naraz ho gyi hai bcz I forgot to wish her first

Shravan- to tmne apna gunah mere sar daal diya?? Wah wife ho to aisi..kya kya don aa gye h lg mistake Khud Krte hai or blame kisi or ko

Suman-oh my hubby pls try to understand

Shravan- ok chalo ab use call to Karl..

Suman-yes yes I am calling

She called her.. and this time Neeti picked up the call ..Suman put it on speaker

Neeti- dii I will not talk with you..Ap shaadi k bad Badal gyi ho !! Previously you was the only one who wish me first at sharp 12 nd now..ok leave ,where is my jiju I will talk to him only..I know that’s not his mistake…she said naughtily..u think I am fool..u will say anything and I will believe..

Listening this Shravan whispers in Sumans’ ear- what happen ??pakda gyi na!!

Suman-ok ok it’s my mistake I agree

Neeti wish you a many many happy return of the day dear..Happy birthday (both Shravan n Suman together said that)

Neeti-Aww thank you juju..

Suman(making puppy face)- hmmm y u didn’t forgive me..

Neeti-Thank you dii..but it itne asani se maaf nhi karungi…u both have to come at my birthday party

Suman-what??? Ab Bangladesh Kaise aao mai itne jaldi..

Neeti-diii.. I m in Delhi

Suman- when did u came u didn’t informed me also??

Neeti-Apko jiju se fursat mile tb na mai apko kuch batao..

Shravan- ok done..we r coming..kisi Or ko bhi invite krna hai??

Neeti-yup!! Preekar ko

Shravan-my saali your chote jiju name is Pushkar not preekar

Neeti-oh my Buddhu jiju!! I know that.. Preekar means Preeti and Pushkar

Shravan-ok we all 4 will come.. bye take care

Neeti-U too..byee

Now it’s evening..Suman is calling Shravan ..but his phone is out of reach meanwhile she is getting Neeti’s call to come soon..

Preeti-Di..ap hamare saath chalo we r getting late..Shravan will come..don’t worry!!

Suman-just wait for 5 mins..may b he is on the way..

After 5 mins..

Pushkar- sumo we r already late..and I don’t know when Bhaiya will’s better we should leave now

This time sumo agreed..

They reached Neeti’s place..Neeti welcomed them..they wished her..

Neeti- Guys where is Shravan jiju..I thought he is parking car so he is getting late but itna der??? Where is he

Suman-wo actually..

Just then Shravan came

Shravan- Hii guys..I’m here,sorry I’m little late

He gave gift to Neeti

Shravan-?? This is for my beautiful saali ,Happy Birthday Saali Sahiba

Neeti-Thank u my late lateef jiju

Suman was not talking to Shravan

Shravan-kya his

Suman-kaha the abhi tk

Shravan-wo actually Urvashi..

Suman interrupts in between

So you was with her I see

Shravan-oh sumo listen to me once yaar

Without listening anything sumo left from there

Shravan to Neeti

Shravan-wo mai ghr hi ja rha tha ki Urvashi came in front of my car ..she got hurt so I took her to hospital that’s y I got late.. now what shall I do sumo is not listening to me

Neeti-jiju she is my dii..asaani se NIH something special

Shravan think for a while n then..

Light fall on a person who is on stage ready to dance

Yes that guy is Shravan


Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya

While dancing he glares at Suman

Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat

Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat…

Sumo ignored him

Shravan to Neeti- yaar Teri di manegi nhi kya

Neeti-Arre thoda or mehnat kro juju

Shravan- ok I will try

Shravan again went to stage


Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil

[Listening this song all couples went on stage,Neeti went to sumo and ask her to join jiju but she doesn’t agreed]
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

(Shravan again forwarded his hand toward sumo and hold his ears too but of no use )

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se huey juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane

Teri meri, meri teri Prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

(Guys song was playing and Shravan Suman tashan was going on in between)

After this song also Shravan was not able to cheer up sumo..seeing Shravan sad Neeti too become upset and this was noticed by sumo..

