We are more than best friends a shraman OS (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys..!!
How r u all..??
Frst of all toh I want to say dat I m soooooooo happy…
I m here wid d 10 OS of mine…! Ooh wow I had completed 10 OS….OMG can’t believe this….bt guys must say…I can’t complete them widout ur support n luv…
So I would lyk to thank u all fr ur support n love towards my OS’s n me…
Baad wala hug n lots of kisses fr my side to all……!

So here is d 10 OS ! “We are more than best friends”
Hope u enjoy……. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

Story starts wid……
A girl is sitting near her windowShe has a diary in her hand……a pink beautiful dairy…..
She read it again n again…….n smiles…
She luks outside of her window….
G: people said ke 16-17 years ki age Mai attraction hota hai pyaar nai…Mai nai manti…….kyun ke mujhe attraction nai pyaar hoa tha…hai…….
G: it’s been 5 years……….(she luks at d diary) I have nothing except this diary……
(She sighs)
I don’t knw when I cross the thin line b/w frndship n love.hah it’s when I se u Frst tym………bt I guess u always stand in d side of frndship……
(She slightly laughs)
G: I used to read this diary daily…..bt u….u now moved on I guess….when I was coming to london it’s was our last meeting……
She touches a beautiful swan pandent in her neck…..
G: just this…….u didn’t even say smthing…. Bt I….I never got a chace to tell u my feelings……
(She luks down in disappointment)

On the other side……
A boy goes near a beautiful glass box….which is filled wod red pearls….
(He takes out a red pearl frm his pocket in put it in d glass box)
B: here goes 1,826 pearl……..(he smiles)
B: it’s been 1,826 days or u can say 5 years……..since I met u….where r u …? How r u….?? Many questions…..bt don’t knw when I get my ans…

Girl goes near her cupboard……
Diary pages start turning due to wind…..
She luks back to diary in its 2nd page where her n a boy pic is shown……
(She goes near it n touches d pic)
G: how can I forget d day……when I Frst met u….

FLASH BACK:
5 years back….
A girl enters in college…..she is very much sacred…..
G: seniors will definately rag me…….(she luks here n there)
(She looses d step of her sandal)
G: if any senior cm near me to rag…..I will beat him wid my sandal…..

(Suddenly her eyes stuck to a boy who is standing on wall wid sm frnds)
N huge crowed of juniors r standing down d wall…..
Boy: so who is next….???? Umm u….!
(He points at nerd boy)
Nerd boy: me..????
B: yes u..! Ja beta principal ke office ja or un se keh ke college tere papa ka hai…
Nb: hain..??? Nai plzzz he will rusticate me…
B: ooh hello we r here fr two years abhi tak hum toh rusticate hoy nai tu kaise hojai ga…..go n do wat I say……
(Nerd boy goes silently)
B: hmmm now next one is…….

Girl sees this frm a distance she gets shock)
G: I think he is d boss…..beta sumo tu kat le yahan se….warna if he got to knw dat u r also a junior he will not leave u…..
(She starts to go)

Boys is abt to say smthing when he got dis balance
But sumo cms frm behind n holds him….means save him frm falling…..
They share a cute eyelock….
Boy while breaking d eyelock: hello!!
(He stands up on his feet)
B: hmm junior or senior….?? Of course junior. !! πŸ˜€
(Sumo gives a confuse n shock Luk)
S: ho….how d…do u knw…??
B: cause agar koi senior hota toh Dhaka mar kar mujhe girata..! (He laughs) like them….he points towards his frnds who r laughing….
S: sorry….
B: fr wat…???
S: I..I saved u…
B: ahhaha why r u saying sorry…..or tumhe ruk ruk ke Bolne ki bemari hai..??
(Sumo gives a confused Luk n nods no)
B : nai u r saying…I..I m.so..sooryyy….if no toh then say with flow na…. πŸ˜€ acha anyways u saved me reward toh bata hai….
S: plzzz don’t rag me….
(Boy lyk swt his frnds n then laughs hard)
B: OMG u r tooo cute….(he pulls her cheeks) y would I rag u…??u saved me I m saying on serious tone thank u …!
S: ooho the. It’s okyy
B: btw m shravan malhotra…n u….??
S: suman……..
Shr: oooho nice name sumo…..
S: no it’s suman….
Shr: I knw bt I will call u sumo…is it okyyy..??
S: hmmm bt only my frnds call me sumo….
Shr: so m not ur FRND….??
S: haha nt lyk dat….u can call me…!
Shr: hah that’s great so let’s go to class I think it’s tym….
(They strts to go)

