bhabi plz give ur sister hand (Part 40)


Hii, thanks for your response on previous part. Truly speaking then I thought you must have forgotten it. Thanks for remembering it.
Part 39


They both are still in same position. There trances broken by sound of wind charm.
Both reliases what had happened some moments ago.
Both were feeling guilty, none of them are looking at each other.
Both knows there is none of them mistake, both just carry away.
He is looked at her to understand ‘ whatever happen few moments ago ‘ what means for her.
Before he could conclude anything , she herself answered him , feeling his gaze.
“ it was mistake “
Sanskar: what?

Swara: ya it’s just mistake I carry away with those emotions.
Sanskar: mistake? How can you say that? Didn’t it matter you?
Swara; no( stern voice)
She is not facing him.

Sanskar: really
She turned toward him , directly looked into his eyes.
She nodded in yes.
He still don’t want to believe it , she is considering those moments as mistake. He angrily bang on door and leave from there.
She close the door and collapsed on floor.

Swara ; ( to herself) how could I loose control?, He doesn’t deserve me. Why I can’t hate him?, why always my love overpower my hateness? No I have to hate him, how could I forget his deeds, his slap and most importantly that day when he was that position with that girl. Instead of giving explantion , he slap me infront of her. Not only it, he almost throw me from there.How could I? I have to hate him. Pls god don’t make me weak. I have to remember all sorrows given by him,only he is reason on my di’s and jiju miserable life. Till di doesn’t forgive him, I will also not forgive him. If I I’ll forgive him soon it will not only injustice with my love but also with all girls respect. I have to stop my heart for him, whom is day by day making me weak. Ya I will distance myself from him.
She sleeps in same position.
Sanskar ‘s room

He angrily punching on punch bag. His hands were bleeding but only one sentence revolvers in his mind.” It was mistake”
Sanskar; ( monologue) what she think of herself? How can she considered those beautiful moments as mistake. Why no one wants to see my change behaviour? Why?? No one is understanding me neither she nor bhabhi. First both were always understand me without even saying any words. Now not even they are believing me that I am change. Does my love is so weak or I don’t deserve second chance.

He faints there due to loss of blood.
Screen froze both were sleeping on floor, tears marks were clearly visible on their faces.
Kaira is smiling foolishly again and again by touching her lips.
Brain: why are you giving close up ad.
Soul; I don’t know.
Heart: she is in love.
Brain; really , silly girl don’t forget love is waste of time.
Soul; haww
Heart: don’t listen him, brain is useless.
Brain; I am not, don’t forget he doesn’t like you.
Soul: really( tensed face)
Heart: does he say , he hate you.
Soul; no
Brain; can’t you see ? How he always fight with her and most importantly he is in love with your frnd. May be she also love him.
Soul; but …
Heart; don’t listen him, if she loved him she must have told you. Don’t worry now you try to make your place in his heart.
Soul; really, do he will also feel same like me?
Heart: yes, he will also.
Brain ; never, remark my words he love ‘swara’ . he will never going to love you.
Heart; no
Brain : yes
Soul; you both idiots keep silence.
She sadly seated on bed, thinking about her feeling and swadi closeness.
Kaira: ( monologue) does he really love her? If yes then I will be not come between them . I can see love in his eyes for her but in her eyes only friendship is there. Oh god so many confusion in their life. But why I am thinking about it, it’s just mere attraction. Not any love, brain is right love is totally waste.
Brain give 1000 watt smile to heart.
Soon she also dozes on bed.

Adi’s room
Adi impatiently finding something. He is throwing all things here and there.
Adi; ( monologue) where is it? If anyone sees it , it will create problem. Adi concentrate it must have somewhere in room itself. But if she will see it then she will start to hate me. I don’t wanna loose her friendship, if she will hate me then I will die I can’t live with her hateness. Ya it must have here only, I will find it tmrw.
Soon he also sleep there but not peacefully.

Next mrng
All were still sleeping in there respective room.
Raglak were sleeping cuddling each others, on both of their face smile is crept.soon Ragini sleep get disturb by Sun rays. She slightly open her eyes . she smiled seeing herself in Laksh embrace. She lightly kissed his forehead , feeling her kiss he also smiled in sleep. Soon realisation hit her, she separate herself from him without disturbing his sleep.

