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Beintehaa mohabbat….Manan (Part-3)

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Thanku soooo much guyzz dear Alisha , Manu, Piya, sush, Zuha , Ananya , Shisna, Inu, Kavina and sorry if i missed somebody ur love and support is something which gives me strength to write what i am writing today
Today i wish to tell u something that my exams r on my head and so i would not be able to update this ff till 16th dec after that i wll try to be regular but i want u all to tell me whether i should continue this ff after exam or shall i start a new one ?
Thanku all of u for supporting and giving ur loads of love to me
Thanx guyzz ur each and every valuable comments become support for me to continue this ff
it’s a bit long one so plzz take something to eat before starting reading
Happy reading!!!

Part 3

Recap: Nandini’s concept of love and Manik dreaming abut Nandini
Suddenly he saw sir coming towards him and sir was abut to scold our dear Manik was fortunately bell rang and everyone ran outside as today’s classes were over, except fab5 and Nandini & Navya and sir but then sir left the class and only fab5 and Navya Nandini were standing Nandini was abut to leave but suddenly stopped thinking of calling Navya to come with her and in a nic of time Mukti called Nandini
Manik was staring at Nandini continuously and Nandini was being uncomfortable due to continuous gaze
Mukti: Hi Nandini ,Hi Navya welcome to our academy guyzz
Navya & Nandini in Unison : Thanku dear

Dhruv: It seems that people here have not being nice to u guyzz. Is it so?? (talking abut navya’s introduction thing)
Navya:(hesitatingly )no it is not really so but ..
Cabir:(Could sense her nervousness ) We understand this,its bcoz u don’t have met real friends
Saying this cabir was extended his hand saying : Friends ???????
Everyone was amazed by this sudden proposal (Fab4 was continuously staring at him as if he have done some kind of sin(crime) bcoz Fab5 had this record of not making friends easily and Navya was pleased by his proposal as such there were no friends made by her in this academy except Nandini )
Navya : (very happily extended her hand towards Cabir) Yup sure, from now onwards we are FRIENDS !!! right saying this she turned to nandu she was surprised but agreed and
Nandini: (extending hand towards Cabir ) FRIENDS!!
Cabir shaked his hand and saw Fab4 looking at him curiously and he told everyone through sign language to extend hands for friendship

Dhruv : (to both)(acted like a kid) me also…
Both laughing and giggling at his expression and told yes friends for sure
Aaliya and mukti also became friends with Navni(Navya & Nandini)
all of a sudden Nandini saw a book lying under the desk so went to pick it up
Now it was Manik’s turn to shake hands but as soon as he was going to extend suddenly all of them told to go to canteen Manik told he will join them in a while and they all left the room except Manik & Nandini
manik (thinking) yipeee finally i got some time to talk to her
Manik(bit stammering ): Nan…nandini
Nandini: yaa Manik u were telling something ?
Manik: yaa i was thinking now all have become friends except us so (nandini interepted)
Nandini: yup Friends???(extending her hand)
Manik : (very happily) friends
When they shaked their hands there was a kind a beautiful feeling both were experiencing but nt expressing through their faces

Manik: Nandini lets go to the canteen our friends went over there only
Nandini: yaa sure Manik lets go
while going outside Nandini’s leg got twisted she just screamed at her highest pitch as she got leg sprain where Manik as soon as saw her in pain could not control himself and took her into his arms while nandu was crying all this time
Manik: don’t worry nandini it will be alright (controlling his emotions or else he would also be in tears)
Nandini: Manik ..its paining… a lot(while sobbing )
Both looked at each other and were able to feel the pain through which they were going through , then Manik kept her down with utmost care on a chair .
Manik: i wll go and bring first aid kit till then wait for don’t move ok
Nandini: no Manik .. u don’t have to go… anywhere u can … take the spray from my bag there the purple one(showing the direction) (stammering due to pain)
Maink: (going in the direction) and gave her the bag (yes guyzz bcozz Manik a person who respects a woman so he won’t open her bag)

Nandini took out the spray and was trying to apply it by herself but could not. Manik took it from her hand and started applying it while Nandini closing her eyes crying in a silent mode .
Manik could nt see the pain and decided to do something .(thinking)
In the canteen
Navya: where r they both left ?? what work they both r doing that they r so late ? let me check(saying this she stood up and started to go)
At the nic of time cabir hold her wrist and they both had a cute eyelock
where Dhruv shouted Bravo!! Bravo!!
Cabir and navya suddenly came back to senses and thought that Dhruv saw their awkward position
Aalu: what happened Dhruv why r u shouting
Dhruv show his mobile screen which was seen with a winner written on it(guyzz he was talking abut the game nt Cabir & Navya)
Mukti: Grow up Dhruv!!!
Aalu: Mukti u only call na Manik
Mukti: i was also thinking of doing so
Mukti called Manik and the bell was ringing but he was not picking up the call