Bt shr stops n luks behind…..
Shr to his FRND: no buddy will rag or bully…. sumo… Understand??
(He strts to go bt again stops)
Or Han in juniors ko mat chorna….(he laughs)

After d class both shraman talk shok……
Shr: so this is our khana ka adda….means canteen….we enjoy here a lot….
They sit on a table…..
Shr: so wat do want to eat..??
S reads d menu.: hmmm French fries…
Shr: aloooooo hahah u like potato dishes??
S: yes…!!
Shr: hahaha phir Bhi itni smart…!! Wow..!
Sumo blushes….
They eat there respective dishes….
Shr: u knw wat I never ever had a junior FRND….
S: haha so that means m Frst…
Shr: yes Frst or last…. ( they share n eye lock)
Shr breaks d eyelock: Oky Oky….so let’s click a selfie..!
(He clicks a selfie wid her)

PRESENT:
(She touches d same pic)
A tear rolls frm her face……

Scene changes to d boy’s house…..
–he is wearing d same locket—
He goes n opens his cupboard…..
He takes a lot of frames wid different photos of him n sumo)
(He takes out a frame in which “shravan+sumo = BFF’s” is written)
Shr slightly says: BFF’s………………….
(He then takes out another pic of sumo)
Shr: I should have said that day…..dat I love………bt i didn’t realize it…

FLASHBACK:

It’s been 3 months n shraman r now besties….
(They share everything wid EACHOTHR)
Shraman r eating pani puri…
–there r also a couple present there who were eating n romancing—
Shr: hahahah c them….love birds…
(Sumo laughs)
S: acha shr…….
Shr eating…mmmmmmmmm
S: did u ever love smone….
Shr luks at her lovingly……
Shr: yes……this pani puri (he laughs)

(Sumo gets irked)
S: ufffff…….
M going to car eat fast…..
Shr strts to go bt shr stops her….
Shr: sumo……
(She turs back n he clicks her pic)
Shr: perfect…..
(Sumo gives a watever Luk n goes)

PRESENT:
(Shr sees d pic)
Shr: why didn’t I stop u n said dat I love u……….that WS d biggest mistake of mine….

Nxt day…..
(Preeti cms to sumo)
___guys preeti is sumo’s elder sis_______
P: sumo….I want to talk to u….
S: yes di…
P: ur marriage got fixed…
(Sumo gets shock)
S: wat…??? No…I…
P: shut up….u will not say no this tym….
S: but di u….
P: sumo frm past three years u r continuously saying no to every boy….I don’t knw wat r u waiting fr…????
S: plzzzz di……
P: no sumo…..not this tym…
S: no I will talk to mom n dad…
P holds her…
P: sumo plzz try to understand mom n dad r both very happy frm dis marriage…plzzz don’t spoil their mood ….. They r coming in 3 days behave well…
( preeti goes n sumo sits on bed touches her pendant n cry)
S: y did u nt cm in these years….no shr I love u only…

At ni8………
(Both shraman r sitting near their windows holding d same pic in their hand)
Shr is so upset cause his marriage also got fixed with his dad best FRND daughter….
Shr n sumo both Luk at d pic—–

FLASH BACK….
There WS a party in their college n both goes in it as a couple…..
While entering….(cameraman) clicks their pic together….
In party…
Shraman is sitting n everybody dancing….
S: shr plzz yr chal na….we should also dance…
Shr: nai I won’t go…u go….
S: Aaahaaa it’s a couple dance…
Shr: so..?
S: kuch nai (irked)
Shr: acha m going to get myself a drink u need..?
S: Pepsi….
Shr nods n goes…..

