‘Bay Khudi’ – A tale of Love, Hatred, Obsession & Forgiveness! TwiNj [Episode #2]

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Hi guyss…! How r u alll?.
Guyss I m sorry .. I wasn’t available on TU since Friday… as my netpack got over…. still its working slow.. I may not be able to post anything but I’ll try… nd I may not comment.. plss guyss I m sorry for that.. mera additional comment daal dena hurt mat hona… sorry…

Let’s get back to the epi..

Episode 2 ~

The episode starts with Leela saying to Rt.
L – ‘Kyun jaane diya aapne? Pata hai na Usha ji kitna naraaz hongi.’ (Why you gave permission to go? Usha ji would be angry.)
Tanushree – ‘To hone do! Uski to aadat hai!’ (Let it be! Its her habit)
L – ‘Maasi..! Apko to pata hai na Usha ji mujhse kitni nafrat kerti hain, or Twinkle se bhi.’ (You know how much Usha ji hates me and Twinkle!)
Rt – ‘Haan lekin Leela kam se kam tum to bachon ke darmiyaan ye nafrat na phelao na!’ (Yes, but Leela atleats you shouldn’t make hatred between children)
She sat their upset.

Twinj nd Mahi reached an ice cream parlour. Mahi nd Kunj were talking and Twinkle was sitting with her head bowed down. She was sad. Just then the waiter brought the ice creams. Kunj gave chocolate ice cream to Mahi nd gave Twinkle strawberry ice cream nd he himself took strawberry.
M – ‘Kunj bhai, par ye chocolate flavour to apko bhi pasand hai to phir strawberry?’ (Kunj bhai but chocolate flavour is ur fav then why strawberry)
K – ‘Haan pasand tha mujhe!’ (Yes, i liked it)
M – ‘Mujhe laga ke apko abhi bhi wohi pasand hai.’
They both smiled. Kunj was about to take the spoon when he looked at Twinkle. He kept the spoon back and saw her lost in thoughts.
M – ‘Kunj bhai me ek min aayi.. mere frnds yaahan aye huay hain!’ (I m coming in a minute. My frnds r here)
She went from there nd settled with her frnds. Twinj were alone. He looked at Twinkle. He smiled.
K – ‘Pata hai hamari zindagi bhi iss ice cream ki tarah hoti hai! Thandi or mazedaar.’ She looked at him. (Our life is like an ice cream. Cool nd enjoyable)
K – ‘Lekin dekho, ahista ahista khatam horahi hai. Or agr life ko sahi se use nhi karogi na to life bekaar hojaye gi or khatam.’ (But see, slowly slowly its ending. And if you don’t use life then life would be useless and then end.) He kept his hand on his chin. She was looking at him nd he was looking at her.
K – ‘Meri baat samajh aarahi hai?’ (Are you understanding what I m saying?)
T – ‘Nhi!’ She said taking a deep breathe.
K – ‘Kamaal ki baat hai, itni intelligent ladki ho, class mei har waqt top kerti ho lekin itni simple si baat samajh nhi aarahi!’ (Strange! You are such an intelligent girl. You top in class evrytime nd u r not understanding such a simple thing)
T – ‘Mujhe nhi pata ap kya keh rahe hain!’ (I dont knw what r u saying)
K – ‘Twinkle me bass ye kehna chahta hun ke tum har waqt is tarah kitaabon me mat ghussi raha karo! Apni life enjoy karo! Mahi ko dekho! Har waqt khush rehti hai or ek tum.’ (Twinkle, I just want to say that please don’t be busy in books everytime! Enjoy your life! See Mahi! She is hapy everytime nd there is you) She looked at him with some anger in her eyes. She hates being compared to Mahi!
T – ‘Zindagi jo mujhe dey rahi hai, me usse wohi lauta rahi hun! Or Mahi se mera mawazna mat kiya karein! Uske pass jo hai wo mere pass nhi hai!’ (I m returning life what it is giving me! And don’t compare me with Mahi! I don’t have what she has!)
K – ‘Kya hai uske pass?’ (What she has?)
T – ‘Mumma ka pyaar, unki tawajja, unka aitmaad!’ (Mumma’s love, attention and trust)
K – ‘Toh tumhe lagta hai ke mami tumse mohabbat nhi kerti!’ (And you think that Mami doesn’t loves you.)
T – ‘Unka rawayya mujhe sab kuch bata deta hai!’ (Her behaviour tells me everything!)
K – ‘Twinkle..! Ye tumhe lagta hai aesy! Ek maa kabhi apni do betiyon ke beech me farak nhi rakhegi!’ (Twinkle! This is just ur thinking! A mother can nevr make a difference between her two daughters.)
T – ‘Apne dekha hai per me ne bar’ta hai!’ (You have seen but I have bear it.) She spoke with heavy voice. Kunj looked at her. They shared a painful but short eye lock. Music plays. Her eyes became glassy.
K – ‘Twinkle tum bht sensitive ho is liye tumhe ye baatein feel hoti hain aesa kuch bhi nhi hai.’ (Twinkle, you are very sensitive that’s why you r feeling these things. Its nothing like that.) She nodded in no.
T – ‘Jab se hosh aaya hai tab se ye baat mujhe maloom hai ke mumma ke liye me koi maaine nhi rakhti.’ (I know this thing from when I came in senses that there is no worth of me for mumma.) She continued, ‘Or Mahi, Mahi me jo zindagi apko dikh rahi hai na wo mumma ki mohabbat paane ki wajah se hai!’ (And Mahi. The life you are seeing in Mahi is becuz of getting Mumma’s love!) She bowed her head and cleared her eyes. It pricked him badly. Seeing his love in pain, he was hurt. There was silence for some mnts. Mahi saw them and got confused as they were not eating the ice cream. He looked at Twinkle with pain.
K – ‘Theek keh rahi ho tum, mohabbat insaan ko bht pur aitmaad bana deti hai!’ (You r right. Love makes a person believe in himself)
K – ‘Twinkle.. me.. me tumse…!’ He was finding words.. ‘Me tumse..!’ Just then Mahi came and interrupted him.
M – ‘Umm.. sorry .. wo frnds ne baaton me laga liya tha.’ She settled herself on the chair.
M – ‘u both didn’t finished the ice cream yet.’
He smiled – ‘Nhi bss..’
Kunj looked at Twinkle with pain. Mahi saw him looking at her nd sensed something is wrong.
M – ‘Twinkle! Kuch hua kya?’ She kept her hand on her shoulder.
K – ‘Nhi kuch nhi… kuch nhi hua’ he quickly replied.. mahi felt something strange. They started eating ice cream.

