bhabi plz give ur sister hand (Part 14)

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Hiii guys, thanks 4 ur response on previous part.
Sry for 1 mistake; instead of 2 year now leap is of 4 year.
Thanks mica 4 telling it…
Madhu don’t worry about adi, I will not let him hurt…
Swadi are only engaged only….I hope u all understood what I wanna say…
Thanks naina for suggesting niaksh name…
I have updated first part of ” in your love”
Here is link….
Part 1
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Swara reached at mm.
At mm…
“ mam, u can’t go inside.” Watchman.
“ why I can’t go. It is also my house. I don’t need anyone permission for going inside. Leave my way, I am going. U don’t who I am? “ swara
“ sry mam, whoever u r but u can’t go inside.” Watchman
“ okay, infrom laksh sir , swara has come to meet him. “ swara
“ u wait, I will infrom him.” Watchman
Inside mm…
“ why r u inside. U should be on gate na. Go there.” Laksh
“vo sir, someone has come 2 meet u” watchman
“ I don’t wanna meet anyone” laksh
“ but sir, she is come for very far and her name is…” watchman
“ whatever her name, tell her laksh maheswari never meet anyone at home” laksh
“ okay sir” WM
At gate
“ now can I go inside?” swara
“ sry mam sir has denied to meet u.” WM
“ Do u tell him my name?” swara
“ mam, sir is not ready to listen anything. And Sanskar sir is also not at home. Only he can convince him.” WM
“ I don’t want anyone favour. Go and tell ur sir, she is saying until u will not meet her, she don’t leave from here.” Swara
“ but, weather is also not good. U can come tomorrow” wm
“ I told u na, just infrom ur sir. Mam will not leave until he doesn’t meet me.” Swara
“ kk, mam ur wish” wm
4 hours passes, but swara is still there. Meanwhile Sanskar also come home.
“ sir, one minute.” Wm
“ wat happen” Sanky
“ vo sir, this girl is here from 4 hours. She wanna meet laksh sir.” Wm
Sanky see in that direction,but can’t able to see her face.
“ who is she? And does she told what she has work?” sanky
“ I don’t know why she wanna meet him. Her name is something like..” wm
Someone from behind shouted his name.
“ Sanskar wat r u doing here? Laksh
“ bhai, that girl wanna meet u. She is here from 4 hours. Bhai meet her once.” Sanky
“ she is still here. I don’t wanna meet anyone.” Laksh
“ plz, atleast listen her once. “ sanky
“ call her” laksh
“ thanks bhai, wm call her.” Sanky
“Kk sir” wm
…….
“ mam, sir is ready to meet u. Come with me.” Wm
“ thanks,u go I am coming” swara
…………
“ where is she? These girls na don’t have any sense. Now I am ready to meet, then she is not coming.” Laksh
Laksh turn to go….
“ u don’t want to meet ur doll. U forget me na? “ swara
By listening her voice, sanlak freeze.
“ I know now u and di are not one but still we have some relation. Do u not even see my face. From 4 years I am trying to come India, finally when I came. U don’t wanna even see my face, do I am that much bad. Okay u not turn I am going. Sry to distrub u.” swara( almost crying voice)
She began to go, ….
“ swara” laksh
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Past…..
“ di, y u stop me. I wanna know why he want to kill himself.” Swara
“ bhabhi, is really u r her sister. I mean may be by mistake she is change with some one.” Sanky
“ what do u mean ? , I should ask this question jiju are u sure he is ur brother. I think he is really kidnapper.” Swara
“ I am not, u stop jiju kid.” Sanky
“ I am not any kid, if I am kid then u r grand paa” Swara
“ u both stop it, Sanskar how can u assume that girl as doll.” Laksh
“ bhai, it’s only ur mistake. U only use doll word. I thought girl must be small. How could I know ?” sanky
“ u should ask na, how can rags sister be so small.’’ Laksh
“ why not? See ur self only her age is more but her mind is just like 5 year kid. Can any one by seeing her imagine she is rags bhabhi sis.” Sanky
“ di, tell ur BIL. Don’t say anything about me, he don’t know me what I am? “ swara
“ I know u better than anyone, u come from London. U have studied in xyz school. Ur fav color is blue, u like to hangout with frnds, u love to eat chocolate and most important thing ur dream is slap and beat someone. I think this much info is kk. Or I should tell more about ur parties.” Sanky
All has mouth open…
“ jiju , I am right he is really belong to some mafia. U should give him to police.” Swara
“ Sanskar, how u know everything about her. U r meeting her first time na.” Ragini
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Precap; Sanskar reaction about swadi engagement.
Laksh breakdown…

Past: love and hatred both start…

Sry, 4 boring part…..
And also for small part, from Monday I will give u long parts…
Tomorrows what u want…
Next part of ff…..
First part of ss….

