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Hello guys…this is Anu with a special OS….As it is was my birthday on 4th…..and I am here with a special story (only one shot) as a part of my b’day special series…and this is completely different fm my other two OS guilt and I too had a love story….and can I expect more than 20 comments for this…is this possible by you all…Its my challenge for you all….

And to notify you beforehand this is going to have a sad ending…so pls don’t feel sad…I am just trying a story from a different angle…and you might feel it is a copy of a film..yes it is an inspiration from a movie but I am informing you all that I have no intension to copy anything….and sometimes other writers might have included anything from this already in their stories..nd if I say in my memory I have not read anything like that…sometimes I might have forgotten that…and I asked a suggession for this issue from one of my most trusted friend and she only told me about this point…so please please dont be angry on me…and seriously I have no intension to copy anything from anyone…..And I have no intension to make anyone hurt…
I am waiting for maximum comments…because I want a great gift from you all as a b’day gift..and hope you all give me my gift…

And all of you pls don’t go from here without dropping your comments…they matter for me a lot…and all silent readers even if it is your first time to comment no problem is there…you can freely express your thoughts to me by your comments…
And negative comments and most welcome…cause they tell me where I have to improve myself…so no problem…
I know this is too much of my useless talks ..I am stopping with my talks and let me start with my..

Birthday Special Series…Shivika OS by Anu….(1)
ONE SHOT

Introduction:- This is a single shot and the story starts with Daksh kidnapping Anika and taking her somewhere….

Shivaay coming out of Shakti’s room with the loan papers for Anika….He got to know from him that Dadi had applied for a educational loan for Sahil and the money cheque was given to Daksh by dadi to give it to Anika a day before Shivaay’s marriage…..

Story….

Shivaay comes out of his dad Shakti’s room with the papers he had to give to Anika….He was having several questions in his mind…..he sat down in his room near the window and slipped into deep thinking….

Shivaay(in mind)- If dadi had given the cheque to daksh to give it to Anika…then why did he lie that it was the price for Anika he was giving….why did he lie…..

After thinking for a while…

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Shivaay-Now I got it…it was his trick…so he did not give any money to Anika….but then that night when Daksh and Anika were in the same room……I find something fishy…..rewind the whole incident…

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Flashback…

Shivaay was going to the kitchen….there he saw soumya telling the servant to give tea to Anika in Daksh’s room…then Shivaay went to Daksh’s room and found out them being together….

Flashback ends…

Shivaay – So this means Soumya knew that Anika is in his room…but she did not have any kind of change…normally if one get to know about a couple being together the whole night without marrying it would be a sort of a michmichi feel right….but she did not have such a michmichi feel…..This shows there is some mistake…..I have to ask to Soumya…

Shivaay goes to Soumya’s room but she is not there…then he asks a servant passing by about Soumya…the servant says she is with Rudra in his room….
Shivaay went to Rudra’s room and finds Soumya over there…He goes to her and asks…

Shivaay- Soumya,can you just tell me that a day before my marriage,you asked the servant to send tea for Anika in Daksh’s room….

Soumya- haa that day..hmmm….yes…previous night I got a nightmare and woke up at around 2:00am..and I went to take some water from the kitchen.. Daksh bhaiya was there and he saw me tensed…he asked me what happened and I told him everything…since Priyanka was not there Daksh bhaiya called Anika di to come and sleep with me….he went and brought her to Oberoi Mansion and I and Anika di slept in Daksh bhaiyaa’s room and he slept in my room….why bhaiya…what happened??

Shivaay got shocked hearing what sumo said….he fell down on his knees and remembered how he pointed a finger on Anika’s self respect…he could not believe that he did a very big mistake….he started to cry…and holded his head with his hand..and he was filled with guilt…

Surprised with this gesture Rudra and Soumya holded him and asked what happened…he told everything to them from daksh saying he would spend a night with Anika to seeing them together to Shivaay accusing Anika and till this time….Rudra and Soumya were shocked….

Rudra- bhaiya I know you can never hurt Anika di but on knowing this you might have lost your control…but bhaiya Anika di loves you a lot…she would surely forgive you…go and apologize to her…

Soumya- Yes bhaiya Rudra is right….Anika di will forgive you…go and apologize to her…

Shivaay got up,wiped his tears and ran to find Anika….