At Night ~
Kunj came back his home. He entered the home and Usha came.
U – ‘Kunj from where r u coming?’
K – ‘Nani ke ghar se bataya to tha..!’ (From Nani’s home! I told you.)
U – ‘Uske baad?’ (After that?)
K – ‘Uske baad mein Mahi or Twinkle ke saath ice cream khaane gaya tha!’ (After that I went to have ice cream with Mahi nd Twinkle)
U – ‘Why Twinkle?’
K – ‘Ye kesa sawaal hai?’ (Which type of question is this?)
U – ‘Duniya me aesy bht se sawaal hain jinke jawaab naa hi diye jaayen to behtar hai!’ (There are many questions in this world which are better not to answer) ‘Aj ke baad tum uss ladki se kabhi nhi miloge!’ (You’ll not meet her after today!) She warned him.
K – ‘Kyun?’
U – ‘Ye zaroori nhi hai ke tumhare har kyun ka jawaab mere pass ho!’ (Its not necessary to have answer of your every why.) ‘Isse mera hukum samajhna!’ (Take it as my order) ‘Issi me hum sab ki bhalai hai. Understand?’
She said and left from there. Kunj let out a sigh. He stood there and reminisces Twinkle’s words which she said today. ‘Jab se hosh aaya hai tab se mujhe ye baat maloom hai!’ ‘Mahi me jo apko zindagi dikhti hai, wo mumma ki mohabbat paane ki wajah se hai!’ Her words keep on echoing in his ears. He became sad.

