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BEPANAAH PYAR HAI, TERA INTEZAAR HAI (One Shot )

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BEPANAAH PYAR HAI, TERA INTEZAAR HAI – SACRIFICING LOVE INORDER TO SAVE FRIENDSHIP(One Shot OS)
To love without condition, To talk without intention, To give without reason & To care without expectation….This is the heart of a TRUE FRIEND…….
First of all, I want to give a big waala thanks from the bottom of my heart to all my frnds who commented & liked my previous OS….thnx a lot to Rishu, Priyanshi, Amnaa, Swetha, Sana, Neha, Dhruvi, Mitali, Bibechna, Niyaa, Vrushti, Anu, Sayali, Sanju & Sarah for commenting….a big waali jaadu ki jhappi for u all….Now without wasting ur precious time with my chattering, let’s get started…

It was 10 in the morning…all were busy in roaming here and there with books…Yes guys, it’s a college…let’s take a look at them now…
Girl: Oh God!! What is this? Till how much time I’ll wait for him? Why hasn’t he come yet?
The girl is none other than our Sanchi…She kept on looking at the door of her classroom…that’s when he entered…our handsome hunk Kabir…A smile formed on her face on seeing him…He settled down in his place and turned…When he saw her looking at him he smiled and gave his usual wink which is enough to make her flat…she blushed and smiled…He turned & left to chat with his frnds…but her eyes were still busy in admiring him…she was lost in her world..that’s when someone hit her from the back…

Sanchi: ouch!!…Who the hell…she turned to find her besties Prasha there…
Sanchi: Dumbo!! U just scared me…
Pragya: Abeo Devi jee, we’ve been calling you for the past 10 mins, but you are lost somewhere….
Isha: Btw, whom are you looking at……she tries to search & find out while Sanchi interrupts…
Sanchi: Me….I mean I…..I…..(she was mumbling)….I mean nothing like you are thinking…
Pragya: Pakka!!!
Sanchi: Haan baba…pakka…..

Isha: Leave all these things….come, let’s go to the canteen….& she dragged them along with her & left
It was their final year in college….SanIshPra were besties but were from different streams….The trio met during their break where they used to roam, chat & enjoy each other’s company….Sanchi missed them a lot, but still she passed her time by looking at her dreamboy….haha….She had a crush on Kabir from the 2nd year of college, but she hid this from everyone, even from her besties…During her initial days at college, she focused only on her studies…& about Kabir, she considered him as a flirt kind of a guy…Kabir was the bestie of Veer…& it was through Veer, that Sanchi came to know that Kabir was not at all the kind of guy what he showed in front of others… With passage of time, she had started developing feelings for Kabir…but they never talked with each other, not even through chatting…It’s only when sometimes Kabir teases her in class(which Sanchi really liked by now), they used to talk…
Some days passes…

One day Sanchi receives a message…it read,”Hi!! This is Kabir…Can we talk for a moment if you are free”….”Yes…I’m not busy, you can talk”….replied Sanchi…..Kabir immediately called her…

Kabir: Hye!!
Sanchi: Hello!!…(she was smiling…)….What happened? Any problem?
Kabir: Actually, I need a favour from you…(muted)…they talked for some time…then…
Kabir: Hey Sanchi, Can I ask you something? Do you feel bad when I smile or wink at you in class? coz I’m like that…winking, smiling….plz don’t mind ok….
Sanchi(in mind): Why would I feel bad for that…In fact I feel very very good…
Sanchi: No…Not at all….Not a problem…
Kabir: Btw, I was not asking your permission…even if you don’t like, I’ll still keep doing that….& they both laughed….”Paagal kahin ka”….said Sanchi & laughed…
This was how their friendship started & day by day it grew more & more stronger with passage of time….& it was getting more & more difficult for Sanchi to hide her feelings, for this, she decided to propose Kabir…So, one evening she called Kabir…
Kabir: Hello Sanchi….What’s up!!
Sanchi: Kabir….actually I wanna say you something, but before that plz promise me you won’t take me wrong….

Kabir: Of course Sanchi you can tell me anything….tell me what is it?
Sanchi: Actually I used to love someone during my school days, but he dumped me…
Kabir: I know Sanchi, Veer told this to me before…But Sanchi, I would say, don’t feel for those who left you…Stay happy with what you have…Just relax..(Veer & Sanchi were in same school for some days…so Sanchi & Veer were friends from their school days)…
Sanchi: Yeah….but I’m afraid…
Kabir: Afraid for what?

