Billionaire Banker and The Chirpy Beauty (NeSam-DT2) Chapter 8 Contd.

Chapter-8 (Neil)

Neil’s head buzzed with the memory. It circled his mind immediately in the black fog of the past. Bile rose to his throat still thinking of the crash. Feeling it hit his blood and skin. Feeling the stench of burning flesh. Feeling the metallic taste of blood in his mouth. Feeling her burn alive infront of his eyes.

He remembered it. He felt it enter into his veins like in a bitter flow. He felt loath pump his blood and soul. It stayed in his gut in a ball of poison. He wiped his burning eyes with the back of his hand. He shook his head and his body started tremoring and sweating profusely feeling everything of that incident.

He walked fast out of the apartment, ripped open the door of the car and got inside it. He drove it around recklessly onto the highway.

He drove mindlessly fast and his eyes searched frantic for some dark corner. He ended finally into a small dingy looking pub.

His breaths came out in hard pants as he reached the drinks counter and sat on the bar stool.

The bartender came around and slid his gaze all over the man who looked every way frustrated and dishevelled.

He looked across expectantly at the first customer who seem to stay all night long.

“Wisky.” He barked.

Neil looked around and his eyes narrowed as the man put out a glass on the counter.

“The whole bottle.” He bit out.

The bartender looked surprised but he nodded his nonetheless after a second. Neil could have gone to his own lavish pub but he would be a boar and spur brawls in this state, which he didn’t want to make an impression of a nasty boss around his own place. That would be shameful.

He drank through the bottle and felt the whisky burn it’s fiery path down his throat. He hissed with the affect of it as it burned his eyes and rang his ears through the long pull he took, but it did nothing to numb the memory.

Slowly slowly the pub buzzed with people. A group of giggling twenty somethings were giving clear inviting smiles, fluttering of long eye lashes and pushed out ample chests. He could very well take one. Forget himself in a one night stand, but the idea and it’s novelty for physical pleasure lost completely and lay fizzled when he remembered a pair of ghostly big hazel brown eyes. They kept staring deep into his dark soul beseechingly. He cursed heavily trying to shake off the look but it stayed in the back of his mind swirling images and moments of her ardent affection. It called onto his senses. Her eyes. Manipulating their way into the deepest darkest secrets of his mind and perhaps his heart. The heart which lay in black abyss for a long time. The eyes struggled to stray into the purgatory of the sins he committed.

He hated her for that. He hated the demure false smiles. He had only disgust for the likes of her. Stringing men around her little finger with the way of those looks she gave them. And then freezing them out. Playing a tease. He didn’t come to terms when his perception changed of her. It was different all of a sudden when she came and stayed in his apartment. The vulnerability and softness of features painted a complete tranformation in his eyes. He couldn’t understant it. Damn her for making him mad with desire too. He turned loathful thinking of it. Becoming one of her desperately clingy men. Now she played him same. She had the dare to manipulate his mind. Now she was going to pay for it.

He drank till he was tottering on his feet but not until he lost his senses. In the clumsiness of it he dropped his wallet.

He slid down to the floor searching for the lost things.

One of the waiters came running to help.

The guy gathered everything from the floor and gave it to him, but Neil’s hand searched more. His vision though was subsiding and he was finding it difficult to focus his eyes on the blurring floor.

“Have you lost something, Sir?” The waiter asked after a while.

Neil’s eyes fastened suddenly on a gleaming golden object that sparkled and shined on the floor. His trembling hand caught it string and his eyes sharpened on the pendent.

Memories surged up immediate and with it, her face endearingly beautiful filled his greedy eyes. Everything came up in a surge. Her eyes sparkly alive, her cheeks filled with embarrassed crimson when he murmured things in her ears, her lips gorgeously luscious, her whole face heating up when his gaze lingered lazily warm on her porcelain glistening skin. It wasn’t all false. She cannot fake clumsiness. She cannot be any less awkward in movements whenever his focus sharpened on her form. She wasn’t confident of her body. The movement to cover herself in self consciouness from his penetrating eyes did nothing but rouse him more. She should know it very well of what it did to his self control. It snapped whenever she tried to hide her delicious curves from his eyes. More than that, the way she tried cover up her love for him.

God, how can he think she played such a dirty game. He knew she was good and honest. That stubborn nature of hers. To make things right. It put a question mark in his mind. What drove her to hurt him? There was something she did try to hide since she woke in the morning and disappeared from his arms. He remembered the gleam in Suha’s eyes. A smug triumph coloring her features when Sam drew away when he got closer.

Realization slammed his mind like a thunder lightening. His jaw grinded hard.

