my better half (Episode 10)

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Hello guys! I m here with next epi.
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My better half (swasan ff)
Epi 10
Mumbai
Morning
Swara’s apartment
Swasan are sleeping peacefully in each other embrace when Sunrays strike Swara’s face disturbing her sleep.she nuzzles her face in sanskar’s chest.
Sanskar’s sleep got disturbed,he opened his eyes and saw her beautiful wife glowing in Sunrays.He removed hairs from her face and bend on her and started moving his nose on her cheeks.
Swara:(irritated):Sanskar stop it.
Sanskar( smiles):no I m enjoying.get up its morning.
Swara: hmm

Sanskar: u don’t want to spend time with me I will go today.
Swara(looked at him): u will go so soon.
Sanskar: Swara I came suddenly leaving all work so I have to go.
Swara: OK we will go together.
Sanskar: u will also come.?
Swara: yes
Sanskar: but your work.
Swara: its almost completed , little bit which is left Rita will handle.
Sanskar: wow love you(Peck her lips)
Swara(smiles): let me book our tickets.
Sanskar: OK
Swara got up and sit with the support of bed and picked her phone
Sanskar put his head on her legs and hugged her through waist.swara put her one Hand in his hairs and with other dialled the number.
Swara: hello Rita.
Rita:yes mam
Sanskar started kissing her belly by removing shirt. She was feeling difficulty in speaking
Swara:yea actually book two tickets.
Swara was trying best not to mourn
Rita: for what tickets mam
Swara(took deep breath and said in one go):book two flight tickets for Kolkata today itself.
Sanskar chuckled while Swara glare at him.
Rita: OK mam I will book and inform u the time.
Swara cutted the call.
Swara(angry) what were u doing don’t u know I was talking on call.

Sanskar(looked up and innocently):what I did I was just resting.
Swara:really I will tell you.
Swara tickle him and he started laughing.
Swara:u were teasing me na.now see.
Sanskar(laughs): ok sorry swara leave.
Then only swara’s phone rang.
Swara: yea rita
Sanskar took the chance and tightly back hugged her.
Rita:mam today’s flight is in evening I had booked two tickets.
Swara: OK message me the details.
Rita:sure mam.
After cutting call swara looked at sanskar

Swara:what ??
Sanskar:nothing.
Sanskar turn her and took her beneath him and started opening her shirt button.
Swara:(breathing heavily): sanskar
Sanskar: him
Sanskar nuzzles his head and started giving wet kisses on her neck
Swara:flight is in evening.We have to get ready.
Sanskar(looked at her): there is much time now don’t disturb me.
He placed his lips on her and yet once again both lost in each other.

Afternoon
Swasan are doing packing.swara had almost packed her everything.
Sanskar: swara u r packing like this as if u will not come back.
Swara(looks at him and smiled): hmm
Sanskar: what?(confused)
Swara(diverting topic): nothing u just get ready.

Sanskar: OK (about to leave but turn) and yea swara we will not tell anyone about ragini and this is over and don’t talk to her about all this.
Swara: ok but she didn’t left the job.
Sanskar: she can’t leave as she had signed contract but if after yesterday incident she will not come then i don’t know Swara whether she comes or not u with not say anything just ignore.
Swara: hmm
Sanskat left to get ready and swara did her and Sanskar’s packing.

Kolkata
Evening(7pm)
Maheshwai house:
Swasan is sitting in hall with ram and sujata.They had just came so having tea and snacks.
Sujata: swara I m so happy u came and tell me why he(point to Sanskar) went to Mumbai suddenly?
Swara and Sanskar looked at each other. Sanskar was tensed not knowing what to say.
Swara(smiles): u know na mom your son is stupid he got some bad dream about me so got worried and went to meet me.
Sujata: ohho I thought don’t know what would have happened.
Swara smiles and sanskar relaxed.
After chit chatting for sometime they left to their room.

Gododia house:
Ragini is sitting on her bed looking sad and pale.shekar came inside with dinner.Ragini has not come out from her room and not talked with anyone.Shekar was hell worried about her.
Shekar(caress her hair): have your dinner beta.
Ragini(said slowly): papa I m not hungry.
Shekar: beta why u r sad I m there na .
Ragini looked at him with hope.
Shekar: yes I will talk to him u don’t worry.
Ragini: really papa.
Shekar: yes now have your dinner.