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Rudra- Sumo I don’t know but I feel something wrong is going to happen…we have to track bhaiyaa…

Soumya- Yes Rudra I am also felling some danger so let’s track him…connect bhaiyaa’s phone with the GPS..

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Rudra- yes sumo awesome idea…I am going to connect his phone with mine…hmmm…where is my phone….my phone is in your room I think..let’s go….

Soumya and Rudra go….

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Shivaay couldn’t find Anika in Oberoi Mansion..So he thought to call her..
But her phone was switched off..
So Shivaay went to find her in her home…….
When he reached her house he saw the door was open..when he went inside he could find Anika’s phone smashed into pieces…he got scared by seeing this..

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He shouted ANIKA…WHERE ARE YOU?????
Just then a call from a unknown number came to his mobile….
He picked the call and heard a man laughing madly…

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Caller- Hello Shivaay, this is your friend Daksh…

Shivaay- Daksh say where is Anika..I am sure she is with you…

Daksh- exactly Shivaay…I never thought you could find out that she is with me…and I knew that…because I am your childhood friend..

Shivaay- Daksh what do you want??Money,property,fame or anything I will give…free Anika from your clutches….
( Shivaay could hear a moving train’s sound and the sound of metal sheets being made into sheets…)

Daksh- Shivaay…I want Anika’s life…She did a grave mistake by marrying you not me…now she will face the consequences….

Shivaay – Daksh…listen to me..don’t do anything to Anika…she is innocent..I only forced her for marriage…and she is not at fault…its me Shivaay….pls Daksh….don’t do anything to her…

Daksh- Shivaay if you want to save Anika then come….bye…..

the call is disconnected…..

Shivaay- Metal Sound….Train..yes got it…Daksh has a metal factory near Bandra Railway Station….I have to go over there….Anika…I am coming…

Shivaay runs towards his car…he is now driving at high speed…he is not caring for anything…not thinking about anything…Only about his Anika…

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In Oberoi Mansion..

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Rudra- Sumo…see this..bhaiya is driving the car in very high speed…see the arrow in the GPS is going at a very high speed…

Soumya- Its good that we connected the GPS with Shivaay bhaiyaa’s phone…

Soumya- Rudra I feel something is not good…let’s go there….and call ACP Ranveer..

Rudra- that officer…has doesn’t even like the Oberoi’s..

Soumya- I said Rudra call him and inform him…I am feeling something very bad is going to happen….

Rudra- OK…I am calling..

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On call

ACP ranveer- ACP ranveer speaking…who is this..

Rudra- hello hello Acp…its me Rudra Singh Oberoi…Actually I need your help…

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He tells the whole thing to Ranveer..

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Ranveer- its good that you informed me…OK where is he going…

Rudra- If I look he is nearing Bandra…

Ranveer- OK guys…I am going with police force to Bandra…when you get the exact location do tell me..

Rudra- we are also going…

Ranveer- OK..let’s keep in touch…
The call is disconnected…
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In the metal factory..

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Daksh- Anika…my dear….why did you do this???You loved me na…and I loved you too..

Anika(trying to speak)- Dd..aksh…daksh…I never loved you..you forced me to love you…I hate you…you are so cheap and physco..mind my words go to doctor and treat yourself….

Hearing this Daksh slaps Anika…It was so hard that the chair on which Anika was sitting tilted and fell down…

Daksh( holding her neck ) – Anika…now not only you…Shivaay is also going to pay for the betrayal..

Anika- Daksh..no…There is no mistake done by Shivaay…he is innocent…let me die…don’t do anything to him…..

Daksh- So my guess was right..you love Shivaay right…you were loving me na ….Now I will make him die in front of you and then you will ofcourse die by seeing his death…

Anika- no daksh..leave billu ji….leave him…he is innocent..he did not do anything…
Daksh pushes her chair and gets injured by a metal piece…
Then Daksh goes to the entrance of the factory…
Anika is screaming don’t do anything to shivaay…Don’t do anything to shivaay…he is innocent….
and then she falls unconscious……….
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And the GPS in rudra’s phone starts ringing as shivaay stopped at a location….Rudra passed this message to ACP ranveer….
ACP also called the ambulance to that place…..
Rudra’s car and the police jeep came together….but there was big traffic and they got stuck…Ambulance was also not able to pass the traffic…

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Shivaay reaches the factory….he is slowly moving inside as he knows danger can come anytime…but…
A big hammer came and hit his head…he immediately falls unconscious…
Daksh was the one who hit him…he was laughing and saying….now my revenge will start…

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Anika wakes up when Daksh sprinkles some water on her face…she sees Shivaay tied along a chair….blood oozing out near his forehead and he is unconscious…
Anika immediately cried out his name….”Shivaay”….
“Shivaay,wake up…what happened to you…Daksh…please please leave him..he is innocent…..please Daksh please….please don’t do anything to him….”

