Best friends forever♥…twinj OS

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Best friends forever♥…twinj
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“Best friends” who r they..?
They r our lifeline..they r the person for whom we r living..its our family too..but our best friends r our life..isn’t it..?
They r the one’s who have all our secrets n we have theirs..even if u don’t have a best friend u tell ur secrets to ur brother or sister who eventually becomes ur best friend..
It is a relation which once is tied can never break..but..
Is it good to replace ur freindship with love…?

I n kunj were freinds sice childhood..our families were friends so it was the reason why we were together..always..if i had a problem i would visit him n if he had a problem he would visit me..if he had done something wrong i was their to save him n if i have done something wrong he was their to save me..we have done everything wrong together..he was my partner in crime..during our high school time..we were best of friend..friends who dont need words to communicate..nor does we need actions..our eyes said what we wanted to..we were always together no matter what..even if he had to go to a date with any1 n i said that i wanna go a movie or somewhere else he would clearly say no to the girl with whom he was going to a date..our bond was so strong that no one can break it..”no matter what will happen..

i will be always by ur side..even death can’t break our friendship” was the lines he said LAST to me when we were sitting in library n filling our secret book..it was the last page in which we had written ‘BEST FRIENDS FOREVER ♥’..the book is still with me n i will keep it with me..then after that day i got to know that he joined ‘The Bullies’ which was the worst grp in our college..in this grp the one who is joined can never go..they did all wrong..they smoked..they drinked..they gambled..they eve tease the girls..n everything..how can he join this grp..when i asked him..he said”i know what i m doing..don’t worry..”..then he started to be with them n i was left all alone..i was missing him..i was missing my best friend..whom i secretly love..

he was not coming to college..frm so many days..i went to his home where i got to know that he is not there also..i texted him after a few days..i could see that he read the message but didn’t replied..he was with his gang..was this his friendship..he promised me that he will be my side forever..even death won’t break our friendship..n because of this gang we r apart..n finally one day i found him..in the college corridor..listening to music..i ran to him n asked him..”Where were u kunj..u know i was missing u so much..y u were not coming to college..i was so worried for u..can’t u ecen text me..n y the hell r u with that grp..i told u not to join it..” he jerked me away n said “Who r u to me..? Just a friend..notjing else..so don’t interfere in my life..i will do whatever i want..got it..” he left saying so..but actually he was right..i was just his friend..n nothing else..for me he was my everything..but i guess love should be 2-sided..it wasMe who was in love with him.maybe he didn’t reciprocated the feelings..after that day we never met..i was all alone..lonely..sitting aline in the bench..going home alone..no one to share secrets with..no one to console me..no one to tease me..no one to make me smile when i m sad..no one to be with me..not even my or his family..they died in a plane crash..so now i was all alone..i had no one..no one to say that he or she is mine..only kunj was the one who i was supposed to say mine..but he also left me..he not only broke our friendship..but my heart too..i never talked to him..only i could do was cherish our moments we spend happily with each other..then one fine day..actually it was not fine day anymore after i recieved a call..it was frm Rohan our friend n not the member of The Bullies..

he said that Kunj was taking his last breathes..i rushed towards the hospital..after all i much i deny..i still love him..all our moments were coming in frnt of my eyes..our mischieves..when we were blaming each other..our happy moments n then the last time i met him..but that didnt stopped me or slowed me down but i just increased my speed n i reached the hostiptal..i went to his room n there i can see a man pulling the white cloth on this face..which meant that he is no more..no my kunj can’t leave me..he said even daeth cant apart us..i was crying like hell..i wanted to go there n hug him but rohan was stopping me..he said that no one is allowed to go inside..let them shift him to another Ward..i was just seeing him n when they shifted him i rushed to him n cried my eyes out..then rohan gave me a diary n said..”His cousin asked me to give it to u..”..it was the same diary..the same diary which i wanted to know..he didn’t showed anything..what is written in it..then i started reading it..