Ragini happily had her dinner and after that shekar left .
He angrily came outside
Shekar:how he dare to make my daughter sad.He have to accept her.
Janki(making him understand): what r u saying shekar he is married.He has his own family.How can you spoil someone’s life.
Shekar:I don’t care for anyone.For me only my daughter’s happiness matters.
He angrily leave to his room.
Now ragini was happy as she knew her father can do anything to fulfill her wish.
Ragini(happily): soon u will accept me sanskar sir.

Next morning
Swasan room
Sanskar is getting ready for office.when Swara came.
Swara:sanskar I m also coming to office.
Sanskar: why?
Swara:just like that.Even I can visit music academy. (Let me tell music academy is beside Sanskar’s office).
Sanskar: okay
Later after breakfast both left for office.

Maheshwari industries:
Swasan entered inside and everyone wished them.
Swara: I will talk to sweta sanskar.
Sanskar: OK
Swara was about to go when ragini came from front.Swasan saw her.Sanskar held Swara’s hand and she tightened the hold and smiles at him assuring him she is always beside him.
Sanskar felt relaxed.swara that’s why came to office as she knows Sanskar will need her.
Ragini came closer

Ragini(normally): good morning sir.
Sanskar confused seeing her behaviour and just nodded.Then she looked at swara but didn’t wish her.
Swara: OK sanskar I will come to cabin after meeting sweta.
Sanskar: okk come soon
Swara: sure.
Swara went to sweta and sanskar to his cabin while ragini got irritated.

Reception
Swara came to sweta.
Swara: hello sweta
Sweta: hi finally u r back.for how much time.
Swara: let’s see for how much time I can live here. U tell any hot news of office.
Sweta: no till now nothing but as soon as I will get I will tell.
Swara(laughs): OK
Then they talked casually.

To be continued..

Precap: shekar blackmail sanskar to accept ragini.

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74 Comments
  1. Sus

    lovly dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  2. Gayathri.visu

    Awesome part dear…. Naughty Sanskaar. Wow!! Now Swara is back…hope she will teach good lesson for that mad family. And that brainless shekar, how dare him to blackmail Sanskaar! Mad people!! Waiting for next part dear.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  3. Rosey

    Wow creep Shekar like her caught cheap mentality…I just hate duo father daughter…cheap
    Swasan were so cute please post next sooner

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  4. Mahavir

    awesome dear its really really awesome i really enjoyed but this shekar..!! nd the precap plzzz dear dont make,Sanskar to accept that bastard ragini coz of that idiot shekar’s blackmail..!! i cant read a single word also about Sanskar accepting that Nagini

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and don’t worry about precap swara won’t allow that nagini to come near her hubby sanskar so just chill and enjoy the drama.

  5. Ishanvi

    Awesome Di!! Loved it!! Don’t separate Swasan’s please!! Continue soon!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post next part soon. And I will not separate swasan and that too for ragini neverrrrrrr

  6. Rachna

    Awsm…. Shekhar ( Mad person) for her daughter happiness he is ready to destroy other happiness!!!
    Update soon next part

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post soon

  7. Awesome dear the precap what he is going to blackmail Sanskar Swara will not leave allow anyone near to him

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u r right swara won’t let ragini to come near Sanskar.

  8. wow amazing

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  9. Manasvi

    Nice..
    Post soon..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post soon

  10. Arshaanya

    Sanskar is big bsns tycoon n so powerful dan how can dat dumb shekhar can blckml him??
    Go sanskar u hve to show ur devil side to ragini n shekhar ?

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u will get to know how shekar will blackmail sanskar.

  11. Phoniex

    loved it. how can a parent let his daughter marry someone who is already married?

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and there are some parents like shekar who r blind in their children’s love that they don’t think anyone else.

  12. loved swasan romance??continue soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post next part soon

  13. Neptune

    i loved it dear huh sansku is really very naughty i loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much and that sshekhar is really brainless i would love to see what happens next and really hats off to you yaar you are posting all you ffs regularly i wonder how you manage it….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I can write my ffs bcoz I m free at home so this is best time pass for me hehehe and will post soon.