Sanchi: I’m afraid coz I’m getting attracted a lot towards you now a days…I don’t think it’s just an attraction or infatuation….it’s something more than that….I Love You…Kabir was shocked…
Kabir: Hmm…ok….Sanchi was a bit confused coz she didn’t expect such cold reaction from him
Sanchi: What do you mean by this? I need an answer…
Kabir: What answer do you expect me to give? What reply will make you happy? Tell me…
Sanchi: You don’t need to lie to me…just tell me the truth…that’s enough…
Kabir(taking a deep breath): Ok listen…Do you know that I had a crush on someone from my school days?

Sanchi: Yes…Veer had already told me that…
Kabir: She hasn’t accepted my love yet….I’m still waiting for her only…Sanchi was dumb-struck
Sanchi(composing herself): What if she says no to you?
Kabir: Sanchi plz try to understand…it’s not abt her accepting me….the thing is, I never have such feelings for u…I alwz thought u as a frnd….yes I like u, but dear only as a frnd, that’s it…..Sanchi was crying on the other side & couldn’t speak for a long time….
Kabir: Sanchi yaar…if u want, u can scold me, but dear don’t stop replying….it hurts….I’m sorry if I’ve hurt u…

Sanchi(wiping her tears):No no…it’s ok…It was all my mistake….leave it….
Kabir: No Sanchi, there’s no mistake in this….u loved me & u confessed it…that’s all…
Sanchi(smiling): Kabir…can I ask u something? Being a girl, I proposed u…so, do u feel that I’m somewhat a cheap kind of a girl? Will u start hating me for this?
Kabir(angrily):Shut up stupid!! What girl or boy? Feelings r same for everyone…be it boy or girl…& I’m not such kind of person who’ll think like that…& I can never be angry on u…hating toh bohut door ki baat hai…
Sanchi: Ok…I’m sorry…..& after some talk, both finally slept wishing gud nt to each other…
Next mrng…..Kabir called Sanchi

Kabir: Hello Sanchi….Gud mrng….
Sanchi: Gud mrng….btw, if u r not busy, can I ask u something?…”Hmm”…replied Kabir…
Sanchi: U said u don’t hv feelings for me….what if u get it later?
Kabir: I’ll tell u for sure…I’m not the kind of person who would hide his feelings…
Sanchi: & what if it’s too late & we would hv walked apart?
Kabir: Look, if I get feelings, whenever it is, I’ll tell u…wherever u r I’ll come to u…if I’ve decided u r mine, nobody can take u away from me…but the only thing, u must be ready to hold my hand & come with me…
Sanchi(emotional,happy & with tears): Of course I’ll…I just hope, that day comes soon…
Kabir: No dear, plz don’t have unnecessary hopes, if it doesn’t happen, then only u’ll be hurt
Sanchi didn’t speak up….didn’t reply to Kabir…
Kabir: This is the reason I’m not giving u hopes……I don’t wanna hurt u or in the long run, break ur heart…Anyways, leave it…why to talk abt the thing which is not gonna happen…leave it…see u at college….bye….

Sanchi: Yeah….bye….
Days passed….Sanchi said abt her love to Prasha…& apart from them, she had another bestie, Ria with whom she shares her every secret…& another co-incidence, Ria is Kabir’s cousin….but still, she’s more close to Sanchi…Ria consoled Sanchi after knowing Sanchi loves Kabir while he doesn’t
Ria: Sanchi, if u don’t mind, shall I talk to bhai in this regard?
Sanchi: Thanks dear……but no thanks….I don’t want to force my love on Kabir
Ria: Don’t worry dear….hv faith in ur love…

Pragya: Abeo….don’t think so much….he’s urs….only urs….give him some time, he’ll realize soon
Isha: Yes….& nobody can take him away from u…..he has to return to u…
“Now cheer up”…saying this the 3 started tickling Sanchi…..haha….Veer was passing by & had heard their talks & even he now supports Sanchi….”Thanks Veer, thnx for supporting me even after being Kabir’s bestie”….said Sanchi…”It’s ok Sanchi, even u r my frnd, childhood frnd, saath toh dena hi hai”…said Veer…& they both smiled….
One day there was a surprise b’day party celebration of a classmate….Sanchi went there, but without her besties, coz Ria was not feeling well, while Prasha had got some other work…..while returning it became late, so Sanchi asked Kabir if he could accompany her & drop her at her home to which Kabir agreed…..Initially, during their journey, both were silent, so Kabir initiated…

