My better half, Naughty Billo, Uncontrollable Feelings Promos by Mars

Hloo guys!! Firstly a big round of applause for all swasanians and hellu fans who voted breathlessly yesterday.
It proves we all can do anything for our doll and congratulations to all for her victory. It doesn’t matters who win bcoz we know hellu is THE BEST for us but still endless efforts made were outstanding.
Here I m giving promos of upcoming story. Hope these will not be that shocking like previous one.

My better half(swasan ff): promo
Past story:
Scene 1
Calcutta University:
Sanskar is sitting on his knees with rose in his hands in front of Swara
Sanskar; swara I will say directly that I love you and I don’t want you to be my girlfriend but my wife, my life partner, my soulmate. So will u give me chance and become my betterhalf.
Swara smiles with teary eyes as her love is proposing her.
Swara(whispers): yes.
Sanskar stood and both hug each other. All the students clap while one girl fisted her hand in anger.

Scene 2:
In a classroom:
A girl is pleading sanskar.
Girl: plzz Sanskar accept me I love you.
Sanskar: why u r not understanding I m already in relation with swara.
Girl: I don’t care and if you will not accept me then I have to do this.
Sanskar: no plzz don’t do that, okay I agree to be in relation with you.
Sanskar took ring from her hand and made her wear.

So who is the girl in second scene???
Why sanskar accepted her???
Will Sanskar betray swara??
To know plzzz wait for further story.

Naughty billo(swasan ff):
Swara and ramta are tensed as sanskar has not still came home from university. Even his phone is not reachable. They had called in university and they told he left at usual time.
Swara is almost crying.
Sujata: don’t worry swara he will come.
Swara:(sniffs): he always say me that I m careless now what is he?? I will not leave once he come.
Sujata: yeah we will scold nicely to him.
Then only there comes call on landline.
Ram received it .
Ram:hello this is Ram maheshwari.
Op: we are speaking from hope hospital. Your son had met with accident and is admitted her. So plzz come and fulfil the formalities.
Ram: hello is he ok.
But the call was already cut.
Swara: what happened dad?
Ram:sanskar had met with accident.

Swara and sujata got shocked.

Till now u had seen sanskar’s care for Swara now u will witness swara’s care for sanskar in her naughty way.
Wait to know further.

Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Scene 1:
Swara is leaving for kolkata. All are present in Hall except Sanskar.
Kavita: where is sanskar?Today u r going and he is in his room. Let me call him.
Swara’s eyes got filled with tears listening sanskar’s name.
Kavita called me so he came.

Sanskar looked at swara and sadness can be clearly seen on her face.
Sanskar went close to her.
Their heart was beating very fast.
Sanskar:okay bye swara. All the best for your future.
He said with some unsheded tears in his eyes.
Swara (fake smile): hmm thanks.
Then she left with Daffy.

Scene 2:
Kavita and a boy is in one room.
Boy: I want that we should marry soon as I need to forget some things.
Kavita: I don’t have any problem but…
Boy: don’t worry I know what u r thinking. Nothing will happen.
Kavita nodded and hugged him.

So is this the end of swasan story???
Will sanskar go to swara or she will come back or being helpless they will accept their fate?
Who is the boy in second scene??
Wait to know further Story.

Well guys!! This is the glimpse of coming stories.
Now like my silent readers, I m also going to be silent. So I won’t be posting my stories for some days bcoz really don’t feel like writing after seeing the response.
Sooooo relax and I won’t disturb u all.

Till then take care.
Good bye.

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  1. what what what no no no.. …i commment on your stories didn’t I…. aaaaahhhhh I always wait for your stories don’t do this mars dear…. warna …warna…. ha I will irritate you…. always by texting you on your account ….please don’t do this post soon…..

  2. awesome ?? but post soon plss.

  3. Interesting dear post soon?

  4. promos are nyc dear

  5. interesting i love naughty billo

  6. No please… keep writing?

  7. Promos looks interesting… awaiting for the stories…..
    Whaaaaaatt????? U are going 2 stop for few days….?????
    Plz plz dont do that plzzz……….
    I visit TU everyday just expecting ur stories….
    Plz plz…
    Post them quickly…..