She started to find niaksh. Not finding him, she became tensed.
Ragini: laksh , wake up niaksh is not here.
Laksh: he must have went for playing( still sleepy)
Ragini: no laksh, he can’t he has habit till he don’t wake me or swara. He won’t go anywhere.
Laksh; ha he must have with doll.
Ragini; laksh, wake na
Laksh irritatingly wake up,
Laksh ; now what
Ragini: vo sry,pls help me in finding him. He must have hungry.if he will not find food na then he will become mad.
Laksh; kk fine
Both started to find him. Laksh notice his cupboard is slightly open.
He move toward it.
Ragini; Laksh, where are you going?
Laksh: can’t you see?
Ragini; why are you talking like this?

Laksh; my mood..
He open cupboard, seeing scenario both become shocked. Both burst out in laugh.
Niaksh peacefully sleeping there, his face and fingers were full of chocolates.
Laksh; oh god Ragini, how much he love chocolate.
Ragini: don’t know, always he wants chocolate only.
Laksh: he is same like you, when I had proposed you marriage instead of answering me you snatch chocolates and started to eat.
She cutely make pouts
Ragini: not fare laksh
He make him sleep on bed, wipe his face and finger.

He covered him with blanket and kisses his forehead.
He emotionally seeing his son sleeping who is smiling in dream like in dream also he is busy in eating his chocolates.
Laksh: ragini, pls I have a one request.
Ragini; what?
Laksh: pls this time don’t separate me from him, I will die…
Before he could complete she keeps her hand on his lips.
Ragini: never say like this.
Both sees each other, there is deep eyelock between them. She wipes his tears and kisses his tears marks.
Soon she reliases her position, she exuces herself.
Swara is trying to open something, before she can become successful in it . someone snatch it from her hand.
Voice: are you out of mind?
Swara: I just trying to see what is inside this box. You always hide it like there is some diamonds in it.
Voice: swara, don’t taste my Patience.

Swara: adi, I am your frnd na.
Adi: you’re my bestie , at correct time I will share my feeling with you pls understand na.
Swara; I know you love someone. Pls tell na who is that lucky girl. I want to see you happy with her. You have done lots of thing for me. Pls…( she hold his hand)
Adi: it’s not like that.
She looses her control..

Swara; ( shouted) then why you have keep some blo*dy girl photo in this box. I know there is her belonging it.
Adi; ( with same force)don’t dare to use any abusive words for her. How do you know about pics.
Swara; oh then I am right. Adi why don’t you forget that girl pls move on. Neither you’re confessing your love to her nor you’re forgetting her. What is stopping you?
Adi: you( shouted)
Listening their voices raglak and Sanskar reaches there. Sanskar is feeling difficulty in walking yet he managed to reach there.
Swara: what do you mean? How I am responsible?

Adi kept silence, she held his collar.
Swara: answer me dammit, how I am responsible for it. I never force you for anything. Today due to that girl you’re shouting on me. Who the hell is she, she only give you sorrow. Adi you deserve happiness, may be she is not correct for you. Why are you wasting your life for that girl who doesn’t even know about your feeling.

Sanskar try to stop her but she shows her hand.
Adi: what is her fault in that, if she does not know about my feeling.
Swara: adi, pls understand na , forget her…
Before she could complete, adi slap her hard. She stumble she going to fall but raglak save her.
Ragini: aditya….

Sanskar: how could you touch her.
Both ragini and sanskar held his collar.
Adi: not today, no will speak between us.
He jerk their hand.
Laksh: adi calm, we understand it, it’s your and her matter but this is not any way..
Raglak and sanskar trying to speak more before anyone could again speak. Swara signal them to stop.
Swara; no jiju, he has all rights on me. He is my best frnd , if I am wrong even he can punish me as well as kill me. I will happily die from his hand.
She reach near him and hold his hand.
Swara; pls if you wanna slap me more you can but pls tell na do you really love someone?
Adi; yes I , what you think yourself? I don’t give anyone that right to say anything about my love not even you.

He angrily leave from there.
Swara: ( shouted) pls tell na who is she, I will make her understand your feeling.
She cryingly sit on bed..
Sanskar try to go near her , before he could reach near her he fainted.
Ragini sees him falling , she hold him.
Ragini: laksh, call doctor.
Swaragini make him lie on bed. Swara notices his hand and feet are full blood patches,his feets were still bleeding.
Seeing his condition, she don’t able to understand anything.