Kabir: Oye…u’re fine?…listen I understand ur feelings & even respect that, but still, try & understand, I can’t do anything in that….
Sanchi: It’s fine Kabir….& I’m sorry if I hurt u…
Kabir: Buddhu….in fact I must say sorry….u’re getting hurt just bcz of me…
Sanchi:Can I ask u something, if u won’t take me wrong?…”Yes”….replied Kabir…
Sanchi: Why don’t u like me? I mean, I knw I’m not that beautiful but still, I want to know from u
Kabir(smiling): Stupid…who said I don’t like u? U know, I’ve alwz thought that I’ll never get a girl who would love me madly…I knew I didn’t deserve it, but still…I was very happy the day u proposed me…moreover, the way u luv me…Oh God!…I feel really bad for that coz I’m hurting u in return…

Sanchi: Stop blabbering…U r a very good human from heart, u deserve the best….but if u were so happy on listening abt my luv for u, why can’t u accept my love?
Kabir: Plz dear…understand…I can’t……
Sanchi: Ok…leave it…we’ve reached(pointing to her home)….I’ve to go…but before that…I Luv U…
Kabir(smiled): & I like u…..BUT….AS A FRIEND….both smiled & left from there….
Sanchi’s POV-This is the best day of my life….I would live my entire life with the memories of this day
But little did she know that it was also going to be the worst day of her life…the news abt Kabir dropping Sanchi at her home…& with it, the news abt Sanchi proposed to Kabir…got spread in the entire college…everyone started to talk ill abt Sanchi, but she was least bothered by this coz her frnds alwz supported her except for one….Kabir
One day she texted Kabir….

Sanchi: Hii…
Kabir: Haan…tell…Sanchi was a bit shocked at his cold reply…
Sanchi: What happened Kabir? Why r u not talking with me like before? U r not even looking at me in college…why? r u angry on me….
Kabir:No….nothing as such….but I can’t talk to u….
Sanchi: But why?
Kabir: Plz understand….I don’t want ur name to be spoiled bcz of me…plz don’t look at me in class
Sanchi: But why r u bothered…let them speak anything….who cares?

Kabir: I do care…if it would hv been abt me, I won’t hv been bothered…but it’s abt u…this I can’t tolerate…the people who used to say Sanchi is a nice & intelligent girl hv now started talking ill abt u
Sanchi: So u r asking me to kill my feelings for others….How can I do that?
Kabir: For me ur reputation is more important than ur feelings…if u can’t do this, I’m gonna do this….& he switches off his phone, leaving Sanchi in shock…
Two days passed….Kabir is avoiding Sanchi…neither is he looking at her in college, nor is he talking to her in the class…during these days, Sanchi cried a lot….no one talked with her except Prasha,Ria & Veer…these two days were like hell for her….

Pragya: Sanchi yaar what is this? Sanchi broke down into tears & the 4 got panicked….
Isha: Hey what happened yaar…Why r u crying…I’m scared….plz tell na…
Sanchi: Why does this happen only with me guys…don’t I deserve love & happiness…
Veer: What r u blabbering? Tell properly…
Sanchi: U know, in school I loved a boy, he left me…it took me a long time to recover from it…Is it my mistake to fall in love again?…guys I didn’t know when I started liking him…he’s such a good person…but he doesn’t love me…why it happens with me, jisko bhi dil se chahti hoon, he goes far from me….U guys also go away from me…I’m afraid, may be one day I’ll lose u all…
Ria(hugging Sanchi): There’s nothing like u think dear…if u don’t get something, that means God will give u something better than that…just don’t lose hope…we won’t leave u ever & they all had a group hug…

Sanchi: U know what, I didn’t feel bad when he didn’t accept me coz he was very truthful, he never tried to take advantage of my luv for him…I later understood this & decided not to pester him…I only said I’ll wait for him…but now, he’s avoiding me…U know, he loves Priya…just few days back he told me abt her…& now Kabir isn’t talking to me coz he can’t bear anyone talking ill abt me & my name won’t be affected…
Pragya: If u start worrying for what others will say, ur life will become hell…
Isha: & u just can’t keep proving urself to all…so, leave them…
Veer:Yes…don’t care for them…

Sanchi: But u know, according to them, if a girl loves a boy & proposes him, she’s characterless…
Veer: Just stop it…who said so? girls or boys…whoever it is, doesn’t matter & u confessed ur feelings, which means u r brave enough …we r proud of u buddhu……..& they all smiled…