When he cms back he sees dat sm boys r asking sumo to dance wid them,…
S: no I m nt in mood…
1 boy: plzzz
2 boy: u r all alone y not dancing…..
Shr cms there.: who said she is alone…??
(All luks at him)
Shr: beta nikal yahan se….(d boys goes)
Sumo luks down…
(Shr holds sumo hand n take her to stage)
S: shr wat r u doing….
Shr: dancing….u want na…
S: ab nai…(she strts to go….bt he holds her hand frm back n pulls her closer to him)
(They both share an eyelock n dance passionately)
Sumo in mind: shr plzzz don’t do this I can’t stop myself falling fr u……
Shr: I already fall fr u sumo….bt I won’t confess it….until u say….

PRESENT:
S: when I mete u Frst tym I fell fr u….in d party I tried to control myself..bt again fell fr u….widout knowing ur feelings…..
Shr: I don’t knw wat u feel abt me now…bt I can’t stopped my self felling frm u….I loved u….I love u..n I will love u….
S: plzzzz shr cm back to me….I don’t want to marry anyone else…

Both luk at d sky….

FLASHBACK….
It’s last day of college…n shr also got a shock new that sumo is going aboard fr further studies…..
Shr: how can u do dat to me…???? Why r u leaving…
S while packing bags: wat d big deal in it…??
Shr: u can’t go lyk this…I won’t let u go….
S: y ?? Wats d matter….tell me one reason to stay…..Luk yr I really have to go…I can my bright future….ipbut I got it only when I study hard n go aboard…..no one can stop me now….
Shr in mind: the biggest reason is I love u…..bt u r hurting me plzz don’t go..plz say that u love me too…..
Sumo in mind: plzz shr say smthing plzz say that u love me…..ek baar Bol do…I promise I will stay wid out thinking of anyone….
Shr: I think it’s better fr u to go……
S: u r ri8…..
(He takes out a swan pendant)
Shr: I brought that fr u….never take it off…
(He gives it to her n goes)
(Sumo tries to stop him)
—-she can c d pain in his eyes——
—n he also can—–
S: I knw u don’t love me but will love u forever….
Shr while walking didn’t Luk behind cause he WS crying
Shr: I won’t tell u my feeling cause I knw u won’t understand….

PRESENT:
S: I loved him more than him…..why didn’t I stay……
Shr: I loved her so much….why did I let her go….

Both: just bcz of my foolishness I lost him/her forever…….why didn’t I confess….

AFTER THREE DAYS:
Malhotra’s reach sumo’s house means mehra’s mansion……
Ram nir n shr enter…..

(Yes guys shr is d guy sumo going to marry)

UPSTAIRS SUMO’s ROOM:
P: yrrrr plzzz cm downstairs….they arrived…
S: no I will not I already told u…I will not marry anybody….
P: ATLEAST see him once…his name is….
(Sumo puts her hands on her ears)
S: lalalalaaa….!
(Preeti gets angry)
P: dafa ho ja ……..
S: hahaha I already said I will nt hear his not n will nt met him either…
P: watever mom will deal wid u…
(She goes)
S: I will not marry anyone I will wait fr shr fr 5 years…..n I will wait fr him forever…

Preeti cms downstairs….she tells Priya abt sumo’s behaviour…
Pri slowly : kaan se pakad ke la usay…..
Preeti: mom…I tried everything she is not coming …
Shr: aunty is everything alright?? Di where is sumo …?
P: sharma rahi hai……
Shr:,wat shy n she…..not possilbe…..
Priya: why don’t u go n meet her urself..shr…
(Shr heart shirt beating faster as he WS going to c his love after 5 years)
Shr: oo…kk aunty…..
(He goes upstairs)

Sumo is standing in her balcony…..(enjoying d weather)
S: pata nai kab jai ga wo larka…..

—smone knocks at d door—–
S: ufff di again…..di…!!!!! I don’t want to cm….
(Again knock knock)
S irked: wat d hell…..di..jao yahan se I will nt meet him…..
A voice is heard fr behind:
“Naraz ho”…….????
Sumo’s eyes widen in shock as she hears d voice…..the polite voice can only be shr……
S: shr………………..