So, she traded him, didn’t she. Traded him like some kind of thing to make her sister stay, the witch. Deep black furious anger spurred his arms to clench. His fingers itched to rattle her body hard. Until her teeth knocked off. Until sense returned in her small brain. Until she realized something. That she was his. That she belonged to him mind, body and soul. He was going to make sure now. To get that across her good and finally. He was going to punish her for this. Punish her bad for falsely making him fall in a trap of a deceit. Making him think that she had only hate. He hesitated first because she wasn’t ready for him. Now, he ruthlessly and forcefully wanted everything from her. Everything of what was rightfully his. Be damned if she was going to think he was brutal and heartless.

His eyes feasted greedily over the chain and the pendant. The glide of his gaze became soft. Anger ebbed away remembering her anxious touch. So hesistant and untrusting like a dove. Her love for him was the same. Frightened and confused.

Something ruffled in the space of his chest. A deep sweet pain. His eyes widened and his breath caught in his lungs.

God, he loved her. He always did. Even when he hated her in the past, he had loved her. He loved her with a compelling obsession. With such deep intensity that it shook his entire body realizing it now. It set fire to every cell of his body. He couldn’t think sane while she was near. He couldn’t do anything but think of her possessively while she wasn’t close. She was the very breath he took in and was the very breath that would leave last from his body. She became his when he first laid eyes on her. The demure mousy looking fifteen year blushing girl. He was ashamed to have designs on her then so young. But it wasn’t just the burning physical attraction. It was everything beyond. For f**k’s sake, she even made him poetic. It was witchcraft. She put a drugging spell on his mind and wound him around her little finger completely.

Neil’s jaw hardened. He wasn’t going to let her know that he loved her. He wasn’t going to go through the painful vulnerability again and trust her. She hurt him bad this time and he wasn’t going to let it go that easily. It would take time to forgive her. Meanwhile, she had hell lot to pay for it.

He fingers curled around the chain.

“Sir, have you lost something?” The insistent waiter asked again.

Neil got up taking in a shaken breath.

“It’s not something. It’s everything that I had lost.” He murmured huskily, as his eyes watered a little.

He gritted his teeth and slid the chain around his neck. He fastened the hooks firm and let the cool touch of the pendant sit firm on his upper chest.

“And now, I’m going to get it all back.” He said through clenched teeth hoarsely.

The waiter gave him a bewildered nod and moved back to the bar.

Neil’s hazy mind cleared a little and he walked out of the pub slowly. A complete peace surronded his mind and lightened his heart. Little specks of snow fell all around from the dark sky.

Neil took a deep breath in and closed his eyes. He spread his hands wide and a sudden cool breeze circled his body. He let it inside his lungs. It gushed fast into his veins and spread warmth all around his blood.

He let love come to him and drench his parched soul completely. From the thick white fog, her face appeared slowly. A slow shy smile spread her lips wide as she looked across at him demurely. Neil smiled too. God, she was so pure and beautiful even in his mind. He could keep on looking at her and never get satisfied completely of the thirst he had for her.

He opened his eyes and a new set of determination hardened his jaw more. He walked upto his car and got inside. The drove around listlessly and finally had the will to tread home. He parked the car outside his apartment driveway. He strided up the stairs and got inside hall.

He was about to walk upstairs but a firm hold of a warm hand on his right shoulder froze him to the floor.

He turned around slowly and came face to face with Suha. She drew closer to his body instantly and Neil’s body drew tight.

She was a perfect match to his height. Her cool grey eyes collided with his. In fact she was every way he would go for a woman. She was slim and was rather pretty. Even can be described gorgeous if considered the oval shaped face, thick black hair, straight even white teeth and dark eyebrows.

“I was waiting for you.” She smiled coyly sweet, fluttering her eyelashes for the complete affect.

She was wearing a peach coloured nighty that barely covered her legs. Both of her hands had bandages. Even then she looked every way healthy.

Her slender hand drew down to his chest. She was looking at him silently expenctant, as if telling him to make a move. Neil stared back flatly.

She frowned and her hand slid over his jaw.

“Don’t look so grim. I will make you forget her….just be with me and see.” She said again in a smoky voice.

Neil waited for something to happen but accept disgust and a cold indifference nothing settled in his gut. He didn’t feel a roar of hunger. He didn’t feel his blood heat up and burn scorching at her proximity. It didn’t rake a feeling to constantly tease and make her nervous and skittish. He didn’t feel like murmuring intimate words in her ears. He didn’t want to keep her holding in his arms always. He didn’t feel the feathery curves hit and crave at his desire. His eyes did not meet a hesistance of an eye contact but a smug boldness. He didn’t meet softness of features but a satisfied gleam of scoring something.

Neil became cold through and through suddenly.

He leaned his head down closer to her face.

