Best friends 58

Best friend 58

Dhara, Jwala, Surbhi, Tania, Ammu, Taiana, Priyanshi, Ani, Amee, Unknown, Shabrin, Aashi, Nive, Aishu, Meghs, Mallable, Twinkle, Rithu, YashiJustin.


DHARA: I hate it also. I want to throw it but what to do it’s the only way to contact my family so I have to suppress my feeling.

JWALA: Yeah I know you would have rocked in it. After all you are my sister and friend.

TAIANA: No I am not learning French I just used to learn in freshmen year of high school. Well I am glad you liked it. And no need to be sorry dear and just make this knot in your head I hate reading sorry so you better not write them from next time.

ANI: I love your comment. It’s awesome you liked it. I want to thank you but what to do I am trapped in the rule made by myself. No sorry no thank you. But yeah I am really honoured if you like it that much. Well I did not know this that I am the only one to reach 57. I am so happy you told me. Yeah!!!!!

AMEE: Missed you. Love you. And lots of love and hugs to you. Okay so get ready because it is going to be really long so sit on a chair or bed will be better. First of all yes you can never hurt me. I mean your comments are obviously less painful than heart attacks so it does not hurt. Hahaha I am enjoying this. Well if you are going to take it seriously then I am going to set up a appointment for you of a cardiologist.
Well its good it was just to tease me otherwise I would have not replied to your comment today. And I hope I will never read Sorry in capital words from you. And if I read it someday I swear I will come to Assam to punish you.

I told you that anything in your comments never hurt me. I am your friend and I know friends are always there to pull your leg so yeah I was relaxed.
And I always obey my friends so when you said to stop thanking I did it. Anyway I also hate to thank my friends but I used to do that for formality but then I thought that since when I started treating my friends formally so I stopped it.
I want to do the same with my phone. I really want to throw it but what to do mom has bought it on Diwali so if I will throw it, she will literally kill me and will never buy me that. And I won’t be able to communicate to her so I dropped the plan.
I know nowadays phone is easy for everyone except me. Even my family is more comfortable with their respective phone but me, never.

Ufff now I will have to make a friend who is heart specialist because you will give me heart attack and that will be difficult to pay so I will make a friend who is cardiologist. You know I hated bio since my childhood. I really did but I am happy that even now we have persons like you who is ready to give their talent and time to help others unconditionally. You know when we ask for donation in our NGO it gets really difficult but we have many people who work their as volunteer. They are great and I am happy that you are also one of them and happier because I am your friend.

Actually you can call me bookworm. I can leave anything to complete a book. Well as I told you I appreciate fresh and raw so writers who are actually not famous I love to read them because somehow I am able to connect with them but I read all kind of books, it should be interesting only.
Well I am happy for your fans but still I will give credit to myself because that’s what friends do.

Unknown: yeah one incident made both of them remember their past. And that incident was nothing big it was just Ragini saw childhood photo of Sanskar and the tied knot in her brain got loose same with Sanskar. And no Sorry if you said me sorry or thanks again then I swear to god I won’t reply. Sp no sorry.

SHABRIN: Aww little sissy. I love you and don’t cry. Well this is just amazing coincidence.

AASHI: Aww no need to be sorry just read it and only if you get time no need to harm your studies because even I give priority to my studies. I will miss you too. But I have given my facebook id so we are gonna be friends there.
AISHU: Hey sis well I am glad you felt that. Love you too. God bless you.

MALLABLE: Well yeah lucky had to suffer a lot. And I am good. I hope the best come in your way. God bless you dear. Loads of love.

TWINKLE: I knew it that swasan is your fav. Well Glad you liked it and yeah that Amee is but you also are.

RITHU: Okay but I also said that in serial they are my fav but in my story they all are equal for me.

YASHIJUSTIN: Awww I am glad you liked it.