Daksh- No Anika no….I will not listen to anyone now….no one….not even God….

Anika- Shivaay..wake up….Daksh…don’t do anything to him…please please please….I will marry you…please….

Daksh- Why..as a second hand thing..no Anika…I was always treated inferior to Shivaay….Teachers would praise him first then me….his belongings in the name of sharing he would give to me and what all..I cannot tolerate this…..Shivaay will pay for everything he did to me….
Then he shows a Pocket Knife to Anika and tells

Daksh- From this weapon I am going to start his last moments of his life…and yours also..And you have to see it….
Anika starts screaming Shivaay…get up…Daksh…no….pls dont go near him…don’t do anything to him….please…..
and she starts crying…

Daksh walks towards Shivaay and sprinkles some water on him…he wakes up and with difficulty he opens his eyes….

Shivaay- What have you done Daksh???I am your friend na….

Daksh- Actually I was your friend na….and you betrayed me…so much…I loved Anika so much…and you married her…..now you will face the consequences….

Shivaay-Daksh listen to me…

By that time Daksh pierces the knife slowly near his heart area….Shivaay cried out of pain…Anika begged Daksh to stop..

Daksh- Tum tadap tadap ke maroge…
This is for betraying me….playing with my feelings…

He pierces the knife more in his heart…Shivaay again screams….Anika screams more…she tries to move and falls along with the chair….

Daksh-This is for loving Anika even when I was there…..
And he pierces it more…..Shivaay screams very loudly…Anika screamed at the top of her voice…
Suddenly a bullet sound was heard….
ACP Ranveer had shot a bullet towards Daksh and he fell down…and died on the spot…
Rudra runs and comes ….

Rudra- Bhaiyaa…..

He runs and goes to shivaay and removes the ropes tied to his hand…Soumya helps anika…when anika was free she ran towards Shivaay and started crying loudly…pls dont worry Shivaay…nothing will happen to you…..Somebody call the ambulance…
Till that time the doctors came and put him on the stretcher and took him….inside the ambulance anika was sitting….
During the journey she was apologizing to him for his condition…she was crying very loudly….Shivaay in a very low voice and with great difficulty he said..
Anika…don’t worry…nothing will happen to me….I love you Anika….
Then he became unconscious….
Anika screamed……SHIVAAY……….
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They reached the hospital….Shivaay was taken to OT and surgery started immediately…all Oberoi’s got to know about it and rushed towards the hospital…..Pinky started blaming Anika for everything…..Anika sat down crying….
Doctor came out…
Dadi rushed towards him and asked about his condition…

Doctor – the knife had entered his heart..and he already had a weak heart as his muscles were not strong enough to function…he was under medication….and we have only one option…Heart transplant…..

Dadi-Then do that doctor…..I will give you anything please save my billu……

Doctor- Mam I am sorry to say but there is no donor available now….pls arrange a heart donor as soon as possible….
Everybody started to cry……the doctor went………………..Anika also went somewhere
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Anika went to the doctor and asked that is there any donor…
The doctor replied no…

Anika- so doctor can anyone donate a heart….

Doctor- No there are some special procedures for that…the main thing is the the tissues of the receiver and donor should match…

Anika- So pls do the test of my tissues with his…

Doctor- but Mrs.Oberoi you…

Anika- I asked you to do it doc.

The doctor took her tissue sample and sent it to lab for testing….till then in mean time anika was all tensed….she then became sure the tissues would surely match…
She then wrote a letter and then holded it near to her heart …….
The doctor came and said the samples match….but are you sure…

Anika- 101% sure…

Doctor-but we need your relatives consent…

Anika- pls doc.pls don’t waste time…write in the consent that I am Anika…. only anika….I am an orphan…I have no one…enough….and pls do give this letter to Shivaay after he is well..
Doctor takes that letter and keeps it in his pocket…..