“I would if I could.” He murmured softly and saw her face brighten immediately, but he wasn’t done. His lips turned up in a slow sardonic sneer…..”But, wouldn’t it be a shame if it would just be a one sided f**k.” He whispered harshly low.

He smiled coldly and was satisfied to see her face colour and twist an angry red and she stepped back as if burned.

Neil’s eyes turned glints of stone and his anger pulled up extreme but he shook it off for sanity’s sake and walked away in complete shudder of disgust. If at all family was like this then he was better off having none. Except her though, he thought softly.

His feet struck dead near outside her room and he felt a wealth of emotion curl around his heart knowning that she wasn’t there behind the closed door.

He opened the dipalated door and smiled ruefully remembering all their fights about it.

He got inside the room and stood staring around the emptiness. Though the scent of her lingered all over. He sighed heavily and walked towards her wardrobe. He flung it open and only empty space and hangers invited his eyes. A sense of deep sadness drew around his mind and he felt his fists ball in frustrated anger. He couldn’t believe she had left him, but nonetheless he was going to make her so weak and helpless for him that she was going to beg to take her back. A slow brusque smile turned up his lips.

Oh wouldn’t it be fun to bend the self righteous little minx. She would scratch his face and spit in his eye before bending to his will, he thought in wry amusement. His eyes caught a pink something over the shelf. His right hand unconsciously swept over the soft lush material.

Immediately the sweet scent of lilacs and roses attacked his senses and nostrils. He circled the scarf around his hand and moved closer to the bed. He sat down and took a shaky breath in. His empty heart weighed heavily for her. It was becoming difficult to breath suddenly. His eyes misted over willing the bed to make her slumbering form to appear on his side magically. He slid down on his back on the bed holding close the scarf around his upper chest. He didn’t till now that he would miss her presence this painfully.

He wanted to hurt and punish her for making him feel desperate things and at the same time embrace her tight in his arms and pull her deep into his chest. Caress and love every inch of her at the same time again he felt a rising anger and scorn for the man he became. A Vulnerable shadow which left his soul strip and lay bare to her eyes, and he hated and despised her for bringing him to such level of low.

His thoughts turned fierce and his breath evened out and he fell spiralling into a fitful disturbed sleep…..


Next up part- A New Start- A fierce hateful punishing love cannot be denied forever…


Credit to: kfar


  1. Sasha

    Awesome!!!!!!.i like both bt come on its high time that u updt before dawn, it has become more interesting than the rest coz story is stuck, u hvnt updt since months.

  2. roshini

    I like anything you write….I am in love with all your stories. So please dont ask to make a choice

  3. Neha

    Superb!!!!! Really now its getting more interesting day by day at first we saw Neil-Sam love hate story and now it will a revengeful story…..really awesome…desperately waiting for your next update…plzz be fast:-);-)

    • Neha

      Hey. Kfar yaar I m missing ur update today very much…wish u cud have updated as on Saturday I m used to ur stories πŸ™

  4. Shree

    Omg !! Farha thank you so much for updating!! It was perfect…. Finally he realized that he loves her…. From the start.. And that she didn’t hurt him intentionally….. Love in Neil’s style.. Wow

    Don’t make it too harsh and brutal… Get them together sooooonnnn…??

    Every part is perfect.. Both the stories.. Plz update dt1 soon..

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug

  5. nikki

    fantastically great. soo awesome
    i love the track, continue the same one
    i actually like hot and cold Neil
    hope u add some stuff in this as well
    and dude finally Neil realized his love for her
    that’s too awesome
    and ya the best one from dt1 was that Rads had already packed her bags when her father forcefully brought her.
    from dt2 when Sam expresses that she slept with even twinging once jabki she was hurt badly, the whole night(after robbery incident), even though she turns many times in night when she is totally fine.
    it shows how comforting is Neil to her

  6. manha

    oh god really neil’s love is something else. possessive, obssessive, caring, hurting, n totally confused. But for now i’m happy that he know that he loves her. i’m so happy for it.
    u really wrote superbly all his inner turmoil of emotions n thoughts around her. He was angry that he liked her, he loved her, she had traded him. it is amazing. the dialogues were just mindblowing. I didn’t lost anything but everything. oh god superb it was. it was his heart saying that he was lost in her n he loved her. N the next one where our neil, the hero came back ” that he was getting her back”. superb.
    but but but his ways r veryyyyy veryyy dangerous. plzzzz don’t make it more dangerous n everything looped.

    i too love fantasies n fairy tales. It is some way of looking our boring life in a positive way. lol. N i’m happy that i do believe them n wish them to be true. no matter they can be ever true or not. who knows. But heart will be always at peace. so don’t worry i’m with u.

    every bit of dt series is superb. DT1 it is definitely my radz. her behaviour n simple gestures make every scene delightful. N ardhika chemistry hasn’t much explored for now. But i loved some epi first is the night where neil n arjun goes to meet radz n neil calls him romeo n assumes some random stuff abt radz. It was most hillarious one. n then all the scenes after ardhika marriage. they r just awesome.
    DT2 night where neil comes to sam’s room n sleeps there. that was complete fun.Then the fight scene where neil says “i hurt u” to sam. that was so emotional n deep. n now this one where neil knows that he is in love with sam. superb.
    i’m looking forward to see our mad neil’s crazy love. haha.

    plz update DT. longgg time. plzzzz. thank u for making me go back my memory lane. lol.

    loveee u . update soon.