Finally I got my laptop back. Sorry Guys I had option to type with this damn mobile but let me tell you I hate typing with this little thing. I feel like I should cut my fingers after long typing. I really don’t know how can someone be so busy with this little thing but that is just my opinion. I know nowadays people can’t live without their phone. But I am not one of those. I can’t live without my laptop. But finally I am breathing because I got it back. Yipeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!

Now this is for all of you who want my fb id: Its [email protected] You just need to search it on fb then I will be there. But yes I will only accept friend request from the people whom I know here. Like whose name I know. Well I was pro in computers so just let me warn hackers that you can’t hack it and if you did I swear to god I will trace you so don’t even try that. I can take legal actions against hacking. JUST KIDDING. Heart attack???? Thanks amee your friendship has taught me lot of things. Oops no thank you and thanks otherwise she will be walking bomb sorry typing bomb. Hahaha love you AMEE. But this day is mine. Okay so this is my email id on everything like fb, google +, twitter, instagram, gmail, so you can catch me on any social networking site. Even on wattpad.

Now something serious which is not serious and that is next part of my story. I hope I am not making you all a cry baby with these emotional episodes. If this is like that then I will stop writing these emotional stuffs right now because I don’t want to be the reason of my friends’ tears.

Well for why does it still affect it is ready I just need to type it and update so It will be there in 2-3 hours I guess. I thought to update that first but I thought that more number of people want to read this so you know I updated this one.

Swara: And you think Ansh deserve this????

Mr. Mathur looks at her questioningly.
Swara: Actually it’s his nick name there.
Mr. Mathur: Oh. Look shona I know you want best for him but we also know that we will become burden for Sanskar after sometime.
Swara: Uncle you know, he loves you. I agree he loves dp uncle and Ap aunty and I am not even measuring the love that whom does he love more but I know he loves you all. This is Sanskar we are talking about he has the largest heart in the world, he can love anyone unconditionally. I know that. He loves everyone without even expecting anything from them then how can you guys be burden on him. You know who has made him like this??? Maheshwari’s blood and the things you both have taught him. More than half part of Sanskar’s life is made by you, uncle and Aunty. How can you think that he will ever forget you guys or he will ever consider you as burden?

Mrs. Mathur: But yes if we will leave him now maybe after few days, months or years he will forget us and his life will be normal as it should be.

Swara: No his life is with you also. He can never forget you. Not in days, not in months, not in years, not even in this life because his heart will always remember you. Whenever he will close his heart and he will need a mother, I am sure he will want you aunty. Uncle whenever he will spend his time with his child, he will remember you. Because his childhood was with you. Please don’t do this to him. He will break and this time in so much pieces that no one will be able to collect him.

Mrs. Mathur: I know you will. I know you can.
Swara: No I cannot aunty. He needs you. I know you guys are thinking that if you will be with him then things will be uncomfortable for Dp uncle and Ap aunty but think about topper once. He needs you. Uncle, Aunty, please come with us. I know things will be different but you have done this much for your son, one more thing. Pleaseeee.
Swara rubs her fingertips on her forehead and tears start shedding from her eyes.
Mr. Mathur: Are you sure you and Sanskar can manage with us and maheshwaris????
Swara thinks about his word and a smile spread on her face.
Swara hugs Mr. Mathur.
Swara: You are the best uncle.
Mrs. Mathur: What the hell are you doing??? We can’t do this to our son, shona and maheshwaris. Just think about it. I am also his mother, there is also a mother.

Swara: Aunty I know things won’t be easy. There will be awkwardness like hell but I promise Aunty I and topper will try our best to make it normal as soon as we can.

Mrs. Mathur: You are not understanding shona.
Swara: Aunty I only understand one thing that I can’t see any of my friend sad and unfortunately they all are crying now. I bet you aunty I can even turn that mount everest if it will be needed to finish any drop of tears from all of their eyes. If you will leave Sanskar now, he will cry and make Lucky and Lado cry, eventually we all will cry and if you will come with us now. I know things will be difficult and really nearby impossible to handle but at least no one will cry. I know there will be unsaid fight for right on him and I know you both will try your best to ignore but still there will be but I promise aunty I and he will try our best to make the both family feel equal. Please give a try.