Sanchi: I don’t know much abt Priya, but I’ve heard she’s a nice girl…beautiful…intelligent…& haan, if she deserves Kabir, let them be happy…I can’t come between them…
Ria: I’m proud of u dear…u r not only sacrificing ur love, but also want him to be happy…Kabir bhai is so lucky to have u in his life….they smiled & had a group hug…
Two days later(now by this time, it’s somewhat become back to normal kind of situation in college…)
Sanchi called Kabir…

Sanchi:Hello…how r u?
Kabir: Hmm…I’m fine….& u?
Sanchi: I’m fine…(paused for a moment)….r u still angry on me?
Kabir:Yes…
Sanchi: But u said once, u can never be angry on me, was it lie? Kabir smiled…”U were not listening to me afterall”…said Kabir…
Sanchi: ok what now…u wanted me to stop loving u…fine, I’ll try my best to forget u, but this will take some time….so plz…I know u can’t believe what I just said, but dear, I’ve a reason for this…during these days when u didn’t talk with me, it was like hell…after thinking a lot, I realized, I can’t afford to lose a good frnd of mine due to my stupid crazy love….that’s why…
Kabir: Thanku so much…but don’t call ur love stupid…I respect it a lot…Love is something which is to be respected & cherished…not insulted….so plz…
Sanchi: Thanku so much…but one thing, after all these problems started, u r not behaving normal…always depressed in class…I don’t like this…I just want my old Kabir back…will u?
Kabir: ok boss, I’ll do as u say…& they both smiled….See u at the college….”Hmm”…replied Sanchi

Hence, they sorted out their problems…& both started to talk to each other like before…Now everything is back to normal…now even Sanchi’s other frnds r talking with her…& all r happy…Sanchi even prayed for Kabir’s happiness that Priya should accept his love & they must be happy, but only if Priya is good & deserving coz she wants the best for her dearest friend….

Sanchi loved Kabir, & will alwz keep loving him…praying for his happiness & well being…
True love is Sacrifice….It is in giving, not in getting….in losing, not in gaining…in realizing, not in possessing, that we love…..Sometimes we have to sacrifice & let go of things we love to move on with our life….For this, sometimes we need to Sacrifice our Love inorder to save our Friendship…..

Hope you all would have liked it…..I know,
there was no Kanchi union in the end, but friends, through this, I just wanted to say that Love is unconditional…..waiting with patience & sacrificing is also a sort of happiness in True Love….But yaaron…don’t at all get disappointed…there’s still a hope that…may be Kabir will one day accept Sanchi’s love, u never know….kuch bhi ho sakta hai…haha….. plz share your views regarding this story through your comments…..& of course, feel free to point out any sort of flaws in my writings by commenting…
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With lots of Love,
Priyanka

66 Comments
  1. Aafiya

    Nice and superb…. Awesome message you have given….

    1. Riyarocks

      Thanku sooooooooo much Aafiya dear for commenting…..I’m really glad, u liked this plot & my message which I tried to give through it………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……….gud nt……tc……..

  2. Ha yaar you’re right sometime sacrificing is also a sort of happiness in true love……….it is a different from others os ………..I like it yaar……….it is an emotional and so adorable story………it is a story of real friendship…….thanks a lot yaar for such a beautiful story

    1. Riyarocks

      Anu dear…pehle toh, thanku soooooooooo much for commenting……..ur comments bought a big waala smile:) on my face………I’m really glad that u liked it…….& haan, acc to me, luv is like a butterfly, when u least expect it, it settles down upon ur shoulder…..while true friendship has got no expectations….no boundaries, no limitations…..nothing………now, enough of my bak bak……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee……..bye……..tc………have a gud day……….

  3. Rajnandini

    MRP yaar sacch mai aakhoon mai aasoon aa gaye ye padh ke…..kitna beautiful likha hai yaar….matlab kuch bhi kehna iss shot ke saamne gustakhi hogi! Sach mai yaar tera jawab nahi! Sidha dil se hokar rooh ko chuaa hai iss shot ne! Har love story puri nahi hoti aur love mai sirf ek dusre ka baanana jaroori nahi hota! One sided love kabhi kabhi alag sa sookon deta hai aur woh sookon mujhe tumhare shot mai dikha! Ye toh diye ki taraha apne pyar apne yaar ko roshni dene ke liye jalta rehta hai! Kuch toh alag hi aajoba hai ye one sided love aur sach mai jo tumne likha hai naa woh sabse beautiful than ever tha! Aab tumse shikayat nahi…..sanveer ke os se 100 times beautiful hai ye! Hats off to u dear…..love u loads meri MRP….good night …..sweet dreams…