    • manha

      farha song. i don’t hav much knowledge in it but i think TANHAAYI frm DIL CHAHTA HAI ameer song ka song. it may be gud.

  7. Well done kfar ur ff is so standardized and the English language is so good . U also created te magic of Manmarziyan through Nesam πŸ™‚ I did read the other chapters of ur ff but I was a silent reader that time so didn’t comment much

  8. Rg

    Wow farah, u do have magic. Mdt1& dt2 were both gud. Yet my personal favourite this time around is billionaire banker thou am thoroughly an ardhika shipper.. Beautifully and scorchingly written. Or to be truthful whatever u write becomes my favourite for tat day or period until ur new one comes up. U should really think of a career in writing romantic fiction I would b d first one in que to buy ur books. Please continue dt1&dt2 as am an hard core ardhika fan. Also mmz new beginning. Am waiting badly for it. And Also all I want for Christmas is u. Also before dt2 etc. In short all ur stories …. Plz plz don’t stop writing any of ur stories. Continue at will. This is my personal request.plz plz consider…..I loved both ur posting in d comment section and today. Glad Neil saw through Sam and Suha. Can’t wait to c Neil and SAMs cat fights. Thank u for a quick update. It was a passionate and a beautiful one. I loved it. Plz don’t give up writing … Plz update all ur stories….? Take care.

  9. Rg

    Hey Farah last time too twice I asked abt new beginning mmz.. U didn’t tell me anything yaar. U gave tat up.??? Plz yaar don’t give up. Plz continue tat one also Farah??? Plz Farah…Moorthy I knw am pestering u…? Can’t help it am addicted to ur stories…. Pls do let me knw.

  10. I love all chapters of dt1 and dt2 ,all chapters are mind blowing,brethtaking bole to jhakaas ,I like neil arjun radhika sam,I like each and every word which is written by farha

  11. Lakshmi

    Awesome update. Neil was hurt n angry at her but later understood her intentions and also realized his love for her.His answer to suha was superb.
    I love whole DT series .Every bit of this series is fantastic.U r writing fabulously n fantastically all these stories. Plz update dt1 also.
    Love u farha?? ….take care…

  12. Liya

    Hey farah. . . Finaly neil’s heart is out n open. . . Luv u neil. . . Thank u that neil realizd his heart. .,othrwise the witch suha wil exploit his mind. . .

    Due to so many coments, my fon is nt loading lng cmmnt sectn of previous part, so can u pls post dat preview again here. . .or includ dat part in the nxt part of the stry. . . N Belatd though, Happy New Year dr. . . Luv u :-* πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

    pls updt othr sectns of DT series lyk dat f ardhika, shaina, neil. . . Also serene shadow n the christmas stry. . .k. . .pls pls. . . Updt nxt part soon. . . Pls dnt make so much delay. . .pls. . . πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

    To other ff writrs of Manmarziyan . . . Pls updt regularly guys. . . Atleast twice or thrice in a week. . .pls. . . Pls. . . πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  13. unab

    Hi farha I’m a big fan of ur writing but I think I should stop reading from now on bcoz I can’t wait. It’s like daily I’m visiting this page to c whether u hv updated. Sry pls don’t mistake me ya. Try to update it more frequently. Sry if I hv hurt u in any ways. Consider this as a request

  14. aditi

    I really luv or story a lo I am mad abt it will u try to make a off of swaragini just this like nesam and ardhika one story only of swasan and another story only of raglak I am only just asking if u want only k I will not tempting u and plzzzx cmnt will be waiting fr ur next episode plzzz cmnt

  15. aastha

    Its gud….
    Actu I lve every part f DT 1,2….. bt i lve dt1 mre.. …….my fav s te 1 in wich Arjun cmes to rads room after he rescue hr……….plz plz update DT ardhika sooooooon I’m dying to read it……n plzzz unite ardhika siooon..lve u …..❀❀

  16. Dj

    Hi Farah
    Dis chapter of exclusively niel too good it completely covers the whole story from beginning ‘coz it’s been only Sam’s so far.. .. …
    n a new start hereafter is beyond predictable…….waiting…….
    N I like both dt1 & dt 2 amazing n unique

    Keep writing……………..