Mrs. Mathur looks at Mr. Mathur. Mr. Mathur holds her hand.
Mr. Mathur: Let’s give it a try.
Mrs. Mathur nods.
Swara hugs both of them.

Mrs. Mathur: You only want to hug us now????
Swara blushes and scratch her back hair.
Mr. Mathur ruffles her hair.
Mrs. Mathur: Go upstairs then right and the second room.
Swara runs from there but turns back.
Swara: I promise you won’t have to regret your decision. And we won’t be doing anything cozy so you can come whenever you want.
Mrs. Mathur: If you won’t go now then we both will come with you now.
Swara: No, I am going. I am going.
Mr. Mathur: You go shona. We both have some talks to do.
Swara gets scared.
Swara: You can’t change your decision.
Mrs. Mathur: We won’t. Now go.
Swara runs to his room.


Swara turns the knob of door and see Sanskar sitting in a cornor and he has hidden his face in his knees and his both hands his around his knees.

Swara goes to him and sits near him on her knees and hugs him.
Sanskar also changes his position and sit on his knees and hugs her.
Sanskar rests her head on his croak of neck.
Sanskar: Sho….Shona, how….ca…can the….they think lik….like this????
He asks her in stuttering voice.

Swara slides her hand up and down on his back to calm him down.
Sanskar: how shona???
Swara: Shhhh, its okayyyyy. Everything is okay.
Sanskar: Why my destiny is like this. First fate snatched my real mom and dad and now them. I know for sure fate will make you leave me.
Swara: I won’t go anywhere, not now, not ever, never. No one will leave you. Everyone loves you.

Sanskar: But they are leaving no sorry they are asking me to leave. They are asking their own son to go away from them. Why???? Because they think I will be happy without them!!! The hell. The freaking hell. You know what the fact is that no one loves me. Everyone wants to get rid of me. Everyone wants to leave me but they think I can’t handle the reason so they make a fake one.

Swara: Nooooo. Everyone loves yo….
Sanskar: No one. I mean how can they decide on their own that what will make me happy and what is right for me.
Sanskar again starts crying.
Sanskar: How can they think that. How can they think about leaving me.

Mrs. Mathur puts her hand on his shoulder.
Sanskar looks upside.
Swara: I should leave.
Mrs. Mathur holds her hand and shakes her head gesturing her to stay.

Mrs. Mathur hugs sanskar. And Mr. Mathur also come.

Mrs. MAthur: We will not leave you. We can never leave you dear.
Mr. Mathur ruffles his hair.
Mr. Mathur: Come on men don’t cry. We are sorry. We even thought about that but you know right that we can do anything to make you happy and we thought that if we will leave you will be happy. So we tried to do it. But we cannot, we could not. All thanks to your friend.
Swara squeezes her eyes and bits her lower lips and blushes deep red.

Sanskar hugs his parents.
Mr. Mathur: We are coming with you to Kolkata. I mean we are going to buy a new house near your house. You know. I am going to operate my business with the branch of Kolkata. I know you need us and you need them also so we won’t make it difficult for you. Ahm can we come to Kolkata????
Sanskar gives the widest smile he can and he ever had.
Sanskar: Yeah, you can, you should. Oh my god I don’t believe you are going there to stay. I am so happy papa. Thank you so much for changing your decision otherwise you have no idea what would I have done to myself.

Mrs. Mathur: Now we have. You know shona made us realize that all.
Mr. Mathur: So now we are going to stay together for your full college life so we have plenty of time to do this family scene. But right now we both have to plan our moving out and moving in to Kolkata. And yes extend your trip we all will go together but first talk to your real parents. Okay and tell us about the conversation.
Mrs. Mathur: Your papa always leave in business man mood. I am so happy and excited and you know why??? Because we trust you and shona.
Sanskar hugs them again.
Mr. Mathur and Mrs. Mathur leave.


