I BELIEVE YOU (A SWASAN LOVE STORY)..THREE SHOTS – Part 1

HI GUYS…THIS IS MARYAM AND THIS IS MY VERY FIRST TRY SO PLZ ENCOURAGE ME THROUGH YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS….
MY STORY STARTS WHEN SWASAN AND RAGLAK MARRIED (NO ENTRY OF KAVYA) …THE TWO COUPLE ARE VERY HAPP..AND SHARE A VERY STRONG BOND..
IT WAS A FINE EVENING…
As usual swara was waiting for sanskar in their room….It was nearly 7…and sanskar had not returned yet…swara like a very caring and dutiful wife call him as she was very worried..bcz sanskar was not so late ever and even if he was late he would have call her…but today neither he had call nor he was picking his phone…
As there was no response from the call..swara decided to tell laksh and ragini about it….when she get up from bed ghee heard the door of there room opening…He was sanskar…In a very bad mood and a faded face…
Swara quickly went to him and hug him..
Swara: oh god sanskar..thank god u are here…I was waiting for u for so long..where were u..
Sanskar without saying anything breaks the hug and went directly to the washroom….leaving swara shocked..as he never behaved like this. .
Swaea (to herself): might be there was so much work in the office..that’s why he must be tired..

Swara goes towards the bed and was preparing it for their sleep..sanskar steps out of the washroom and went toward the bed…swara to make make his mood good..goes towards him and hug him and kiss him on his cheeks….but was shocked to see sanskar response…

Sanskar push her away from him and said in a drastic way..
Sanskar: oh hello…plz keep distance from me and next time don’t u dare come close to me..why are u always behind me. ..huh
Swara (cups his face): Sanskar what happened to u why are u behaving like this..
Sanskar: excuse me…u are u to ask me this…I can behave in any way..be in ur limit..
Swara: I am ur wife ..and I have full rights on u I can ask and say anything so..
Sanskar: you are my wife right so be in ur limit wifey…..u don’t have rights on me…u have full rights on u I can do anything to u..beat u…force u…and even can leave u…
Swara: enough sanskar what are u saying…why are u reacting ice this ( loud ebnough)

Sanskar suddenly slap swara..

Sankar: don’t raise ur voice ok..u are nothing…This slap was for arguing e with me..
Swara had tears in her eyes….before she could say anything..sanskar again push her and went towards bed and leans on it…
Swara controlled herself..thinking maybe it was because of the stress of work…she also moves toward bed…but sanskar interept ..

Sanskar: where are u going…from now u are not going to sleep on bed..go sleep on couch..
Swara: but sanskar. ……
Sandkar: don’t argu again or else this time I will beat h very harshly…just move from here and go to sleep…
Swara was feeling very bad but control herself…And moves toward the couch and sleeps there…having tears in her eyes……

TO BE CONTINUED……………….*
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*so guys how wax it…its my very first try I know I am not a good writer…but plz encourage me…and plz tell me should I continue it or not. ..

Credit to: Maryam

20 comments

  1. swasantha

    It’s seems to be a wonderful plot pls continue… Update the next part soon… Thank You and Sorry for troubling you.

  2. Nita

    The story is wonderful….. I want to know why Sanskar behaved so…..plz update next part soon….

  3. Angel Goldie

    Ohh My God…Awsum…Loved it..bt y is Sanskaar behaviour like this ?? Soo Strange..Plzz Continue soon..cnt wait

  4. Angel Goldie

    Continue soon na yaar…waiting very badly fr the da nxt part ..so update soon n dat too a Bigger One plzzz

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