I n twinkle..we r best friends since childhood..we share a great bond with each other..i have a different feeling when i see her..don’t know what it is..
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Today we r in our high school..n still together..i wish we will be together..always..i don know about her but yeah i wont leave her..she is my best friend..but i m still unknown about my feeling for her..
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Today when the results were out..i n twinkle went home n called our family who were living in new york n asked them to come here soon..they said they will come but they never came..they died in the plane crash..i was soo sad..but seeing twinkle i had to be strong..she was crying like hell..i cant see her cry yaar..i was acting strong in front of her but frm inside i was broken..when i went to her she just hugged me tightly..we hugged many times but this hug was different..i guess now i m aware of the feeling i have for her..is it love? Yes it is..i love her..not frm today but frm my childhood..but should i be happy that i discovered what this feeling is called or be sad that our family is no more n my twinkle is crying..but i love her..
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I joined The Bullies today..i didn’t wanted to but i had to..n because Of that i started ignoring twinkle..i didn’t wanted to but i had to..i m srry twinkle..but i love u..n will always love u..
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Today..they all called me..i don’t know whats the reason behind..i went n they all were talking..then they started talking ill about twinkle..i was soo angry n i started beating them..but i was 1 n they were 5..but still i beated them n 2 of them were srsly injured..but the rest 3 overpowered me n now i m going to die soon..i m writing all this so that one day u will know y i did this twinkle..i know that u r the 1 reading this..i m telling u twinkle..never cry..i can’t see u crying..i will always be there for u twinkle..when u will see the stars the brightest one among them will be me..when u will close ur eyes n think about me..i will be present in the wind..when u will go to college listening to music..i will be there dancing on the tunes of it..even if u can’t see me..i will be always there..for u..in the wind..in ur mind..in ur heart..in everything that is present near u n related to u..I LOVE U TWINKLE..forever..

Now i was in tears but i didnt cried..after all my kunj asked me not to cry..but still i was thinking that y kunj joined the grp as he didn’t wrote it in the diary..then his cousin came n gave me his(kunj’s) phone..i looked at him n then took the phone..it was locked but the lock screen was having a photo of kunj n me smiling..i typed kunj n it didnt unlocked..then i typed twinkle..still it didnt unlocked then i typed twinj n it Unlocked..i smile between my tears as i got into a flashback..

I n kunj were roaming in the garden when we suddenly saw a tree where a couple were writing something..we went there n saw that they were joining names..we asked them that r they in relationship n they looked at us n then at each other n laughed..they composed themselves after epseeing our confused faces n said thst they r just best friends but they eill be with each other for forever..not as lovers but as best friends..so i thought that why don’t we join our names n write it on the tree..i said kunj to which he said no..when i asked him he said..”Why to show it to tge world that what we r..they can clearly see it..showing our love n friemdship by doing something in frnt of world is not frue..its called true when we r alone n u show the same love n carethat u show in frnt of world..n still if u want u can write..” i just nodded in no n said..”its ok if we dont tell to world but we can join our names right..” “lets think..” he said n we started thinking..then after some stupid names we came to conclusion that it will be TWINJ..TWInkle + kuNJ = TWINJ..he made me understand n i smiled..

As i opened his phone messages were already opened..then a message caught my attention..it was frm Brad..the leaderof the grp..i went to that message n what was written totally shook me apart..it was the message on the day frm when he stopped coming to the college..it read-
“Brad i have made distance frm twinkle..n i joined ur grp Just for that reason..i hope now u wont hurt her..i m ready to die for her but plzz dont hurt her..i love her..plzz”

I was in tears..he made his life hell just to make mine a heavan..he was suffering these days n i was just thinking about me..he was soo good n what i thought of him..he gave his life just to make me live..i misunderstood him..i love him..i still do..i holded his hand n said “I love u kunj..” n suddenly i started feeling uneasy..n then everything went blank..when i opened my eyes i saw my kunj..slreading his arms asking me to just go n hug him..i ran to him n hugged him tightly..then i saw here n there n saw that it was all white n then i got to know that i was in heaven..with my prince..then i got to know that i got a heart attack n there n then i died..but still i m happy that i got him..not in earth but in the heaven..where the couples r actually decided..i kept my forehead against his n said..”I LOVE U KUNJ..”..
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Hey guyz..
How was it..
Its me again to eat ur brains with my boring stories..u know what i have a paper tomorrow n m writing this for u all..i didn’t even opened my copy n saw anything n i started writing this story..
So guyzz can i get 15+ comments..? I know that its not worth but still guys..we writers r taking out so much time to entertain u all n cant u guyz give ur 1 min to type a comment..u can write good or bad or just a word that can encourage the writer to write more..

