The beginning of a new chapter for chakor Episode 24

Recap suraj is angry with chakor decision but chakor wants to punish ranjana vivaan ragini and imli in her own way….

Suraj; i dont know whats wrong with jaagathmaatha she always wants to forgive every1….
Imli sees suraj and runs to hug him…
Imli;suraj babu im glad ur bk i was so worried for you…
Suraj takes imli of him and ignores imli…
Suraj; leave my room now!
Imli weeps and leaves…
Imli olv tonight suraj babu i will make you mine…
Suraj stares at his bundua mohaar and gets depressed… he closes his eyes and hids his pain…
Ranjana; all the work is done and the guests are coming too ragini go and call imli and vivaan..
Vimli; this child is a disastrous for us we need to get rid of it otherwise suraj and chakor we will never be able to get them…
Imli; vivaan babu i have a plan why dont we spike sukor drink so at the end of the night i get suraj babu and u get didi and wen we wake up in the morning then they will never be able to seperate from us…
Vivaan: wow imli you are too good now lets go and act like a happy couple they both laugh and leave…
Guests; congratulations vimli we are so happy for you and imli you are giving the rajvanshi’s thier first grandchild god bless you vimli recieve gifts and sit down…
Suraj does not want to attend but remembers chakor words and goes downstairs everyone stares at suraj…
Imli; wow my suraj is looking to good at tonight he will be mine…
Suraj stands in the coner as he is not interested in the party…
Chakor comes down in a green gown and looks beautiful…
Everyone stares at chakor…
Imli gets jealous…
Vivaan; tonight is my lucky night with my chakor…
Suraj sees chakor and stares at her he is lost for words and is mesmerized seeing chakor…
Chakor gets happy spotting suraj and walks towards him..
Chakor;suraj how do i look…
Suraj; unable to speak….
Chakor; you dont like my dress??

Some girls come and hug suraj…
Suraj olv wow im unable to speak seeing chakor…
Chakor gets anxious seeing the girls with suraj..
Suraj olv if i tell her that i have feelings for her then she will make fun of me i wanna know her feelings first…
Suraj tries making chakor jealous and takes all the girls to the dancefloor and dances with them
Chakor olv look at this paakandi i wore this dress for him and wanted to tell my feelings i have for him but this paakandi is busy with other women if i tell him i love him he will make fun of me i can never express my feelings to anyone…
Suraj sees chakor fustration and gets happy…
Vimli get happy seeing suraj with other women vivaan approches chakor and suraj sees…
Suraj olv chakor is my wife so the first person she will dance with is me suraj runs towards chakor and grabs her hand…
Vivaan; chak…. dont worry chakor you can have your dance but tonight ur all mine…
Suraj and chakor stand on the dance floor a romantic song comes on (couldn’t think of any!!) Chakor; why did you drag me to the dance floor clearly you have many other women to dance with chakor walks of but suraj grabs her arm..
Chakor; let me go…
Suraj; no i grabbed your arm to dance with not to let go with you and this time im not dancing with any randoms im dancing with my wife…

Suraj starts to flirt and tease with chakor..
Chakor olv i dont understand this paakandi and why is he flirting with me..
Sukor dance suraj goes close by chakor and smirks…
Suraj olv doea she feel anything..
Chakor olv what is he doing!!!
The song ends and chakor pushes suraj away from her… but suraj grabs chakor waist as everyone comes to greet them..
Chakor; what are you doing…
Suraj; introducing my wife…
The guests come to greet sukor…
Guests; wow sukor that was a great dance and wen is it gonna be your turn…
Chakor blushes and walks off..
Suraj olv maybe sooner than i thought…
Vivaan signs the waiter who gives chakor the drink chakor gulps the drink…
Suraj tries looking for chakor… imli signs the waiter who gives suraj the drink suraj drinks it all to …
Sukor tried looking for each but failed and feel drowzy….
Vivaan grabs chakor…
Chakor; let go of me im looking for suraj…
Vivaan; suraj errr hes right thier in that room vivaan takes chakor and locks the door..
Vivaan olv only one my hour my love i will join you soon…
Chakor; this isnt my room?? Chakor fails to open the door and goes throw the window escaping back to her room…
Vivaan babu did his bit but where is suraj babu gone…
Suraj goes to his room and vimli fail to find suraj…
Chakor peaks in and locks the door…
Chakor feels giddy…

Chakor; so thier you are you paakandi you left me by myself…
Suraj; i left you?? You ran of leaving me!
Chakor; thats becuase you are a paakandi. .
Suraj gets up im a paakandi…
Chakor; yh chakor giggles
Chakor gets angry i came to this party for you and you didnt even notice me…
Chakor punches suraj and he stops her…
Suraj olv she came for me…
Suraj grabs chakor and questions her…
Suraj; why did you come for me??
Chakor; you idiot becuase i like…
Suraj; yh like??
Chakor olv no i wont say im not gonna make a moccary of myself…
Chakor; no i dont know why i came and let go of me…
Suraj; no finish of what you were gonna say…
Chakor; instead of asking me why did you stop to dance with me…
Suraj olv no i cant say anything otherwise this jangli billi will always laugh at me…
Suraj; no i asked first…
Chakor; fine im not gonna answer you and stop askig these weird queations what are you the police…
Vivaan; well imli good luck finding suraj im off to see chakor…
Vivaan enters the room and sees chakor gone..
Vivaan; chakor!!!!! Where are you…
Sukor hear vivaan shouting(sukor are now drunk cuz of vimli spiking thier drink)
Suraj; chakor i think your in trouble…
Chakor; what did i do lets hide i dont want vivaan finding me…
Suraj covers chakor mouth with his hand and they both slip on the bed…
Vivaan has gone mad and blames imli…
Vivaan; thiz is all your fault chakor would be all mine and now she is gone imli i hate you!!! Vivaan bangs the door and leaves…
Imli olv didi i hate you where have you gone with my suraj babu i will ruin you…
Mahiya plays…
Suraj moves chakor hair that were flying around her face…
Sukor smile at each other and get closer and closer…..

Precap will sukor confess thier love….

13 comments

  1. |Registered Member

    Wow. Wow. Wow Di 😲. Amazing. Sukor’s Dance was sooo cute. When u said love song, I had Tum Hi Ho in my head straight away. Just hope they confess now. The only prob is they might not remember as they r drunk. Keep going and update soon. 😊

    • Tippu

      Thank u so much im glad u enjoyed it alot and i posted another part which will be out soon

  2. Qari

    Loved it so much u have the best ffs all the time and such a long ff too people should read ur ff they are too good

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