(A tear rolls frm her face as she slowly-slowly turs back to Luk)
—n when she finally turns back she can’t believe on her eyes…..her love kum lyf is standing infront of her giving a slight smile—

Sumo’s jaws drops in shock….cause she is seeing him after 5 years….the melodious. Voice…..the perfect hair, hazel eyes still same…but height…he got more lambu…she murmured

Shr WS also seeing her….after 5 years…..
The perfect dark eyes with little kajal, pink cheeks , the glowing smile of her…..bt she got even more beautiful…….

Sumo: u………
Shr: surprise na….??
Preeti cms frm behind….
P: hahaha ab Bol….jiju is standing in front of u n also u knw his name….
Sumo gets shock hearing d name of jiju……
(She luks at shr who is smiling)
S: jiju…????
P: yes my love jiju… J.I.J.U…..anyways u two continue….m going by…
–as she goes sumo luks at him again–
S: wat is..,,,I…I can’t understand….it….shr…tum…..
(She cms near her)
Shr: heyyy don’t get confused let me tell u clearly…..

“When u left me….I mean when u go off aboard…..I WS very sad cause I just lost u in a bit…….three years passed lyk dis….bt frm prev two years my dada WS continuously forcing me to get married to his BFF daughter….n I said no..widout ask her name…..I WS idiot…..bt 3 days ago….

Shr is sitting near his window as he is very upst cause his marriage got fixed…
Ram cms to him….
Ram: beta y r u sad…..
Shr: no papa m not sad….
Ram: acha then have a Luk to ur future wife…..
Shr didn’t want to bt can’t deny…..
He shows him pic….
(N shr gets shock to c sumo in the photo…he luks at ram)
Ram: she is suman my BFF daughter…ur future wife….she is a very talented n self centred girl my boy….she will always keep u happy…..

Shr face glows wid a bright smile on his face….
Shr: of course she will….!!!
Ram: haha beta wat happened to u..?? U were very sad a moment ago u didn’t want to c her pic….her name…n now…..(shr smiles) wai…wait..is she d girl….
Shr nods….
Ram: awww y didn’t u tell me before…..
(Both hug EACHOTHR)
Shr: thanks dad…
Ram: m so happy fr both of u…….

(Hahaha guys Luk I made ramnath positive πŸ˜€ cause serial Mai he is total ravnath or u can say ramu kaka which I usually call him )

PRESENT:
Shr: after dat……this…..I came here….I didn’t even wasted a moment to meet u….
(Sumo is just luking at him lovingly)
Shr: hey…!! Yr say smthing
Sumo cms to her senses: Han Han…..yes…….so…m going to…
Shr: marry me…..
S: hmmmm…….
Shr: Luk yr….I..I don’t knw how u feel abt me…bt I m giving u tym if u don’t want to marry me…..cause we r frnds Frst…..
S in mind: idiot I waited fr this moment fr 5 years n how can I let it go..?
S: no…I…..
(Suddenly d pages gf her diary starts turning due to wind)
It’s d last page…now….
(Shr luks at this….)
Shr: wats dat..?? (He goes near diary)
S: no…no……
(Shr sees n reads)
“N then I realize he is more than a FRND to me……yes I love him more than anything else in d world”
(Shr luks at sumo who is luking down in guilt)
Shr goes near her….
Shr: is this true…..??(sumo didn’t make n eye contact wid him)
(He makes her Luk at him)
Shr slowly n lovingly: don’t be guilty…just tell me dat is this true…?

Sumo nods yes…..
(He happily lifts her in his arms)
S: ahhhh πŸ˜€
Shr: m so happy….!!!!!
S: hahahah shr I will fall……
Shr gets closer to her face: I will never ever let u fall……(they have a cute eyelock)
S: dat means u also……
Shr: yes….!!!! I realize it when u left…..
S: m so sorry I shouldn’t have…..
(He puts his finger on her lips)
Shr: don’t it WS myyyyy mistake too….