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The doctor comes to the Oberoi’s and says donor is available and the tissues also match…so pls sign in this consent form….
Dadi signs the consent form but fails to see Anika’s signature in the donor’s column….
The Operation starts……………….
After 10 hours the operation is done…..everybody is happy and omru asked about Anika…but no one showed any interest in that topic….

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After 2 weeks….

Till now Anika was not found….omru were trying to find Anika but all in vain..Shivaay was very tensed…he tried to call Anika but her phone was switched off….Pinky was happy that Anika left…
Then the doctor came and gave Shivaay a letter….in that letter it was like this….

Dear Shivaay…

Its me Anika…You might think that where am I…right…but I have not gone anywhere…I am in you….I love you truly and can’t afford to lose you….so I did this…pls don’t be angry…….pls pls don’t be angry…
Don’t change at all….love your life fully…and pls do take care of Sahil….I am giving his responsibility to you …….pls be my old kanji aakho walla bhagad billa……I hope that we can meet again…….And I will always see you from the stars ..so at night come to meet me.

Loving you till my last breath

Anika

Shivaay broke down and started crying…he holded the letter near his heart and cried badly …..Without knowing what it is OmRu were shocked….

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Shivaay came under depression…all the oberoi’s were shocked to know that it was Anika who saved Shivaay by giving her life…Pinky got Panic attacks frequently by thinking about her behavior with Anika….Sahil broke down…Omru also were in deep trauma….Then whole Oberoi’s were In trauma….

After a few years…..

Shivaay is seen walking with sahil…now Sahil can walk without using any support…..They enter Shivaay’s room……
The complete look of the room is changed…..His room had now become a room full of anika’s memories….The photos were of Anika and Shivaay….in their tadibaaz look…in their ishqbaazi look…..
These photos were sneak peaks taken by Omru and Khanna ….they had secretly taken Shivika’s photos without their knowledge….even Anika’s favorite bracelet is kept on the wardrobe…..
Shivaay and Sahil discussed something and started to go off to a place …
It was an Orphanage…..
Yes this orphanage was set up by Shivaay…. as anika was also an orphan he knew her pain…So to give happiness to children who were orphans he set up an orphanage in memory of his beloved wife….
Omkara and Rudra were also present over there……They were also helping Shivaay……
Pinky now is a completely transformed woman….she is also helping her children for running the orphanage…she also wants to start orphananges in whole India…..It was her big dream…..

4th Death Anniversary of Anika…
This day was very sad for everyone…as for last 4 years anika left everyone…even her Shivaay…..

Shivaay became very quiet…..he sat down near the poolside kepping his hand near to his heart and remembering his moments with anika……He then started crying….even Omru Soumya and Priyanka came there and hugged him and cried……..
He then went to his room and sat near the window…be looked at the sky to see the stars…..he was feeling happy now as he could feel Anika was near him…his anika detector started to beep….
But as always whenever he sits near the window to watch the stars he feels that Anika is there…..As anika had told him that look at the stars and you can find me….
He now understood why anika had a fascinating craze towards sky…stars…moon…because it makes her feel that her parents are there with her……

After a few months…..

Shivaay now was in his orphanage…..he saw one girl named Ankita showing her tadi to everyone…..She was just the carbon copy of anika…..
Her looks were also matching that of Anika….He then started to be friendly with that girl…
For many days Ankita and shivaay were close to each other…they became very friendly…..Shivaay could clearly feel that Anika is in her…
So he went to Omru and asked them about that girl…..
Omru said her parents died in one accident…..
Shivaay thought for a while and then he said….

Shivaay – Can I adopt that girl….she is so sweet….when I look at her I remember Anika…. So can I adopt her??

Omru happily agreed for that….
Then Shivaay adopted Ankita and all family members were happy about that….
Shivaay loved Ankita very much and Ankita was happy that she got a father and Shivaay was happy that he got a daughter….
His feeling of emptiness without anika was getting less and ankita being the carbon copy of anika…is always irritating Shivaay with her tadi but still loves him the most…

The end…..

Phew….this took me 2 weeks to complete….I am very tired….but as I know that some might not like this type of ending so I am having Option 2…

This would start from Shivaay in the hospital in need of a heart donor….

