‘Bay Khudi’ – A tale of Love, Hatred, Obsession & Forgiveness! TwiNj [Episode #3]

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Hi guys..!
Sorry for this much late.. I m posting this cox of Ritzi.. she asked me to..! Nd will post devil wala ff soon..!
I hope u guys like the new twist which is coming in both of my ffs.. nd haan my SS is on a hold for sometime.. kisi ko yad bhi hai konsa.. yess ‘A Mystery..’ I will post it as I get time… thank you guys for ur love nd support u all r giving..! Nd I m happy u r liking this ff as I thought a lot before writing this that what would happen? If someone didn’t like it then what? But I m happy that u guys r giving immense love to this ff love u .. nd Anayaali u aksed me to write ff on one pakistani serial. Do tell me which serial then I’ll decide????

Episode 3 ~
Next Day ~
Tanushree nd Leela came in hall.
Tanu – ‘Ye mahi or twinkle abhi tak tayyar nhi hui kya?’ (Twinkle nd Mahi aren’t ready yet?)
L – ‘Wo.. Twinkle nahi jaa rahi..’ (Twinkle is mot going.)
Tanu – ‘Why?’
L – ‘Wo keh rahi hai usy padhai kerni hai.’ (She is saying she has to study.)
Tanu – ‘you should have denied her. How can she live alone?’
L – ‘Ap jaanti to hain padhai ke aagy usy kuch nazar nhi aata.’
Rt came there. Ramu kaka also came there.
Rt – ‘Aesa nhi hosakta..! Me Twinkle ko chod ke qata’i kahin nhi jaaunga.’ (This can’t happen. I won’t go ever leaving Twinkle.)
L – ‘She is not listening.. I tried several times but she said she has to study.’
Rt – ‘Me khud us se bat kerta hun.’
Leela stopped him.

Ramu kaka – ‘Me hun na Twinkle bibi ke pass phir ap kyun fikr kr rahy hain.’
Rt – ‘Ap yahin rahein gay.’
R – ‘Ji mujhe to Leela madam ne subha hi bol diya tha.!’
Tanu – ‘Phir bhi.. kunj ki itni badi khushi hai usy jaana chahye tha..!’ (But..! Its Kunj’s big day..! She should come with us.)
L – ‘Ap usy jaanti to hain.. phir bhi me ek baar bolti hun.’ (You know her..! Let me try once again.)
She said nd went to her room. Twinkle was studying.
L – ‘Twinkle your baba is saying u have to come wid us.’
T – ‘I won’t go..!’
L – ‘Achaa..’ She turned to go but a thought stopped her. She turned around nd warned Twinkle.
L – ‘Twinkle bht dhyaan se rehna ..! Me ne Ramu kaka ko keh diya amder se door lock ker dey gay.. or watchman se bhi bol diya hai wo alert rahega.. lekin tum bht ahteiyaat kerna.. bikul bhi sona nhi.. theek hai..!’
T – ‘Theek hai mumma ap to aesy keh rahi hain jesy me kisi khule medaan me hun..’ (Ok.. mumma but u r saying like I m standing in a middle of nowhere.)
L – ‘Tanha ladki ke ghar wale uske liye deewar or chat hote hain .. lekin tanha wo khule aasman ke nichy hi hoti hai..’ (Alone girl’s family is her roof nd wall..! But alone she is under the sky..) Leela’s talks were confusing Twinkle but Leela was right becuz……………..
T – ‘Mumaa what happened u r scaring me..’
L – ‘ so Why are u not going wid us..’
T – ‘Mumma ap chahti hain ke me aeai jagah pe jaaun jahan mera koi muntazir na ho..!’
L – ‘Acha lekin tum apna bht dhyaan rakhna .. theek hai.. sona bilkul bhi mat.. theek hai..’
T – ‘Theek hai..’
Leela turned to go..! But again turned around.
L – ‘Twinkle sona nhi..’ (Twinkle don’t sleep.) Leela had some fear in her heart.. her fear was right becuz…….
T – ‘Ji mumma..’ Leela left from there..
Next Scene ~
Usha nd Manohar were welcoming the guests.. They all come.. Kunj were watching them from a distance.. He noticed Twinkle was not there..He came to the nd greeted them.
K – ‘Mami Twinkle didn’t came?’
L – ‘No.. She was studying.. her exams started that’s why..’
K – ‘Ap usy akela ghar pe chod ke aagayi..?’
L – ‘Nhi Ramu Kaka hain uske pass..’
K – ‘1, 2 ghante se kya fark padta hai?’
Tanu – ‘Beta, humne to bht kaha tha lekin usy apni padhai ke aagy kuch nazar nhi aata..’ (Beta, we said a lot but she can’t see anything infront of her studies.)
He nodded nd left the venue.
M – ‘What happened to him?’
Rania – ‘He must have felt bad.’