Next scene ~
Twinkle was sitting on the study table studying for her exams. Her Nani, Rania came there with a glass of milk in her hand.
R – ‘Beta! 12 baj gaye hain raat ke .. bss band karo padhai! Utho or sone ki tayyari karo!’ (Beta! Its 12 o clock .. stop studying.. get up nd sleep.)
T – ‘Nano! Mujhe bht padhna hai!’ (Nano, I have to study a lot!)
R – ‘Toh subha padh lena na! Exams ke lye chuttiyan to mili hain!’ (So, you can study in the morning! U have got vacations for the preparations!)
T – ‘Nano! Agar me nhi padhungi to fail hojaun gi!’ (Nano! I would fail if I would not study!)
Rania kept the glass on the table and caressed her cheek.
R – ‘Meri beti kabhi fail ho hi nhi sakti! Chahe tayyari kare chaahe na kare!’ (My daughter cant fail! Whether she study or not!) Twinkle looked down and spoke with much pain.
T – ‘Per zindagi ke exam me to mein fail horahi hun!’ (But, I m failing in life’s exam.)
R – ‘Which exam?’
T – (teary eyed) ‘Sabse badh ker to Maa ki mohabbat na paane par meri ander ki pyaas badhti jaa rahi hai!’ Pata nhi mumma mere saath aesa kyun kerti hain?’ (Firstly, the thirst of not getting mother’s love is rising in me! I don’t know why mumma do this wid me?)
R – ‘Nhi Twinkle tum galat soch rahi ho. Aesa kuch bhi nhi hai’ (No, Twinkle u r thinking wrong.. its nothing like that!)
T – ‘Bachpan ki mehroomiyon ne mujhe waqt se pehly bht hassas ker diya hai! Me logo ke rawayyo ko achi tarah se samajh sakti hun!’ (The lacking in childhood has made me more sensitive before time! I can understand the behaviour of people.) She spoke with heavy voice and tears in her eyes.
R – ‘Dekho beta! Zaroorat se zyada hassas hona bhi insaan ki khoobhi nhi khaami ban jaata hai! Apne andar se is hassasiyat ko bahir nikalo. Normal ladkiyon ki tarah raha karo! Mahi ko dekho!’ (See beta! Sensitiveness can become a person’s bad habit. Take out this sensitiveness from you! Be like normal girls. See Mahi!)

She suddenly looked up at her Nano who compared her with Mahi. She hates it. She spoke with a stern voice.
T – ‘Ye har koi mujhe Mahi ki misaal kyun deta hai? Me Mahi ki tarah nhi hun!’ (Why everyone gives me the example of Mahi! I m not like her.) She became calm and a tear escaped from her eye. She was controlling her emotions. She continued, ‘Mahi ka daaman to Maa ki mohabbat se bhara hai ..! Or mera daaman….’ Her voice shakes. ‘Mera daaman to khaali hai!’ (Mahi’s lap is filled with mother’s love while mine is empty.)
She started sobbing because now she wasn’t able to hide her emotions.
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Me kitne tukdon me tooti
Koi jaane na
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Rania left the room. Twinkle started crying vigorously as now she was alone nd she feels peace crying in alone.
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Me kitna raaton mei rooti
Koi jaane na
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She reminisces her childhood days when she was 9 and Mahi was 8. Leela kissed Mahi’s forehead and dropped her to the door while she ignored Twinkle.
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Mera haal jaanta hai Khuda
Kya bataaun tujhe
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She reminisces when Rt, Leela nd TwiHi went for shopping for Kunj’s birthday nd Leela didn’t shop for Twinkle nd bought the dresses for Mahi only. Nd when Rt came and bought a dress for Twinkle, a fairy gown.
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Meri daastan adhuri rahi
Kya sunaon tujhe
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She was crying badly how Leela ignored her nd never noticed her presence. She always felt ‘left out’. Even the fairy gown which Rt bought for her, Leela gave it to Mahi as she was continuously asking for it. That was when Twinkle asked from Rt that isn’t she mumma’s daughter. Rt would always console her and tried his level best not to made her feel ‘left out’ but mother’s love is mother’s love.