Doctor – We got one donor…..we will immediately start the operation….
Pinky,Janvi,dadi,prinku,soumya and anika started to pray from that moment itself….
The oberoi men were also praying……

The operation was successful……

After a few weeks…..

Shivaay with anika in his ward….the doctor comes and gives them one letter…..

Dear Shivaay…

You might be thinking who is your heart donor…right…..and its me ….Tia….
Shivaay…to be frank I didn’t love you neither I wanted to marry you…I was already married to a person named Dushyant…my love……But I had to marry you because my mother forced me. She wanted to take revenge from the oberoi’s….
And so I was decided as your bride…..But I was not happy….
My mom made me do all sorts of wrong things….trying to kill you…trying to kill Anika..

yes all attacks on Anika was done by me….and I was regretting for it….
One day my Mom told to give dadi extra dose of sleeping pills so that she dies….I denied and she blackmailed me by telling about my child..
Yes I was pregnant….With dushyants child….And when I ddidnt agree she killed my child….She killed that innocent unborn inside my womb….she hit me stomach hard and made me fall from stairs…that led to my miscarriage….
And the she told me to kill Anika by making her suffocate ……I got angry and slapped her…
And what she did…She killed my Dushyant….

I couldnt bear this ….I wanted to end my life….
Then I heard about your condition…So I thought that it would be better if I die by helping you.. after all I did so much bad to the Oberoi’s…..
Shivaay….pls forgive me for everything I did….I am very sorry…..

Tia

Shivaay felt angry by reading this and wanted to help Tia…..Anika broke down on thinking about Tia’s favour….
Then Shivika plotted against Mrs Kapoor and sent her to jail…
In oberoi mansion everyone remembers Tia and everyone thanks her for saving Shivaay….
Shivaay and anika try to lead a happy life …

Shivaay proposed her and anika accepted it…..Shivika marriage was conducted and after 2 Years a sweet boy Ansh was born with kanji eyes like Shivaay….

The end…

So I made two endings for this story …A happy one and a sad one…..

**Hope I get a good response from all of you….pls pls don’t go without typing a comment….I worked really hard for this Story…**

With love
Anu

40 Comments
  1. Samaira20

    It was just awesome dear….Both the endings were amazing….😊😊😊

  2. Sairan

    The story you wrote..I must say u have really taken a different route which many of this may not take..It’s very touching..But yeah honestly I liked the second option more as I personally always wanted a happy and smooth ending..Any heart piercing thing saddens me..Bt hatts off to your unique interpretation

  3. I loved both of them

  4. I love it love it die heart fan of your writing

  5. Sairan

    Please continue with the guilt story..Plzzzzzzzzzzz…Just in love with it ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

  6. Your sad story brought tears in my eyes 😭 iam a silent reader and I am commenting for the first time in 2 years it just I was not able to hold back

  7. Both the endings were awesome. I literally cried when I read the sad ending but it touched my heart til know I read many Ffestiniog and Oscar but this one is very heart touching I am a silent reader I never commented as I was very busy but today I want to comment and salute your work andone thanks for showing this type of tiara

  8. Pinkyyy

    Awesome os dear
    The first was so emotional dear
    Loved it

  9. Shivika

    Anu….i am not even able to type the comment…..u just made my eyes pool of tears…….both the ending are just breathe taking……….i can’t stop my tears even now……..i m not able to just tell u how m feeling after reading this…..dear u r fabulous writer……..beyond perfection…….u made it up girl…..took my heart away…keep writing…….loved it beyond limits……😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Can’t stop my tears….they are flowing uncontrollably………love u dear

  10. Awesome

  11. Awesome dear and I cried reading first ending after reading second ending I felt happy you are A good writer and advance Happy birthday to you πŸ’πŸŽ‚

  12. Ya both the stories were awesome

  13. Ruksy

    😒😒😒😒 The first one actually made me cry and it was so sweet. Second one was so amazing. Loved them both. 😊😊😍😍😍😍😒😒

  14. I wanted to go without commenting but i decided to let you know tht saying stuff like “i expect 20 comments i challenge you all” blah blah just gets me irritated and i feel like i dont want to read anymore… however as i was absolutely bored and had nothing to do i read your story… i would have appreciated your work if you hadnt done the comment comment rant of yours! If your work will be good you will get comments… you shouldnt come off as desperate for comments while showing your work. Dont do tht next time!