Shr touches her pendant… U still have dat…??
S: it’s frm my most beloved one….how can I lost it..?
(He kisses her on cheeks)
Shr: thank u fr waiting fr me…………
S: thank u fr returning to me…..
Shr: now I want to ask smthing…..

(He sits on knees)
Shr: miss sumo….my lyf ,my bestie,my love……m asking directly dat will u be my partner hahah now fr temporary tym fr lyf tym…….
S: hmm soch ke Bataon gi….
(Both laughs)
—he makes her wear ring—–
Shr: I promise I will never evr leave u again……
S: me too…..
(Both hug each othr)
Shr: I love u……
S: I love u tooo…….
Both: n I will love u n stay wid u forever………..

—-5 YEARS LATER—–

Shraman r now a happily married couple……they r sitting on couch…..reading d dairy ep which sumo wrote……
Shr: hoooo I love this line….that I was more than a best frnd….
(Sumo smiles)
(He side hugs her)

A little cue girl around 4 girls running out her room n happily hugs him….
Girls happily: papa….!!!

(Yes guys…!! She is priyanka our shraman’s most cutoooooo si daughter)

Shr makes her sit on his lap….
Shr: my princess…..
(He kisses her cheeks)
S: mama ko toh koi nai poochna…..(makes a pout face)
Both father daughter high5…..
(Shr locks sumo in his arms…n priyanka puts her head on sumo’s shoulder)
Shr: now I have a complete family…….
(Sumo kisses on shr cheeks)
S: thank u mr shr malhotra fr everything…….
(She luks at priyanka who is so happy to c her mama papa luv)
S: n this cuto si beti…tooo…..
(Sumo cresses priyanka’s face while shr kisses on sumo’s forhead)

N it’s end on a happy note…….
“The couple lives happily after wid their daughter”

So guys how is it…???
Did u lyk it…???
It’s so special fr me guys …..cause it’s my “10” OS πŸ™‚
If u lyk this then plzz cmmnt cause I really need it…..
Again thanks a tone fr ur support n love…..!!
Silent readers u tooo cmmnt (plzz don’t stay silent)

Chalo guys by by….
See u soon…..
Love u all…..!!!!!!

53 comments

  1. Zainab

    This is the cutest thing I’ve read so far 😍
    Loved it to every bit of it πŸ’œ
    Really loved the way you wrote flashbacks and the present scenes.. AMAZING…. FABULOUS… FANTASTIC… AWESOME..
    Much love
    xoxo
    P.S while reading this I didn’t know that you write it and i was like wow what a writer, man.. and then I read your name and was like oh wow our maria wrote this 😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Heyy zainab API…!!
      How r u…?? πŸ˜€
      Awww thank u so much fr such a sweet cmmnt api…!!
      Hahahah itni tareeef…!! M blushing yr…. πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€
      Really u didn’t knw wow….!! Hahaha then it’s amazing wai I didn’t knw I write this good….. πŸ˜€

  2. Anamika

    Haye
    So cute
    Congo for the10 OS✌️
    Alll were awesome n this is like cherry on top of the cake🍰
    This was soooo cuteπŸ˜„
    i loved it😍
    Loved it jus loved it😍
    Hope u write many more like this
    Love uh marie baby😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwww thank u so SO so much Annie di ……!! Really glad to c ur sweet cmmnt…!!
      N sooo happy that u lyked it….
      Thank u thank u soooooooo much…!!!
      Haha I will surely write….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u toooooooooooooooo….!!!!

  3. Angel_pari

    Awwwwwww maira this was just wowwwwwwww
    πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΌπŸ‘Ό

    love it cute like u πŸ™‚

  4. Sss

    |Registered Member

    aha its so nice amazing cute sweet love story yar loved it to the core happy endings that too sweet way.diary part seriously loved it..cngrts for 10th os though I dint read all of them but from now I will as I really like your this os awesome one

    • Marie

      |Author

      OMG such a sweet cmmnt ……..!! So happy yr….!! Thank u sooo much fr praising it so much…!! N I m really glad to c ur cmmnt…..!!
      Aana no prob at all
      A awww that’s so sweet of u yr…..!!
      Lots of luv…..!