Swara: di, do something.
Ragini; don’t worry doll, nothing will happen to him.
Swara; all is only due to me.
She started to cry, Ragini console her.
Ragini; doll, what are you saying.
Swara: vo nothing di, first we should do something to clean his wound.
Both did his first aid, still he is unconscious.
Doctor come and checked him.
Swara; doctor, he is fine na.
Doctor: yes miss gadodia, only he is unconscious due to blood loss. I gave him injection he will soon become conscious.
Laksh bid bye to doctor.

Ragini: swara, you go freshen up. I am here with him.
Swara: no, I will not go anywhere. I will be with him.
Ragini; no doll, you can’t. See your condition..
Swara; pls di( she join her hand )
Laksh: ragini, pls …..

Ragini: but laksh , she is..
Laksh: ( hold her hand) pls, they need each other. I know when he will wake he will only try to find her not for him atleast for me, let her stay with him.
She nodded , both leave from there.
Swara kisses his forehead and bandage, due to excess headache she sleep on his chest.
Adi sadly seeing box, he open it and take some pic.
Adi: ( to pic) how could you say like this?, ha answer me I can’t forget you.You wanna know na who is that lucky girl whom I love, that girl is only you ‘ swara’ but I am not lucky like you. You don’t love me even you don’t know my feeling, I am not blaming you. How could you know( he sadly laugh) I even not let you know my feelings.
he sees his hand and punches on wall.
Someone is listening all this with teary eyes.
Precap; most awaiting part ( guess guys, what it must be)

Note; how many of you wanna laksh bold behaviour. Soon Ragini will reliases all her mistakes.
( sry for less raglak and adira scene)
Bye, take care and love you all

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  1. Deeksha

    Nice dear…. Loved it… Continue soon!!!!

    1. Anniya


  2. Teja

    Wonderful word is also sorting less to say amazing titi mera man to kr rha to ki mei Roz Tujhe bolo ki where is ur update but I will not bczz u also have another work but now I m really like in heaven reading this update soon update☺☺☺ waiting for it

    1. Anniya

      Omg, you really like this part. Don’t worry I will try to give regular parts. I will update soon.
      PS: titi loves gabbar

  3. I think in next part u give seen of swasan marriage becoz u tell in last to last episode

    But the part Is superb

    1. Anniya

      May be you’re right….

  4. dwasan marriage

    1. Anniya


  5. Samaira

    Umhm aahaa kaira is listening na.
    Oh god anni di kahi swasan marigge tho nahi.

    1. Anniya

      Sammy, where are you nowadays?
      That’s suspence…

  6. Shreeyu

    Thnkew so much Anniya for posting. … Loved the episode sooooo much

    1. Anniya

      Are you not posting your ff?

      1. Shreeyu

        Posted a teaser yesterday …. Will be posting next episode tomorrow …

      2. Anniya

        Today, I had already sensed to tu. Now just wait when they will post?

  7. Super awesome

    1. Anniya


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  8. So shocking ?????I M STILL IN SHOCK n pls tell something bout precap m so confused but can’t wait I thought adira will be couple looks like kaira will love adi but he’ll be obsessive lover of swara …..Hmmm looks nice lots of drama awaits!????????????

    1. Anniya

      Adira will be couple,…
      Just little patience…
      You will get to know soon

  9. Abirsha

    Awesome very nice…. But i dont want swara to show concern in sanskar…. Bcox he have hurted her very much….. He deserve some punishment…..

    1. Anniya

      Yup, he will get more punishment…
      Are you not updating your ff?

      1. Abirsha

        Will update on monday dr…. Busy dr

      2. Anniya

        Its kk…
        I will wait..

  10. awesome. loved it.. who listend adi conversation nw wht happen?

    1. Anniya

      That is suspence…

  11. awesome….!! Loved it…!! Ooo shit..!! I thought swara forgave him reading kiss scene in prev episode…!! It’s good that she didn’t forgive…!! Soo next is swasan’s marriage??!! Eagerly Waiting to see it…!! 😀

    1. Anniya

      May be you’re right…
      I am glad you like she doesn’t forgive him…
      Just little patience…

  12. Vyshu10

    Aww… swasan???

    1. Anniya

      Don’t cry, Sanskar will again win her heart..

  13. Kakali

    Niaksh can’t live without chocolates… but now i can’t be happy without ur chappy… i want it daily daily daily…. it’s like a funny n emotional dose…

    Hmmmm chappy was not that good but it was out of my words…
    loved it Anniya… thnk u…

    may i know what r u doing in Study??

    1. Anniya

      I am in CLG, 1st year bsc cs and what are you doing?