Next Morning ~
Twinkle was shown sleeping in her room. Leela entered the room and sat on the beside her. She took her hand to her hairs but resist. She finally started caressing her hairs. She was crying badly.
L – ‘I m sorry Twinkle! Mujhse bht badi galti hogayi! Maa bilkul theek kehti hain, me ne apni mehroomiyon ka badla tumse liya! Tum to bikul masoom ho! Isme tumhari kya galti?’ She kissed her forehead. Twinkle’s sleep got disturbed.
She opened her eyes and saw her mother sitting beside her. She quickly sat straight. She was surprised.
T – ‘Mumma ap?’
L – ‘Haan me tumhe uthane aayi thi naashte ke liye! Chalo. Nashta nhi karna?’ (Yes, i came here to wake u up for breakfast. Lets go. Don’t u want to have bf.) Twinkle was surprised cum happy cum sad cum shocked.. so many emotions at the same time.
T – ‘Ap mujhe uthane aayi hai?’ (U came here to wake me?) She spoke with tears in her eyes nd surprised cum happy face.
L – ‘Haan nhi aasakti kyya?’
T – ‘Aaskati hain! Lekin kabhi aayi to nhi uthane!’ (You can come! But u never came!) She spoke as a tear dropped from her eye. Leela felt like someone stabbed her repeated times. She realized how much her daughter longed for her love. She cursed herself for ignoring her since her birth till now when she is 20. She hated herself for not loving Twinkle 20 years. She was feeling disgusting for herself. Leela holds her hand.
L – ‘Me jaanti hun tumhe mujh se bht saari shikayatein hain lekin tum galat sochti ho. Sirf Mahi ho meri beti nhi..! Tum dono ko me ne janam diya hai!’ Tears were gushing out from her eyes.
T – ‘Lekin mujhe to nhi lagta ki me apki beti hun.’ (But I don’t think that I m your daughter.) ‘Bachpan se me ne apki berukhi mehsoos ki.’
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Mera haal jaanta hai khuda
Kya bataun tujhe
Meri daastan adhuri rahi
Kya sunao tujhe
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T – ‘Pata nahi apko ehsaas hua ke nhi ke har bachha apni maa ke pyaar ke maamle mein bht hassas hota hai! Kyunke wo jab iss duniya me aata hai na toh sabse pehli mohabbat Maa ki hoti hai! Lekin mujhe kabhi apki mohabbat ,ehsoos hi nhi hui.’ (Mumma I don’t know that you understand this or not but every child is sensitive in case of their mother’s love because when a baby comes in this world so the first love is of a mother. But I never felt ur love.) Leela took her in her embrace letting the tears fell from both of thier eyes.
L – ‘Mujhse galti hogayi! Me apni saari galtiyon ka azaala karun gi!’ (I will repent for my mistakes!) She said caressing her hairs.
T – ‘Wo kese?’
L – ‘Wo tum khud hi dekh lena ab jaldi chalo mujhe bht bhook lag rahi hai, naashta nhi kya me ne.’ (You’ll see it yourself. Now let’s go fast I m hungry, I didn’t have brekafast.) Twinkle had a smile on her face.
T – ‘Mumma ap Ramu kaka ko kahein foran naashta lagayen me bs abhi aati hun.’ (Mumma tell Ramu kaka to arrange the breakfast table. I m just coming.) Saying this she went to washroom to freshen up.
Next Scene ~
Leela was arranging the break fast table. Twinkle came there and was amazed to see the all her favourite things. She sat down. Leela sat beside her.
L – ‘See, I have made all your fav things.’
T – ‘Thanks a lot mumma.’ Leela started feeding her from her hands. Just then Mahi came and saw them. She made faces and sat on the chair.
M – ‘Wah Twinkle aj toh tumhe apna bachpan bht yad aaraha hai!’ She said with a rude voice. (Wow, Twinkle u r remembering hr childhood.)
L – ‘Haan Mahi jiss tarah tumhe apna bachpan hamesha yaad raha isi tarah aj Twinkle ko bhi apna bachpan yad aaraha hai!’ (Yes Mahi. You always remember ur childhood like that today Twinkle is also remebering her childhood.)
Leela gave Twinkle a bread piece and started feedin that with her hands.
M – ‘Mumma ap shayad bhool rahi hain k apki ek or beti bhi hai.’ (Mumma u r forgetting that there is one more daughter of urs.)
L – ‘Haan Mahi me bhool gayi thi ke meri ek or beti bhi hai.’ (Yes Mahi, I forgot that I have one more daughter.) She said while looking at Twinkle. Mahi got up nd left from there frowning. Leela called her but she left.
T – ‘Mumma apne usy naraaz ker diya!’
L – ‘Tum to uska nature jaanti ho na aesy hi hai theek hojaye gi tum khaao!’
They both smiled.