Ragini: Lucky, where are you going???
Laksh: I am not able to understand these things lado.
Ragini: What is there to understand????
Laksh: Lado, I want bhai to be happy, really happy but I know that he will be happy only if both the families will accept him. And if he will live with both the family then I know my parents will not be that happy and I can’t see that. This is so difficult. Why life can’t be simple???? Why???? I know that mom dad will never show that but I can see that in their eyes that they want bhai for whole.
Ragini: But life always don’t act as we want. I know uncle and aunty will be upset but this is life. They will learn to adjust. They have to. Think as Mathurs lucky. What if they rejected Sanskar to share with you and your family then what will you do??? You also know that they can do that but they are not doing that because they want Sanskar to be happy. If we love someone we don’t expect our happiness we should just love that person unconditionally. And I know uncle and aunty love topper unconditionally so they just want him to be happy. And if Sanskar’s happiness is with both the family then they will never reject this and will try their best to adjust with mathurs.

Laksh: I know but whom should I choose. On one side there is my mom and dad’s happiness and on the other side there is my brother’s happiness.
Ragini: You don’t have to choose anyone lucky. You can’t take decision about them. Let them do that. You only need to be with them. You need to understand them without judging right or wrong. If they are wrong then also you just need to understand their situation and you need to not hate them for their deeds.

Ragini comes close to Laksh and holds his hands in her hands.
Ragini: Look at me lucky. Lucky, you are not responsible for everything wrong happening around you so you are not also responsible to make everything right because you can’t. Try and understand that maybe your extra care is suffocating your loved ones. So just be with them. Respect their decision and if they are happy then find your happiness in their happiness.
Laksh looks into her eyes.
Laksh: What would I have done without you????
Ragini: Probably nothing. Because I know you cannot do anything without me. (She pats her own shoulder to praise herself) You know I am so great.
Laksh: That you are.
Ragini: But I love you so you are the, you know also great.
Laksh hugs Ragini.

A/N: I know I know you want to read Swasan after that but wait till tomorrow. Otherwise it would have been too long. So wait till tomorrow.

PRECAP of next 2 epis: SWASAN convo, SWARAGSANLAK planning to handle mathurs and maheshwaris together, one small drive on the streets of Mumbai. Sanskar planning to officialy say L-word to Swara(I know this one is the best).

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  1. Wat yaar every tym swasan swasan…i just hate….swasan this much big part and Raglak only little …nd if i dint got Raglak more importance in next part….i am not gonna read it…i was silent reader but u r doing this much injustice to our lovely Raglak….Shame on u…

    1. Sana wats wrong wid u hw can u say tht
      Swasan scenes were imp nd moreover tht there were no swasan scene just 4 para nd raglak scene was 4 para too thts to longer thn swasan so plss stop saying this nuisance nd saying to others have some shame on urself

    2. it is writers freedom we can’t comment on that .we can make suggestions and requests but this doesn’t seems like one …………..u should not use such harsh words on someone it is not the writers fault that u lov raglak more than swasan and moreover she gives importance to both raglak and swasan ……it depends the storyline ,,,,,,,sometimes swasan are given more scene and at times raglak ……….pls don’t come up with comments like this

  2. finally happy episode after long time…
    i have a request make swasan confession epic

  3. Interesting episode… Just a request… Want more scenes of Raglak… Just love them… Update regularly yaar… Cnt wait longer to read ur ff…

