bhabi plz give ur sister hand ( promo/ teaser)

Sry guys, I know I have promised I will update on Sunday. But due to some reason I am very nervous, I don’t able to concentrate on anything. Today also I am not updating, yesterday whole night due to nervousness I don’t sleep. And whole day really busy in work. So now I am really tired. Only giving u small promo…
Boy POV..

I will destroy everything. His father sold my mother in market( I don’t able to remember that place where women are sold, if anyone know pls tell me) I will destroy his all life. I will snatch every relation from him also, I will give him that extent of pain. He will become lifeless.
Third person POV…
Now history will repeat. My son will give same pain, which his father give to me. Now game begin

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Are u excited for next part…
I have one question pls answer it with honest..
Am I really a worst writer, someone commented on my previous part my story is totally crap. I want know ur views.

Next part : Tuesday

34 comments

  1. Tamanna

    |Registered Member

    Nice… Don’t be sad yr….your ff is awesome….. Don’t be sad because of some bashers…. Just think about those readers who regularly read your ff and like it….just take these negative comments positively and move on…..
    I have seen some ragsan fans are bashing in swasan ff…..but don’t be sad because of them….. Just Keep smiling and keep updating…

  2. chandu

    Promo was interesting…!! Post the episode soon..!! Don’t think about those stupid people..!! I saw their comments on other ff’s too..!! They are actually commenting their non-sense comments on some of the most popular amazing swasan ff’s..!! You should feel good…that your ff is one of them…!! You are an awesome writer…!! Keep writing dude..!!!

  3. Sumeeta

    |Registered Member

    its good.who told this u ra bad writter.same comment was also given to another ff also.dont be sad.now i am sure it is the new way to bash swasan or swasan ff writer.
    i dont know for raglak story.if same things happen in there also.then he/she try to defame swaragini

  4. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Nice yarrrr …. and who said this …. if u don’t want to tell its ok…… and we should not be nervous on anything …. be strong anniya ….amd u r an awesome writer …. and remember anniya everyone has their different views ….

    And I think so the boy is sanky and third person is lucky ….

  5. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Anniya its awesome….. Some idiot is commenting on all swasan fan fictions the same thing….. Dont take those words…. She is jealous very much of swasan ff writers…. U r an awesome writer….. Dont give a damn to that nasty comments…..

  6. chandu

    My dear lovely brainless Ragsan fan,

    If you don’t feel it good… then stop reading…!! I think you are not even a Ragsan fan too..!! You might be some outsider trying to create rift between our swaragini Fans…!! If you are a true Ragsan fan… stop this non-sense using the ‘Ragsan fan’ name..!! Because you are defaming the entire ragsan fans with this fake name…!! If you really dare to criticize it… then comment with your own original correct account…!!

    With lots of pity…
    A sincere swaragini fan..!!

  7. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Interesting….plz don’t tell dat d person taking revenge is adi.

    And u r a good writer. How can u even think dat u r worst? Paagal ladki….i njy reading ur works dear.

  8. Madhu

    Dr dont get it to ur mind…..may be that person is mental person….thats why that idiot doing this….not only to ur ff dr that idion doing this bashing work to all the swasan ff….
    U dont feel bad dr….ur ff is awesome… that duffer is jelouse thats why doing all this bashing…..
    U dont want to feel bad dr….
    NOT ONLY YOU DR ALL THE SWASAN FF WRITERS ARE BEST……

  9. Madhu

    and coming to the part dr dont tell me its ADI…… plz dr i love him sooo much…..ahhhhhhhhhhhh:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(
    Plz dont make him like this…and promo was awesome…….waiting fr part

  10. maisha

    i am a silent reader u r good writer plz don’t be sad keep writing and love ur ff sorry for not comment

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