my better half (Episode 9)

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My better half (swasan ff)
Epi 9
Mumbai
Swara’s apartment
Swasan were hugging each other tightly because they met after 2 months. After sometimes they break the hug.Both looked at each other and shared a lovely eyelock.swara breaking the eyelock asked
Swara: sanskar u here at this time?
Sanskar picked his bag and entered inside and sat on sofa in hall whereas swara closed the door .
Swara sits beside him.sanskar put his arm around her shoulder and pulled her towards himself
Sanskar(said slowly): I was missing u so came to meet u.
Swara was not convinced but thought not to say anything.she put her hands around Sanskar waist. He also tighted his grip on her.
Swara:sanskar I was coming next week.

Sanskar;hmm but I can’t wait for long one week.
Sanskar kissed at the top of her head.
Swara smiles and said
Swara:let’s have dinner.
Sanskar: yes I m hungry
Swara got up and went to kitchen and sanskar followed her and stood at dining table holding the back of chair.
Swara came with bowl and kept on table.

Sanskar (sitting on chair): what’s special today?
Swara (sits beside him): nothing special just dal,chapati,rice.
Sanskar:ok
Swara:if u want something else I can make.
Sanskar: no dear,important thing is u r there so it does not matter what I eat.
Swara:asha Ji
Sanskar: yes
Swara served him and herself. Both did dinner with just few casual talks.

Kitchen:
Swara is washing used utensils and sanskar is irritating her.He moves his fingers lightly on swara’s neck, arms giving her ticklish feeling.
Swara:Sanskar stop it.
Sanskar didn’t said anything and back hugged her and started kissing her neck swara got lost for a moment but then realized they are in kitchen.
Swara(coming out of his grip):control Mr.maheshwari
Sanskar: that only I can’t.

Swara: asha sit there(pointed to shelf)
Sanskar nodded no.
Swara: I said na sit means sit(fake anger).
Sanskar pouts and silently sit on shelf. Swara smiles seeing him.
After completing her work she looked at sanskar who was still sitting their with pout and starring her.swara went near him and said
Swara: angry ???
Sanskar didn’t replied.

Swara moves closer to him and leaned towards him and kissed his cheeks and chin.
Swara(whispered): sorry.
Sanskar smiles seeing her way of pacifying him. He instantly stood up and pulled her through waist.
Sanskar: no sorry only punishment.
Sanskar placed his lips on her gently and Swara closed her eyes feeling him.
They broke the kiss after few mins.Sanskar was again going to kiss but swara put her hand on his mouth.
Swara: enough not here.
Sanskar made annoyed face.
Swara:come let’s go to room.
Sanskar nodded and both left.

Swasan room (actually Swara’s room):
Sanskar went to washroom for changing and swara was lost in thoughts.
Swara(monologue): I know something had happened that sanskar came all of sudden.Even in morning also he was behaving wierdly. What might be the reason? Something happened at home?. Let me call mom may be she knows.
Swara dialed sujata’s no.and she recieved the call
Sujata:hello swara
Swara:hi mom

Sujata: how r u beta.
Swara: I m fine but mom Sanskar came here suddenly something went wrong their.
Sujata: no nothing happened. I don’t understand this boy.In afternoon he came and told me that he is going to Mumbai to meet you and when I asked reason he said there is no reason.He is becoming weird day by day.U only handle him.
Swara(smiles): ok mom
Sujata: he reached safely ?
Swara: yes mom (listened door opening sound)bye mom will talk later gd nyt.
Sujata: bye gd nyt.
Sanskar came and saw swara sitting on bed thinking something.He went to bed and sit in front of her.He flipped his finger in front of her eyes.
Swara looked at him.

Sanskar: what r u thinking ?
Swara: nothing.
Sanskar look in her eyes.He can see some confusion.
He leaned on her whereas she lied back on bed.sanskar came on her top.
Sanskar remembered morning incident of ragini.He got angry and kissed swara bit roughly but when his eyes met her confused eyes he became calm and started kissing softly.swara’s hand moved on his back.
They broke the kiss when out of breathe.sanskar buried his face in her neck and started kissing her.swara fisted his hairs unable to handle the pleasure.They completely lost in each other.
After showing their passionate love for each other.they were lying hugging each other feeling their betterhalf ‘s touch.swara was wearing sanskar’s white shirt whereas he was only in his undergarments.

Swara’s head was on his chest and his hand around her waist.They were lost in their own thoughts.
Swara was thinking what could be the reason behind Sanskar’s changed behaviour.No doubt she can ask him directly and he will tell but she wants him to tell himself whereas sanskar was thinking to tell swara about ragini as it is high time and he can’t hide anymore.
Sanskar: swara
Swara: hmmm

Sanskar: u trust me?
Swara: Ofcouse I think u no need to ask.
Sanskar: yea I know.swara I want to tell u something.
Swara: I know(looked at him)
Sanskar gave confused look.
Swara: do u think I won’t understand, there must be something that u came.
Sanskar: hmm actually I don’t know how to start.(he sits)
Swara: Sanskar from when u started hesitating from me.
She sits beside him.He held her hand.
Sanskar: today morning when I was going to office ragini called me then he told her every thing happened in park.