  5. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria my cute sissy..
    kesi ho tum?
    yaar tum Itna acha kese likh leti ho?
    it was mindblowing..
    u nailed it…
    a perfect love story..
    congrats for ur 10th OS…
    keep writing more Os like this..
    take care…
    Lots of love <3
    Ruchi …. πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyyy my sweeto di….!!!!!
      M fyn how r u….??? πŸ˜€
      haha thank u
      thank u
      thank u soooo much itni tareef ke liay……!!!!!
      I will surely write afterall u all r lyking it so much πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      love u tooooooooooooooo…!!!!!

  6. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Wow di !!
    How are you?
    I was so excited for it , and finally you posted it !!
    Amazing..!!
    It was beautiful… Nai nai..
    Very beautiful..
    I liked Ramnath here, atleast he’s not the RamNalayak from the show!
    Amazing di!
    Love you loads !!
    -Nikko..
    By the way, ek badi behen apni choti behen ko party degi na ??

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy darling….!!!!!
      M fyn dear …….! πŸ˜€ how r u..??
      Omg thank u so much fr being excited…… thank u so so much fr such a sweet n lovleyy cmmnt my dear……!!
      Haha yr i had to make him possible cause show mai he is a total ravnath…..atleast kahin toh stress kam ho na πŸ˜€

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahaha kyun nai kyun nai……!! πŸ˜€ i will definately give u a party my nikko !!
      tym or jagah bata do n i will be therw to give u party….haha plzz ab ye mat kehna ke india aajaon cause wo mai aanai sakti…….online party. !! πŸ˜€
      love u so so much se bhi ziada yrrr….!!
      Take care

  7. Kaya

    Wow….. lovely OS……you should surely write more of OS’s……you are really a lovely writer……..it was awesome…. amazing…… I loved it……. congrats on completing your 10 OS’s….

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much fr cmmnting kaya dear…..!! Really glad dat u r lyking it…..!!
      I will surely write more my dear…..!!
      Again thanks a tone….!!

  8. pretty preeti

    Di I want party party
    Congo for 10 is
    Every os was fab
    I loved every
    This one was too gud
    Ramu was also gud
    Loved it
    Amazing
    Superb
    Excellent
    Loved it
    Love u
    Byeeeeee
    Party mat bholna

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahaha. zarooor mile gi darling…..!! Online party karte hain….!! πŸ˜€
      Thank u
      thank u
      thank u
      thank u
      thank u
      thank u sookoo much fr itni saari tareef yr….!! u r making me blush…..!!
      Hahah party mile gi beta i wont forget…!! πŸ˜‰
      Love u so much

  9. Neeti

    Ramu kaka ka the end ab Ram ka suruwat hua
    wo how cute de have a child and that too girl
    Maria di itna accha idea ap kaha se banati ho, mujhe us shop ka nam batao πŸ˜›
    sooo nice os atleast Ram aha to kamina nai ha
    loved it
    I love yo itna ki zammen chir zaye aur ashman fat jaye- Neeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahahaa finally but serial mai ravnatg abhi tak hai
      awww thank u so so much fr such a lovely cmmnt yr……!!! heheh us shop ka naam mera choto sa dimaagh hai dear…..!!
      Omg yr so tareef….!! u made me feel so special wid ur cmmnt yr…..!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      n thank u so much fr loving me this much yr……
      I also love u ummmmm
      “MORE THAN U”…….!!!!!!!!!! N MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE….!!!!!

  10. sona

    U rocked Marie..
    Loved it..
    Yaar..ek baath batau ki ye priyanka kaun hai..Teri bestie ka naam hai kya..?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Mujhey nahi lagta ki tumney ye naam yuhi choose kar li..😜😜😜
    Batau..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot sona di…!!! Really glad to c ur cmmnt…!!
      Hahaha nai nai meri bestie nai hai bs aise hi naam aaya cause I was watching dil dhrakne do….so isi liay…… πŸ™‚ but is ur name priyanka….??
      Btw I always forget to ask abt ur real name di….can u tell me if u don’t mind….
      N di 1 more important thing’……mr u on twitter…or insta….?? By the name of sona…??