Next Scene ~
Twinkle was studying in her room moving here nd there. Just then Kunj came in her room. She turned around. She was surprised.
T – ‘Ap?’
K – ‘Haan mein.. jaldi tayyar hojao lene aaya hun mein tumhe..’ (Yes.. me..! Get ready..? I came here to pick you) He was all red in anger.
T – ‘Mujhe nhi jaana..! Ap kyun aaye hain?’ (I don’t want to go. Why you came here.)
K – ‘Behes ka waqt nhi hai..Me tumhe sirf 10 knt de raha hun jaldi chalo..!’ (I don’t have time to argue..! I m just giving u 10 mnts.. fast.)
T – ‘Kunj.. mujhe pareshan mat karein.. jaayen yahan se..’ (Kunj, don’t bother ke..! Go from here.)
K – ‘Theek hai .. mat jaao.. me tab tak yahin betha rahunga..!’ (Ok.. don’t go..! I will sit here..) He said settling himself on the couch.
T – ‘Apka dimaag kharaab hogaya hai kya? Apke ghr pe apki hi party hai or ap yahan bethay hain.’
K – ‘Sab tumhara hi qasoor hai..! Agr tum nhi aaogi to mujhe tumhe leny aana padega na..’ (Its all your mistake..! If u don’t come then I have to come here to take you.)
T – ‘Kunj.. please ap jaayen.. buaa ko pata chalega to wo bht naraz hongi..’
K – ‘Or mein…?’ He stood up.
K – ‘Meri khushi? Tumhein uski koi parwah nhi?’ (Nd my happiness? U care for it?)
T – ‘Agr wahan kisi ne notice ker liya ke ap gayab hain to ghazab hojaye ga.’
K – ‘Hojane do.. Mujhe kisi ki parwah nhi..!’
T – ‘To ap nhi jaayen gay?’ (So.. you won’t go..)
K – ‘Nhi jaaunga..’ (Yes, I won’t go.) ’10 mnt de raha hun.. or jab tak tum nhi aati me yahin betha rahunga.’
In the party ~
Manohar was talking with Aditya nd Rt.. Usha came there..
U – ‘Kunj pata nhi kahan hai? Kab se dhoond rahi hun usy.. ap ne dekha hai usy?’
M – ‘Yahin kahin hoga.. tum pareshan kyun horahi ho?’
U – ‘Call him..’
Manohar called him.

There Kunj’s phone rings.
K – ‘Papa ka phone hai..’
T – ‘To uthaayen?’
K – ‘Nhi.. tum saath chal rahi ho ya nhi..?’
T – ‘Ap aesa kyun ker rahy hain?’
K – (shouting) ‘Tum kyun nhi samajhti me aesa kyun ker raha hun..’ he calms hismelf. ‘Twinkle see u r my czn.. tum meri khushi me nhi hogi to kon hoga?’
There Manohar said that Kunj is not picking the call.
Rt – ‘Kahan jaa sakta hai?’
A – ‘Array kahan gaya hoga.. kisi dost ko pick kerne chala gaya hoga..’
Rt – ‘Apne sahi se dekha to hai na?’
U – ‘Me ne har jagah dekh liya.. saare dost bhi uske yahin hain.. ap dobara call karein.’
M – ‘Don’t be tensed .. I m calling him.’
Rt – ‘Me dekh ker aata hun..’
Other side..
K – ‘Me bs tumhe apny saath le ker jaana chahta hun.. tumhare bina meri khushi adhuri hai..’ His phone again started ringing.
T – ‘Please utha lein…’
K – ‘Uthata hun pehly ye batao tum chal rahi ho sath ya nhi..?’
T – ‘Haan chal rahi hun’ She agreed as there was no point arguing him. He was too stubborn. He picked the call.
K – ‘Hello.. ji wo papa ek frnd ko lene aaya tha.. ji me 10 mnt me aaraha hun..’
He cuts the call.
K – ‘Me hall me wait ker raha hun..! 10 mnt de raha hun.. jaldi aajao.. I m waiting..’ She just nodded.
He left the room. Twinkle just stared at him going.