  17. Krithi

    Loved it Farha… It was beautiful. Happy to know Neil understood that he love sam. Was waiting for the update. And now I am soo very happy…
    And my fav part in DT2 is nesam date in vineyard… It was so beautiful. And I love all their cute fights.. In short I love ur story… Update nxt part so soon… And if possible update it other stories too…. Love all ur stories.. Love you and take care…???

  18. nandhini

    Hi farha this is really smoother update to my heart yes because of that separation. This is totally amazing and nice insult for that dog.I love Neil completely.. He challenged Sam on that day now he dealt damn sure not let her go easily. Yes Neil has to do love torture in sarcastic way make Sam mad and feel guilty to her this plot tremendously .and eager to look forward for much secret disclose. What abt that ex girlfriend death and that dog’s past.can’t wait please do post next soon.
    Everything is well and good but
    I like dt2 more than DT.

  19. Masiii

    Ahahaha Farah i’ll definitely come aur mjee ykeen hai tum nhi mei tmei pkaoun gi ….u cannot imagine how happy i am now finally he Neil realized his love for Sam o m g breathtaking dialogues wen he replied so calmly to tht selfish suha I was on cloud nine hehe n that dialogue with waiter wen he replied tht he is going to get everything n all the things he thought about sam shows his love for her he is so mad ruthless possessive Neil n I love him now he is goin to punish sam ,..waitng for their cute fights I love u soooo much Farah u really made my day if anyone is depressed ….sad …he or she should really read hr stories m lucky to have such a frnd like u bt if u delay updates then I ll bcme like Neil heheehehe …. u know Farah even after I know tht reality is very different from fiction bt u can find peace in it I would love to sit n think about those fairy tales. Stories of prince n princess cz cz u know its bttr to think about them rathe than concentrating on other things which will surely spoil ur mood n u know fiction is really an imp to face reality I think u may not agree bt its like true for me ….n I think every thing u wrote is my favorite part I love all of ur stories bt if u want to know my favorite part then I would say that when Neil kissed Sam n wen he moved his fingers over his lips to tease her I love thy one n wen he slept beside her n the next morning wen he said to her tht she was touching n exploring her body wen he was sleeping n that shop scene their date scene n wen he said tht he hurt her this why he was punishing himself n the boyish smile he gave her in the car n the morning before their date each n every thing I want to write more bt lack of time well in dt1 wht Neil cmmnt about rads n then arjun desperation n again their shopping scene n wen she got to know about arjuns accedent n her reaction n most imp arjuns reaction a..wen he forcefully took her to tht house in short all iv ur stories rrr best n ur other stories too I think I blabbered a lot hehehe love u n a warm tight hug for u

    • Masiii

      Thnku soooo much dear for ur reply before dawn is awsomeeeee completely different I love this part toooi n tmhari update was again supers awesome fantastic brilliant excellent m out ov words ….whoa riddhan too has desperate feelings for Shaina I all ways wonder whts with these guys why they hurt girls Jstt to hide their emotions they r always a mystery n girls always forgive them even they r sorry for it or not bt if a girl hurts them they get mad n they start doing crazy things which Neil is doing ri88 now eheh again u made my day a smile automatically comes to ur fans specially on my face when u update n we get happy I stopped working when I saw tht u updated c u n love u dear gotta go lots ov work is pending n dear waiting for ur next update don’t make it late othrwise u know wht ur fans can do ?????????heheeh

  20. daizy

    Awesome update… always…..and finally I gotta see Neil accepting his love for Sam….I m so happy after Reading this…..but Neil wants to punish her for hurting him….oh my god…plzz don’t make him a serious one….but itz good that at least he realized that she is doing this for some reason…..n this stupid suha….she is so selfish… Plz take her away from Neil n Sam,s life……so much excited to see what you are going to write next….. .AND regarding my favorite episode till now….. Well its difficult for me to mention… Bcoz I love all ur updates till now a lot….and DT is my most favorite one… I m crazy for DT and all DT series….. And will always love your stories for sure…… you too…..
    Plzz update DT…. I m badly waiting for it…..plzz come soon with a long update of DT…..take care…. Keep smiling…..