    1. Riyarocks

      NAHI!!!!!!……….maine ye kya kardiya…….maine apni CVR ko rula dia………bohut badi waali boori hoon na mein??……cholly…….kaan pakalke………ab na aage che thola dhyaan lakhungi……but yaar…….sach bolun…teri iss comment ne mere dil ko choo liya & mere chehre par ek raunak le aayi hai……..waise, shukar hai, tujhe ye pasand aa gaya……& sanveer waali os likhne ki jo galti ki thi, iss os ke through, meri punishment poori hui……..ab aage se, aaraam hi aaraam hai…..haha…….luv u dherrrrrrr saara meri cha…….oops………aadat se majboor;)……..meri CVR……….& ek bohut badi jaadu ki jhappi……pappiyon ke saath………haha………..

  4. Mje ye padh k rona aa gya ….anyways very very nyc OS sweetie n jaadu ki jappi to u to…..gn

    1. Riyarocks

      awww…….mat ro Dhruvi………SORRY………kaan pakadke……….iske baad waale mein, promise toh nahi kar sakti, but haan………koshish karoongi ki itna senti na ho………& tujhe rona na pade……….I’m glad tujhe ye os pasand aaya………..luv u a lot & ek badi….bohut badi waali jaadu ki jhappi tere liye……….

  5. Priyanshipp

    This was superb riyu . Each nd every scene was perfect. Very nice msg. But pls do come back with 2nd part of this os. It was very nice Good night . Luv u so so so so so so much.

    1. Riyarocks

      Priyanshi………iska 2nd part……I mean, thoda concession toh milna chahiye naa…..toh main soch rahi thi, apne ff ka nxt episode mein isme jo reh gaya, wo kasar poori karne ki koshish karoon, toh chalega kya? & yaar……..tera bohut vada vaala thanku, ki tune itni raat tak jaagke meri iss os ko padha……thanku………….luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrr saara meri Shona……..

      1. Priyanshipp

        Chalega nhi dodega. Bas mujhe kaanchi saath cahiye. Pichli ff ki tarah isme kisi ko na maar dena. Or agar sad ending hui to kasam se keh rhi hoon tera ff kabhi nhi padhungi. Luv u so so so so so much. 😙😙

    2. Riyarocks

      arey baap re!……itni badi sazaa mat dena…….plz…….iss baar maaf kar de……agli baar, aisa kuch nehi karoongi……ab toh maan jaa…….dekh, kaan bhi pakad li hai……plz………:):)

      1. Priyanshipp

        😂😂😂😂😂man gyi mai. Chal ab smile kar. 😙😙

      2. Riyarocks

        haha:D:D:D…….luv u Shona………

  6. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Riyarocks

      luv u a lot Shona:):)

  7. superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
    rula diya tune
    amazinggggggggggggggg
    one of best os i read

    1. Riyarocks

      awww……galti ho gayi……..maaf karde mujhe……..kya karoon, main bhi kitni badi waali dhakkan hoon……..apne frnds ko apne writings se rula rahi hoon……..sorry dear………kaan pakadke…….aage se dhyaan rakhoongi & koshish karoongi ki itni zyaada senti naa likhoon………& tera comments padhke, I’m on cloud 9……….luv u a lot Swetha……….& a big teddy hug for u………

      1. plz dear never say sorry
        you write sooo well that easily connected to it and emotions come
        how to say yaar
        fab writer you are
        heart touching
        aise hi likti raho main padthi rahungi
        byee dear love you tc

    2. Riyarocks

      haha……..luv u sweetie pie……bye……tc……….

  8. Fab. U r really a booker prize winner. After reading this I really wish that everyone should fall in luv once in while. Hoping for such amazing OS further. 😍😍😍😍

    1. Riyarocks

      Kajal dear………yaar tujhe ye pasand aaya, ye mere liye bohut badi baat hai & dear, I’m not that good enough & mere writings bhi baaki writers ki tarah, bohut zyaada amazing bhi nehi hai…….but dear, ur comments just made my day….it bought a 100W glow on my face……..sachii……..& u r right……..everyone should fall in love, but the only thing necessary is it should be unconditional……agar len den shuru hojae, toh wo pyaar nehi….vyaapaar banjati hai………luv u a lot sweetie & a big teddy hug for u………..