At the Party ~
Tanushree was talking wid Usha.
Tanu – ‘Ye kunj kahan hai? Sab log pooch rahy hain.. wo aaye to khana lage..’
U – ‘Maa ap ko khane ki padi hai yahan meri jaan pe bani hai.. itni der baad phone uthaya hai to ye bola hai ke kisi dost ko lene jaa raha hun..’
Kunj nd Twinkle entered. Usha nd Tanushree looked at them. They both came near them.
U – ‘Kahan gaye thay tum?’ (Where you went?)
K – ‘Twinkle ko lene..!’
U – ‘Twinkle ko lene ..! Isse leny gaye thay tum..’ Usha looked at Twinkle with hatred. Kunj looked at her.
K – ‘Haan maa.. hum saath khare hain ap ko nazar nhi aaraha..’
U – ‘Tum to keh rahy thy kisi dost ko lene jaa rahy ho.’
K – ‘Maa me apko surprise dena chahta tha..’
U – ‘Waqai me bht bada surprise diya hai tum ne mujhe.’ (Really.. you have given me a big surprise.) She said looking at Twinkle. Twinkle’s head was bowed down.
Tanu – ‘Acha hai.. you came.. here, it was getting so late..we were so worried for u.’
U – ‘Der hone ki wajah to dekh rahi hain na ap.’ (U r seeing the reason for it.)
Tanu – ‘Haan dekh rahi hun..’ (yes, I m seeing.)
U – ‘Kunj, ye function zara khatam hone do.. tumse to me baad me baat kerti hun.’ (Let this function end then I’ll talk to you.)
K – ‘Zaroor… mujhe bhi apse bht baatein kerni hain.’ (Yes, I also want to talk to you.)
Kunj take Usha from there. Twinkle also left from there nd sat down in a corner.