  21. Kruti

    Farha superb chapter… Neil finally realised he is in love. πŸ™‚

    I love all ur stories Farha., Dt, Dt2, before dwan, aiwfciy, and even the other 3 stories which u had posted earlier were all awesome πŸ™‚
    But I love DT a little more,,, I love the innocent, determined,caring, childish – Radhika and the possessive, protective, ruteless business man attitude of Arjun…I loved their simple fights, their misunderstandings, tr caring/possessive attitude towards each other. Very beautifully presented πŸ™‚
    Dt2 is also amazing… it’s totally different.. sam who is kind of shy, carefree, bubbly, and Neil totally possessive, stubborn, confused, aggressive and totally in love… haha this tooo…
    All your stories hv such strong characters…the dialogues, the situations, the narration …everything is just perfect dear.
    Keep writing.. bcoz YOU ARE AMAZING !!!!! πŸ™‚

  22. Aap kyaa heii faraa….u r more and more mesmerizing us with ur each episodes….whenever i read ur stories I haven’t felt the need of any visuals, the perfect visuals already take place in my mind…that’s absolutely a magic which can only be created by one among thousands or even lakhs…and u r one of that….love uu…..

  23. Mai jab tumhari story read karti hoon tb mere cehare pe muskaan ati h ,agar meri life me kitni bhi problem ho aur mai kitni bhi sad hoon per main tumhari story padh ke muskurane lagti hoon cahe kuch pal ke liye hi sahi aur ek baat please please jada intzaar mat karaya karo kyunki intzaar ka har ek pal bahut bhari lagta h πŸ™‚

  24. Haya

    Happy new-year dear kfar…..
    Was desperately Waiting for your new year gift….Small one but was heart filling….really wanted to know Neil ‘s pov….
    Different concept of love….special one….love without compromise….once got inside can’t leave at all….love that never let go…..
    Please never let us compare your stories….
    All are different…..
    All are kids of one mother right……

    Behaviour and features may differ but a
    all are from one womb….

    Coming to your writing…..
    Mmmm what to say I don’t have vocabulary anymore….
    Want to find something new….

    But I know and recognise Your writing well even with out seeing the credit name…..your writing style is well imprinted in my mind…..actually. What else to say more than this….
    You are ‘The Best’
    Once again happy new-year…..
    May Almighty bless you dear….

  25. anu

    farha dear thanks a lot for updating it. actually I am in my village and network here is too bad . I could connect only now. I am gonna read it now. thanks a lot dear

  26. advaita

    Hey di !! Thank you so much for the post but u really test our patience. ……. u literally make us go through hell……well I guess this was a bit exaggerated. …hehe……..but plzzzz don’t delay this much with the updates….plzzzz .Now coming to the favorite part of DTseries …well to be honest I really really really love every story of urs!! …..but their r some moments which I can’t forget….
    1) ardhika’s first kiss
    2) neil’s crazy comments when he saw radhika painting all alone in the night that too in that horrible place…….that was an epic moment ……..when he said that radhika is a witch …and is gonna eat them and all that nonsense. ….it was hilarious. …hehehe.
    3) radhika’s reaction when she heard about arjun’s accident.
    4) arjun’s reaction when radhika informed him that her car’s brakes have failed.
    5) radhika torturing arjun on the next day of marriage by making him go shopping with her and the restaurant ARJUN’S BACK RASH SCENE was the best……lol.
    6) radhika having her bags already packed when arjun came to her father’s house to take her back away with him….it was really touching.
    7) that ghost hunting scene in the middle of the night……it was superb
    1) Neil’s desperation to find sam when Sam had gone to that shop to buy that pendant for Neil .
    2)The movie night with Neil’s gf at Neil’s apartment and Nesam’s kiss in the kitchen and then Neil teasing Sam by touching her sensuously.
    3) The boxing bout and Neil’s dialogue “I hurt u , babe”…….oh I just felt like crying at that.
    4) Nesam’s date
    5) The dinner date of Neil and his gf along with Dev and Sam……..and there our Nesam’s moments ……oh ! Neil was so rude there and at the same time so lustful (if this is a word).

    Well this is it for now…….ahhh it is my longest comment till now . I’m sorry for not mentioning the scenes in proper sequence …….I mean as they occurred in the story.

    Again I’m requesting plzzz don’t take this much time to post .If not daily , plzzz try to post atleast once in a week ……but a looonnnnggggg update it should be.
    Ok good night.
    Keep writing and keep smiling and making us smile too(well a smile always creeps on my lips whenever I see ur updates).
    Take care πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Love you so much ……muaahhhhhhhhh and tight hugs.
    Well u can take these hugs and kisses as a bribe for posting soon …….hehe.
    Good bye and good night again.

