Betrayal- Raglak-Swasan FF (Part1)

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Hello guyzz thanks for your comments. So lets start.

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The episode start with:

Two boys is running in the station. They are coming down from the stairs. Look a like they have did something big. They reached the train. And stop in front of the train. They looked back for last time. And yea its shown they are SANLAK. Both are sweating. After lookinh at the entrance both sat inside the train.

Meanwhile:
A girl running in her bridal dress with lots of jewellery heavy jewellery. Eyes have cryed a lot and are still crying. The only thing she said was a name “LAKSH”. She ran outside the house to the garden to the road. She was waiting for a taxi when suddenly she saw a cab coming jere. She stop the cab and sith in it. And asked the driver to drivd the cab toward railway station. She went from there in hurry.

Meanwhile:
A girl is shown entering in a room wearing a bridal dress. She locked the door. And throwed everything on the floor. Everything which was in the room. And finally after getting tired she fell on the floor. She put her head on the bed while she was stilling on the floor. Tear were rolling down from her eyes like a Ocean. The word she sayed was ‘SANSKAR’ And finally girl shown its was swara.

Meanwhile:
A girl run toward the bombay train but before she could reach there the train started in a high speed while she was coming down from the stairs. And when camed down the traim was going inside the tunnel. She fell down and start crying making a loud voice, People were looking her. But she was still in that position. Crying like a mad. She is shown it was Ragini.

Meanwhile:
Sanlak were sitting.
Sanky: I hope they will understan problem we can’t love them.
Lucky: I also hope. But i am shocked who can they think we most richest business man will love them. And secondly they trusted us blindly.
Sanky: Well. I hope so they will forgive us. Lets forget it.
Lucky: Hmmmm. Good night.
Both slept after thinking about whatever happened today.

Precap: 2 Year leap. Everything changed.

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Guyzzz do comment. And if any silent reader is reading this Thanks. Do commet and thanks for support in intro. πŸ™‚

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64 Comments
  1. feeling bad for ragini,

    1. Maddy_02

      Dont worry everything will be alright. Wait and Read…Hihihi πŸ™‚

  2. Yashasvi

    hey maddy nice story , liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!! will be waiting fr next part dear

    1. Maddy_02

      Awwwww. Thanks yaar. Love you.

  3. Great start, Awww poor Swara and Ragini ?. Can’t wait for the leap and the reunion of SwaSan and RagLak.

    1. Maddy_02

      Hey thanks yaar.

  4. Nice storyline. Waiting for next episode.

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks yaar. πŸ™‚

  5. LovelyAliya

    feeling bad for both Swaragini! Sanlak are a jerk, how could they do something like this! I hope in theses two years Swaragini will close their heart and don’t forgive them :p

    1. Maddy_02

      Lovelyaliya first of all i will call you alyu if you dont have any problem. And secondly thanks for comment. Ans third sanlak are not jerk but other boys are total jerk. Hate them. Well love and your name :-):-):-)

      1. LovelyAliya

        You can call me album if you want πŸ˜‰ I don’t mind :p
        Eager to read more

  6. Nice dear loved it maddy. Love you baby ?. Post next one soon or Else i will come in your dream’s to irritate you. ???

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks rashu di. Love you. Hihohi. You now that you cant irritate me because you love me. And i love you too.

  7. Maddy. Look you torture have made me too comment here. So its was beautiful. I will not say anything Else because you now i am lazy.?

    1. Maddy_02

      Finally chipkali commented. Well i will not say anything else. Love you

  8. Ok… Finally you posted thanks and yess loved it.?

    1. Maddy_02

      And i love you . Thanks

  9. Amazing…..Love you…. post next one soon. Or me and Anny,roshini,unknow,Aania will kill you in sleep…. hold on just kidding.??????

    1. Maddy_02

      You cant guyzzz Even think to harm. Even not in your dream’s. Thanks and loveyou

  10. Well…. amazing. Unknow u sayed right how can i leave her. Loved it. Post soon??

  11. Superb yr.. But what’s wrong with sanlak hw could they just do that

    1. Maddy_02

      Hold on….wait some time. Thanks for comment.

  12. Amazing..???

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks katie babe?

  13. My baby?. You rocked it. Love you

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks zain love you soooooo much. ??????????????????????????

  14. Love you keep it up. Loved it and love you??????????? MY BEBO

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks my bebo you alot. Samia my bestie love you alot.????

  15. Akshata

    oh my god!! feeling bad for swara and ragini…….

    1. Maddy_02

      Akshata thanks for comment. Love you. I know u must be wondering u dont now me but still i am saying love you. Well i am hyper so plz forgive me if you felt bad

      1. Akshata

        why will i feel bad? actually i am so happy after reading ur reply…..
        and yes love u too….. so friends?

    2. Maddy_02

      Why not friendship ?????

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks settu????

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks for Reading Malar. Love you.????

  16. good good good
    plz continue
    poor ragini just love her

    1. Maddy_02

      Last replie my hands Are hurting man. Phewwww. ?. Thanks for comment and for Reading love you. ????????????

  17. Interesting story

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks rizna bebo ????

  18. Sindhura

    They cheated them poor girls

    1. Maddy_02

      Yea. But wait some time everything will be in their control

  19. Superb episode and very interesting dear

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks ammu dear ????

  20. Nice strt

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks dear piya?

  21. Awesome

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks soujanya dear.

  22. Jwala

    interesting

    1. Maddy_02

      Thankyou so much for commenting jwala i have read your ff. Gangs og devil vs gangs og angel. I love IT. Thankyou

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks nikky

  23. Vyshu10

    nice..y did sanlak leave swaragini?

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks. You will get to now

  24. Moni

    Nice☺

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks moni

  25. Megha123

    Awsm epi BTW feeling really bad 4 swaragini ????

    1. Maddy_02

      Thanks sumeeta Nice profil picture

  26. Abirsha

    Nice….

  27. Chaitali

    Nice start maddy!Eager to know the whole story !

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