Tanushree came to Twinkle nd sat down. She kept looking at her.
T – ‘Dadu, ap mujhe aesy kyun dekh rahi hain?’ (Dadu, why r u looking at me like this.)
Tanu – ‘Dekh rahi hun ke iss waqe (incident) me konsi baat chhupi hai..!’ (I m seeing what is hidden in this incident.)
T – ‘Kya baat chhupi hai Dadu?’ (What is hidden, Dadu?)
Tanu – ‘Yehi ke hum sab ke kehne se to tum nhi aayi.. mgr Kunj ke saath aagayi.. dekhna Usha kitni baatein banaye gi..’ (U didn’t came when we all insisted but came with Kunj.!)
T – ‘Dadi, isme meri kya galti hai? Kunj ghr aagaye thy..! Me ne lakh mana kiya ke me nhi jaaungi per wo addy rahy or kehne lagy ke agr tum nhi jaaogi to me bhi nhi jaaunga me yahin betha rahunga. Is liye mujhe majbooran aana pada..’ (Dadi, what’s my fault in it..! Kunj came home..! I denied several times but he didn’t understood nd said that if I won’t go then he also won’t go. That’s why I came. I was helpless.) Leela came there.
Tanu – ‘Lekin usne kyun kya aesa?’ (But why he did so?)
T – ‘I don’t know.’
L – ‘Mujhe sab pata hai.’ (I know)
Tanu – ‘Kya pata hai tumhe?’ (What u know?)
L – ‘Ye munasib jagah nhi hai ye sb baatein kerny ki baad me batati hun … chalein khana khaa lein. Chalo twinkle.’ (Its not the right place to discuss thess matters. I’ll tell u afterwards. Let’s have the dinner. Come Twinkle.)
They left to have dinner.
Next Scene ~
Twinkle was standing at a corner. Kunj came there and stood beside her.
K – ‘Phir se sab se alag.’ (Again alone.)
T – ‘Mujhe hujoom me wahshat hoti hai.’ (I m scared in crowd.) She replied without looking at him.
K – ‘Or me tumhe tanha rehne nhi dunga.’ (Nd I won’t let you live alone.) She finally looked at him.
T – ‘Aj jo apne mere saath kiya hai na..! Uske liye me apko kabhi maaf nhi karungi.’ (I won’t forgive you for what you did today wid me.)
K – ‘Mat kerna.’ (Don’t forgive.) He instantly replied.
K – ‘Wesy agr aj tum mere saath aati nhi na to me yahan sab se akela hota.’ (By the way if u didn’t had came today with me, I would have been the most alone.)
T – ‘Me mumma ke pass jaa rahi hun.’ She said being irriated with his talks.
K – ‘Acha listen..’ She stopped.
K – ‘Tum kuch khaa nhi rahi? Me tumhare liye nikalta hun.’ (You aren’t eating anything? Let me give you.) He took the plate when they both heard Usha’s voice.
U – ‘Kunj?’ They both turned to look at her.
K – ‘Dekhein na ye kuch khaa hi nhi rahi.’ (See, she isn’t eating anything.)
Usha came towards them and spoke.
U – ‘Isko khana khilana tumhari duty hai?’ (Is it your duty to feed her?)
K – ‘Guest hai hamari.’ (She is our guest.)
U – ‘Jaao yahan se.’ (Go from here) Kunj looked at her. She looked back at him. Usha signalled him to go. He left from there. Usha came towards Twinkle.
U – ‘Kunj se door rahu.’ (Stay away from Kunj.)
T – ‘Ji?’
U – ‘Aisy koi mushkil alfaaz istemaal nhi kiye me ne. Asaan lafzon me ye keh rahi hun tumhe Kunj se door raho.’ (I haven’t used any hard words. I m saying in very easy words that stay away from Kunj.) Twinkle bowed her head and Usha left from there looking at Twinkle with much hatred. Rt came there. Twinkle smiled.
Rt – ‘What was she saying?’