Next Scene ~
Usha, Kunj and Tanushree were sittting in the hall.
Tanu – ‘Bhaeee dil khush hogaya kunj ka result sunn ke!’ Kunj smiled.
U – ‘Afterall he is ur only grandson.’
K – ‘Bs nani Maa ne usi ke liye bht hi badi party rakhi hai!’
Tanu – ‘Haan u told yesterday.’
U – ‘Ap log zaroor ayega!’
Tanu – ‘Haan haan bikul. Acha tumne Anita or Aditya ko invite kya?’ (Yes, ofcourse! You invited Aditya and Anita?)
U – ‘Ji call ki thi kal! Apki naraazgi to me nhi seh sakti!’ (Yes, I called them yesterday. I can’t bear ur anger na.)
Tanu – ‘Acha kiya puraani baaton ko bhula ker aagy badhna chahiye!’ (U did it right, u should forget the past nd move on.)
U – ‘Kyun? Itni asaani se nhi bhula sakti!’ (Why? I can’t forget easily.)
Just then Twinkle came there and greeted Usha.
K – ‘Wesy yahan pe or bhi log bethe hain agar ap dekhna chahein to!’ (By the way there are other people as well if u wanna see.) Twinkle greeted him and he said ‘Jeeti raho!’ Just to tease her. Usha was angry.
U – ‘Kunj! Kyun fee horahe ho? Chup betho!’ (Kunj, why are u being free with her. Stay quiet.)
K – ‘Me mazaak hi to ker raha hun uske saath!’ (I m just joking with her.)
U – ‘Can’t u stay quiet? Speaking isn’t mecessary.’
Tanu – ‘Usha! Kya hogaya hai? Aesa kya bol diya usne jo tum itna gussa horahi ho.’
U – ‘Rehne dein jab se bada hua hai na ye jab se tameez hi nhi rahi hai ise! Kab kosni baat kerni hai samajh hi nhi hai isse.’
Twinkle became sad. She left from there. Kunj looked at her going.
Tanu – ‘Kunj is not like that. He is very mature.’ He smiled.
He then thought about Twinkle nd he became sad.

At Night ~
Rania was taking the milk glass when Leela came.
L – ‘Twinkle ke liye lay jaa rahi hain?’
R – ‘Haan khana nhi khaati na to raat ko roz milk de deti hun!’
L – ‘Laayen me le jaati hun.’ She said taking it from her.
R – ‘Tum?’ She looked confused.
L – ‘Ji main. Is me itna surprise hone ki kya baat hai?’ She said smiling.
R – ‘Ramu kaka bata rahy thy ke aj tumne Twinkle ke liye break fast bhi banaya tha.’
L – ‘Ji.’
R – ‘Or use apny haath se khilaya bhi tha.’
L – ‘Kayi baar insaan ko apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hojata hai, beyhad afsoos hota hai!’
R – ‘Acha hua tumhe jaldi iska ehsaas hogaya! Nhi to pachatati (regret). (That’s good u felt it. Or else u would have regret.)
L – ‘Pachtana to meri zindagi me likha hai. Me milk le ke jaati hun.!’
She said nd left from there.
Twinkle was studying in her room. Leela entered the room. Twinkle looked at her.
L – ‘Drink this milk fast.’ Twinkle was happy.
T – ‘U brought the milk.’
L – ‘I did something wrong?’ Happiness was clearly visible on Twinkle’s face.
T – ‘Nhi but u r making me surprised since morning.’
L – ‘So now mother’s love became the reason of surprisw for the daughter.’
T – ‘Nhi I didm’t meant that.’ She was confused.
Leela cupped her face.
L – ‘Array I was joking.’
T – ‘Itna maangne ke baad apki mohabbat mili hai!’ (I got ur love after so many prayers.)
L – ‘U prayed for me.’
T – ‘Hmm.. even when walking.’ Leela caressed her hairs.
L – ‘Now leave these talks. Tell me what r u going to wear tomorrow in the party?’
T – ‘I’ll not go.’
L – ‘Why? Ur bua would mind.’
T – ‘She would like that I didn’t came.’
L – ‘Twinkle I can’t leave u alone. Everyone is going. Understand.’
T – ‘No Mumma I’ll not go.’
Episode ends on Leela’s confused face.