  8. no no how can you do this mars ? you always think about your silent readers only then what about your regular readers who are eagerly waiting for your stories .sometimes comment doesn’t come the way we expected .but the readers may be busy or may be struck in some problems also .so don’t stop writing because you are getting less comments .i’m really sorry if i sound rude to you and pls post soon u take care .waiting for you

  9. Awesome promos dr excited 2 read

  10. Seebu_s

    interesting promos

  11. Tamil

    Amazing dear……interesting……Eagerly waiting……don’t stop writing dear…..continue….

  12. superb

  13. Awesome dear

  14. woooow ….dear ur all ffs promos r so intresting all 5 ffs r to awesome ur i daily waiting for ur ffs update i love to read our swasan ffs ur writing skill to impresive & outstanding ….plz post all stories parts soon dear ….despiratelly waiting ….

  15. Interesting

  16. Shibil

    Interesting promos ……eagerly waiting for the upcoming story plot …..regular and silent both readers are loving ur stories ..due to some circumstances they may not comment u….
    don’t take much time Mars come back soon with ur stories dr ….

  17. Y not writing the stories… ????.. Please posttt them… I am reading your My better half as welll.. Will comment on that soon.. ??????.. And I loveee ur naughty billo story… ???.. Pleaseee don’t make us wait more… Hopefully u will update… ??

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Marssuuuu don’t do this to ur regular readers! Some or many readers struck with some circumstances. Even nowadays I m also not regular or late to comment. Don’t stop writing bcz of less comments. Come back soon dear!!

    And three promos are veryyyyyy interesting!! Waiting for episodes…..

  19. NDSG

    ???????? Silent reader Y r u silent… Now my Mars became sad…????

    Awesome promos Mars, mostly better half wala I love most… U don’t feel bad. It hurts seeing less response I can understand… U take ur time. I’m with u…????????

  20. SNY

    Interesting…post soon….!!

  21. Rabia0032

    Amazing promos can’t wait…

  22. Abirsha

    Promos are interesting!! u r saying u won’t update bcoz silent readers didn’t comment…. Then what about ur regular readers??? U care for silent readers more than readers who comment in ur story!!! Okie no worries…. Update when u feel like to update….

  23. Awesome
    But plz post soon

  24. Mars please don’t do this .please write your stories asap .i have an ia test that’s why I can’t comment on your stories.

  25. awesome update next parts soon mars i didnt understand my better half promo scene2 is it in past or in present scene promo? update soon

  26. Soujanya


  27. Kanha

    Awesome siso. Naye naye shocks dekar mujhe heart attack de diya tumne??????? Jaldi jaldi saare stories post karo siso. Waitinggggggggg??☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Loveeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuu sisooooooooo??????

  28. AnuAnn

    Interesting.. Hope u post soon

  29. Promos r Interesting…but what is this line “I won’t disturb u all” ….u r thinking about silent readers not about me….I toh daily comment na on each n every ff of urs….Haan bas kabhi kabhi thora late ho jati huin?….but……m angry now ??

  30. Mars

    Hlo guys! Mars here, firstly very sorry as I can’t reply individually so now i really apologize for neglecting my silent readers. It was just I wrote it I didn’t mean to hurt anyone so I m extremely sorryyy holding my ears and to improve my mistake I will give maximum updates which I had already started giving so enjoy them.
    Milestone dear don’t be angry yarr plzz forgive your this writer cholly and to all also very sorry once again.
    Thanks for liking promos soon u will get to know what will happen.
    For anu dear, I want to clear that second scene of my better half is also of past story only.
    Once again thanks and sorry.
    Lots of love
    Take care.

  31. Mars

    Sorry mistake in comment its not neglecting silent readers. Its neglecting regular readers who comment on my every update. Even silent readers thanks for reading stories. I can understand that there must be some problem that u can’t comment never mind.
    Thank you to alllll

  32. Simi

    Interesting promos..

  33. Vyshu10

    interesting promos

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