T – ‘Kuch nhi wo khane ka pooch rahi thi.’ (Nothing, she was just asking about dinner.)
Rt – ‘Mujhe to nhi lag raha tha.., naraz lag rahi thi mujhe.’
T – ‘Nhi nhi baba.. apko galat fehmi hui hai .. khane ka pooch rahi thi.. Apne khana khaa liya?’ (No no Baba… U r misunderstanding her. She was asking about dinner. Did u had dinner?)
Rt – ‘Nhi.. abhi nhi khaaya me ne .. tumhare saath hi khaaun ga tumhe bulane aaya tha. Chalo..’ (No..! I haven’t.. I’ll eat with you.. I came here to call you.. Come.) Twinkle smiled and turned to go. Rt stopped her.
Rt – ‘Twinkle?’ He caressed her hairs.
Rt – ‘Duniya se alag thalag.. tanha mat raha karo mere bete..’ (Don’t live alone nd apart from this world.)
T – ‘Samajh hi nhi aata Baba..! Logon ke saath rehti hun to ghabrahat hoti hai or tanha rehti hun to ye duniya rehne nhi deti..’ (I don’t understand Baba.! When I live with people, I got suffocate and when I live alone then this world doesn’t let me.)
Rt cupped her face.
Rt – ‘To tum sirf apne baba ke pass raha karo..Iss duniya ke aesi ki tesi..’ Twinkle smiled.
Rt – ‘Now come.’ They both left.
Later at Night ~
After the party at Sarna Mansion Usha nd Kunj were standing in the hall.
U – ‘Aj ki iss harkat ki wajah kya thi?’ (What was the reason behind this act of yours?)
K – ‘Konsi harkat?’ (Which act?)
U – ‘Twinkle ko lene kyun gaye thy tum?’ (Why you went to take Twinkle?)
K – ‘Kyunki wo party me nhi aayi thi.’ (Because she didn’t came in the party.)
U – ‘Acha wo party me nhi aayi thi to tum bagheir bataye pohanch gaye usy leny.’
K – ‘Maa! Agr me apse poochta to kya ap jaany deti?’ (Maa, If I had askes from you so then you would have allowed me?)
U – ‘Matlab pata tha tumhe.. pata tha tumhe ke agr mujhse poocho gy to me hargiz jaany nhi dungi..’ (Means you knew.. you knew that if you would have asked from me I would have not allowed you.) She shouted.
K – ‘Maa baat kya hai.. ap kyun us se har waqt itna chiri rehti hain?’ He said increasing his voice.
U – ‘Bss.. wo larki ek aankh mujhe nhi bhaati..’ (Stop..! I don’t like her.)
K – ‘Maa shayad ap bhool rahi hain ke wo apke bhai ki beti hai.’ (Maa younare forgetting that she is the daughter of your brother.)
U – ‘Kunj khamosh raho tum..’ Manohar came there.
U – ‘Is maamle me mujhse behes mat kiya karo.’ (Don’t argue with me in this matter.)
M – ‘Kya hua Usha itne gusse me kyun ho?’ (What happened Usha? Why are u do angry?)
U – ‘Ek baat meri kaan khol ker sun lo Kunj.. wo ladki agr mujhe nhi pasand to nhi pasand.Aj ke baad mujhe nazar na aaye ke tum uss ladki me dilchaspi lay rahy ho.. samjhe?’ She left from there.
M – ‘Kya hua hai isy?’
K – ‘Kuch nhi papa.. chodein theek hojayen gi..’
M – ‘Kunj.. kahin such me aesi koi bat to nhi hai jo tumhari maa keh rahi hai? Warna itni achi party chod ker yun koi jaata nhi hai..’ He smiled. Kunj also smiled. Kunj nodded his head in no.
K – ‘Ap fikr na karein… saare maamlat sahi karane me ap hi ki help lunga..
M – ‘Acha chalo kaafi raat hogayi hai..! Jaa ker sojao.’
K – ‘Ji papa.. pata nhi meri subah kab hogi?’ Manohar patted his shoulder.
M – ‘Beta.. tumhari subah subah hogi… jaao shabash.’ They both smiled and Kunj left to his room.

