bhabi plz give ur sister hand (Part 9) (special part 1)

Part 8

HII, ANNIYA HERE…THIS PART AND 10TH PART ARE TURNING POINT.
THANKS FOR UR COMMENT. I MYSELF FELT PREVIOUS CHAP NOT UPTO MARK. OKAY NOW NO . STILL U ALL COMMENT. A BIG THANK U. SO HERE IS SPECIAL PART.. HOPE U LIKE IT.
NOW MORE BAK BAK….
COMING TO THIS PART……..

SWARA POV
I am still running. nothing is coming in mind, how i escape.when i turn back goons are still chasing me. somehow i manage to hide from them. now i am hiding behind tree, i can easily see them. i am not worried about myself. where is aditya ? i really tensed about him.

scene shift…
adi is still lying on road but muttering one thing ” save her ”.
IN MM,
sanskia are seated in mandap. ritual are not yet started. someone is happy but someone is sad. laksh is roaming here and there in tension.
laksh monologue
i don’t know what to do ? how i able to stop this marriage. swadi are also not picking my call. i hope my doll and aditya are fine.
rags has mixed feeling she is tensed as well as happy.
rags monologue
i am really very happy for sanky marriage . after his marriage he finally back-off my princess life. but tensed for my princess ,i don’t knw where is she. i just pray where ever she is must be fine. where are u princess plz come back. ur di is missing u.

after 45 min
all ritual are completed expect phere . raglak tensing passing sec, both r trying to call swadi but nothing is happening. sankia standed for taking pheres .

” stop” someone
all r shocked to see that person , alia face became pale. remaining r tensed as well as shocked. ( guess guys who is that person , and ans me u r rght or wrong in cmnt)
He or her head is bleeding ,or not able to stand properly or breathing heavily
” aditya what r u dong here ? why u stop our marriage, what is ur new drama ”
aditya is still breathing heavily , standing with some support
” just wait for sometime, swara is coming, she must be stuck somewhere, i can’t let her struggle go in vain, i am pleading u plz wait for sometime ,she has some proof which can change ur decision , we r business rival but in personal life i don’t have problem with u” aditya(in pleading voice)

”what r u saying? where is my princess? ,how u lost her , she is ur responsibility( she hold his collar ,laksh is trying to pull her but all things are going in vain , at last she became tired by hitting him and seated on floor.) where r u princess . i am going to search her” rags
”u r not going anywhere, u r not well, plz try to understand ,when swara came if she not saw u she became tensed” laksh
”no i don’t want to listen u , she is most imp in my life” rags

”stop all ur nonsense ,why u have stop our marriage, lets complete phere , u know he is our business rival,not only him , i think ur so called family, and that bi***h are involved in his plan,see na she is not in here, they all know how to trap u, let complete our marriage. she must be somewhere planning big.” alia
” but swara” sanky
” don’t worry, she will must reach in sometime with some fake proof.” alia
” plz sanskar at least for once trust us ” laksh
” why r u pleading him ? it is good if he marry her. at least my sister wii be safe. pls u both continue. we don’t have any problem. laksh if u want stop his marriage. u can, but don’t drag my shona. i can’t see her in pain anymore.” rags said this in anger.
” if anyone is interested in finding my shona, can join me . i am going. not more arguments” rags
” now ur so called bro wife also don’t have any problem. she also know her sister is how cheap.” alia
” no more words against my swara, i will kill u” adi
” adi, leave her don’t waste our time we have to find her.” rags
both leave from there, laksh is still in shock
sanskia started taking phere.
1st phere is started, somewhere a girl is lying.
2nd phere is started, same girl is struggling to stand
3 rd phere,finally managed to stand
4th phere,trying to take help
5th phere, finally get some help
6th phere, reach at some gate

( i know no one able to travel so fast,but in ff everything possible)
u have to wait for next part to more know about marriage…
till than enjoy past..

past..
sanlak are going toward car. suddenly laksh phone rang.
” kk i am coming” laksh
” bhai what happen” sanky
” sry sanky , i don’t able to drop u. manage ur self. after clg , go to airpot and pick doll.” laksh
without listening further he went.

sanky monologue
how i supposed to identify her & moreover, how can bhabhi allow her to live separately more strange is how could she able to travel alone in plane, there must be someone with her. i knw how much bhabhi love her but still, i have many confusion, i am thinking too much.

AT AIRPORT
Sanky reach there 5 min before landing , he take one doll name board.

IN PLANE
a girl is shown she sleeping peacefully ,has light make up still looking perfect.

AT AIRPORT
sanky still waiting for doll with board of her name

PLANE LANDED,IN PLANE
but she is still sleeping
”mam, wake up we reach kolkata” air hostess
”what ,so early only before sometime i sleep ,u know i am doing i am seem dream but u broke my dream , in my dream, i am beating some goons. this is my 1 time i beating someone even i never slap anyone, u broke my dream u r very bad ( in dramatic and crying voice)
she lift her thing & came out
air hostess is still in shocked.
”kolkata, finally i came ,now i never leave from here”girl
sanky side,
sanky is now beyond furstated
a girl is coming with smile toward him with something in hand. he became happy seeing her….
Precap
remaining part of teaser…..

till then guess
for whom seeing sanky become happy..
who is that girl…
what will happen to their marriage..
after seeing that girl stage , how everyone react.
specially….[ u could have already guess who is that special person]

10 th part is totally going to shock u. so today even silents reader comment[ if any] i want to know how many of u reading it.i have been write this part with great difficulty. i have fever, still i give u this part. because yesterday part don’t give me satisfactions. and i promise u update on suday hope u like it.
wait for next part…
sry for leaving u in suspense….
till then think….
NEXT PART WILL BE ON TUESDAY…
bye, take care and love u all..
to know more stay tuned with ANNIYA

54 comments

  1. little princess

    Awesome dude…u did a amazing work by handling both present n past track well..update soon….waiting for rest of happenings…i hope that his marriage with alia shouldnot happen…eagerly waiting for next part..

  2. Season fan

    Plz plz update soon …
    I just love your ff …. I am silent reader 😎… this is the first time I am commenting ….
    Coming to the ep it was mind blowing😘 …. luv it … you are literally superb😍 ….. waiting for next part …. πŸ˜ƒ

  3. Vidhi

    It’s Awsome dear…… Loved it…. 😍😘😘😍😘update soon dear…..

  4. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    superb choti.. loved it a lot.. I don’t want swasan in this ff also ha.. adi loves swara more and he deserves her.

  5. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Sorry I read it yeaterday only …. but busy so can’t commment …. it was awesome … u left me in suspense don’t do this to me. ……. plz next asap ….
    Oh think so have fever …. no worries take rest and no need to update till u feel better ….

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