N i m saying it to those who can encourage the writers..n not to Those who knows to discourage them..i m not saying that dont comment negative..comment ur views in such a way that ur view is clearly seen n u dont use any bad language..y do u guys use bad language..n mind u guyz..m onlt 12 bur i know double abusing words then u do..if i started na them u all will not be able to show ur face to any1..just respect the writers yaar..u tell ur opinion but without using ill language..they take out so much time for u n u guyz just discourage them so badly..u guys can give them ideas n tell them the points u didnt liked n what could be done but u guyz just bash them..i m not saying only about me guyz..i m saying this for each writer..2 girls commented ill on my ff n i was so hurt guyz y do u have to do so..N 1 more thing guyz..should i not start my ff ‘Our Eternal Love’ coz i got only 9 comments including those 2 bashers..ya i know that there r 25 comments but its of mine too..if i bored u guyz..m srsly srry..i thought not to continue that ff..

Anyways..do tell me ur views about this os..plzz comment..n if this os if i dont get much comments i m not gonna write again..m srry if i acted rude but guyz i m hurt tooPlzzz do comment.either positive or negative..but no ill language..n if some1 used then i swear that i m gonna start this time..my friends know me well..i m a girl who can hear anything but if it hurts me then i just burst out..i dont care what i m saying..so no ill language..Toaday i talked alot..srry if u got bored..
Love u all..
Bye..
♥♥

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42 Comments
  1. awsm..emot..os
    plzzzzzzz.cou..ur..ff

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm maha..i will se if i can conrinue my ff..love u

  2. Sohi

    It was awesome

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm sohi di..love u

  3. Aashiya

    Hey jasmin,
    I’m Aashiya….I guess I’m commenting for the first time on ur writing……………………..
    U know what I too have a bestie….nd our relation is also like twinj’s friendship………
    We fight wid each other like tom nd jerry bt at the end it’s me nd him….he’s there for me no matter what…he’s d 1 who knows all my secrets…In our case I’m d siyappa creator nd he’s d siyappa solver….although I never tell hI’m how Important he’s for me…..u know he’s my hero…I never told him dis but this os just forced me to tell him so…..u know I was literally crying while reading this nd I’m even crying now…..
    I can very well understand how it feels..losing ur best friend. …….In d worst of my nightmares also I can’t imagine losing my bestie…..He means soo much to me….
    u know jasmin,I even sent him d link of this os….although he’s never in treated in ffs nd os but he’s gonna read it for me…I was just soo touched by reading this that I had to send d link to him…………

    Nd dear ur really a gr8 writer …..hats off to u…..If u can make ppl shed tears wid ur writing…It means ur really a gr8 writer………I can say that this os is d best os I’ve read till date…sachii me….best os till
    date……
    nd pls don’t pay heed to those idiot bashers……They ain’t got brains….nd we all know that..hai na?????pls don’t feel sad coz of them….plshhhh for me….

    Nd baby pls don’t get sad by less comments. ..coz most of the members are having their finals….even I’m having my hindi exam tmrw…Plshhh nd don’t ever stop writing…….

    Nd ya wd u like to be my friend….If u don’t mind we can be sisters too………do tell me abt ur self……I’m aashiya….13 yrs old…….In 8th grade
    nd pls reply 2 my cmmnt if u have time

    Love u a lot lot lot ???????
    – Aashiya? ?