Next Morning ~
Tanushree, Leela and Rania were sitting together.
R – ‘Kunj ne acha nhi kiya.. usy is tarah se Twinkle ko ghr se ley jana nhi chahiye tha..’
Tanu – ‘Aesa bura bhi nhi kiya.. acha hua twinkle bhi shareek hogayi hai.’
L – ‘Badi Maa lekin apne Usha di ko dekha tha.. kitni naraaz nazar aarahi thi..’ (But you saw Usha.. how much angry she was.)
R – ‘Usy to hamari Twinkle se chir hai.. haqeeqat jaanti hai na uski..’
Tanu – ‘Arrayyy khamosh rahi Rania.. Twinkle ghar pe hi hai agr usne sunn liya to bht bura hogaa..’
L – ‘Mujhe to bht darr lag raha hai.. bs sab acha hi ho… Kunj ki aankhon me mein Twinkle ke liye pasandeedgi dekhti hun.. or ye baat Usha di ko bilkul pasand nhi aayegi..’
Tanu – ‘Ye to bht achi baat hai..ghr ka ladka hai.’
L – ‘Nhi Badi Maa.. kya achi bat hai.. usha di kabhi aesa hone degi…’
Tanu – ‘Uski tum fikr mat karo.. me samjha dungi usy..’
R – ‘Kabhi bhi nhi maanegi..’
L – ‘Ap kisi se baat na karein.. me Twinkle se baat karungi is baare mein..’
Tanu – ‘To kya wo bhi kunj ki tarah..’
L – ‘Nhi nhi.. abhi nhi.. per Badi maa.. mohabbat bht jaldi apni jagah le leti hai .. or Kunj ki mohabbat ke aagy ek na ek din Twinkle jhuk hi jaayegi. Ap sochein zara uski ek haan poore khaandaan me toofan phela sakti hai.. phir ap logon ne jo mere liye qurbaaniyan di wo bhi zaaya hojayengi..’ Leela got up nd left from there.
Twinkle’s Room ~
T – ‘Ap kehna kya chah rahi hain saaf saaf poochiye..’ (What r u trying to say ask me.)
L – ‘Dekho Twinkle.. jis gali me na jaana ho..! Us gali me qadam rakhna himaqat hai…’ (See, Twinkle.. To step in the street where we don’t have to go is foolishness.)
T – ‘Kis gali ki baat ker rahi hain ap?’ (Which street u r talking about?) She was confused.
L – ‘Us gali ki jis gali me sirf muhskilein hain or wahan se bahir nikalne ka koi raasta nhi hai..’
(The street where there r problems.. nd there isn’t any way out.)
T – ‘Ye kesi uljhi uljhi baatein kar rahi hain kya hogaya hai?’ Leela sat down on the bed.
L – ‘Kunj tumhe acha lagta hai?’ (You like Kunj?)
T – ‘Bilkul bhi nhi..ye sab apse kon keh raha hai??’ (Not at all? Who is saying all this to you?)
L – ‘Nhi kisi ne kaha nhi..bss., tum uski har baat itni asaani se kesy maan jaati ho?’ (No.. no one … How do you agree to his talks so easily??)
T – ‘Wo me nhi maanti .. wohi mere peechy pary rehty hain.’
L – ‘Kal ko wo peechy par gaya ke usy tumhe zindagi ki saathi banana hai..’
T – ‘Zindagi ka saathi.. ye ap kesi baatein ker rahi hain.. meri to abhi padhai bhi complete nhi hui hai…’
L – ‘Acha.. lekin Kunj to aesa chahta hai…’ (But Kunj wants this.)
T – ‘Dimaag kharab hogaya hai unkaa.. me aesa soch bhi nhi skti..’
L – ‘Matlab you don’t like him.’
T – ‘Not at all.’
Leela got up and caressed her hairs.
L – ‘Me bhi aesa hi chahti hun.. or agr wo tumse koi aesy baat kare to tum khud inkaar ker dena.. taake usha di tak ye bat na pohanchy.’
T – ‘Bua don’t like me at all.’
L – ‘Nhi kerti to na karein.’
T – ‘pata nhi log mujhe pasand kyun nhi kerty.’
L – ‘Tum itni khoobsurat ho.. jalte hain sab tumse..’ they both smiled. She kissed her forehead and left the room.
Leela went downstairs when Usha came.. she greeted her.
U – ‘Where is Maa.’
L – ‘She is in her room.’ Usha left from there. Leela went upstairs behind Usha.
Screen freezes…