Precap: Twinkle was in the party standing at a corner when Usha came towards her.
U – ‘Stay away from Kunj.’
T – ‘Ji?’
U – ‘I didn’t said any hard words. I said stay away from Kunj.

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28 Comments
  1. Nishfd

    Lots of love…
    I just love it ….
    Inta ……………… sara……..
    U just nailed it. …
    Thank god leela realized her mistakes. …
    Bt usha huh ….
    Anyways post asap. …. plz plz plz….

  2. Supriya18d

    awsm Purvi…..kya Urdu likha h…wow

  3. Sohi

    Very emotional episode
    I was crying at the scenes of twinkle

    Usha is very harsh
    What is the reason behind Leela’s hate

    Waiting for the next update
    Do continue

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    Emotional epi….bt itni nafrat ka reason kya h

  5. Ramya

    Awesome purvi amazing
    I’m happy dat twinkle got her mother love
    But yaar dis usha is so bad
    Hate her
    Love u keep smiling

  6. SidMin23

    Nice finally Lela realize her mistake and Usha is too much now hope soon kunj confess his feelings for her

  7. Ritzi

    Yaar purvi…itne mindblowing se epis na diya karo tusse…..padhne se distraction ho jata hai….tu Toh fail karake ki dam legi! Ye tere net pack ki Toh! Itna gussa aa rha hai…jaldi fill kara pack apna.. Be lekin yaar ek Bhai bahen shaadi …..pyaar how?

    1. Purvi128

      Tujhe fail karake marna nhi hai…!!!!! Nd haan i asked ur insta acc? Do tell me?
      Or haan yarr they r cousins..! There isn’t any restrictions for cousins to marry or fall in love..! They r not real bro sis..! I hope ur confusion is cleared…
      Or haan jald hi fill kerwa lungi… tension na le.. ritzzuuu..
      ?

      1. Ritzi

        U think I hv insta account?

    2. Purvi128

      Someone told me..!! I don’t remember..

  8. OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!
    purvi
    my cutie pie
    my cup cake
    YOU ARE GREAT WRITER
    I SALUTE YOU
    the episode was
    marvellous
    amazing
    outstanding
    too emotional
    Lovely
    CUTIE
    Incredible
    TOOOOOOOO GOOD !!!!!!
    by the way please
    REVEAL why everyone
    hate twinkle so much
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    awaiting for your
    next episode as soon
    as possible and hell
    desperate to read next
    please post soon
    lots of love
    LOVE YOU MY SWEETIE PIE!!!!!

    1. Purvi128

      Thanks a lot Ayesha…! Will post as I get time..!

  9. Ariya

    Hello pruvi didi…
    Gotta shock by seeing my comment… I am also shocked u know my holidays has started from yesterday and i may be post some story on twinj try…
    Now coming to the ff it is awsm as always but dis tym u js nailed it so well that there is lacking of words … U know how well u portrayed twinkles emotion
    I js loved it to the core and smwhere it is ryt as far as i know i am always get unusual behav8our from my parents as they love their elder daughter and younger son more than me..
    I felt like someone portrayed all my emoti9ns ….
    Back to the epi ..
    Loved it post ñext soon….