In classroom
Manik: Nandini do u think love can be at first sight (yes guyzzz he heard all the philosophy of love which nandu was talking abut but did nt heard the talk they did abut him )
Nandu saw him with a shocked expression
Immediately without wasting a sec he twisted the leg to the opposite side of sprain and Nandini again screamed and said “U r really a Monster”(in her high pitch)
But suddenly felt relieved and saw manik in total shock …….

Precap: Still thinking….

Guyss plzz do make ur feelings a series of words and plzz make comment
Each & every comment will be whole heartedly accepted whether positive or negative
I hope its not getting bored if so plzz let me know guyzzz i m eagerly waiting for ur reviews
ur suggestions are precious feel free to give
Plzz answer my question which i asked in the start of this chapter
Love u guyzz
Stay tuned plzz!!!!

20 Comments
  1. It’s okkk dear take your tym but pls don’t stop this ff pls pls continue after your exam it is an amazingggg story today’s part is mindblowing I like plot of your story it is very nice and plssssss continue take care and all the best fr your exams

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku soooo much for understanding me it means a lot dear
      I wll try to update soon
      once again Thankx for my exams!!
      Take care
      i wll be back soon with a bang
      Stay tuned plzzz!!!!

  2. Awesome update dear please don’t stop this ff continue it we will wait for your update take your own time but please don’t stop all the best for your exams give your best take care we will miss u come with a bang

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku so much dear
      i wll try to update soon
      once again Thankx for my exams!!
      Take care
      i wll be back soon
      Stay tuned plzzz!!!!

  3. Tanushree

    nice going pls go on..

    1. Shrutu

      ya sure Thankx a lot dear
      Take care
      Stay tuned plzzz!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. Hai shrutu dear…. Just now i red all ur three episodes… U r amazing…just mind blowing…Keep on writing

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear Shwetha
      its really awesome to know that my concept is loved by my readers
      thankx again dear
      i wll try to update soon tc
      Stay tuned plzz!!!!

  5. Zuha Fatima

    Hey Shrutu,
    Well this was something magnificent…The essence of word was enough to stir the hearts of the readers.

    Well when I received the link I thought that I will inform you that I will be off stir from 2nd Dec – 15 Dec as of examination but fortunately you won’t be posting ad of your examination so gladly I won’t be missing the story 🙂

    All the best for your examination dear 🙂

    Loads of love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Shrutu

      hey Zuha
      Thankx for the awesome words u use to describe my thoughts written in this story
      On the very first day only i told its all abut destiny , look now also our exams are starting & we both wllbe offline so no worry of missing any story
      And all the very best for ur exams , and thanku for ur Love and support it means a lot
      thankx for exams
      tc
      Stay tuned plzz!!!

  6. Well I believe love can happen any time anywhere at any age episode was perfect

    1. Shrutu

      Really u feel love can happen at any age , but dont u think it can be infatuation
      Anyways thanku sooo much for loving it
      tc
      Stay tuned plzzzz!!!!

  7. Kavina

    Loved it. How is exams going?

    1. Shrutu

      Thanks dear
      my exams r gone start by monday
      tc
      Stay tuned plzz!!!

  8. Hiii dear ..i read oll ur updates 2day itself….reallly a nycccc story….d way u describd love….lovd ittt…olll true..i too feel d same actuallly…n e ways update when u r free….we oll can defintly understand…dont worry….i cudnt comment as i too am having my exams…too hectic days….bst of oll d luck 4 ur xams…do welll….nd retrn soon…t c

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku very much Anjali, its really amazing to know that my concept is loved by u all
      All the best for ur exams
      And thankx for ur good wishes
      tc
      Stay tuned plzzz!!!!

  9. Superb dear….

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku soo much Sharmi

  10. Ruth as I am taking about true love it cannot be infatuation as I myself is experienced this I am saying bause love is not only staying together love also means sacrificing for our love

    1. Shrutu

      i totally agree Neha , but my point was only that in teen age one don’t understand the difference which creates a huge problem for them ..
      By the way its not Ruth its Rutu
      anyways tc
      Stay tuned plzz!!!

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