Precap: Twinj were in car. T: ‘Ap naraaz hein?’
K – ‘Tumhe konsa fark padta hai meri narazgi ka..’
T – ‘Fark padta hai tabhi to pooch rahi hun.’

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Sorryyyyy… for this much late.. I m really sorry..! This episode is the compensation for that.. itni long jo hai… sorry…
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Bye
Lots of Love

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23 Comments
  1. Dialogues r fantastic???????i love with the precap..
    Post soon

  2. Sohi

    Mashallah episode bada hi Acha tha

    Episode was marvelous especially dialogues were just wow
    Ur urdu is very nice

    I think kunj loves twinkle very much
    Waiting for more twinj scenes

    Precap is very interesting

    Do continue and post soon
    Bye

  3. Twinj

    Bhootni pheli baat yeh ki may bhooli nai tera ss a mystery n I have the proof aur woh yeh hae ki maine ek baar tujhe kaha tha cmt may plzzz post mystery fs soon…chod tujhe yeh yoh yaad he nai hoga but aab pir bol rahi hu…plzzz jaldi post karde….

    Regarding the epi it was just superb…wow kunj kitna ziddi hae..akir twinkle ko manahe liya….tu saach may itna suspense create karti hae ki baat he maat kar…kya baat hae so twinj ko nai pata…kya baat hae jiski wajah se usha twinkle se nafrat karti hae…mujhe toh lagta hae twinkle leela ki asli beti nai hae…means they r not cousin aur sahi kaha twinkle ko kunj ke pyaar may jukhna he parea….oh ho promo seems interesring….fikar hae…matlab pyaar bhi hae…can’t wait…post soon….post soon….plzzzzzzz bhootni..dekh may plzzzz bol rahi hu….aab toh jaldi post karde…..

  4. Hi purvi, I am a silent reader…u r ff mindblowing me tumhare sarre ff & os padhti hu ur all ff is amazing…?????? tum apne dusre ff bhi post karo na plz plz plz I am waiting yrr plz post soon…
    OK bbye
    Luv u
    ???????

  5. Presha

    hey butter cup….
    awesome…
    loved it…
    too good…
    felt bad for twinkle…
    plz post ur ff u made me live again…olz nd devil one too…
    im waiting…
    love u…,
    post soon

  6. Ayesha51

    aww purvi
    my cup cake
    my cutie pie
    my sweetheart
    my sweetie pie
    my hot chocolate
    my muffin
    my darling
    my sweetheart
    my vanilla
    my strawberry
    my jaaaan
    kya episode tha
    it was
    just
    awesome
    fabulous
    fantastic
    superb
    outstanding
    marvellous
    too good
    splendid
    incredible
    I’m dumbstruck
    and speechless
    oh I loved it
    loved twinj scenes
    they were so cute
    and hate this
    blo*dy hell usha
    plz plz post soon
    ab jaida wait mat
    karana
    and please reveal
    soon what’s the reason
    behind everyone’s hatred
    towards twinkle
    please post soonest
    can’t wait to read the next
    and I’m hell desperate for it
    please jaldi karo
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    and please post ur devil
    wala ff soonest
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    love you loads
    muahhh
    ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  7. its beautifully written dr i loved it.u portrayed d feelings of an introvert very well.And its true opposite attracts.kunj is very outgoing and tw is reserved. And kunj loves tw very much and made sure she is not isolated. he respect her being reserved. I’m also reserved. but nobody understand d feelings of introvert.tysm for such an amazing story

    don’t be so late for next epi

  8. Ritzi

    Purvi….tht was so so soooooo shweet of u yaar….I mean…the moment I read tht u hv dedicated the epi to me…I was so so sooooooooooooo happy…I literally blushed. Regarding the epi! Tht was super duper cool…I mean kunj’s ziddiness….twinkle li shyness…I loved it! Nd ye twinkle ke past ka kya chakkar hai! Its so exciting! I loved it! Nd yr news tht u r going to post devil wala ff soon…I m like….this girl is the best!

  9. Hey ????? Fabulous episode. Sorry I didn’t comment on any episode kyunkii uss waqt mere tests chal rahe the..??…..
    Kya likhte ho ??? Gazab ???just mind blowing aur woh bhaari bharkam Urdu ke sabdh ?fab again….
    Post soon ???

  10. Paavu

    Hi meri lovely oreo tu na itni der baad uhh I missed u devil wala jaldi jaldi plsshh plsshh mila bhi de unko han pata hai m doung mad talks jaldi mein hun bye… Love u dis was dhamaka itni bhari bharkam hindi marjawan hayee

  11. puru………♥
    hi yaar baby here…….sriiee login nahi ho rha…….
    yrrr how do ryt soooo gud……♥
    oh god bas kuch phrases hain jo nahi samaj aaye…….
    but luvd it…..♥
    too adorable..too cute too lovely…..♥
    love u soooooo mch dear marvelleous……..♥
    kunj is soo cute……and twinkle too……♥
    loved it………..♥
    post soon dear…..