  14. Amazing update… swara should teach a good lesson to ragini and her father… is her father crazy??? That he is willing to nreak swasan marriage so that ragini can marry sanskar… eagerly waiting for next update… pls post next update soon…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post next part soon

  15. awesome loved it… huhh precap? spineless shekar ko bagao yaha se… mad family sanskaar ko ab apna devil roop mein aana padega..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  16. Nice one..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  17. Awesome dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  18. Amazing……. seriously sekar blackmail sanskar !!! Hope sanskar himself show his devil side that he can’t be able to tell his name from his moutj

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  19. Ira

    Nice chappy but this Ragini is too much?

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  20. Nagamanasa

    Awesome dear….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  21. Awsm dear..naughty sanky..loved swasan romance..
    What z d problm with dat creepy nagini and shekar???brainless dumbozz..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  22. swasan are best and can’t u just kick out this naagin

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and don’t worry Swara will kick nagini out

  23. Tamil

    Amazing part dear….shekar is disgusting person …

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  24. Simi

    Awesome dear
    Shekhar is disgusting.. Shekhar ko Ragini ke lava kuch aur dikhta nahi hei

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  25. Awesome….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  26. Kakali

    Hi Mars! My SwaSan! No doubt why they are ever heavenly.! I’m loving it dear!
    Grrr you know I just thought of putting myself on Raginiz shoe! Oki, if I try to see from another side Ragini is attracted towards Sanskar, according to her she loves him which is only attraction nothing else!
    Well somehow Ragini isn’t wrong thought! Sometimes we can’t stop our emotions from flowing in wrong direction. So did Ragini! She didn’t know(when she felt attracted towards him) that Sanskar was married. She couldn’t help out herself admiring Sanskar!
    Sooo that’s okk according to me!
    But when she got to know Sanskar is married but still trying to get him is not correct!
    She is wrong and there is no doubt.
    But more than Ragini, it’s JHANKI & SHEKHAR’S Mistake.!
    Being a month Jhanki couldn’t make ger daughter understand what wrong she was doing while Sekhar is ready to destroy a happy family for sake of his daughter’s happiness!
    Ragini can stop her NOJ EXISTING FEELING if her parents try to make her understand what wrong she has been doing!
    Soooo acc to me I can’t blame Ragini either! Mistake is of ev1! Mainly her parents who failed to show her right path at right time which now lead to Shekhar taking this kinda cheap tricks!
    I will be more than happy if you clear this out in upcoming episodes! ——-It’s totally my view, it’s totally not needed that you will also think the same! Just thought of sharing with u!
    Loving my SwaSan and their unending love and trust for each other!
    It’s time for Swara to BANG ON!
    Her husband needs her more than her carrier and I’m so glad that she came back! Perfect step!
    Continue soon dear! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I agree its not ragini’s mistake as she might be immature but shekar who is so selfish just want her daughters happiness.
      He is more wrong.And don’t worry dear I will clear everything in next episodes. Just wait.
      Yes now swara will give priority to Sanskar
      BTW thanks for giving your views.
      I will post soon

  27. Kakali

    A few spelling mistake :p : Mother, non and many more!

    1. Mars

      Not a problem dear

  28. Seebu_s

    loved swasan scenes☺but y shekar is so cheap…!i agree with kaku..,ragini is wrong…but y shekar is hell bent to marry her with married man…!is he dumb or what…?sanskar is happily married to swara and living so happily…but how come shekar think sanskar will make ragini happy..?in serial also most spineless character is shekar..!and here to he is..!hope nothing will happen to my lovely swasan?and abt others..none of my business?

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and don’t worry nothing will happen to swasan.

  29. Meera_s

    shekar is worst father…loved swasan scenes

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  30. Nice…..

    1. Mars

      thank you dear

  31. Neha_01

    loved it,,the way swara understands sanskar. waiting how story will proceeds & how sanskar answers shekar’s blackmailing.
    Mars update soon dear!!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  32. loved it so much…?continue soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  33. Rads

    Actually this is amazing dear. I really loved this episode. And that ragini, I just want to kill her. How dare she eye on swara’s sanskar, and that shekar he is totally mad. Swasan are together now, I hope they will teach the godidia family a good lesson. Love you lots for this awesome episode ?????

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  34. awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  35. Vyshu10

    Awesome…loved it. Swasan romance???????? heavenly couple made for each other

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

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