Swara didn’t said anything.
Sanskar looked in her eyes and can only find one think that is love.
Swara smiled looking at him and he got confused.
Sanskar (irritated): may I know why r u smiling I m serious here.
Swara: that is only problem. U take everything seriously.
Sanskar: it means u r not angry.
Swara: why will I get angry what’s your fault.But if u would have proposed someone then till now u would be dead(teasing).
Sanskar (chuckled): I will never do that.
Swara: I know(said hugging him).Sanskar we can’t change someone’s mentality but we should not let them affect us.
Sanskar nodded and said

Sanskar: that’s why I came here only u can handle me.
Swara broke the hug.
Swara: mom was also saying same.
Sanskar: u called mom
Swara: yes to know why u came suddenly.
Sanskar: u could have asked me directly.
Swara: why should I ask u should have told first.
Sanskar(peck her lips): okay.
Both lied hugging each other
Swara: u know sanskar I already have doubt on her.
Sanskar(surprised):how?

Swara:my secret agent told me that she always stare u and she even decorated your cabin on your birthday but fortunately u don’t go to office.
Sanskar:you have agent in office?
Swara(smiles): yes to keep eye on you.
Sanskar: really??but who.
Swara(slowly ): sweta(laughs).
Sanskar:ohhk but I don’t know that she planned on my birthday.
Swara: see! How stupid u r I m sitting here and I know but u being their don’t know.
Sanskar(making innocent face): I don’t have agent na.
Swara hit on his chest and both laughed.
Later sanskar slept but Swara was thinking some thing and she took major decision.she also slept hugging sanskar tightly.

Precap: swasan came back to Kolkata.
Swara went to office and saw ragini there.

NOTE
For sufferings(swasan ts) readers.
Actually I m in dilemma that what to do.As everyone wants perfect ending but I don’t know how to end it in one chapter. I had thought of further story but it will be leanthy but satisfactory. So I was thinking to extend this ts from three shot to ten shot but if u all want.
Actually I can write in one chapter also but it will be messed up and there are many things to be cleared .so plz let me know if u want that I should extend the story or not.

Coming to my better half
plz do tell me how is this epi and I tried to give maximum swasan scenes.
Give your views through comments
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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64 Comments
  1. Nagamanasa

    Awesome dear…Swasan understand each other so well…loved it…post next one soon…And coming to Ts u can change it as per ur conveinence

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  2. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  3. Rosey

    it was superbbb please post next sooner
    and about your ts you take your time…and show what you want

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  4. Amazing

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  5. Sus

    dear take your story nucly don’t be hurry
    just explain properly whatever you want.
    becoz you writing story for awareness and i think your story Suffereing have a such a social topic. If you feel in 1 or 10 shot you are able to give proper message go for it.

    this chappy ia awesome i like swasan bonding really watever the thing never hide from your partner

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear.

  6. Ishanvi

    Awesome!! Waiting for next part eagerly!! Continue soon!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  7. its really an amazing episode…
    dear plz 10 shots krdo.. i want to read more..
    ????

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  8. Phoniex

    Loved it dear this is what love does to you tou trust your love no matter what.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  9. Independent

    I knew it that Swara will be normal after hearing about ragini. Awesome dear. And about sufferings dear plz don’t give any heed to others opinions and continue as u planned otherwise u r going to mess it up for sure

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u was right as u said in last epi that swara already have doubt.

  10. Mahisha

    It’s awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  11. Manasvi

    I loved this chapter..
    Waiting for Naughty billo?
    It’s awesome!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post naughty billo at night or tomorrow morning

  12. Tamil

    Amazing dear….read all parts loved it…..in suffering Swasan ts i will suggest extended the story….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  13. Tamil

    Amazing dear….read all parts loved it…..in suffering Swasan ts i will suggest extend the story….

  14. Awesome dear……. Waiting

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post soon

  15. Gayathri.visu

    Fantastic epi dear….. I LOVED IT!! Waiting for next part dear..

    About sufferings, I m ok with ur decision. But please continue that story what u have planned before.

    Aree plz….plz…plz post naughty billo also.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and about naughty billo I had started writing the part if it got completed will post at night or in the morning

  16. Neptune

    awesome dear i just loved the way swasan understand each other so well and coming to your ts i think you should take more shots but end it in a proper way i loved the way swara supported sanskaar please post naughty billo also i am waiting for it too

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and naughty billo at night or in morning.

  17. Good.. Hope ragini understand swasan love for each other n leave her vile intention of separating them… Bcoz it never gonna happen…better she try to find her better half …

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u r right ragini can never come in between swasan

  18. Neha_01

    Loved this episode Mars..waiting for more swasan scenes. Update next part soon!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  19. mars its awesome.. update next part soon waiting for naughty billo…
    coming to ts go for it what you planned .. dont mesed up it dear,… if u cant show in one part then u can go for more parts but give good message .. dont want ur story to messed up..
    update next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post soon and naughty billo also coming soon.

  20. Rachna

    Awsm Dr… Waiting for nxt part…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  21. Maryum

    Nice dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  22. Simi

    Awesome dear.. Swasan’s understanding ??
    About sufferings make some more chapters.. Otherwise it will be a mess

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  23. Awesome dear waiting for what will Swara do next coming to suffering u continue as per u plan

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  24. Nice..yes u can extend the story..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  25. Arshaanya

    Loved it dear…
    N u can extend dat ts… make it as ss as i knw u cant explain all things in jus 1-2 chappies… n i want to justify all chrctrs n ur story..so u cant extend as much as u want ??

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  26. HI Please make it 10 episodes,, show their bonding and trust and cute scenes…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and yes I will extend it to 10 shots only.

  27. As usual awesome epi dear…. Love it. Eagerly waiting for next part post soon.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post soon

  28. Seebu_s

    amazing dear??

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  29. nice dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  30. loved it so much

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  31. Meera_s

    reading ur all ffs…must say every ff is so different and amazing

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear

  32. Vyshu10

    Awesome…loved it. Falling in love with swasan

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