  12. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous cute…bt aakhir usha esa behave kyu krti h twinkle k saath

  13. SidMin23

    Love the episode and wait for next part twinj conversations seem to be cute

  14. Lovey_kz

    just love it most important kunj ka character it is awsm plz post asap
    love you

  15. Hey purvi epi was mindblowing…. U write it amazingly…. I luvd it…. U show suspence greatly…. Yr luv u fpr such a nice ff…. I never let my hopes down…. I always praise u infront of my api and now after reading this ff she said i was right u r great writer…. Ur ff maintain TU writers respect luv u yr for that…. I luv u luv u luv soooooooo mucccchhhhh for that …. And yeah about that serial its name is “Dhaani” Geo drama pa lgta tha… Plzzzzzzz wo meri api ka fvrt serial ha plzzzz write if u can luv u…. Today i am feeling so proud on TU writers just bcz of u….

  16. Purvi i never read any ff but i am reading 2 ff right now one is fatima story and 2nd is ur this ff… I was silent reader of ur this ff only…
    Sorry i dont read ur other but will try to read if get time dont mind plz plz plz….
    U write so well like real writers really i am speechless…
    U r fab writer…
    This serial was my favrout serial and now thats why i am reading this ff…
    Or yeh ff parhny ka credit meri younger sis anuu ko jata ha jo yahan anaya ali ha jis na mjy ye parhny ko bola….
    Or yr tm Urdu bht hi achi likhti ho sachi jb ka mjy lgta ha ek indian ho ka Urdu likhna bht difficult ha…..
    Tm ek achi writer ban skti ho….
    U should try in writing its my advice to u next is up to u…..
    Anuu bol rhi ha devil wala ff jldi post krna….
    Plz plZ plz dhaani pa b ff likh do ….
    Luv u and sorry i will not comment again….
    Add my one comment in ur all epi….
    Bye…. Lots of luv for u???….
    Take care….

  17. Purvi i never read any ff but i am reading 2 ff right now one is fatima story and 2nd is ur this ff… I was silent reader of ur this ff only…
    Sorry i dont read ur other but will try to read if get time dont mind plz plz plz….
    U write so well like real writers really i am speechless…
    U r fab writer…
    This serial was my favrout serial and now thats why i am reading this ff…
    Or yeh ff parhny ka credit meri younger sis anuu ko jata ha jo yahan anaya ali ha jis na mjy ye parhny ko bola….
    Or yr tm Urdu bht hi achi likhti ho sachi jb ka mjy lgta ha ek indian ho ka Urdu likhna bht difficult ha…..
    Tm ek achi writer ban skti ho….
    U should try in writing its my advice to u next is up to u…..
    Anuu bol rhi ha devil wala ff jldi post krna….
    Plz plZ plz dhaani pa b ff likh do ….
    Luv u and sorry i will not comment again….
    Plz plz plz if u feel necessery then do reply to my comment….
    Plz plz plz it will be great pleasure for me if u reply to my comment….
    Add my one comment in ur all epi….
    Bye…. Lots of luv for u???….
    Take care….

    1. Purvi128

      Hey dear…! Thanks a ton dear for this sweet comment..! I m really happy by the response of evryone.! Thank u so much..! Ur comment made me so happy..! ??
      Nd I m sorry I won’t be abke to write on dhaani as I haven’t watched that nd I can’t watch that cuz of my busy schedule..! But I’ll try.. nd I have so many ffs.. that’s why sorry..!
      Love u dear..??

  18. Its ok purvi i”ll not mind i can understand….
    Yah post devil wala ff….
    Anuu is saying ka us ki wajah sa m ya ff parh rhi ho so agr m us ki tarf sa tmy bolo gi toh may be tm devil wala ff jldi post kr do….
    Plz plz plz plz yr us ka liye post kr dena ku ka m nhi parhti sorry but dont read ur other ff….

  19. Simiyy

    Hey Purvi
    If thats you on the DP you look very pretty
    I just love Kunj character
    I have seen the serial so i know the story
    Can’t wait to read more
    Please post your devil FF soon too please
    sorry for the late comment
    Loads of Love

  20. Ramya

    Purvi
    It’s sooo sooo cute
    Amazing
    Per tumhari Hindi thodi mushkil hai
    Per kamal ka dialogue hote hai
    Just amazing
    Aur ha vo kunj twinkle ko like aana wala scene cute hai
    Precap is interesting yaar
    Loved it
    Love you keep smiling

  21. nice lovly epi

  22. Afra061995

    Superb episodee purvii

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