  27. Roma

    Awesome, lovely, marvellous, outstanding. …lots of words like that my dear Farha darling. …you’re amazing…loved the way neil wants Sam back in his life…the realization that he loves her was outstanding…he is totally different person very confused species of human…he loves her but also at same time he wants to punish her for deceit and doesn’t want to show that he loves her…great yaar. …lovely words farha…I get mesmerized always in your words specially when you put so many synonyms in the same line…what an unique talent you have dear…I’m just speechless in describing the way I feel after reading your each update…to be honest i love each and every part of every story of yours but if you’re asking….in dt1 I loved the part when arjun realized that rads is not part of her father’s evil plans and their marriage n all ardhika moments . dt2 nesam’s first date n all nesam’s moments…I’m very blessed to have friends like you honeyyyyyy…you make my life brighten with your amazing stories. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight warm looooooong hug, muaaaaahhhhhh, and yes Happy New Year… take care deariiiiiiieeess

  28. Ritu

    Please write something by keeping the song of arman Malik main rahoon ya na na rahoon tum mujhme SDA yuhi rehna…….please……..

  29. rasha

    Hai dear.finally neils pov has come.i was waiting to knw about his feelings for sam.ohh he love her likeee…..dnt no wht to say.iliked it very much.infact I love every part of ur story dear.both series. Every scene.i always used to visualize it.always imagine to watch it on tv.u knw.i dnt knw my wish comes true or not.hope so.any way fantastic kfar.allah bless u for everything in ths new year.and happy new year dear.

  30. manha

    oh god farha. this is quite a joke yaar. but what can u do too. u kept such an unique name. no one can remember it easily. so girlieeees his name is Riddhan malhotra, he is lawyer but left it.

  31. manha

    superb farha. u write so beautifully that i cannot stop to praise u dear. it was just awesome. u beautifully carve their feelings n emotions n thoughts that it feels like i should never stop reading. but the update gets over. what can i do??!!!
    ok so i’m waiting for this update n then i will post my thoughts abt this. it was superb yaar. First time his emotions r shown.N now he is even jealous of his horse breeze. wow. this is high improvement. haha.
    waiting dearyyyy for all ur updates, but plzzz first update DT n FAA. plzzz FAA it is more than 3 months girl that i’m stuck in the canteen. plzzzzz update it.

  32. advaita

    Hey di thank u so much and a belated happy new year to you too. I think the name of the main lead in BEFORE DAWN was “RIDHAAN” . I don’t remember his last name though. Ty so much again for posting this one too. Plzz write DT next.

  33. Krithi

    Hey Farha it was Supr. Was missing this story. Its been long that u updated it.. And thanx for this small part.
    Shaina’s husband’s name is Ridhaan Malhotra.. I too forgot his name. You only mentioned his name once in ur last update…

  34. manha

    farha i think all the boys r mad. they hav their ladylove infront of them n they even know that they r in love with the girls. but uff their ego or whatever their head cases are they don’t allow heart to speak. everytime they move away n also hurting our poor girls. in this case i think my cutiepie neil is more better than allll. atleast he does what his heart say n he will never leave his girl. aha. πŸ˜‰

    • Masiii

      Ya I agree with manha their doesn’t allow them to listen their heart the hurt our girls …neil is really thousand times bttr than any one …aww u said ”my cutie pie neil” aww m feeling jealous now ahahah jet joking

  35. Lakshmi

    Awesome farha . Ur all stories r fantastic,we r addicted to ur stories .I too waiting for DT n FAA like manha.

  36. aastha

    its nice……u ve updated shainas story arter a long time……………………i lovd it……………..kfar cn u tel his age????????????????n shainas too??????????shaina mi8 only b in hr mid 20’s na????
    i truly agree with manha………wen boys see their ladylove tey play around wth their felings………..

    • Ameena

      Agree with u roshini….just hate sp…and they r showing that stupid saas bhau shows….sp don’t have feelings…manmarziyan was the best show ever…they should definitely bring mmz 2…

    • Kruti

      Wow that was such a beautiful promo…I too wish they had given it some more time…it was such a perfect serial, all the characters, story, actors, dialogue, emotions wr perfect… it had everything… romance, friendship, family bonding, comedy, suspense… it was tooooo perfect… but they had to end it… and continue to show those meaningless saas bahu drama with never ending revenge, crying, howling, jealously, death/rebirth, makeovers etc etc nonsense stuff πŸ™

      Wish they get Mmz 2 with same actors but thats not possible .. so I guess we hv to find solace by reading Farha’s amazing stories πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • roshini

        I had read somewhere that they wanted to show a different bond of understanding between Neil and Radhika where Radhika would be the kind of support which Neil is for Sam ….which would have tested Arjun’s love and Sam’s feelings and as we all know a beautiful story got scrapped bcoz of channel

  37. manha

    yes amu n roshni the promo was just fab. n i just love the song. i hav been listening it for so long. but what can we do SP has already ruined everything. N we lost our show which was sooooo gud. i really am missing it n yep i’m not watching any other shows nw. it looks tv se naata tooth gaya. wish mmz comes back or atleast ardhika yaar. itna toh hamari haq banta hai. plzzzz listen to us.