    1. Jasmin

      Oh my god di…like srsly..thiss much big comment..n believe me i have a smile more bigger than ur comment..i m glad that u shared ur story with me..hope that ur best friend will also comment :P..hehe..just kidding..thank u very much di..it means alot..n i guess u r right as many have papers so they cant comment..n i thought we r friends right..n i m ready to make any1 my sister..n brother too..n about myself i cant reveal my real name but i m 12 years old..studying in 7th..n u know what my best friend is also here but she is not a writer..she wrote a story..we both also share a great bond..and yeah all the best for ur exams u kniw what i was studying when i thought to check my post n then i am just replying to every1 n i didnt studied anything..but i can study later also..but u know what its maths so no tension..btw love u tooo..

      1. Aashiya

        Awww my sweetheart….thnks for replying…..nd I’m really sorry…my bestie won’t comment..m really sholly…..He doesn’t even reads ffs nd os(boys r idiots?) bt for me he read it nd he was like baby (he calls me baby?) don’t worry I won’t ever lev u…..he’s really very sweet…nd btw he liked d story too….He said it was very sweet nd emotional…
        Thanks for writing dis os as coz of this I came to know dat hw much I matter to him nd how much he matters to me…thank you shooo much
        nd I guess ur bestie’s name was manu….as far as I remember….
        nd I love u toooooooo a ll lotttttttt
        nd thanks for being my sissy. …bt now I wanna make u my brother (as u said)so wd u be my brother ???

        Love u a lot………
        -Aashiya
        (Sorry agn as my bestie didn’t cmmnt
        Take d parsing of dis reply frm his side????? sachii he praise ur os a lot….He had to praise afterall u wrote shooo well)

        ABHI FINAL WALA BYE (mai boht bolti hu I know??)
        With boht Sara pyaar nd concentrate on maths☺☺☺☺☺

        -AASHIYA ? ? ? ? ?

    2. Jasmin

      Dii..icant be ur brother as m a girl but if u wnt u can be my brother..n yes do thank ur besti too.. n yes my bestis name is manu wow yrr u remembered..nice haa..great remembering skills..n if once i started talking then no one knows how much i can speak..so m not starting..n just now i completed revising the formulas n practicing them..soo i thought to open tu..anyways do thank ur besti..love u too…

  4. Baby

    Awwww….jasmin sooo touching u know m crying like anything. …..jst crying n crying these tears didnt stopped even I have paper tmrw bt saw ur writing n culdnt stop to cmnt or tell u how was it….it was marvellous beautiful fabulous emotional beyhadh lovely… 🙂 🙂
    Lods of love♥♡★☆

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm baby di..it feels so good that u commented even if u have paper n u knkw what i have my next paper to be hindi..tomorrow its maths n after that its hindi..but tyvm..love u too..

    2. Jasmin

      N all the best dii..love u..

  5. SidMin

    Hey … Just loved it Awesome . ..
    It was so emotional .?.. just loved it have no words…
    All the best for your paper … ???
    Love you keep writing ❤

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm sidmin di..it means a lot..your wishes for exam will let me pass..hehe i hope it would be true..anyways..love u too..

  6. Presha

    Hey jasmine its just awesome nd too emotional… U defined friendship very well dear…. I just loved it to core

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm presha di..love u..

  7. Spectacular…

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm sana..love u..

      1. Jasmin

        Tyvm sana di^..love u..

  8. It was awesome and emotional too ….I loved it keep writing ….

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm nisha di..will try to write more..love u..

  9. Awesome yrrrr superb ek number yrr dil jeet liya tune toh best os……perfect writng perfect emotions sab chiz just perfect…..loved it aur haa plz apna ff cont. Krna…..

    1. Jasmin

      Ohho manu..finally tere comment ke darshan karne ko mile..anyways..thank u ypvery much yrr..n ha i m not sure ki main continue kar paungi ki nahi..maths abhi hua nahi n aage kitne bhayankar oaoers bache h..dekhte h..love u..