  15. It’s awesome if. U write any other epi pls share me the link if it

  16. Since most ppl say tht critisism is also accepted i must say u have a lot to improve your story lacked a charm and wasnt upti the mark nor interesting…

  17. Not bad but not good

  18. nice superb i really really love it

  19. Vincy

    Ur sad ending was so emotional it made me cry… N happy ending is grt

  20. Priyali

    Anu… darling this was a very sweet os….
    I personally preferred the 1st option… that is just sweet..

  21. oh no…it was really heart broken….i cried by reading this is.. .
    It was really awesome…

  22. Chinni19

    Loved it really superb one.I liked first one more

  23. It was really a heart wrenching story. In the first part I almost cried reading it. I know that u told that u took inspiration from another stories but the way u penned it down was really beautifull. I Loved both the parts but the first one was just amazing dear πŸ˜‡ πŸ˜‡….

  24. Twinklingjasmine

    The first ending made me cry dear..so much of pain was in it..the second one also was amazing as how Tia was forced for everything and her heart..wish she was really like that in the serial..anyway the chapter was amazing and showing shivika’spain ..write more os when u get time..and Happy Birthday..πŸ˜ŠπŸŽπŸŽ‰πŸŽŠ

  25. Both endings are amazing awesome

  26. Superb story… loved both of them…

  27. :’-(

  28. Dear author your both ending are very good. Keep writing. From a silent reader of your ff

  29. Gangu

    Nice endings yaar and the first one is sanam re know😍😍😍😍

  30. Marvellous…loved both the endings equally…

  31. Neeti

    But I cried at both ending 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 huh! U made me cry! Nd more than that u didn’t even tell me that u already posted it😭😭😭😭😭😭 hwwww! I am very upset. But still I will comment at first nd then will stop talking to u. At the first story, ye apne sahi nhi kiya, mere bechare Annika ko mar hi dala. I was crying badly, I am on bed so I wiped my tears with blanket πŸ˜‚ I have to wake up the full night nd do work but ur os made me so emotional that I can’t concentrate on my work. The second os, I am very very very very very very sad for Tia. Although I don’t like her but her letter was heart touching. Nd you won’t even remember if the story was written by someone else, the first reason, no one wrote anything in thia way, the second reason is the story I was talking abt was on some other show but it was not like this story. I am crying. That faltu os of mine is nothing in front of urs. I love you diπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ (baki ka cmnt uss os pe)- Neeti

  32. Anyakhan32

    Hey Anu…! Thank you for letting me know about this beautiful piece of writing….
    It was really heart wrenching….both the end…!
    Annika gave her heart to Shivaay So as to save him…this was really…what can I say loss of words..
    Actually I really liked Tia in the start but this Cvs spoiled her character..she was really sweet and innocent…and I would love to see this Tia in the future..not dying but to be sincere and good natured…
    This was a whole different plot..but I just loved it..❀
    Do write more and let me know…!

    Love you,
    Anya😁

  33. Razna

    It was a suppr story anu chechiii….and both endings were nice….

  34. Mrunal

    this was superb yaar….
    it made me cry…
    i cried on both ending’s first one for shivika… & second one for tia…
    I’m speechless…

    1. First of all thanks for letting me know about this soulful storyline …sometimes something’s cannot be measured into words as its beyond the knowledge of anyone … The first ending literally made me 😒teared eyes such a soulful storyline… N the second ending literally made me feel that what is sacrifice or pashiyatap …literally now I am spellbound ….😘 love u and yaa I always remember u
      Anu

  35. Luna

    The first ending was really good dear, it’s very emotional and it was painful. The second ending was also good but u shouldn’t have written 2 endings, because it dilutes the overall impact. IMO. The letter part was tear jerking in both the endings, but I wanted to see Shivaye’s POV after reading the letter. U shouldn’t have wrapped the story in a hurry, This story could have been an FF instead of OS. But it’s still good. Keep writing.

  36. Salo

    It was very sad but it was awesome

  37. Nansshivika

    It was beautiful.emotions overflowing throughout is awesome.both anika being donor n tia being donor have their own charm.superb

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