  4. Awwwwwww i missed u toooooooooo much thnk god ur laptop is back nd now i will read yr ff asap nd wat did u say about me???? Walking bomb??? No talking bomb rite???? Now i m really angry
    ok a biiggg SORRY for teasing u yipeee now u will come assam atleast to punish me so wen u r coming hope by 12 u will be here just kidding oh foolish i m u would have understand it was a joke nd was laughing on me rite?
    So dont laugh too much our frnds says tht if u laugh too much thn u will burst lyk a balloon ………….. …………….. again u laughed!!! control on laughter or ur neibours will think u have gone mad
    Ok now u would be thinking tht i m mad rite??? Wellllll ya i m
    I think i m the frst mad person who said yes i m mad tht means i m not bcoz hr paagl yhi khta h ki wo paagl nhi h bt i said i m mad tht means i m not mad
    Waaaaattttttttt u hated bio????? Its so intresting i must say ur teacher would have beena boring or u never gave studied it by relating to ur body
    U know i just luv bio nd i m my teachers fav student wether it be my school or cochng nd ya i lyk maths too i was very gud in this 2 subjects i havent read any novel except thtz ravinder singh’s can lovd happen twice nd i was totally lost in tht book tht i commpleted it within 6 hrs oh god after reading tht i imagined ravin nd simar in this songs lyk “hona tha pyaar hua mere yaar” nd “love me thoda or” wenever i listen this songs i imagine thm tht was the frst tym i read novel nd i got mad nd was feeling love is sooo deep after tht i luved love stories now u must be thinking tht in my lst comment i said tht i love detective stories too if i havent read any thn hw i lyk detective stories actually in my 12th we had a novel of sherlock holmes the hound of baskervilles as our course buk so tht i read it nd lyked it
    So u r learning frm me to give me heart attack? Common u cant give me heartattack cause the scull in which u r studing i m its principal nd hope u know principal knows much more thn students ha ha ha ha ha
    Oh god i didnt knew tht even insects use net nd write ffs nd i was commnting on on its block????
    Dont think toooo much ur knee will strt paining i will tell u said ur a BOOKWORM rite??? A worm is an insect so u r an insect ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha so think before writing if u r writing fr me cause u know i will never leave a small chance to tease u
    Nd want to say smthng i know u r never hurt by my or any of our frnds but still in ani’s commnt i said tht u r not frst to reach 57 epi strted praising another ff for tht may be u feel bad or discouraged but trust me i have no intension to discourage u but i cant stop myself watever comes in my mind i say it thtz i think is a big minus point in me i cnt say sry to u bt plz understand me i know u do but ………
    Anyways leave it OHHHH drop the idea of throwing ur fon or else i willnot be able to read this ff nd ur commnt u know i was soooooooooiooooo hppy wen twinkle said tht i m ur true frnd
    Do u knoe devga??? She comments on siya k ram serial update once in new year day 1st tym i cmmnted there nd saw there bonding nd thought hw they know each other very well i asked her did she knew thm before or met on net thn she said frndship doesnt need us to know each other but to know each others heart at tht tym i never thought about this bt now i must say she was rite our heart is the only connecting link btwn us see we met few weeks before bt dont know wen we became good frnds nooooooooo lyk our characters we 2 are bestie
    Nd u know one thing wenever i fill exausted or tired i just want to talk to u nd want to share every thin thick prt of my lyf LLOOOVVEEEEE U A LOT
    Ok this one is not so big but keep smiling nd ya send u mail itz subject is heartattack check it let me know if u have watsap thn send ur no there if not thn download it asap

    1. sorry guyz i know my this long commnt may be annoying for some of u but seriously srry cause thts not my faul its deeepaa’s fault

      1. Amee u r really a mad and funny also and now u can consider ur self mad because besides u others r also calling you mad…..just joking ?

      2. Well thnx i know bt i dont mind

    2. Dear one word for uhh..INSANE…ur n deepa comments rock… N your friendship is insane(just kidding).. Wonderful….and thanks for the best of luck dear….

      1. Thnx dea aashi for the commnt

      2. 2 rplies in one commnt OMG i m becoming so popular pls my dearest fans dont be shy pls commnt just lyk shabrin nd aashi did let me know who ever read my commnts nd laugh

  5. hi dear very nice episode…deepa I have sent u friend request on fb plz check it…

  6. Emotional chap …..luvd it …..and the precap totally awesome. …and
    Luv u and take care…sis

  7. Mind blowing

  8. hey deepa wow yar episode was so nice more than that waiting for precap…..