  9. Anuradha123

    Awesome riya dear! Extraordinary story bohot hi heart touching tha… Dukh to huwa jab kabir ne sanchi k love ko accept nahi kiya.. But sanchi k samajdari ko salaam.. Very beautiful story riya… Kaha se laati ho itni khubsoorat ideas.. Mere toh dimag ka tube light hi nahi jalta… Love u dear

    1. Riyarocks

      FINALLY!!……….my Anu is back!!!!!!!…….tumak log pai bhal lagil…theek toh likha hai na??….Shona…..tere comments ko bohut zyaada miss kiya……..& yaar……ye ideas mere doston ke sangat mein rehne ka nateeja hai………baaki, main toh kuch bhi nehi………& haan……..agar tu tube light hai…..phir toh main ek fused bulb jaisi hoon…….haha………btw, tu apni wapsi kab kar rahi hai? tere ff….pyaar ishq mohabbat aur ajeeb daastaan kab waapas likhna shuru karegi? bohut intezaar karliya…ab aur nehi…….luv u dherrrrrrr saara……..dintu bhal houk…….haha…….bye……..tc……..

      1. Anuradha123

        Waah toi kor pora akhomiya hikili? Bohut val lagil tur comment pohi… Lahe lahe aahim aaru likhim dei… Yaar tu toh itni achi Assamese likh leti ho! Love you too dear

    2. Riyarocks

      haha…..Moi katomon Akhomea hobdah zano……..very few………in fact, I’m learning through google baba;P;)….tere saath frndship ki hai, toh itna toh kar hi sakti hoon……..abhi tak sirf basic learning par hi hoon……aage……dekhte hain………haha………luv u Shona…….

  10. It’s amazing…
    I have very became a fan of your writing ND I love each ND every OS of yours. Keep writing like this dear

    1. Riyarocks

      awww……thats so sweet of u Ishi dear…….I’m really glad that u liked this plot…….ur comments bought a big smile on my face…….a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweety pie…….have a nice day…….bye…….tc………

  11. Yaar its sooo…… awesome. I could feel everything it was just like im living that moment, and yaa its true we can sacrifice love for friendship because what matters more is to be frnds😄😁😁😙

    1. Riyarocks

      Rishu dear…….thnku sooooooooo much for commenting……I’m really glad that u liked this plot………& yeah u r right, frndship ke liye hum har hadd ko paar kar sakte hain…….luv u a lot sweetieeeee & a big teddy hug for u……….have a nice day……bye……..tc……..

  12. Dhruti

    my my my prinku ab muje lag raha he ki me koi normal ladki se baat nahi kar rahi hu ye koi famous writer he jo itna aaccha likhti he ki kya batou ab…………
    bahout hi aaccha os tha and what you said about love and friendship it’s really true…………….i love your new concept and i love your writing……………..sorry jyada nahi likh paungi ab sory for that………………….
    love you dherrrrrrrrrrr sara(in your language)
    after read your os i’m felt fresh so go back to study and start reading he he he……………..

    1. Riyarocks

      achha jee……..normal nahi hoon!!……tu rook abhi….haha…….arey yaar, main koi bohut zyaada achha nehi likhti vikhti…..but haan koshish karti hoon ki apne writings ke through kuch msg de sakoon & uss se bhi badi baat, tum sab se joodi reh sakoon….tujhe ye achha laga…….ye sunkar mere mann ko shaanti mili….. & ek baat, kyun na tu bhi kuch likh hamare liye…..ff ya os……..agar main likh sakti hoon, tab toh tu zaroor likh sakti hai……….ek baar sochna iss baare mein…….ab ke liye, bas itna hi……….luv u dherrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………..

  13. extremely sweet n beautiful n lovely so well written my Darling Riya Loved it to core.Made me get nostalgic n made remember my crush n my college days hahaha.