So she decided to over this and now she is on stage


Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

(Shravan was going out,just then he turn back and saw sumo on stage)

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

(And now Shravan also join her on stage..he put her hand on her shoulder and his hand on waist and they continue dance)

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

(They were totally lost in each other’s eyes..that they don’t even noticed that they r In front of everyone there eye locks broke with audience ???)

They came down of stage

Neeti-wow jiju..u r amazing!! Pane to mere party ki shaan badha di..

Suman-oye mai bhi dance ki tere jiju k saath..Meri bhi to tareef kro kuch…

Neeti-sorry I will not..


Neeti-aapne ek hi dance kiya n jiju 3 you know three..????

Suman-ok ok tu or tere jiju jeete mai hari

Preeti-oh baten ho gyi ho to chale cake cut kr le??

Pushkar-arre mujhe to boht zoro ki bhook lgi h..lets go n cut the cake n do some pet(stomach) Pooja!!

Neeti-ha ku nhi mere bhukkar juju..lets go

[Neeti cut the cake , she feed cake to everyone,, they do some masti by applying cream on each other’s face nd now it’s time for ShraMan and PreeKar to leave]

Preeti, Suman, Pushkar,Shravan all hugged her

Neeti-Thanks all of u..u made my day sooooo u all

They bid byee

-The end-

Guys I don’t know what happened to my os..half published n half in air Sorry for that.. Sorry for wasting your time on that.. And I don’t know now it will publish on 1nov or 2nd so sorry Neetu

This os is specially for our birthday girl Neeti..hope u will like it.. and sorry for grammatical and spelling i m very weak in English..

Happy Birthday dear..stay blessed..may all your wishes come true..

Luv u

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  1. RANdomfANCreationz

    Wow Alina it’s ???
    Haha Kya birthday hain neeti ka

    1. Alina

      Thanks jo..happy to see you back

    1. Alina

      Thanks fati

    2. Alina

      Thanks fati..

    3. Alina

      Fati.. U know Nov me boht ja birthday hai..starting from Neeti then srk..then virat kohl.. Then my n your besties then Nikki mam’s and one more IDK the date but in same month my one tu friend Irena??

  2. Ufaaq

    nice one alina liked it
    i hope u know me
    last wala b acha tha sorry comment nae kia
    that was ammmazing
    and ya welcome

    1. Alina

      Thanks both friends (ufati) commented one after other.. Nice coincidence..n ya I know you by name only..would you like to share something and u.. In which class u r..from where u r??
      And no sorry yaar..

      1. Ufaaq

        i m from pakistan
        my age is 16 and i m in 11th standard
        and u?????

    2. Alina

      I m from India..turning 19 on 10th of Nov..and doing bsc (1st year)??

      1. Fatimagulesarfraz

        Woah !!!! What a coincidence Alina my besties bday is also on 10 Nov ???

  3. Prettypreeti

    Aluuuu sooooo sweeettttt offfff uuu .phirse likh fiya.soo good.u r really sweet like this os.
    My ALU too good from heart and from hand.
    Loved it.
    Love u

    1. Alina

      Thanks preeti.. N let me tell u one thing me Alu dii I m elder than you..ok??
      I m telling this bcoz I saw somewhere u wrote kittu dii And she is younger than me so you are also younger than me??

      1. Prettypreeti

        I know but alu is cuteeeee sooo sorryyyy

    2. Alina

      OK…preeto No!

      1. Alina

        Not no typing mistake Np!

  4. This was so cute. Loved it so much. ?

    1. Alina

      Thanks zainu

  5. Ariana

    Alllluuuuuu sry! I’m commenting after a year I guess
    I’ll just get into the shot than talking abt my busy life
    It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet
    I bet Neetu would hve bn jmpin on her bed reading it
    make mooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeee shotssssss coz u r amazing writer
    can’t type more, I need to catch up with my studies
    anyways bye sweetheart. I’ll chat with u on twitter when free
    love u

    1. Alina

      No problem dear..u know when u all comment on my post I feel like I have done injustice with u all..I read your ff love friendship or something more but haven’t commented sirf Maza le liya sorry ?? uk I want to read your new ff but my father is too much he can’t see me holding mobile in my I generally read shots it takes less time na?? But I will try to read

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