    • Shree

      These days almost all the new shows on sp are contract based.. That’s why they end soon .. We can’t do anything.. If its so, then what’s the use of polls in tu.. Total waste…

      It could have been aired on colors .. The best channel to drag serials and give different plots .. I swear… I’m not joking.. Very few serials have ended soon on this channel… Mmz would have still been aired and we would’ve never been bored. It was the best

      The thing I’ve heard ppl say colors is waste channel and so is best .. So much obsession.. Sorry if I hurt anyone… But what to do .. I just hope we get season 2 of mmz …

  38. Rg

    Lovely little smth of shaina. I love her name. This for replies Farah. I will eagerly wait for all ur update s. Tc.

  39. Hareem

    Heyyyyy kfar…waited eagerly for this …
    As usual u nailed it dear..I’m sooooooo happyyyyy..Niel came to know why Sam had hurt him…nd finally he will get her back..loved it to d core..

    Hey I just like both d parts of DT..
    Update sOOn..both..waiting eagerly..

    Love u loadZz

  40. Lakshmi

    Yes we all want our mmz season 2 .They should have given atleast 1year for that concept.That promo was superb.

  41. Vivi

    Hey farha…i don’t have any words to describe ur stories Cozz wordzz r not enough….u r an amazing writer… jest feels so read ur stories..

    Waiting is the only hard part…but no more prblm 4 u anything…..update soóòâøôán…..luv ya alot

  42. Kruti

    Hey Farha I love this story toooo… thank god I was reading the comments and I got to read this awesome update … it was a nice surprise…. thank you πŸ™‚

  43. hey farha u always surprised mesmerized me with ur update….It is really verryyyyyyy verrryyyy lovely n fantastic update….Neils state of mind…. n whn he realised the sam untold truth abt her behavior.. big smile on my face aprear…. ohh yeee neil ko pata chal gaya…..n that suha the b*t*h…hate her…nw more excited for nxt update…to see neil more pasdionate n punishment wala love….
    faraha u r rockstar yarrrr….actually m too daydreamer….n whn m alone many story runs into my mind…bt i could nt penned it…..
    hey faraha DT1 n Dt2 both are marvelous in there own way..can’t compare them….bt still if ask i like 100 marks for Dt2 n DT1 have 101 mark more for aradhikas love….

    love u n ur storyyy sho sho muchhhhh….
    ur big fan Dipika

  44. Bcoz mai baar baar page check kar rhi hoon I know I am demanding more but kya karu tumhari story ki adat ho gyi h log apno se hi umeed jada karte h πŸ™‚

  45. Roma

    Thx a lotttttt Farha darling for this cute update…seriously…missing all your stories sweetheart…this part was awesome…first time showing Ridhaan’s pov…their emotions, concerns, caring and mixed feelings are fabulous…can’t wait for more…plzzzz update sooooon your all amazing stories,…anxiously waitingggggg…love you loads and very very tight warm looooooong hug, muaaaaahhhhhh

  46. kanthi

    Superrrr epi kfar!!!!! Waiting for the next one!!! Please don’t delay the next epi !!!! Please!!!!eagerly waiting for it!!!!

  47. nisha

    hey farha dear woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhat an episode dear.
    i love each and every bit of it neil’s anger his pain to loose her and to get her again. I love the scene of the other lady who came towards him and the convo of both of them and then she said I make u forget her and he rehected her I just love it yes truly very much intense neil’s love is .
    You too in the mood of love is in the air dear.

    That guy is lucky who get you as a life time gift my hyderabadi girl . luv u by heart
    Keep smiling always
    Once a friend always a friend.

  48. Pihu

    hey farha dear
    didnt got time to comment
    luved ur episde alot
    it was just rocking
    and pls update the bxt part asap
    also update dt
    and nxt a very very big one
    plssssssssssssssssss dear

  49. jade

    God.. kfar..!! awesome!! FINALLY Neil realized his love for Sam. FINALLY!! Such a relief to read this update!! Mind blowing!!
    And Damn.. you’re just like me.. all weird and freakish (No offense) i too am always lost in fairy tales.. thinking about things that aren’t actually possible and stuff.. i guess that’s why i’m the weirdest one amongst all my friends..
    Justo updato soono..!! Willo beo waitingo..!! πŸ˜›
    LOADS OF LOVE.. :-*

  50. advaita

    Hi di!! Plzzzz upload next part of DT or any of ur stories, but plzzz make it fast. Can’t wait anymore. Ok bye. Take care πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  51. roshini

    Where are you Farah…pls update all your stories…I know tats too much .But kya karen YEH DIL MANGE MORE!

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