  9. Ok dear hereafter i won’t repeat;) the epi was very nyc… Finally thr r some happy moments… Keep it up…

  10. Hey just awesome….Every part of it…..I was feeling like why you ended it..want to read more and more…update fast☺☺☺
    And u don’t worry about the comments because sometimes u also need some bad comments to make it best to bestest and we r here to read your writing and appreciate it …so don’t u dare to feel bad and I love you too…..u know sometimes when I am sad or in tension and just after that I see ur ff a big smile come on my face and I feel happy that now I can comment on your writing and after the reply u gave another big smile come to my face…so really thank u 4 that
    OK I think I have written too much but don’t feel irritated now…hope 4 the best ???????

  11. superb episode

  12. Vinay Karthik

    hey deepa 2day u rocked yaar…… wat a episode its simply awesome…… OMG i can’t believe its our swara only r not ….. she is so mature and handled the situation very well…. swara’s each nd every dialogue is really nice nd i can feel it….. i like mattur’s nd swara scenes nd their bonding is nice…. sanky plz don’t cry yaar keep one thing in ur mind wen swara is with u, u don’t need to worry for anything …… nd deepa thanks for ur concern my dad is fine nd healthy…..

  13. awesome dear

  14. lovely..

  15. Oh god… U making me addicted… Daily i open these fanfictions n the moment i see best friends am like on cloude 9… But it was really short.. N ya do write emotional onesss i love it… Moreover write loooonnngggg.. As long as u can…. N as fast as u can… Just lovedddd it

  16. loved it superb
    update nxt plz w8ing 4 swasan

  17. As usual it was fantastic fabulous awesome spectacular mind blowing…… I am srsly addicted to it.. Though my exams are gng on but daily I was waiting for your ff… Finally u came back…..loved it yrr….uhh rocked once again.. Every part of was amazing… Finally swasan CONFESSION… yippee. Yeah. Yeah I got a heart attack while reading your warning…… M plzz update next part soon……eagerly waiting… Love u loadss……

  18. deepa your words made my day seriously but i am not like amee but still thankyou so much oops sorry in friendship no sorry no thankyou . and i too hate my mobile phone i just love my lappy i don’t even use it 😛 and now finally coming to the episode it was awesome as usual and today i loved precap 🙂 love you deepa <3

    1. Twinki i hope u dont mind if i call u tht
      Why u said tht u r not lyk me??? I cant understand it

  19. Shona is really tough nut to crack 🙂 just waiting for Swasan’s official confession. I know Deepa you will rock in that also 🙂

  20. Hi deepa .. How r u… Its awsome as always … I portrayed each chacter emotions very well…
    Swara is great she handle situation very well…. No wonder y i addicted to ur stry.. It’s becz of 4 of them bond .. Today u really done good job…

    N i am happy to see today raglak emotional part especially lucky part i just loved it… Lucky being emotional …

  21. Superb sis and swara’s part was just awsm ……fabulous nd as a whole i have no word 4 compliment it was out of dis world mind blowing nd heart touching….honestly speaking i want to see maheshwari’s reaction on dis eagerly waiting for nxt part love uuuuu dear

  22. Note from Deepa:

    I am sorry. So sorry, sorry. Actually I have to go to workshop for 2 and a half month. In these days I will try to write best friends but why does it still affect will have to wait. I am so sorry. I know I am being selfish and disappointing you all but I can’t help it. I promise I will try my best to finish best friends in these but as you all know I can just try. No promises.
    I hope you all won’t forget me and believe me or not but even if you all will forget me and my story I won’t mind because I will now that it is all my fault.
    I am sorry and one more thing, can anyone of you post it on tellyupdates pleaseeeeee. Because I can’t do it there. Please please please.
    And I am sorry.

  23. dis story is very different, n m loving it….u r framing each moment beautifully…. pls update next track as soon as possible

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