    1. Riyarocks

      awww….that’s really sweet of u Rushi dear……..& yaar, getting comments from one of ur fav writers, this really means a lot for me………thnku sooooooooo much for commenting………I’m really glad that u liked this plot………luv u a lot sweetie pie & a big teddy hug for u……..have a nice day dear……..bye………tc……..& eagerly waiting for ur 40th episode……luv u……

  14. Moonlight25

    My choco pie…just loved the OS…each and every scene was perfectly described…..you are so talented….plz come up with another part 2 of this OS…if you want….and very msg…..you gave…..love you loads ❤😘

    1. Riyarocks

      awww…..thnku thnku thnku so much sweetie pie for liking this plot……..& dear, I’m not as good writer as u…….but haan…..mujhe ek shikaayat hai tujhse…….when r u going to resume ur ff History repeated itself? its been a long time, abt more than 3 weeks……eagerly waiting to know what next is gonna happen, how the misunderstandings r going to be cleared, can’t wait to know abt it……..anyways, thnx for commenting…..luv u dherrrrrr saara & a big waala teddy hug for u dear………

  15. Negisanyukta

    After reading ur os,i think i must open my oxford dixtionary to find words for ur appreciation.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
    I just loved it to the core.It’s really amazinggg…
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Feeling bad for Saanchi.U made her Miss.Devdas from Miss Golgappa.
    After reading ur os, i m 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    no need to believe these tears,they r crocodile tears.
    I have read so many os on TU,but this one become favourite .
    Keep writting dear.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

    1. Riyarocks

      Really!!!!!!…….mujhe nahi pata tha ki main kuch likhne laayak ban gayi hoon…….waise, tareef ke liye shukriya….shukriya….shukriya………..meri khushnaseebi hai ki huzoor-e-aala ko meri ye plot achhi lagi……..haha……..btw, mujhe ye laga hi tha ki ab tak kisine notice nehi kiya, but yaar tune kardia….haan…. maine socha, ki hamesha kabir ya veer ko hi kyun rulaaoon…thoda, sanchi devi ji ko bhi rone de deti hoon(but haan….show mein jab sanchi ko emotional dikhaate hain, mujhe samajh mein nahi aata ki sanchi hass rahi hai ya ro rahi hai…..haha……..anyways, thnx durgeshwari ji;P….haha….mere iss plot ko like karne ke liye……….luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara………….

      1. Negisanyukta

        Waah dii!! Sweetie se seedha durgeshwari..
        not fair😖😖😖😖😖😖

    2. Riyarocks

      haha;P;)……….achha laga naa;P……haha………just kidding…….:D:D

  16. Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing lovely

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku sooooooooooooo much Divya dear for commenting……ur comments bought a big smile on my face…….I’m on cloud9 after reading ur comments………luv u a lot sweetieeeee……..& a big teddy hug for u……….have a nice day………..

  17. Niyaaa

    Hey prinku i know m late hun per sorry nahi khungi … tujhse pitna h kya….haha… btw os is super duper perfect one side love storyy… or wase bhi suna h naa ektarfa mohbaat ki taqat kitni hoti h.. or sabse badi baat uspe haq sirf khud ka hi hota h… jarur nahi har ishq ko uski manjil mile kabhi kabhi binamanjil k raste bhi khubsurat ehsas or tajurba de jate h.. okay ab bahut hui basanbaji… phir kahti hun os ekdum toofani bilkul meri prinku jaisa… Lovvv u nd a breakbone hug for u..

    1. Riyarocks

      achha kia jo tune sorry nahi kaha….warna……….haha…..tu jaanti hai……..waise, iss baar maine socha ki har baar hamara kabir ya veer kyun tadpe, ek baar sanchi devi ji ko ehsaas karaaoon show mein kabir ke haalat ke baare mein……isiliye, maine sanchi ka one sided luv story rakha………ab hamare kabir ko rulaya hai, toh itna punishment toh banta hi hai naa……..haha……..anyways, jaanke bohut bohut bohut zyaada khushi hui ke tujhe ye plot achha laga……..luv u dherrrrrrrr saara Shona & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi……..tere liye……..

  18. Amazing…… Loved it …….. I am speechless

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku so much Amnaa dear for commenting…..I’m really glad that u liked this plot…….a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweetieeeeee………..bye………tc………

  19. Destiny’s secrets .no one knows.
    NICE OS.

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku sooooo much for commenting Ishk(I hope I can call u that)……….& u r right…..all we need to have is faith……..faith to move forward, even when we don’t know what might happen in the nxt moment….btw, I’m really glad that u liked this plot…& thnx for that……luv u a lot dear…….bye……tc……..