  10. Purvi128

    Hey jasmin it was amazing.., i m just crying nd crying nd crying..! I can’t stop my tears.. theu r just flowing.., so sad it was..! Loved it.
    I don’t have words to explain this wonderdul os..
    I hope u get much comments .., and all the best for ur paper..!
    Do write more .. as i m in love wod ur writings…
    Love u

    1. Jasmin

      Thank u very much di..it means a lot to me..i m not sure that i will be able to write more now or not but in future i will..love u..

  11. Sameera

    Awww Jasmin soooooo cute and emotional yaar literally I cried after reading this I am lacking words right now what to comment on don’t know about this masterpiece yaar loved each m every line of it yaar hats off to you ???????

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm sameera..it means a lot..i mean i m lacking of words yaar..thank u soo much dii..love u..

  12. SidMin23

    It was nice and emotional will reading and kunj did this to save his twinkle and twinj meet in heaven love it.

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm sidmin23 di..love u..

  13. Sorry for late commenttt?
    Kyaa kehna ???just PERFECT os with lot of luv?? rula diyaa??? ….And aapne bore toh bilkul bhi nahi liyaa??
    Lots of luv??

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm di..its ok but i m happy that u commented..and mujhe aap nahi bolo coz main aalse choti hu..love u too..

  14. Ramya

    Hey Jasmin awesome amazing so unique
    I loved IT

    So superb no words to express how u wrote
    N at first inwas sad dar kunj had died but next part made me hell happy
    TWINJ r finally together n even death cant apart dem it was so true
    N amazing
    N d wayy u expressed n described d meaning offrndship was superb I njoyed it slot so plsss stop saying it as boring as it’s amazing
    N don’t give any importance to dar bashers
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm ramya di..it means alot to me..u all dont know that ur single word can also make my day and here u all are commenting paragraphs i mean yarr..srsly di it means a lot to me..love u too…

  15. Hey jasmin,
    That is a very lovely os.
    ‘BEST FRIENDS FOREVER’ this title reminded me of my dreadful past which made me cry…after reading ur os I cried even more hard…I really loved it to the core…It was indeed praiseworthy n I do hope this kind of relation still exist in the real world…It was frictional but it touched my heart…Kunj without caring about the world loved Twinkle…He even sacrified his life for Twinkle.,May be this is true love…U r an awesome writer…Pls do cont ur ff…turn a deaf ear to those bashers n pls could u give me the links to ur ff.N would u love to be my fren.Regarding my intro I am Aakriti/aaku…registered member…16 yrs n June 30 that’s my day…Loved the os n would u love to PM with me.

    Loads of love,
    Twinj

    1. Jasmin

      Hey dii..tysm yrr..but i m srry if i hurt u by making u remember ur dreadful past..i m srsly srry for that..ur comment means a lot to me..i m soo glad that u all liked the story..n when the next time i will write i will surely provide the links to all my ffs n os’s so that u can read them..n i m jasmin(fake name)..12 yrs old..studying in 7th..n my day is 4th of june..n i m srry as i dont know how to pm some1..if u csn then plzz tell me how to do it so i can pm every1..love u too..

      1. Jasmin don’t be sry yaar…
        Jasmin I will tell about my past in the PM n don’t be sry coz that past taught me a lesson…so it happened for my gud…
        N regarding PM don’t worry I will send u msg…
        For sending msg just type the name of person with whom u wanna PM in members (u will find members in top left corner of the page)then click the person n just below their profile u will find msg just click it n then type ur msg…n if u get msg from anyone then u will get notification…Do post the next one soon…

  16. Fatimaa.

    Heyy jasmin..
    It was really nice nd emotional..
    Loved it..dear

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm fatima di..love u..

  17. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome emotional

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm purnima di..love u..

  18. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Awesome amazing os.. …U defined true freindship ….It was really very emotional I can’t stop crying reading it…. Really I loved it….
    Best of luck
    Loveee uuuuuu

    1. Jasmin

      Tyvm amaya di..it means alot to me..love u too..

      1. Amaya Bhardwaj

        Heyyy jas,
        U r an amazing superb excellent writer..,do continue with ur FF… Please send me link of ur prologue….If it is possible….
        All the best for your exams dear…
        Will u love to be my friend….
        Loads of loveee

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