Bye , take care and love u all….

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34 Comments
  1. Sanjanaagrawal

    Next part of ff … and can u tell me qhy can’t u update saturday n sunday if u don’t want Don’t tell its ok n past was awesome n present too ……

    1. Anniya

      No specific reason, this Saturday I am updating 2 part of TS. So can’t update both. On Sunday I will try….
      Thanks..

  2. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Anniya

      Thanks…

  3. Awesome

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….

  4. Hey dear it ws nt borng but ya a bit small..hope u post nxt time a long part…nd da epi ws v.nice..waitng fr nxt..post soom

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….
      From Monday I will update long one….

  5. little princess

    Good one..waiting to see the reaction of sanky n laksh..i hope she unite raglak soon…and get back her love for which carved a long back…i thnk now a days u r giving short chappies..may be the situations demands so…but still u used to handle both present n past altogether well…when will u finish the past track?…i felt like u made some mistake in linking the past with present in this chappy.. I mean this episode was not having the same flow that u used to give through past n present track.. its just my opinion..dont be desp…and i am sorry if i hurt u…u r a good writer and i really appreciate ur writing skill as well as ur thinking skill…u very well maintained the story n made it beautiful.. But here in this episode i felt like a break when it came to past track..writing upto the end of present was perfect but lost the continuation afterwards… Whatever i said was just my thoughts..dont feel bad n disappointed..i said it so that u can write it better…all that i said is only about this episode… Ur previous episodes r amazing.. Keep on writing… Love ur storylines..update next chappy asap..

    I consider u as my good frnd… Said all these as considering our frndshp… I hope u also consider me as a good frnd

    1. Anniya

      I also felt so, thanks 4 telling me.
      I will improve myself….
      I considered u good frnd ….
      Thank u …..next time I will try to give link between past and present…
      About short update I am mobile now a days. Typing from mobile is really difficult work. I will try to give long parts….
      Again thanks…

      1. little princess

        Glad to know that u understood what i said…i thought that my comment hurted u…bt u took it in a positive way…really like ur this positiveness….i know that u r sincere n dedicated on ur work…u can bring betterment in ur work…i felt like telling u that somewhere something is missing as compared to before..moreover it can happen as u r writing more than 1 story..u may not be getting enough time or may be busy with ur own life..but still u finds time to write fictions n update it properly as per readers wish…u tried ur best not to disappoint ur readers.. And u r giving us more interesting as well as appreciable work that r indeed good ones…even i can understand that its really a difficult task to update from mobile…it may take hours for typing it…so u dont worry…u dont have to give very long parts if it is not fine with u… Give long parts when u can do it…we can wait till then..as a good frnd,everyone will understand u…anyone can do atleast this much for u their frnd…

        Looking forward for more n more new interesting story lines as well as good episodes of ur current works..best wishes…love u…take care

  6. nice..nxt one..

  7. Vyshu10

    awesome….i loved d way sanky blurted out swara’s interests all at once. Upload ff first dear

    1. Anniya

      Thanks…..
      I will update ff tomorrow

  8. awesome..!!! It’s soo interesting..!! Waiting for next part..!!

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….
      I will update next part asap..

    1. Anniya

      Thanks…

  9. Sumeeta

    superb.i really waiting for sanlak reaction

    1. Anniya

      Thanks…
      I will update next part asap….

  10. It’s awesome dear… Loved it… I just want to knw laksh’s reaction…. OMG… Plz update soon… 😘😍😘😍😘😘😍love u💜💖💜💖

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….
      I will update next part asap…

  11. Anniya its too short and lots of suspense. Pls upld next part asap.

    1. Anniya

      Thanks…
      Sry 4 short part…

      1. Are its ok.

  12. Mica

    breathtaking in present part, but laughing in the past part, so funny, luv it anniya.

  13. Its niana not naina..

  14. Plz make naksh meet his dad

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….
      Soon he will meet

  15. Khushiii

    Amazing

    1. Anniya

      Thanks….

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