      1. Ya sure.you can call that.😊

    2. Riyarocks

      luv u…….bye……tc…..:):):)

  20. RuCh23

    Awesome Riya 😍😍😍 loved it!! It doesn’t matter if it isn’t a happy kanchi ending always, writers get many different ideas, coz life isn’t about happy endings always. We should always just go with the flow and see what life give us. If someone or something meant to be ours, then no one or nothing can stop it 😀😀😀. Luv u sweetie 😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      superb Ruwani……..ur comments alwz bring a big smile on my face…..of course, amazing writer ho toh comments bhi tumhare hi tarah, amazing, dhamaakedaar……….hone hi hai……..& u r right, we can’t predict what life has got for us in the nxt moment, so we need to live in the present……….luv u dherrrrrrrr saara & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………

  21. Riru

    aaw di such a nice msg and a beautiful creative fab fantastic superb awesome amazing khidki tor gakab story.bye tc luv u

    1. Riyarocks

      Reni dear……..tumhari comments ek dum tumhari hi tarah hoti hain…….sweet & cute……..& har baar ki tarah, mere chehre par smile le aati hai……….luv u dherrrrrrr saara sweetu & a big teddy hug for u…….bye……tc………

  22. Miss-Golgappa

    You showed the most brautiful side of love…. You portrayed love very well…. And the message was very well conveyed…. Yah you are right dear we should love without any expectation…. Its really hard to see someone very special to you love somebody else… but if we can’t be the reason behind his/her happiness then let others be the reason…What we want is to see them happy….Its easy to love but not to sacrifise…….Loads of love to you sweetie…..

    1. Riyarocks

      awww Sana……thnk God & thnx to u ki tune comment kiya……..mujhe toh ye laga ki shayad tujhe ye one sided love story hone ke kaaran pasand nehi aaya hoga………but ab meri jaan mein jaan aayi, tere comments padhke…….I’m very very very happy ki tujhe ye os pasand aaya……luv u dherrrrrrrr saara & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u…….

  23. Wonderful storu di…u nailed it…loved it from bottom of the heart….so sorry for late comment di….busy with studies….lots of love to u & come back with next one OS soon….😊😊 …..take care.

    1. Riyarocks

      Choti…..no problem……I know studies ka pressure & all, kitna zyada torture karte hain hame…..but I’m thnkful, ki tune waqt nikaal kar isse padha & comment kiya……I’m glad ki tujhe ye plot pasand aaya……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saara Shona & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………gud nt……tc……..

  24. Abhilasha

    Superbbb…….amazing…….. Fantastic….. Marvellous……… Perfect…….loved it from bottom of my heart!!!! U r tooo good……and this story was relatable to one of my frnd!!! It was like the same story is going on!!

    1. Riyarocks

      haye!….tune di commentriyaan aur dil mein baji ghantiyaan re tang tang tang……..yaar, kitne dinon ke baad teri comments padhne ka mauka mila…….thanku….thanku……thanku soooooooo much…….itne busy schedule ke baad bhi tune iss plot ke liye time nikaal kar padha……I’m too excited………aakhir meri likhna shuru karne ki wajaah tu jo hai………luv u dherrrrrr saara……….have a rocking day ahead……….& ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……..

  25. Amazing os dear nd plz write a rooooomantic os of kanchi.. Sry 4 late cmmnting.. Lv u

    1. Riyarocks

      no problem dear…….can I call u moni, if u don’t mind………thnx for commenting……I’m really glad that u liked this plot….& haan, I’ll surely try to write a romantic one………luv u a lot dear……..have a nice day……bye……tc…….

  26. Khamoshi

    Sorry yaar.. bahot dino baad TU pe aayi hu to bahot articles miss ho gaye.. humka maafi dei do.. cominymg to ur OS.. it was marvelous.. kash apna kabir bhi itna flirty hota 😉 to ..hume to mazaaaaa hi aa jaata.. hehe
    Love u yaar and ur articles

    1. Riyarocks

      Mitu…….tera sorry…….not accepted……..haha…….arey yaar, sulu bhai ki fan hokar unhi ki lines bhool gayi…frndship ke rules waali……..& haan, tune padhke comment kia, ye mere liye zyaada mayne rakhta hai…….& agar kabir show mein flirty hota, tab toh veer ka koi sawaal hi nehi hota….kyunki dilwale dulhaniya le jaate, chahe heroine maane ya na maane;P;)………luv u dherrrrrrrr saara…….& ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………gud nt…….tc………..:):)

  27. Hey,,khamoshi dear whr r u??.. U know i miss u a looooot.. Plz dear update soon ur suppppr ff..

    1. Khamoshi

      Heyy tampamoni.. sorry dear for making u waut for so long… tomorrow 4 sure u will get to read next episode of mine ☺😊 thanks for so much of love

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