      1. Kakali

        Hmmmm m also in clz but High Secondary 2nd year with Arts stream…thnkx for d reply…

    2. Anniya

      Don’t worry you will get regular update not daily but ya 3 updates in a week…

  14. Don’t want swara to forgive sanky so soon he shud bear the same pain she had n I think kaira or ragini is listening adi convo !?

    1. Anniya

      Again thanks…
      He will be not forgivenen easily…
      May be your guess is right,

    1. Anniya

      Thanks s…

  15. Awsm Dr…and I think kaira listened Adi conversation…feeling sad for Adi …today’s part I lyk Adi character… Nd kaira notice Adi love for swara nd she lyk Adi….nd soul nd brain wala scene was nice

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  16. Dharani

    awesome waiting for next episode

    1. Anniya


  17. Soujanya


  18. Nice one dear ?????loved it❤❤

    1. Anniya


  19. Hayeee
    nice epi as always. ?
    lv it.
    swasan moments , adis anger raglak part.. all da things r nice..
    u beautifully write it dr
    hw is ur exam dr..????? Is it god??
    Sry jst nw I read ur both epis dr..
    Lv both epis dr..
    swasan parts r awsome..
    swara is right at her point. Im with her..
    bt my poor sanskar.. im also like swara nly bz we both lv sanky. 😉 😉 😉
    Kairas mind soul &heart convo is sooo nice.. 🙂 🙂
    Is nxt epi is swasan marriage?????????

    thank u 4 cmng back sonn dr.
    Keep writing
    be happy always


    1. Anniya

      Thanks for such wonderful cmnt…
      We all have same problem like swara, we all love Sanskar.
      Ya my exams went awsm.
      For that you have to wait…
      No need to say sry I understand,
      Glad you like Kaira’s situation and swasan, raglak part…

  20. Akshata

    Awesome but emotional too….. really feeling bad for Aadi, he loves swara so much. i would love to see bold laksh, but dont want to see his outburst on ragini when both are at fault. if she didnt tell him abt Niaksh then he also didnt try to find out abt her whereabouts. waiting for your surprise. update soon 😀

    1. Anniya

      Laksh bold look will be soon shown.
      Don’t wrry he will hurt Ragini…
      Just little more wait…

  21. Arshaanya

    Awesome chappy…
    Feeling so bad for adi…. luving sanskar nw..
    I knw he did wrong n hs suffrd n still suffrng bt m luving him nw… exctd for precap… i want to see bold laksh… i ve seen ragini z angr n swara supprtng ragini alwayz bt nw want to see Laksh z outburst..

    1. Anniya

      Laksh outburst will be also soon coming..
      Glad someone started loving Sanskar…

  22. Mica

    omg.. those brain-heart-soul convo… i laughed like cute girl.. ops i mean like maniac! :3
    Kairaa!! your heart soo rite, your brain is useless 😀 😀
    haa.. i want bold Laksh , burst out to Hitler …..
    and Sanskar!!! you should know, how much you ever change, but the wound you had ever given her were too deep to heal…but at least, you taste her lips, rite ? aaawww, just enjoy it..
    luv it Aniyaaa!!! tyty

    1. Anniya

      Haha mica you’re really too much, I think without your cmnt I feel my cmnts box is empty.
      You’re right atleast he taste her lips,your msg will reach to Sanskar. He will try to show more change…
      Kaira are you listening , what mica is saying your brain is useless. You should listen your heart…

  23. Wonderful dear……oh my goddness d convo b/w hrt soul n brain wz fab……feeling bad fo adi…..u know wt in ua ff i want swaadi to unite…

    1. Anniya

      Sometimes I also want that but swasan craze always win over my brain…

  24. Sanji

    feeling soo much bad for adi…..sometimes I feel like it should be swadi …….bt I know its a swasan ff…..I’m also a swasan fan bt I like adi most in this ff

    1. Anniya

      I to feel bad for adi, nothing is in my hands. All is in god hand, isn’t
      I also like him very much…

  25. Hey anniya it ws amazing part dear..nd m really very very sorry fr nt commenting frm mny days…i ws mch busy in my studies md exams….so sry fr dat dear??
    Nd tdys part ws superb…feeling rlly vry bad fr adi…i rlly sumtime want swaadi but its swasan nd i cant c my swasan being separated…watevr..waitng fr nxt part eagerly..

    1. Anniya

      It’s all kk, exams and studies are more important…
      Sometimes I too feel like you but same problem I can’t see my swasan separate..

  26. Awsm part

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