    1. Purvi128

      Seriously ariya.! I got shocked seeing ur comment..
      Thanks a lot for ur appreciation..
      Nd somewhere it is like my story…! Nd I m like Twinkle that’s why it was easy for me to portray her emotions becuz me iss haal se guzar chuki hun nd maybe guzar rahi hun..!
      Leave that..!
      Thanks a ton ?

  10. Ariya

    ?????????????☺☺☺☺ these all are for u …,
    And all the writers pls dont feel bad ab9ut comments its jst that all are now busy b5 dont worry and about bashers dont pay any heed to them whenever they bash jst ignore them bcoz i also do the same on my each post hey bash me and i js ignored them because never ever care about others opinion when u know u r ryt .. Always do whatever ur heart says …
    And ther alk the writers are fab mind blowing i read all the stories of them
    And i also mentioned in m6 last s3cond pst always consider a comment fromy side…
    Luv u alll???????????☺☺??

  11. I’m literally speechless. its really good yaar.somewhere I found tw is similar to me.As I’m a ca student I have to study almost 24*7. I’m also restless in night before xam.I also say to my mom I’m gonna fail.my friends always say jab dekho padayi padayi kabhi kabhi give some time to urself also.
    somewhere I felt u r also going through this situation because u described tw emotions so well
    jaldi nxt epi post karo
    lots of love:-) 🙂

  12. Awesome episode

  13. Hey Purvi!
    It was Amazing dear?
    Just loved it❤
    Yaar tu mujhe meray one of the favourite drama ki memories reminsce kara rahi hai??
    N U did a great job while writing Urdu??I was Shocked ??Tune itne ache se word’s ko likha ?? The Tense n type of Urdu they Used in Drama n then u portraying it was just beyond Word’s?Urdu is really difficult to read… write n learn… N no one knows better than me??Urdu Raaton ki neend Haraam kardeti hai???N tune itne ache se likhi??.. n Specially when it comes to Write For Other’s specially when Mostly People Reading here don’t know Urdu ??Urdu is Tough to write??Mujhe aisa laga hi nahi ki yeh koi Hindi bolne wala person ne Likha ho??Just loved this ???Fantastic… Marvellous… SHOLLY last part par comment nahi kia?Paper’s u know?Abhi bhi Practicals baki hain??khair post soon ??I am waiting… N Haan bina login ke comment kar rahi hun isiliye aise??Love u dear??

  14. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Mamma…. Mamma…. Mujhe Purvi ne Rula diya…. I m crying! so Bad haan! Koi apne pyaar ko rulatha hai haan? ??? Yaar Twinkle ke Dialogues… I m speechless! It made me cry! ??? Jaan kya likhthi hai yaar tu! Hats off! Mind blowing! just loved it! Why do Usha hates Twinkle so much! I don’t have words! Love you so much!
    post soonest!

    With Love,
    Urs Tamanna

  15. Awesome epi kya likha tha tm na purvi…. Luvd it…. U described everyone emotions very well…. Or sb sa imp tm na bht achi urdu likhi ha….. If i ask u to write an ff on the story of one pakistani serial… Will u write????….. Jwb zror dena ok…. Luv u….

    1. Purvi128

      Hey Anayaali..! I’ll try to write..! Tell me the name of the serial?

  16. Presha

    Awesome butter cup…
    Just loved it..
    Too good…
    Love u…

  17. mindblowing too emotional epi
    post soon

  18. Baby

    ohhhhh my god purvi mein kahin mar naa jaun…..♥
    itna achaa achhaaa read krte krte hey bhagwaanji……meri puru ko kaho jaldi post kre nahi toh uski baby ki death hi hojani hai jiiiii……♥
    loved it osm speechless….emotional bt leela wow loving it…..♥
    lods of love……♥
    post soon…..♥

  19. Emotional yet nice episode

  20. Episode was amazing and touching
    Waiting for the next update

  21. Do continue

  22. Fabulous episode

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