  11. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Ohk hi love kese ho???
    I liked the one shot I enjoyed it thouroghly congrats for ur 10th one and amazing one shot I liked the way of description
    U know what I don’t like potato’s even I have never eaten them till date strange. Na I know I m unique hahaha
    Anyway thori ill hn isliye short co.ment
    Take care
    Love u

    • Marie

      |Author

      Heyy API…!!
      Wat wat..!! No..no…no u again felt ill….Kia karte ho ap..!! Apna khayaaal kyun nai rakhne ho ap…..!!
      API plz plz take care of urself….take rest…as much as u can….
      Thank u so much fr cmmnting API…!! Really happy that u lyked it…!
      Hahah really u don’t like potatoes…..’wow…!! Haah unique piece….! πŸ˜€
      Na na no prob on short cmmnt…!!
      Plz plz plz take care api plzzzzz
      Love u mostest…!!
      Acha di r u on any other social website…?

  12. sona

    No..I’m not in twitter..or instagram..I didn’t created yet…😊😊😊
    Oh..how was the film?
    I think dil dhadkaney dho ka meaning..hai..
    Let beat ur heart..
    And some times I feel it means heart and beat are two..different things..
    Wts the right answerπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜―??
    Ya..my real name is priyanka..😊
    Wt about urs?πŸ˜‰

  13. Marie

    |Author

    Ooohhhhkk there was a girl on twitter by ur name i mean sona so i thought its u…..khair….ap jab bhi banao batana zaroor…
    The film was good…i like dis film…..haha it means let ur heart beat i think……cause they r saying dil dhdakne do….so may be…..
    Wow really priyanka is ur real mae….its one of my fav names….finally ap ka real name bhi pata chal gaya di….btw hpw is ur age ?? if u dont mind cause i dont knw dat either….
    Yep my real name is maria….. πŸ˜€

  14. Naina

    It was mind blowing but i want to know that shraman story k start ma red pearls kyun jamah kar raha tha

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much dear…..!!
      Actually he was counting d days…….he didn’t even contact or saw her fr five years so he didn’t knw where is she…..cause it’s been five years….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  15. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria !!!! What an OS yr .. just perrrrfectπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ .. fab πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ .. nd many many many CongratulationsπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸ˜ŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰ for completing 10 OS … keep writing like this .. 😊😊😊 ..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so SO so much se Bhi bht bht ziada fr this lovely n seet cmmnt Fatima……!!
      Will surely write false dat u lyked it….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u a lot..!

  16. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awwwww so cute…. This OS just took off my heart. Especially the red pearl thing. Perfect!!! Loved it as much as I love u

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww yr thank u so much fr such a sweeto sa cmmnt….!!!!
      M really happy dat u lyked d pearl thing….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u tooooooo much se Bhi bht hi ziada….!!
      Muahhhh

  17. Nandini aka Nandu

    Am so so sorry maria dear. Actually I commented here twice but pata nahi kya huaπŸ˜” sabse pehle, lots of congratulations for completing 10os. Keep writing dear. Lots of love

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aaha no prob dear….!! Actually I was checking it again n again but didn’t saw ur cmmnts but finally…..!!!! Thank u sooo soo much dear….!!

  18. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    hey marie di u rocked it di loved it to the core of my heart how u write so much well…!!!!!!!!!!!!! an amazing one shot by an amazing writer dilove u lots lots lots lots lots and your ff/one shot so much…!!!!!!!! do write another one shot..!!!!!!!

  19. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    hey marie di u rocked it di loved it to the core of my heart how u write so much well…!!!!!!!!!!!!! an amazing one shot by an amazing writer di love u lots lots lots lots lots and your ff/one shot so much…!!!!!!!! do write another one shot..!!!!!!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy my dear….!!!!
      Aww thank u soo sooo sooo much fr such a beutiful cute sweet lovely sa cmmnt !!!
      OMG itni tareeef mama ne Bhi nai ki !!!
      Love u sooooo sooo much se Bhi bht bht ziada my dear….!!!
      Take care…!

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